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Posted: 12 years ago

PLzz read the A.N at the end.

Disclaimer: The terrorism I have depicted here is totally a work of fiction... no real issue or incident is connected with it.

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Part : 14


Jannat 14

The car was running at its full speed. Geet hid her face into Maan's chest in fear.

"Geet are you hurt?"

Geet nodded negatively but Maan noticed blood strains on her hand.

"Geet you're hurt."

"Maan.. Aasim bhai kaha hai? please aap wapas chaliye.." she pleaded.

"Geet he is all right." Maan said drawing small circles on her back.

"hum kaha ja rahe hai?" She asked sobbing.

Maan didn't pay attention to where the car was going.

Before Maan could say anything the car stopped. Looking outside he found the car stood in front of a house away from locality.

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Colonel was playing with the globe in his office. He almost caught them.. Almost.. If Maan didn't run away with that girl he could've caught Aasim Khan.

"Damn it." He punched on the table in rage. "where are you Maan.. you have a few questions to answer." He murmured.

*************

Aasim Khan was sitting in a dim room with his few men. Impulsively he was tapping on the wooden table.

As a man entered he stood up and asked "kuch pata chala?"

The man nodded negatively.

"agar usse kuch ho gaya toh ammi toh.." he couldn't finish.

A man who was standing behind him spoke. "why you are so worried for Jannat? You have killed her friends before.. Preeti and Aman.."

He couldn't finish the sentence Aasim Khan shouted.. "I didn't.."

A silence engulfed the room.

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Colonel called a few officers to his cabin.

"Any news of Major Khurana?" He asked in serious tone.

"No sir." One of them answered.

"IF you find anyone suspicious arrest them. No need of arrest warrant." Colonel sharply looked at others face. "Follow the order. Any question?"

"No Sir."

"You may leave."

"Sir." Others left his cabin.

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"aap log thik toh hai na?" the driver asked Maan and Geet politely after opening the door.

"kaun ho tum?" Maan asked knotting his eyebrows.

His eyes fell on Geet's wound "arre ap ko toh chot lagi hai.." Ignoring Maan's question he ran in infront of the house and started to shout "Noor.. wo log yaha hai.. aur tu jaldi se yaha aja.."

A girl younger than Geet came out of the house.

"kya hua?" Her eyes travelled to Maan and Geet who came out of car..

"arre ap ko toh chot lagi hai.." The girl came to Geet. "zada gahera nahi hai.. lekin first aid'" She looked at Geet "aap mere saath chaliye.."

Geet was hesitating to leave but Maan assured her she is safe.. and he is with her. Geet left.

"aap mere saath ayiye.." The guy said and Maan followed the guy inside.

Maan entered the house. A few people were standing there.

"kaun ho tum log.. hume yaha kyu laye ho?" None answered. He looked around the room and found Geet nowhere. "Geet' wo kaha hai?" Maan's jaw tightened.

"Relax.." Some one replied from behind. "she is save here.. so you are."

Maan turned to face him. He was so shocked that he couldn't say a word.

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"I didn't kill Preeti." Aasim Khan sat on the chair covering his face. "I couldn't." He stopped for a few seconds. "Preeti ko toh mai apni bahen se bhi zada pyar karta tha.. aur Aman chota sa tha wo jab se mai use janta tha.."

"bhai but chief said you killed them.."

"When he sent a group to kill them he send me with them..I thought some how I can save them.. But kuch karne se pahele hi wo log.." His voice broke..

After a few seconds he spoke again..

"ab Jannat ko kuch nahi hone dunga.. wo log Naazneen ke saath jo kuch bhi kiya.." He stopped. Jannat ko'"

"agar chief ko pata chal gay you've attacked major to save her he will.."

"chief ko kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye.." He ordered. "ye baat iss ghar se bahar nahi jana chahiye.."

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As soon as Maan arrived the base Colonel called him to his cabin.

"why did you ran away from there?" Colonel asked looking at Maan with an icy gaze.

"I didn't. I was saving an innocent girl." Maan answered.

"You know we would have arrest Aasim Khan by now if you didn't leave."

"If I didn't leave with her she would have died or injured badly."

"Maan." Colonel stamped his fists. "Was it more important saving her than catching Aasim Khan?" Colonel said loudly.

"Yes it is." Maan look at his eyes sharply. "It is written in our constitution saving life of an innocent is more impotent than arresting hundreds of criminals."

Colonel was dumbstruck for a few minutes.

"Major Maan Singh Khurana" He said in low but strong voice. "I guess you know what should be an army man's main duty'" He stopped for a second to drink water. "to follow order of his senior.."

Maan kept silent.

"answer Major. You know it or not?"

"Yes sir."

"From now you will follow my order." His tone became more dangerous.

" sir." Maan replied in low voice.

"Good. You may leave." Maan was going to leave but was stopped by Colonel.

"Major.."

He turned back to face Colonel.

"Are you hiding something from me which I should know?"

"No sir."

Colonel looked at Maan's top to bottom with his lazar gaze. "You shouldn't. You may go."

Maan left the cabin.

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*Flash Back*

Maan turned to face him. The well known voice made him speechless.

"none knows about this place." He smiled.

"Dev.." His name came out in a very faint tone from Maan. So low almost impossible to hear.

They hugged each other.

"You are alive? How did you.."

"bro it's a long story.."

"you knew it I am here."

Dev nodded positively.

"Why didn't you tell me?" Maan can't restrain his emotion.

"I.."

"I'm gonna tell dadima you're here.." Maan said excitedly.

"No bro.. That's why I didn't tell you I'm here.. you won't say anyone anything.."

"at least .."

"Dev cut him again.. Promise me bro you won't say any one about it.."

"Ok ..I promise."

*End of Flash Back.*

Maan lean on the pillow, closed his eyes thinking about the happenings. He has only this night to have a peaceful night from next day the world will turn into a maze for him, Love, duty, family he doesn't know which way to go.



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AN: Thanks a lot for reading this FF. I don't know why comments are decreasing and most of the comments are one worded.. like nice, lovely and awesome update. It's really feels disappointing to see a one worded comment.. It needs a lots of time and effort to write.. I expect comment of at least 1 sentence..

Please share your views about this FF.. and criticism is also welcome..

Or may be readers think this FF doesn't worth a comment. Please tell me if you don't like it.

If you don't like it I'm gonna end this FF here..

N I really don't wanna do so .. so plzz do comment😭


XOXO Mimi

Edited by princess_mimi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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iss baar pakka comment karungi ek sath
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Posted: 12 years ago
update Colonel angry and maan met dev



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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor Maan has too much going on !
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg...dev is alive...yippee...!!!
maaneet reach safe place...!!!
asim khan isn't dat bad...he didn't want to kill dem...!!!
conel was hell angry...!!!
nyc update...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...
maan s bound to duty just b/c of colonel..
dev!!??
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Posted: 12 years ago

wow lovely update dear...wow atlast dev was alive...now my maan wat he is going to do...wat happen there..how dev was alive...so thrilling..i love te update so much..
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Posted: 12 years ago
you updated after ages ... Dev is alive ...! shocking...and Geet's bro din kill her frnds ... Interesting ...nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago



somewhere I have this doubts that Dev is alive and created a group to save innocent people...

where is Geet now...is she in Dev's protection...

so Asim never wanted to kill Preeti and Aman and he is trying to protect his sister...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
What is happening who killed preeti and Aman and how is dev alive. contineu soon dear.

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