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Posted: 12 years ago
I READ ALL PARTS IN 1 GO.I WAS FULL OF TEARS .IT'S AN AWESOME FF .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear!!!

The past is so bitter!!

Am really worried for Geet!!

Hope Maan doesn't do something which could not be corrected!!

The pre cap is really scary!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
the saying of fakir baba reminded me of harry potter and the prophecy...

lvd the update...precap sounds very scary...
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Posted: 12 years ago


Maan-Geet both hate each other to such an extent that Maan can kill her...😲

their relationship and fights are getting more intense...

I am happy that Maan didn't touch Sameera...

so Maan and Geet are already married...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 8

Geet was sitting in her balcony facing the nature. She was quite disturbed since morning as if there is something wrong happening. She tried to focus on the book tat she was reading but she could not. Feeling helpless, she finally closed the book, rested her head on the chair, and closed her eyes. It was not even 5 minutes of closing her eyes tat her past haunted her which she was hiding deep inside her heart.

Maan: Are you ok Ms..

Girl: Sam.. Sameera Rathod. She said trying to steady herself by holding Maan.

Maan: did you hurt yourself.

Sameera: Nope, you saved me at the right moment.

Maan: If m not mistaken than you are the same new girl in our class isn't it.
Sameera: Sharp Memory Mr. Maan Singh Khuranna.
Maan: Oh so you know my name too.

Sameera: who will not know the name of the most handsome, dashing and topper's name.

Maan: hmmm, so have studied about me a lot.

Sameera: Nope, just heard about you but now would really like to be a friend of yours

after all its great to have friend like you.

Maan: really.. do you think so and why do you think tat I will make you my friend.

Sameera: its your choice. I just suggested it but believe me it will be my honor to have MSK as my friend but I don't think so I can get it.

Maan: nice way to make friendship and I really liked it. so lets officially introduce each other. Hi me MSK, would like to be your friend if you don't have a problem.

Sameera: and me Sameera Rathod and its my pleasure and honor to have a friend like you MSK.

Maan: oh don't say me MSK it sounds as if m very old. You can call me Maan just Maan.

Sameera: Maan, sounds good. Do you know you are the first person to be my friend here? I mean people are so mean and proud tat even when I approach them they don't even look at you once. Its feels so bad when they turn their back on you.

Maan: Ohh dear don't cry.. its just tat you are new here and none of them like to mingle with a new person. Don't worry I will introduce you to my friends and my friends are not the one to turn their backs ok.

Sameera smiled while Maan took her to meet Geet, Armaan and Abhay, his best buddies.

Maan: hey guys meet Sameera Rathod our new friend.

The three looked at Sameera with angry eyes and Maan with double the anger.
Maan: she will be joining our group from today and will be with us all the time. So Sameera meet my best buddies Armaan, Abhay and Geet, Geet Handa, my best friend.

Geet: Maan you very well know we don't add anyone in our group just like tat so how come she.

Maan: Geet, she is new here an its our duty to be her friends ok.

Armaan: being a friend is different and welcoming her to our group is different.

Maan: how does it change Armaan. Even you both were added into our group.

Abhay: Maan we were friends with Geet first and as far as I know our families know each other but you have forgotten the rule about our group tat we are not supposed to add anyone into it. Just we four.

Maan: Tat was a rule made by Geet not me and she does need a friend and wats the big deal in it.

Sameera: Maan, its ok. If your friends don't like me than I will not force you to be my friend.

Geet: Listen Sameera, its not about forcing but m pretty possessive about my friends and don't like any addition into them and moreover you are new here and we hardly know anything about you,

Sameera: Tats why I need friends here dear. You see I find many of you here rude but looks like everyone is rude and I wont get a chance to be one of you.

Armaan: Sameera, right, we are not rude but its just tat we don't add anyone in our group so soon but see Maan has recommended you so we cant even say no to him.
Sameera gave a cheesy smile to them while Geet did not feel good with her. she was still not ready for it.

Geet: Maan are you sure I mean it wont be any problem for us na.

Maan: Mishti…. ( geet instantly melted) why are you so irritating. Its just Sameera and she is our classmate na so we can be friends with her. so please.
Geet: hmmm
Geet jerked opened her eyes sweating and fearing the smile, the smile which haunted her ever since Sameera joined their group. Geet now did understand the reason behind that mean smile which had taken away her everything. Geet steadied her heartbeats that were running at an unknown speed as if something is going to happen. She got up from her chair and paced up and down in the balcony for fresh air but it did not give any peace for her aching heart. She knew only one thing could help her now and she slowly reached to her cupboard where she had hidden the best moments of her life. She unlocked the drawer and a smiled teased her lips seeing the frame that had her memories of her past. She slowly traced her finger on it trying to soothe her mind but it was not. The way her heart and mind were behaving was making her go mad. She locked the drawer and tried to sleep but sleep was far away from here. Whenever she closed her eyes, tat smile haunted her.

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Geet sat in the class with red swollen eyes and anyone could understand tat she was deprived of sleep. Geet looked around her class and her eyes caught the sight of one person sitting far behind from her which gave some peace to her heart but still not complete. She could hear Armaan and Abhay saying something but nothing went inside her. Soon the Professors came and started his class while Geet time to time turned to have a glimpse of him. It was passed half day at college and they had their last class for the day. They all reached to their respective class but as time was passing Geet was getting more restless. She looked around for him but he was no where to be seen. She felt a fear run through her body not seeing him and before she could think anything else the Professor made his entry. Geet all the time had her eyes towards the door but he was no where. She could not sit in the class anymore and stormed out in the middle of the ongoing class making everyone shocked at her move while the Professor was highly agitated but still he continued his class.

Geet searched for him in the entire college but she miserably failed and each second was making her go mad. She ran from one corner to another and at last she stormed inside Vicky's classroom and pulled him out of the class once again shocking everyone at the core and after coming out of the class far away she just holds Vicky's collar shouting.

Geet: Where is Maan, Vicky? Where is he? Why isn't he in class right now.
Vicky just stared at her as if she was talking in some alien language while Geet just shook him literally pushing him away.

Geet: Vicky where is he, I need to see him right now Vicky. Where is he?

Armaan and Abhay who had just ran after her from class saw Geet shouting at Vicky and was out of control they could not understand why she first ran away from the class and now getting so wild at Vicky. They reached to her and pulled her away from Vicky making her wilder. Armaan holds her by her waist but she still was wild.

Geet: Vicky where is he? I need to see him.

Armaan and Abhay could not get a word wat she was saying but somewhere she knew tat her wildness was for Maan. It rarely happens tat she gets out of control and whenever she gets she needs to see him at any cost and than she could feel good. Vicky moved forward and touches her face to soothe her but she pushes him away asking the same question again.

Armaan: Geet, relax he is fine Geet. he is fine.

Geet: No he is not. I need to see him right now. Where the hell is he.
Abhay slowly comes forward in order to cool her down.
Abhay: Sweetheart Maan is fine. You know na he will be with tat Sameera. So he is fine.

Geet: no he is not. I know he needs me. I need to see him.

Vicky gets angry on her for getting wild and pulls her by force towards him holding her shoulders and shaking her.

Vicky: why don't you get it Geet, Bro is all right. He will be with tat Sameera his girlfriend. Get this in your mind Geet he is fine.

Geet: No he is not. I need to find him. he needs me I know she is upto something to hurt him.

Vicky: Geet.. stop… Bro does not require you any more and he knows wat he needs.

Geet runs away pushing Vicky and drives away madly searching for him when she halts at a place. She runs inside the same temple Radha Krishna Temple and sits at one corner crying. Vicky, Armaan and Abhay who were following her saw her sitting at one corner outside the temple murmuring. They slowly reach to her and were shocked to see her state. They sat next to her while Vicky softly says but before he could Geet pushes him.

Vicky: Bro is fine Geet he is fine.

Geet: no he is not.

Geet inches closer to Vicky and takes his mobile from his pocket roughly trying Maan's number. She tried his number again and again but it was switched off while the three just let her do wat she wanted. She once again tried his number and getting frustrated she threw the phone breaking it into pieces. She gets up to leave when Vicky holds her by hand.

Vicky: where are you going now. You are not in a state to drive back home.

Geet jerks his hands away running to her car but Armaan was fast enough to come and stop her before she gets inside the car.
Armaan: Geet are you insane. Do you know how are you behaving. Just relax.
Geet: Relax, I don't have time for it I need to reach him.
Abhay: Geet we promise we will find about Maan whether he is all right or not but please calm down now. Please Geet.

Geet looked at Abhay for some time and then tried to move into her car but once again Vicky stopped him.

Vicky: Mishti, stop now Mishti. Abhay said na we will find out about bro than we will

The world Mishti made Geet to freeze on her place and she slowly moved back to the place where she was sitting near the temple. She did not say a word but just stared at the open area all the while. Here Vicky, Armaan and Ahbay were trying their best to know about Maan but they were failing even to get a piece of information. None of Maan's friends were knowing about Maan where he was and wat he was doing. Vicky was getting worried and from time to time he kept a watch on Geet. He knew when she would get wild like this it really meant tat Maan would be in some problem. No one knew why it happened but now their main task was to find out about Maan which they could not do and finally Armaan suggested tat they call up Arjun and ask for Sameera and her whereabouts. Abhay and Vicky instantly agreed and Arjun who was fully drunken after thinking tat their half plan was successful, did not know wat he said and told them about Maan and Sameera being at the Khuranna's penthouse all alone. Vicky was shocked to hear tat as the penthouse was a birthday gift for Maan and Geet and it was locked since last 7 years unknown tat Maan had given the keys to Sameera to use it for her parties and all other things.

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Khuranna Penthouse
Sameera smirked to herself smiling thinking tat at last half of her plan would get a success today. She looked at the Champagne bottle in her hand and smiled while she slowly opened it making two drinks. She mixed one drink with some drugs unknown to Maan who was in a happy mood tat he would get some quality time with her after long. Sameera made sure tat their cell phones were switched off and mixed the drugs with the drink and seductively moved towards Maan who was looking outside the window. She reached near him and nudged him with her elbow offering her the drink.
Maan: Drink when did you prepare it Sam.
Sameera: Oh come on Maan tats not important but you should be happy tat I have got a new modeling project and after long we are having some good time together.

Maan: yup but still this place haunts me and I hate coming here.

Sameera: It does not have any feel of her Darling. This penthouse now belongs to me and you and its only filled with your Sameera's love Maan.

Maan: I know it but still it…

Sameera puts her fingers on his lips and places the glass near his lips asking him to drink.

Sameera: Maan we are here to celebrate and spend some time with each other so why do we spoil are mood by taking tat b**** name.

Maan: Sameera… don't.. you don't have anyright to say her anything.

Sameera: Ok baba m sorry. I know she is your enemy and no one has the right to say her anything other than you but how can I tolerate when she invades your thoughts when you are with me. How can I tolerate tat the very same person to come into your thoughts who have destroyed your life making you like this. m sorry.

Maan: No m sorry I did not mean to hurt you Sam but still she is part of my life though in my hatred I cant forget her not even for a second Sam. I have tried so much but she does not live my memories and I cant do anything about it.

Sameera gives him a side hug while slowly Maan sips the drink.

Sameera (ST): I don't care who invades your mind and heart Maan and I don't even bother about you. I just need wat I want from you and for tat I will go to any extent as once I become Mrs. MSK no one can stop me from getting to the top and after all this is wat we have been planning since last seven years. Breaking the relation which you shared with tat Geet was not so easy but you say na when you love someone you also hate tat person with more hatred and tats wat I did and poor you did not even know wat was happening and Geet, wat she did even after she tried joining all the points but it was too late Maan too late for getting back where you both were left broken and after this she will be away not only she but whole lot of Handa's will be away from you along with your so called family.

Maan had completely finished drinking his drink while Sameera was just looking at him. After some time Maan felt his head spinning and he felt heavy and Sameera hold him before he would more away. Though the drink was making him to loose himself he was still having his eyes closed and he could see Geet standing near him and holding him. he smiled and slowly raised his hands to touch her serene face which he always did while Sameera was shocked to see it tat without any work he was getting closer to her but the next few words made her hell angry.

Maan: Mishti, you know you are still the same but I don't like when you say tat you are Geet Handa and not Geet my Mishti. You see… my Mishti was so sweet but this Geet is so bitter and I hate her…. where are you Mishti… your Maan needs you.. believe me Mishti.. Maan is not happy like this.. he still loves you Mishti…

Sameera's blood boiled listening tat he still loved Geet. She knew it very well tat deep inside Maan had this feelings for Geet but he never realized it in his rage and anger. He never did understand tat his friendship and anger was his love for her and she was very happy for it. Maan hugged her thinking she is Geet like he used to hug her before.

Maan: Mishti, I don't like when tat Armaan and Abhay share my Mishti. You know I hate them but still they are our friends na. tat day when tat Arjun touched you I did not… not know why I was angry… but still… I did not say anything… Mishti, I hate when anyone… come close to you… even if its Vicky.. as I cant come close to you… where are you lost Mishti… Maan needs his Mishti back…I Love you Mishti… I really do…..
Sameera tightens her grip on his back taking her to the bed while she tries to unbutton his shirt but Maan was making it tough for her to do tat. She gets very much irritated and kissed him furiously trying to make him weak in senses but Maaan was not getting along. As soon as she starts to deepen the kiss he coughs badly while Sameera heard a loud bang on the door. She was so frustrated with it tat she tried to ignore it but Maan's coughing and the bang on the door only increased every second. Getting frustrated she came out to open the door when she heard Vicky's voice.
Vicky: bro, open the door. Bro please for god's sake open the door bro.
Sameera was shocked to her him and she turned and closed the bedroom door without making any noise.

Vicky: bro please open the door, I need to talk to you urgently bro please.

Sameera slowly opened the door and before she could see and say something she was pushed very badly away from the door. Once the door opened Geet pushed the door along with Sameera and barged inside the house searching for Maan along with others. Sameera was shocked to see Geet, Armaan and Abhay along with Vicky there. She could not think a word when she saw Geet opening the bedroom door and there Geet stood in shock all numb with the sight in front of her eyes with a slow whimper coming out of her mouth " Maan". Vicky, Armaan and Abhay followed her gaze and stood rooted on the spot shifting their gaze from Maan to Geet and Geet to Maan.

Precap: Geet…. Destruction….. Maan….

I will not say tat m happy with the likes for Destiny and I still believe you all tat you will give me your love like you are giving for LOVE and HATE/DANGEROUS LOVE. This story is slowly developing. Though here in this part a bit of Maan's feelings is revealed and Geet, you may be still confused but believe I need to show how Geet is his savior and how he is her destroyer cum savior.

But now I need all you love so plzzz do like and comment.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeee ME 1st
LOVED it .. MAAN still LOVES his MEESHTI It is called 2 body 1 soul
Concept is quite unusual but still loving this story
PLz save MAAN from Sameera I hate Sameera

What will happen next ???
PLz update soon ..I am waiting

Edited by URME - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update
what next? will geet misunderstand maan? i think she will
what will maan do?
lovely update
do conti soon...

thanxx for pm
Edited by ishanidhi08 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update sameera is really a bi... can go to any extent



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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...so maan is in love with geet,the way geet misses maan states tha she is also in love with maan ...waiting to know what happens next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
i hope geet doesnt misunderstand maan
and would try to find that he is trapped

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