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Posted: 12 years ago
will be waiting for Geet's decision..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzypm

don't worry Ash...I am stalking my own thread due to restictions😆

dii they hve restriction on the number of posts u make in 24hrs
my 10 posts over😭
grrr hate it😡

and wow..me waiting
and also updating tonyt!!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you friends for your lovely comments. Hope you will enjoy this part.

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Chapter 42

pal pal dil ke paas tum rahati ho

jivan meethi pyaas yeh kahati ho

pal pal dil ke paas tum rahati ho

Later in the night, Geet walked out in her balcony as cool breeze flew in. She was just gazing around when she was again dazed to see Maan standing outside on the road. As their eyes met, Maan made a sign by folding his both hands under his head (as if sleeping) and flew her a kiss and waved her a good night.

Geet rubbed her eyes thinking she was dreaming and then remembered his words in the morning "unless I see you before I sleep, I can't sleep"

Geet raised her hand to wave at him and he finally drove away. Geet kept on staring at the empty space he left behind still trying to assimilate what happened.

har shaam aankho par teraa aanchal laharaaye

har raat yaado ki baaraat le aaye

main saans letaa hu teri khushabu aati hai

ek mahaka mahaka sa paigaam laati hai

mere dil ki dhadakan bhi tere geet gaati hai

pal pal dil ke paas tum rahati ho

"Pata nahi woh kitni der se mera wait kar rahe the? He actually came to wish me good night. What is going on?"

She blushed at the mere thought of Maan wanting to see her in the morning and then before he slept. It almost seemed he was sharing not only his day but his dreams too with her. She twirled happily in her room and then went thud on her bed. Lost in her dream world, she dozed off waiting for the next day.

Next Day

Geet got ready on time and hurried to her gallery so that Maan doesn't get late. On one side she was not sure if he will come today but at the same time she did not want him to be late or miss a chance of meeting him. It was as if her heart wished and knew that he will be there.

He was off course there but not alone. Even Vicky was there all dressed to go to school. Maan knew that today she will come on time. His heart knew that she knew he will be there waiting for her.

Vicky squealed in delight "Tayiji….I missed you so much."

Geet felt very guilty of hurting Vicky, Daadima, Dev and Meera. She ruffled his hair "Sorry beta."

"Koi na Tayiji…bade papa explained to me how you miss your mom na. It's ok. He also promised to make me meet you"

Geet kissed Vicky on his cheeks and mouthed a thank you to Maan with tears shimmering in her eyes. She was missing Vicky too.

Vicky handed her a box.

Geet asked him – "Yeh kya hai?"

[What is this?]

"Aapke liye maine aur bade papa ne milkar banaya hai. Aaj I got up early and as per our plan we both cooked this for you. It is your favorite pasta….hai na bade papa"

[Bade Papa and I have made it together for you. Today, I got up early and as per our plan we both cooked this for you. It is your favorite pasta….isn't it bade papa]

Geet looked at Maan with tears now almost threatening to fall "Maan…Aapne mere liye…"

[Maan…you did this for me]

She was too choked to continue.

Maan wiped her tears.

"Are yeh kya Geet. Hum dono ne itni mehnat ki."

[What is this Geet? We both put in so much effort.]

"Haan subah jaldi uthe aur maine Pokemon bhi miss kiya"

[Yes, got up early and missed my Pokemon too.]

"Aur tum ro rahi ho. We did it for your smile not for your tears Jaa"

[And you are crying. did it for your smile not for your tears Jaa]

Maan bit his tongue before Jaan could slip out from his mouth but Geet still understood the endearment he wanted to use. She wiped the remaining tears and smiled

"Thank you Thank you so much"

She gave a tight kiss on Vicky's cheek as their eyes met on top of his head.

kal tujhako dekha tha maine apane aangan me

jaise kah rahi thi tum mujhe baandh lo bandhan me

yeh kaisa rishta hai, yeh kaise sapane hain

begaane ho kar bhi, kyun lagate apane hain

main soch main rahataa hu, dar dar ke kahata hu

pal pal dil ke paas tum rahati ho

She called up Daadima in the evening

"Hello Daadima."

"Geet beta…kaisi hain aap. Hum bahut shamind.."

[Geet beta…how are you? I am very asham…]

"Daadima please, aisa mat kahiye. Mujhe kisi se koi shikayat nahi hai. Aur I tried explaining to dad also that it is not like Maan misbehaved or did anything wrong with me. Sorry toh mujhe kehna chaiye. Pata nahi meri wajah se papa ne aapko kya kaha hoga. I am sorry Daadima. Please app unki kisi baat ka bura mat maniyega. Chota samajh ke mujhe maaf kar dijiye"

[Daadima please, don't say like this. I have no complaints with anyone. And I tried explaining to dad also that it is not like Maan misbehaved or did anything wrong with me. I should be the one to say sorry. Don't know, what all papa must have said to you because of me. I am sorry Daadima. Please don't take his words to your heart. Forgive us as your kids.]

"Yeah aapki modesty hai beta jo atna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi aap maafi mang rahi hain. Shayad aapse yeh kehna ka haq nahi raha humara but please beta ho sake toh laut aaiye. Aapke bina yeh ghar ghar nahi lagta. Agar aap nahi aayi toh hum shayaad Maan ko kabhi maaf nahi kar payenge"

[It is your modesty that after so much also, you are apologizing. Maybe I don't have any right anymore to say this but please beta, but if possible come back. Without you this house does not feel like a house. If you don't come then likely I will never be able to forgive Maan.]

"Daadima.!!! Please, humne aapse kaha na unki koi galti nahi. Yeh rishte zabardasti nahi bante Daadima. Aur aage se yeh mat kahiyga ka ki aapka koi haq nahi. Humne dil se aapko Daadima bulaya hai. Jab humaari shaadi nahi hui thi tab yeh rishta joda tha aapse. Phir yeh baat kabhi mat kahiyega. Aapko pura haq hai. Daantne ka, zid karne ka, pyaar karne ka.

Aur haan, I am also missing you all so much. I never thought that a day will come when I won't even enjoy in Handa Haveli. Bas Daadima, is baar jab aaungi toh shaq ki gunjayesh na ho yeh soch kar aaungi. Phir se aap sabka aur apna dil nahi tod sakti. I hope…I hope aap humein maaf kar…"

[Daadima!!! Please, I just told you that he is not at fault. Relations can not be built by force. And don't say again that you have no right. I have always called you Daadima from my heart. Even before my marriage, I had formed this bond with you. So don't say this ever again. You have full right. To scold us, to force us, to love us.

And yes, I am also missing you all so much. I never thought that a day will come when I won't even enjoy in Handa Haveli. Just Daadima, this time when I will come, there will be no hesitation. I don't have strength to break my or your heat again. I hope…I hope you will be able to forgive us.]

"Geet beta…aapne humein phone kiye aur aap is bare mein soch rahi hain. Humaare liye yehi bahut hai. Hum jaante hain ki aap bahut mature hain aur hum aapke faisle ka intezaar karenge beta. But I won't lie to you. I will also pray that you decide to come back and give Maan one more chance."

[Geet beta…you called me and are thinking about this. It is enough for us. I know that you are quite mature and will wait for your decision. But I won't lie to you. I will also pray that you decide to come back and give Maan one more chance.]

2 more days passed with Geet and Maan wishing each other good morning and good night.

tum sochogi kyun itana main tumse pyaar karu

tum samajhogi divaana main bhi ikraar karu

divaano ki yeh baate divaane jaanate hain

jalane me kyaa maja hai parvaane jaanate hain

tum yu hi jalaate rahana aa aakar kwaabo me

It was raining that night and Geet got delayed first at gallery and then got stuck in traffic. She reached home and as she entered the gates she realized Maan was waiting for her inside his car. She saw him stepping out in rain and rolled her eyes. She parked the car at the gate and ran to meet him.

"Maan yeh aap kya kar rahe hain. Pura bheeg jayenge. Phone pai hi good night wish kar dete"

[Maan what are you doing? You will get all wet. You could have wished good night on phone itself.]

Maan spoke softly an with lot of love - "Phone par tumhein dekh nahi sakta Geet….mehsoos nahi kar sakta…pehle hi ji nahi bharta toh phir phone se kaise bharta"

[Cant's see you on the phone…can't feel you…now itself, I am not contended then how can just talking on phone would have helped?]

Geet didn't know why but tears welled up in her eyes at his love filled words. Even in rain Maan saw those pearls falling from her eyes. He did not know why but he raised his arms. Geet did not know why but she hugged him tight. It felt as if pain of their 5 day separation poured out of their hearts along with the rain.

Geet calmed herself and came out of his arms. Maan saw with amazement at the doll dressed in white looking no less than an angel. Geet blushed as she saw his adoring gaze.

"Ahem..woh aap ghar jaake jaldi se kapde badal lijiyega nahi toh tabiyat kharaab ho jayegi. Ek hafte mein do baar bheeg chuke hain aap."

[Ahem…please change you clothes immediately after reaching home, otherwise you will fall sick. You have got wet two times in a week.]

And then she looked at him a little sternly "Agar aap bimar pade na toh…no office…no good morning and no good night"

[If you fall sick then…no office…no good morning and no good night.]

With that Geet turned away folding her hands in fake anger.

Maan stepped towards her standing very close to her. She could feel his breath as he answered and got lost in his words – "tum bhi jaldi se jaake kapde badal lena. Agar tum bimaar padi toh I will come inside your house to wish you good morning and good night aur phir tumhaar Hitler bhai pata nahi mera kya karega."

[You also go and change your clothes quickly. If you fall sick then I will come inside your house to wish you good morning and good night and then don't know what your Hitler brother will do to me.]

Geet turned abruptly with her "O" shaped mouth and almost slipped back in his arms forcing him to lean back on the bonnet.

She straightened herself "Hitler bhai….very funny…mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha aap mazaak bhi karna jaante hain"

[Hitler bhai…very funny…I didn't know that you could joke also.]

Maan answered with a straight face - "Mein mazaak kaha kar raha hoon Geet"

[Who said I am joking?]

Geet just rolled her eyes at his cheeky response and marched inside muttering "Dusht Daanav". Before closing the gate she gestured him to get going "Good Night"

Maan smiled slightly "Good Night" and drove away. Geet happily skipped inside with a big smile adoring her face.

pal pal dil ke paas tum rahati ho

jivan meethi pyaas yeh kahati ho

pal pal dil ke paas tum rahati ho

Precap - Aapki Geet aaj hi wapis ghar aa rahi hai…aapke paas

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Posted: 12 years ago
so cute romance
like the way maan treating geet
both are madly loving each other
liked the precape...ha... no more heartbreaks
varna ... ...varna ... what should i do ...i will think after wards
but now
we want geet and maan romantic nights
vo bhi jaldi update karna teekh hai ...
.😡

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was super duper update... first of all thanks for updating again soon... 🤗

It was just beautiful... Love is in air 😳

Vicky - Geet... that was a cute moment... and Daadi - Geet conversation was just brilliant. It had perfect emotions... loved the understanding and bond they share

and ofcourse maaneet were just awesome.. the best... loved their moments... the sweet GM and GN... the wish in the rain... the hug and MSK comment about rahul... everything cute and amazing...

awesome update yaar... thanks and continue soon... precap is making me jump in joy
Edited by shrutheAjay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update yaar...it was so sweet to read the update...maan cooking for geet , waiting for her outside her house to wish good night...all so dreamy...enjoyed reading it and precap looks very good...
waiting for ur next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
it maneet forming love geet insecurities clearing and love talikng that place maan made vicky met geet geet talked to dadi and dadi asked her to come back and maneet rain scene there hug and hitler bhai



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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part dear

so both are acting like new lover

wah maan made breakfast for his jaan

ab to jaan bol do chupa kio rahy

pre cap is really exciting

waiting dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh! shit...cant wait for next one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 update and wonderful precap wating for the next update ..

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