My Story - Hum Tum Aur Hamare bachey

Hey everyone, im new to all of this but ive read all of your fictional stories and wanted to write own of my own so i did. im not a writer nor a very good speller so please put up with my bad grammar, its not very good but let me know how i can improve and if i should write more, id love to hear all your feed back so here goes..

hey its really gud!!!!!! 😊 nice os ...

its really good! :)

aww thankyou that really made my day :) sorry to ask this but whats pm? im new to all this :/

Originally posted by: kaay_x

aww thankyou that really made my day :) sorry to ask this but whats pm? im new to all this :/

wow its really nycc to continue 😊

its realy nice plzz continue😃😊

Nice start...can't wait to read more.

<font color="#0000ff">Part 2 everyone! Very sorry for the late update.. Actually i was so busy reading everyone elses fan fiction and wanted to make sure what i had planned for this story was not already taken, anyway ive said enough i think so heres the next part.. Enjoy & let me know what you think!...</font>

A nurse came out of the operation theatre. Arnav began to feel uneasy about was about to come. He knew nothing bad could happen to his khushi, he would never let that happen so that was the least of his worries. NK held his shoulders to show his support and that his always there for him no matter what was gonna be said. Arnav took one glance at nk and turned to look at the floor. The tension was unbearable...

"congratulations mr raizada!" the nurse broke out "your now a father of 2". Arnav looked up almost instantly at the nurse and straight to Nk as he was confused and couldnt believe what just happened. Nk just nodded a yes and smiled. And with that arnav got up and walked away, unaware of hat he was doing! He muttered to himself "im a father of two, that means twins! He continues speaking to himself just in a louder tone this time. He couldnt think straight -the doctor had said only one would make it as they could save one! But nothing like this had happened infact they had saved 3 lives! And for that arnav was so grateful! Arnav soon became restless his mind had gone blank for the first time in his life, he could not think he didnt know what to do.. Were talking about the great one and only arnav singh raizada here!!

He was sooo happy he couldnt stop smiling! It was as if his sexy smile was fixed on his face permantly. He repeated the fact that he was a father for another millionth time. He had definatley made sure every passing sould had heard this.

Nk couldnt believe what he was hearing and seeing in front of him, he had never in his life seen his cousin like this out of control. With that he started laughing really loudly which made arnav aware he was watching, "nannav mere bhai (his famous speech) dont you want to see your kids? Dont worry okay, we can go once your done finished with your boasting & arnav couldnt stop blushing! And with that nk walked away with his unique wink..

nice update :)