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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: poongs123

hey disha u here hi...



heyyy poongs...

ur previous post gave me a eye sprain ...😆😆
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Originally posted by: disha_Maan.GC



heyyy poongs...

ur previous post gave me a eye sprain ...😆😆

hahhahhhaa😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Originally posted by: poongs123

hahhahhhaa😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

r u in offline ha kya??
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Originally posted by: poongs123

r u in offline ha kya??



no...m online... just showing red light...😉😆😆
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heyyy payalpari...😊
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Thank you friends for your lovely comments. I can see you all enjoyed Maan's cooking a lot.

Cyberlife – Wonderful names – Ms. Raunak and Mr. Cheeky Singh Khurana. I feel like writing a new FF just for the two names to justify it completely.

Anu – Your poems are just mind blowing. I bow down to you yaar. You should try your hand at writing and I am sure you will do a fabulous job.

Speechless – Welcome back dear after a along time. I enjoyed reading your animated comments once again.

-Lakshmi-, Cyberlife – Sorry Guys. Weekend update is very tough for me. Family time so tough to get away.

VERY IMPORTANT: Please add ritzypm as buddy to gets PMs for this FF

Chapter 43

The beauty of a woman
isn't in the clothes she wears,
The figure that she carries,
or the way she combs her hair.

The beauty of a woman
must be seen from in her eyes;
Because that's the doorway to her heart,
the place where love resides.

The beauty of a woman
isn't in a facial mole;
But true beauty in a woman,
is reflected by her soul.

It's the caring that she cares to give,
the passion that she shows;
And the beauty of a woman
with passing years only grows.

Contributed by Anu (hermoso)

All were shocked seeing Geet enter wet and so happy but Rano was now sure something was fishy.

She asked her as Geet crossed her "Beta tum bheeg kaise gayi?"

[Beta, how did you get all wet?]

Geet answered without thinking as she was still under Maan's spell – "Woh Maan se milne mein…."

[In meeting Maan…]

Geet eyes widened and she gulped her saliva as she finally realized what she said.

She turned around to see her family all staring at her.

Rano closed the distance – "Chup kyon ho gayi beta…Maan se milne mein what?"

[Why have you become quiet? In meeting Maan what?]

Geet – "Woh Mom woh, Maan bahar wait kar rahe the toh meine socha neeche hi good night wish kar deti hoon nahi toh woh bahut zaydaa bheeg jayenge"

[Woh Mom woh, Maan was waiting outside so I thought that let me wish him good night from there only otherwise he will get soaked.]

"Good night wish karne ke liye aaye the Maan?"

[Maan came to wish you Good Night]

"Ji"

"Ji…matlab"

Geet responded hesitatingly - "Woh roz mujhe good morning and good night wish karne ke liye aate hain"

[He comes daily to wish me good morning and good night.]

Rano was surprised but Mohinder and Rahul were just dazed. Geet looked at their expressions and clarified - "Woh…he just wishes me….that's all."

Mohinder now came closer – "He did not want this relationship and we gave him freedom. Now why is he coming after you? What does he want to prove? And he thinks by wishing you two times a day he can get your forgiveness and trust."

"I don't know all that dad. All I know is ki since the time I have met him, he has been very reserved. He doesn't express much but nowadays I feel as if he is trying to tell me what he feels. He has taken care of me before also but first time, he is going out of his way to make me feel special…make me feel loved…or just plain simple wanted.

Mein kya karoon Dad…kya karoon. Maybe I am melting…maybe I want to give him another chance….apni zindagi ke liye har koi ladtha hai dad…and he is my life."

With that tears fell from Geet's eyes and she ran to her room.

Rano caressed Mohinder's arm – "Yeh un donon ke beech ki baat hai….humein un donon ko hi suljhane deni chaiye."

[It is between both of them…we should let them fix it themselves.]

Mohinder was thinking but Rahul was still very angry.

"Mom, aap toh humseha se hi Maan ki side leti aayi ho but I do not trust that man with my sister anymore."

[Mom, you always take Maan's side but I do not trust that man with my sister anymore.]

"How can you say that? Main uski side nahi hoon Rahul….mein apni beti ki side hoon. Jab usne mujhe pehle yeh sab bataya tha tab use door jaane mein is se kam dard hota…kam complications hoti. Mera dil toh kiya tha ki mein use apne aanchal mein chupa loon but life is not that simple. They are married and she has every right to choose the path she wants. Hum sirf uska saath de sakte hain kyonki humaare liye uski happiness apni ego, hurt and respect se kahi badi hain"

[How can you say that? I am not on his side Rahul…I am at my daughter's side. When she had told me earlier about all this then it would have hurt her less to walk away…there would have been less complications. My heart wanted to hide her in my arms but life is not that simple. They are married and she has every right to choose the path she wants. We can only support her because her happiness matters to us more than our own ego, hurt and respect.]

She turned towards Mohinder

"Aur waise bhi kaunse maa baap yeh change ki unki beti ka ghar toot jaye. Boliye Mohinder, kya aap chahte hain ki aap ki beti ka sach mein divorce ho jaye? Rahul…tum kya chahte ho? Kya divorce se use khushi mil jayegi?

If she still has hope for this relationship then who are we to stand in her way?

I know that I can not live her life for her. Apne hisse ka sukh dukh har kisi ko jhelna hota hai. But I am going to be there with her always to support her because for me nothing else matter. I know I am being selfish but maa hoon. I am and will only be supporting my daughter and no one else."

[Moreover, which parents wants that their daughter's house should break? Tell me Mohinder, do you actually want that your daughter should get divorced? Rahul, what do you want? Will she get her happiness with divorce?

If she still has hope for this relationship then who are we to stand in her way?

I know that I can not live her life for her. Everyone has to bear the happiness and pain written in their destiny. But I am going to be there with her always to support her because for me nothing else matter. I know I am being selfish but I am mother. I am and will only be supporting my daughter and no one else.]

Geet was crying when she got text from Maan "Good Night and hope you are taking care of your self."

His text brought a smile to her face and she kissed the text. Haan uska dil toota zarror tha but she knew that she can never be happy without him.

Next Day

Geet reached gallery and her eyes started looking for Maan. She found him coming towards her with a smile and a bouquet.

Geet wished him "Good Morning"

"Good Morning. This is for you"

Geet caressed the beautiful flowers in her hand.

"Yeh?"

"These are camellia flowers. They are known for their good luck charm. Aaj tumhaari painting exhibition hai for abc company project. I am sure everyone will love your work and this is just an additional wish from my side."

Geet was very touched by Maan's gesture.

"aapko kaise pata?"

[How do you know?]

"Tumne hi toh bataya tha London jaane se pehle….bhool gayi…coffee peete waqt"

[You only told me before I went to London…you forgot…while having coffee?]

Geet was surprised that he remembered and got her flowers.

"Aap ko yaad tha? Mujhe toh laga tha ki mein hi bolti rehti hoon aur aap kuch sunte hi nahi ho."

[You remembered? I thought that I only keep on speaking and you don't listen to anything.]

Maan smiled at her cute complaint – "Jaanta hoon ki aaj tak tumhein kabhi kuch kaha hi nahi aur jo kuch kaha galat kaha. Lekin, it is a fact that our coffee time is very special to me. It takes away all my tensions. I miss it a lot. Maine humseha tumhaari baat suni hai bas shayaad kabhi jataya nahi.

All the best and have a good day."

[I know I never said anything to you and whatever I said was wrong. But, it is a fact that our coffee time is very special to me. It takes away all my tensions. I miss it a lot. I have always listened to what you said but maybe never showed it.

All the best and have a good day.]

Geet smiled as Maan waved her a bye and left. Her day indeed went very well with client very happy with her paintings. But more than that she was filled with happiness and a new hope had made space in her heart. Even stronger than before, she was gripped with a new determination to make this relationship work.

"He always heard what I said. Shayad mein hi unhein sun nahi payi."

[He always heard what I said. Maybe I only could not hear him.]

She sat in the car at the end of the day and lovingly caressed the flowers. She inhaled the aroma.

"Maan mein kitni budhu hoon. Maine humesha yehi chaha ki aap mujhe apnayein…pyaar karien. Aur aaj jab you are ready toh mein peeche hat rahi hoon. After a long time I am getting what my heart truly desires than why this hesitancy. I need to grab this opportunity to fulfill all my dreams and fill my life with your love.

I am sorry Maan for hurting you lekin I can not stay away from you any more. Jitna expect kiya tha use se kahi zaydaa aapne mujhe diya hai…ab aapki Geet aapse kabhi door nahi jayegi.

I am coming Maan. Aapki Geet aaj hi wapis ghar aa rahi hai…aapke paas."

[Maan, I am so stupid. I always wanted you to accept me…love me. And now when you are ready, then I am stepping back. After a long time I am getting what my heart truly desires than why this hesitancy? I need to grab this opportunity to fulfill all my dreams and fill my life with your love.

I am sorry Maan for hurting you but I can not stay away from you any more. You have given much more than what I expected …now your Geet will never go afar from you.

I am coming Maan. Your Geet is coming back home…to you.]

Precap - For few seconds he heard nothing other than the sound of crying and then heard a soft whisper "Maan"

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Me first. YAY. Chal6 let me read the update first.
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