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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update and thanks for the pm :Ad

Nikki <3
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Awesome . What do you want to have ? Indian , Italian , Chinese , Mediterranean?"
"Are you just making up words or you really know all this stuff?" , Abhi asked , raising his eyebrow .
ROLF ... hahahahah very funny , cracked me up
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Posted: 12 years ago
Visual of Nikki crying running in slo motion towards Abhi
Abhi welcoming her with open arms Sha rukh style
hehehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
@pra: i really liked how Armaan is trying to help N understand her own emotions.. its like while telling Armaan about A she is remembering things that were going blur in sight of her anger and frustration.. I like how Armaan too comes to term with AN relationship in his own way..

Oh A and N and their egoes :) both dont want to talk to each other on phone :) In a way it is right.. . after not talking for so many days it does make sense for them to meet rather than to talk.. Looking fwd to the way they will meet.. Is N going to find her Sid bursting out of her kitchen instead :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
read all 20 parts in one go...AN scenes r so cute...nikki's past was very emotional...waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago

hey pra 🤗

thnx for updating inspite of being so so bussy..that too back to back updates..😃
coming to the part 19
i just love ridhima.. shes so understanding!! even if she was not nikkis frnd since college days still sometimes she understands her even better than armi does..😳
and ridzii and abhi relation is also is lovely.. i mean she understands modi very well
and they share very comfortable relation.. not exactly friends but still!!
armaan is so so cutee.. yeah he sometimes irk them but only few lucky people get so caring and loving friend like armi..😳

ridima is so tru hes nikkis big bro 😃

armi is extra possesive sometimes but thz becoz he has seen nikki in worst phase of her life.. he jus wana protect her from every harm.. thz his pure intention.. so whatever bad things he talks abt abhi is so obvious from his side.. 😉😳 so m not angry on him..😆

nik is angry on abhi but when armi talks bad abt their relation n doubting their marrige she takes abhis side..even in anger 😳 thaz nikki.. she loves abhi way too much!!


armaan crakd me up wid this..

Fine , fine . Make me the villain of this love story . That's all you have been doing right from day one . " 😆😆😆😆

i love the convo of armi n nikki
i mean how he made her understand that she should forget all bad thing.. 😳
he jus wants her frnd to be happy wid the man whos not in his good books😆
nikki was fighting wid this dark truth of her life since long back..but armans one wise word and she actually started thinkin abt it.. 😳 armaan is really an angel of her life..😳
(Abhika bhi nahi suna but armi ka suna 😉)
love this para... 😳
What Armaan said and what Abhi must have wanted to say did not sound dissimilar , did it ?
Maybe Abhi wanted to talk about her father only because he wanted to help her move on and yet she had pushed him away . She was angry only because he was being himself , only because he was honest and true to his own emotions and all he wanted from her was that same honesty . It may have been ego , it must have been their capacity to cause hurt and yet every single emotion was genuine , every single emotion stemmed from the fact that Abhi and she knew each other so well. This realization only made her aware of how much he
loved her and wanted to be there for her , much like Armaan did. They both loved her and cared for her . She wasn't alone . Together they understood her innermost feelings without even being told ...😳😳
finally she realised it.. m so happy lovely writing pra😃
still armi is so armi so so so buddhu.😆.but so caring..
Do you really love that Modi ?"

i would have been angry on the person who asks nikki this rediculous baseless questn coz ofcourse its a obvious thing..any blind person also would see how much they love eachother.. but when it comes to armi i can jjust do this.. laugh😆😆
Part 20
aww pareshaan abhi looks even cuter..😳
*remember when nikki was not wel n he barged in her house( in his blue UBS shirt ☺️ in which he was lookin extrm hot Blushing) n then found she was kidin him n tht she was fine
that time he said meri to jaan hi nikal gyi thi.* i rememberd this scene when i imagine worry on my cutipie abhiz face *😳

abhi is so so so rude😆 wid poor sid but at the same time he is so so cute much more than his rudness..
coz he realised mistak n said sorry to sid 😲 which is really rare..😆 he jus cant say sorry to anyone.. aww hes so sweet!!
sid abhi scene was as always fantastic n funny..😆😆

ridima abhi convo is cute..😳 i love their relation abhi is so comf wid her.. which is agen rare
thing.. shes so sweet..
this part was so damn funny..😆😆 🤣
Awesome . What do you want to have ? Indian , Italian , Chinese , Mediterranean?"
"Are you just making up words or you really know all this stuff?" , Abhi asked , raising his eyebrow .😆
"Try me bro . Just try me ."
"Anything Sid… Anything that does minimum damage to my intestines and to my kitchen." , he said at last , wishing he'd just go away .
🤣

and aah finally our princess niki decided to come to her hubby.. she
cant wait evn one night to pass.😳.
😳despirate nikki is so... sweet.. wild 😉😆 only if you know wat i mean 😉😆
wana see where this despiration lead them to 😉 *ahem ahem* again only if you know wat i mean😆😆
thanx for update
love this one.. 😃
update soon.
waiting for next..
😳 cherry
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mitzification

Visual of Nikki crying running in slo motion towards Abhi

Abhi welcoming her with open arms Sha rukh style
hehehe

nooo 🤣 not so AN 😛😆 @pra- make it like -AN hug in rajsthan!!! when lights gt off.. n nikki
ran to abhi and just threw herslf on him.. ☺️passionate hug😳☺️
sorry mitzii 😛😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

@pra: i really liked how Armaan is trying to help N understand her own emotions.. its like while telling Armaan about A she is remembering things that were going blur in sight of her anger and frustration.. I like how Armaan too comes to term with AN relationship in his own way..

Oh A and N and their egoes :) both dont want to talk to each other on phone :) In a way it is right.. . after not talking for so many days it does make sense for them to meet rather than to talk.. Looking fwd to the way they will meet.. Is N going to find her Sid bursting out of her kitchen instead :)

@Pri , thanks for another nice comment sweetie. Yes these two parts were kind of static without any fiery emotions , but still meant to wrap up all the lose ends of Armaan's opinion on Abhi and Nikki's coming to terms with her anger and angst over her past and Armaan sort of helping her .
And of course , AN and their egos :) , but then I couldnt imagine them suddenly talking to each other on a phone call or rather imagine the conversation to write . Yes , they are finally going to get together . Aren't I a real sadist ? Its been like so long and so many weeks in my story telling timeline , that they have been apart😊.
@bold part 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry_an

hey pra 🤗

thnx for updating inspite of being so so bussy..that too back to back updates..😃
coming to the part 19
i just love ridhima.. shes so understanding!! even if she was not nikkis frnd since college days still sometimes she understands her even better than armi does..😳
and ridzii and abhi relation is also is lovely.. i mean she understands modi very well
and they share very comfortable relation.. not exactly friends but still!!
armaan is so so cutee.. yeah he sometimes irk them but only few lucky people get so caring and loving friend like armi..😳

ridima is so tru hes nikkis big bro 😃

armi is extra possesive sometimes but thz becoz he has seen nikki in worst phase of her life.. he jus wana protect her from every harm.. thz his pure intention.. so whatever bad things he talks abt abhi is so obvious from his side.. 😉😳 so m not angry on him..😆

nik is angry on abhi but when armi talks bad abt their relation n doubting their marrige she takes abhis side..even in anger 😳 thaz nikki.. she loves abhi way too much!!


armaan crakd me up wid this..

Fine , fine . Make me the villain of this love story . That's all you have been doing right from day one . " 😆😆😆😆

i love the convo of armi n nikki
i mean how he made her understand that she should forget all bad thing.. 😳
he jus wants her frnd to be happy wid the man whos not in his good books😆
nikki was fighting wid this dark truth of her life since long back..but armans one wise word and she actually started thinkin abt it.. 😳 armaan is really an angel of her life..😳
(Abhika bhi nahi suna but armi ka suna 😉)
love this para... 😳
What Armaan said and what Abhi must have wanted to say did not sound dissimilar , did it ?
Maybe Abhi wanted to talk about her father only because he wanted to help her move on and yet she had pushed him away . She was angry only because he was being himself , only because he was honest and true to his own emotions and all he wanted from her was that same honesty . It may have been ego , it must have been their capacity to cause hurt and yet every single emotion was genuine , every single emotion stemmed from the fact that Abhi and she knew each other so well. This realization only made her aware of how much he
loved her and wanted to be there for her , much like Armaan did. They both loved her and cared for her . She wasn't alone . Together they understood her innermost feelings without even being told ...😳😳
finally she realised it.. m so happy lovely writing pra😃
still armi is so armi so so so buddhu.😆.but so caring..
Do you really love that Modi ?"

i would have been angry on the person who asks nikki this rediculous baseless questn coz ofcourse its a obvious thing..any blind person also would see how much they love eachother.. but when it comes to armi i can jjust do this.. laugh😆😆
Part 20
aww pareshaan abhi looks even cuter..😳
*remember when nikki was not wel n he barged in her house( in his blue UBS shirt ☺️ in which he was lookin extrm hot Blushing) n then found she was kidin him n tht she was fine
that time he said meri to jaan hi nikal gyi thi.* i rememberd this scene when i imagine worry on my cutipie abhiz face *😳

abhi is so so so rude😆 wid poor sid but at the same time he is so so cute much more than his rudness..
coz he realised mistak n said sorry to sid 😲 which is really rare..😆 he jus cant say sorry to anyone.. aww hes so sweet!!
sid abhi scene was as always fantastic n funny..😆😆

ridima abhi convo is cute..😳 i love their relation abhi is so comf wid her.. which is agen rare
thing.. shes so sweet..
this part was so damn funny..😆😆 🤣
Awesome . What do you want to have ? Indian , Italian , Chinese , Mediterranean?"
"Are you just making up words or you really know all this stuff?" , Abhi asked , raising his eyebrow .😆
"Try me bro . Just try me ."
"Anything Sid' Anything that does minimum damage to my intestines and to my kitchen." , he said at last , wishing he'd just go away .
🤣

and aah finally our princess niki decided to come to her hubby.. she
cant wait evn one night to pass.😳.
😳despirate nikki is so... sweet.. wild 😉😆 only if you know wat i mean 😉😆
wana see where this despiration lead them to 😉 *ahem ahem* again only if you know wat i mean😆😆
thanx for update
love this one.. 😃
update soon.
waiting for next..
😳 cherry

Cherry , firstly , nice display pic😊.
and secondly , thanks a ton for the comment and I know you had to type it in 3 times. I am genuinely touched my dear . So happy I decided to login to take a short break from the daily grind of my life .
Yes , I dont like Armaan in AN's story , but if they had to show her being forced to choose between him and the man she clearly loved , then I would at least want to make him the person who knows her really well , you know and someone worth giving so much importance too . And by the time I was done writing these parts , I almost started liking him 😛
And yes , the para you quoted , I like it too . It is one of the most heavily revised parts in the whole FF or probably in all my writing so far :))
@bold part , right ? Yes , with Armaan it seems perfectly normal , but with someone else , if I were Nikki , I'd be furious too. Thanks , I'll take those lines as a big compliment😊
Yes Part 20 was written to torture Abhi specifically and have some Abhi Sid interaction . Yes he is mean to his cousin and then realizes it and apologizes . He is like a coconut , bahar se sakht and andar se all mush for the people he cares and loves 😊
And the red lines , aah the blushing and naughty Cherry rises to the fore😛. SHould I say this or not . Oh I'll say it . I know ALL you mean and the next part is my favorite among all the parts of this FF because it has AN in all their moods , with their passion and anger and hesitation and chemistry . OK I'll stop with my yapping . But I seriously like the next part a lot and cant wait to upload it over the weekend.
Thanks Cherry for getting me all worked up with my AN love 😊.
I need to go now . I will try my best to post the update by Friday night . ⭐️ comment
Edited by pra19 - 12 years ago

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