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congrats on the new thread
awesome amazing beautiful update loved it
arnav speaking great of his grandfather n looking dashing n kushal holding devayani close found that so sweet so the favor was for khushi to organize kushal birthday party n loved how he was manofiy her to attend the party loved how he just get her n understand her so well knownig they the fact that they met each other a while ago that much understanding already loved it n the light conversation between him and aman n arnav twitch with envy that aman knew khushi longer burning with jealousy loved when he said "hold on...i'm not jealous..am i?" loved it n when aman said "hope ur hair fire resistant" hehehe buaji seem fiesty n raja looking handsome kushal doesnt hate raja so funny he like the dog but dislike the owner n arnav took note that kushal isnt fond of khushi
Arnavs adimiring khushi beauty n getting lost in her innocence taking in her apperance "green suit her ...but maybe a red would too" hmmm n his inner desire that was beautifully describe n written and the almost kiss that was magical couldnt stop grinning at that moment my mouth was wide open didnt expect that n scream with joy n the reaction the shock after the kiss,arnav frustration, Khushi confusion fantastically describe n bauji telling her love only happen to married couple just add to her confusion khushi ran to her sercet hide-out which only her n raja knows about really hats off to u everything was just brilliant n perfectly describe n
awesome update cant wait to read more thanks for the pm
Udne Ki Aasha
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