AbhiNikki FF-Your Journey with Me Completed - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome parts Pra...loved d frnds bonding again bt I m misin Abhi here now. Why is he not in d picture? :@ Make him come bak to Nikki soon. I wanna knw how he reacts 2 these guests here n d sudden change in d behaviour of his dearest wife. ;)
update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
pra: It was nice to see lot of updates after coming back from vacation :)

Part16:
I like how N is still not ready to think about her past, instead her thoughts linger on merry thoughts of past where she had everything... family of friends and A... Well she thinks she is moving on by thinking about the past as if it never happened but that isnt helping and it just showed in last few parts.. You know i like how she is thinking about almost everything now that she is alone but still not able to come to terms with her past.. Guess A and R are here for helping her thought it :D

i will either edit (if i can or write more comments for next parts as i read them)
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 17:
I like how you show the growth of both Armaan and N with marriage.. They are understanding where to give each other space and show the trust to handle tough situations.. The subtle greeting scene which few years back could result in another explosion like pool scene but with time and maturity and offcourse prev experience handled so well.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Opps for last comment.. somehow i thiought Armaan and Ridhimaa are married :)

Part18 is so nicely showing the comfort of friendship that Armaan and N share. :) He was so easily able to get the truth out of her and can so easily see N's not being herself ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry_an

Great updates pra..😃

i love nikki- armaan -riddhima milaap😉😆 Seriously everyone should have such lovely friends in your life.. even if far away from eachother still missing and thinking about the other.. and when they meet they should be as comfortable and free to share things as they were before getting apart.. love armi-nikki friendship..
but abhi ko pura negative character bana dete hai yeh log i mean armaan.. and nikki kuch bolti nahi.. hmm sigh.. ok misunderstandings to honi hi hai..
but glad atleast last me she told the truth..
armaan is so armaan.. seriously a detective😆
i love this one- And where is your dear husband ?" 😆😆 abhi and armaan can never adress eachother propaly.. they wil either avoid talking or if they have to talk they wil call eachother( using some adjectives) like lover boy hitler or romeo or best of all by their surnames modi n malik 😆
hmm situation between nikki-abhi has been worsened..
seems like nikki is very damn angry and hurt..
but seriously in previous part when she thought of something like this-
She was a fool to believe Abhi and she would have a "happily ever after" . Was it ever possible that a life like that would exist ? How did she just assume that this relation was special ?
it really hurt. me reading this para how can she doubt on this b ful marrige i mean i know shes angry hurt.. but still just coz of few bad experience and fight you cant forget all the beautiful sides of it.. ya i mean it is serious and nikki has sufferd a lot but cursing him on his face is anothr thing..but doubting their relation in mind is different ..or may be this is human nature..
i hope this damage gets repaired..soon..
anyways.. waiting to see what happens next..
update soon..pra..
despirately waiting..
storry becoming more n more intresting 😃
u r a lovely writer..⭐️
take care
regards
-cherry😳

Cherry , thanks sweetie . Feels good to login and read such a lovely comment . Yes , they are lovely friends and like I keep saying , unfortunately or fortunately Armaan was an important part in AN's storyline and so I did not want to keep that jarring end open or like competely cut him off the way they did in the show . And @bold part , I know what you mean . But then , like you rightly said , that is esentially human behavior . She pushed him away saying leave me alone and now she is like why hasn't he called me, is he tired of me ? 😊. Only Nikki can think in those lines , remember all the times she did that too him before the pool incient . How the damage gets repaired , hmmm , we'll see 😉. I'll post the next two updates next week.
Till then thanks again sweetie for keeping the discussions on AN alive .
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

pra: It was nice to see lot of updates after coming back from vacation :)

Part16:
I like how N is still not ready to think about her past, instead her thoughts linger on merry thoughts of past where she had everything... family of friends and A... Well she thinks she is moving on by thinking about the past as if it never happened but that isnt helping and it just showed in last few parts.. You know i like how she is thinking about almost everything now that she is alone but still not able to come to terms with her past.. Guess A and R are here for helping her thought it :D

i will either edit (if i can or write more comments for next parts as i read them)

Pri , thanks dear . I too feel so good to login after a while and see your lovely comments 😊. Thanks.
Yes Nikki is kind of not able to come to terms with her past in the sense of giving it a closure . By keeping it in the foregroud , she thought she had done that partly , but of course she hasn't and now it is out in the open and unfortunately she holds Abhi responsible and her angst and hurt is kind of raw and untattended . Armaan and Rid's entry was well maybe a iittle too convernient from plot points POV 😊 , but I am sure it will fit from the complete storyline POV . And like I keep saying , this FF was an attempt to close down all the loose ends in AN's story and tht is one reason why AR made their entry .
Glad you liked the greeting scene . Yes they are all more mature now and yet Armaan cant get rid of his ill feelings or whatever towards Abhi . I for one thought he'd never be able to do that and the three of them or at least him coming to terms with it was never really shown . For me , Abhi and Armaan can never be friends , at most cordial and tolerant maybe . And yet , the sense of ownership and concern he has for Nikki could not be random . I wanted to show that part rather than showing how he kind of completely got out of her life randomly the way he did in the show.
Edited by pra19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

@Jyothi , thanks dear

@Nikki , thanks so much sweetie . Glad you liked Armaan-Nikki-Ridzi portions .

@Trish , thank you so much dear . So glad you liked the bonding between the three old buddies . And I know Abhi is been missing for quite some time right 😊 . He will be back soon . Don't you worry😉 .Will update next week hopefully by Tuesday .

@ariel and Sheena , thank you

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pra19

Cherry , thanks sweetie . Feels good to login and read such a lovely comment . Yes , they are lovely friends and like I keep saying , unfortunately or fortunately Armaan was an important part in AN's storyline and so I did not want to keep that jarring end open or like competely cut him off the way they did in the show .
And @bold part , I know what you mean . But then , like you rightly said , that is esentially human behavior . She pushed him away saying leave me alone and now she is like why hasn't he called me, is he tired of me ? 😊. Only Nikki can think in those lines , remember all the times she did that too him before the pool incient . How the damage gets repaired , hmmm , we'll see 😉. I'll post the next two updates next week.
Till then thanks again sweetie for keeping the discussions on AN alive .

and i love armaan nikkis relation..so special everyone cant understand the depth of it..
i agree wid u fully.. Armaan is very important in ANs love story..
aftrall he is ous nikkis family 😃
you did fantastic job pra..
ya i know nikki, shes so innocent.. short tempered but full of love..😳 n loves abhi more than nything..
just wana see what gona happn next n how shes gona deal wid everything.. 😉
ya m waiting dear..
enjoy the vacation..
take care..
-love
cherry😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry_an

and i love armaan nikkis relation..so special everyone cant understand the depth of it..
i agree wid u fully.. Armaan is very important in ANs love story..
aftrall he is ous nikkis family 😃
you did fantastic job pra..
ya i know nikki, shes so innocent.. short tempered but full of love..😳 n loves abhi more than nything..
just wana see what gona happn next n how shes gona deal wid everything.. 😉
ya m waiting dear..
enjoy the vacation..
take care..
-love
cherry😳

Thanks so much Cherry . I am back , but I'll keep busy for a while now . So I thought I'd login today itself and post the parts right now as I know you definitely are waiting for them😊.
So here they are , the next two parts
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