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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lot di...

hope eveyr thign is fine with u 😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Interesting part Harianjana👍🏼

Thanks a lot anu ji, and by the way ur shiv's siggy was so nice...😊
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very nice update hari thanks for pm a lot and sry for late response

No. di. don't tell me sorry, I know u are in ur studies, so I didn't feel sad, U are taking time to read ffs and comment here, thats itself was great fo u 😊 thanks a lot...
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Part 17


Radhika frowned as she listened it... for a minute she doubted "Does Dev know, its me..."

"No no, how will he know, he might be calling to give some file. lets go Radhu."

Radhiak knocked the door before entering and Dev who was freely sitting there signaled her to come in. Radhika came in and standing there folding ehr hands "Sir. any work"

Dev:No no, Now I am not ur boss,just as a friend. Birju is not there na so I am bored, my work was finished so called u here.

Radhika was surprised but trying not to show it on face she said "haan Dev boliye., actually I am really sorry for the afternoon thing its Vishaka di had some problem there and I was worried for her so ..."

Dev who was lost in his own thoughts didn't care for Vishakas thing and he asked Radhika " Radhika, why did u jump in the river this mng. "

Radhika:U still had that in ur mind.. yeah actually I know that u don't know swimming so i was concerned and I jumped into water.

Dev:But how did u know?

Radhika:Wo.. Daadima ne humesha aapke baarein mein hi bolti rehti hain. Isiye bachpan se bhi kuch jaante hain aapke baarein mein(Dadima, always used to talk abt u . thats why I know abt u from childhood.). I like to talk to her a lot... Indeed I love her a lot... and when ever I am molishing her leg or massaging her head she used to say abt u. in that way I know.

Dev:U used to massage Daadima's head.

Radhika said as it was obvious question "Haan, she used to be in Vrindavan for long time and urs house was on the way to our gurukul and every evening on my way back to home I used to come to ur home and spend some time with daaima. even now too I would like to, but she will like to spend more time with u so I am not coming. Other wise I would be in Ur house only from 4 to 5 as from 5 I will leave to evening aarthi at temple. "

Dev:But why did u do those cleaning work and all of temple, its the work that would be done by workers right.

Radhika:I don't know, I like to do the seva to god. and I would like to work for Kanha, a this is the time I could spend there lonely enjoying every aspect of the temple, which gave me many valuable things in my life.

Dev smiled and said "And that back side of temple, why u go there always. is it any specialty."

Radhika:I like that place so I would like to go there and sing... and specialty was there , I used to share every thing of my word to my best friend whom I met there.

Dev:Whom?

Radhika:Mere Kishan kannayya.

Dev:Kishan kannayya... He felt the word very much familiar, but he couldn't place it...

Radhika:Kya hua Dev any thing wrong. She was anticipating that he will get some recognition with name

Dev:No, feel like I heard this word so...

Radhika:Oh... , Radhika felt happy...

Radhika thought to her self "Why won't u Dev when I would have called u with this word for some thousands of times..."

Dev:Haan got it...

Radhika looked at him with expectation

Dev:Its the word used for Kanha right, so u used to share every thing with kanha.

Radhika smiled and said :Right, i used to share every thing with Kanha .But she felt dissapointed for not being able to say him that along with Kanha she share every thing with her K.K too

Dev:And... that day the song u sung, really it was beautiful I should accept it...

Radhika:thank u ...

Dev was abt to say something when he stopped and started to place thing together he was playing radhika's voice in his mind he suddenly exclaimed "How did I miss it..."

Radhika:What happened?

Dev:U only sung the aarthi today mng in temple right

Radhika:Haan its me,I leave for temple to do aarthi.

Dev;Yeah today mng i listened the song. again it was beautiful and I wondered who sung it, but i missed the voice of urs as...

Radhika:As u never pay attention to it. Becoz u are always in ur world of business and indeed D.P who hates girls will have to pay attention to any girls voice?

Dev smiled and said "Of course u are right. But won't u feel bad for the things. "

Radhika:No Dev, I won't

Dev:But generally girls does right.

Radhika:May be I don't know, but I wont indeed why should I, there's no rule that u should pay attention to my voice or u should pay attention to me and indeed why would u, U strangely know me for some days only...

Dev:If ever I know u from a long time and still I behave with u in same way as i does now...

Radhika: Till I won't mind, becoz u know me from a long time means, I too would know u and might have understand ur mind set. May be its ur mind set that u don't do. then its ur way, every person in this world wouldn't be of same kind right. so I won't mind.

Dev thought to him self "May be she was right person..."

Radhika was trying to get what he was thinking and then Dev only spoke... 'Radhika, I would like to take ur help some issue"

Radhika:haan Dev Ask me what help did u need.

Dev:Actually matter was a bit complicated and also a bit confusing too...

Radhika trying to place what it was "I assure that I will keep it a secret."

Dev: Its a bit personal, and in these two years i never discussed a personal matter with any other so I am hesitating, I am not knowing how to place it...

Radhika kept silent understanding the situation... but she wondered what might be the problem was...

Dev gathering his words 'Erm. actually that day I came to party becoz I got call from some girl who talked to me in a different way , she irritated me to the utmost so I came here to give left and right to her. "

Radhika: Did u expect her to be in this party

Dev:Yeah. actually she herself said I can find her if ever I came there.

Radhika:Did u get her.

Dev:Nope I didn' t find her that day but instead I has to stay for some time in that bunch of cats to utmost irritation.

Radhika frowned to the way he referred Vishakas friends...

Dev:Sorry sorry. not u.. but remaining members there. i doesn't like girls when they unnecessarily try to show how fashioned they are.

Radhika smiled and said "Nothing like that"

Dev:And later she used to call me and disturb me saying that she had been my friend for 15 years and she was indeed my best friend too...

Radhika:Oh...

Dev:But I didn't heard of any girl like that from any of friens or daadima. Then how can I believe that she was my friend/

Radhika:May be they didn't know.

Dev:What does that mean.


Radhika:I mean, i am saying it based on what Daadima said abt u, U used to do chatting a lot then. I mean even u used to chat with R.P uncle and Vaishali aunty too instead of phone and mostly u preferred chatting.May be she must have been ur chat friend, in that way...

Dev: But ...

Radhika:If ever she was ur friend she should know some thing abt u, that was known only to ur friends.

Dev:Yeah she know a thing abt me which even I doesn't know, she exactly know that i doesn't know swimming,

Radhka:But this was known only to dadima as u shared it with her only... how can she know?

Dev:That only, may be she was indeed a friend of me...

Radhika:May be...

Dev:Actually to say, now also she was knowing my daily things, what I am doing now and every thing. Looks like she was following me as a shadow.

Radhika:Means u think she's in Vrindavan or Delhi

Dev:exactly... and she knows every thing abt me, she was saying the best secrets of mine which was known to none.

Radhika:Best secrets?

Dev feeling embarrased :Erm... about my dates with girls...

Radhika smiled and said "Sorry continue. "

Dev:I just wanna know whom she was, I am sure I would not have believed a girl unless she was good, and I just doesn't wanna miss that girl as my friend now.

Radhika surprised to see D.P thinking not to miss a girls' friendship. She maintaining her cool posture "So what do u need from me"

Dev:Nothing...she was refusing to say her name and was asking me think go back into my memory and think of my past...

Radhika:Yes, she might be trying to get ur memory back.

Dev:Haan but I am trying to gain but I can't , So any help.


Radhika:See Dev, I am sorry to say but I am not a doctor to treat u n getting ur memory back, but... haan I had an idea I remember Daadima once talking to AMmaji that u were planning to write a diary. I don't know whether u succeeded or not, but at least u can search in ur flat at U.K so that u can get ur diaries if u write any. If ever u had a friend, u should have wrote abt her.

Dev:Thanks a lot, idea toh acha hain. but U.K flat ki keys...

Radhika:Keys were with Vivek bro.

Dev:What will I answer him.

Radhika thought for a while... she said "Yeah one idea Dev, u will leave to Canada right.. U can say to bro that from Canada u are going to U.K for some work regarding some documents and u will take two days there so u need the keys of the flat. "

Dev:Brilliant Radhika, I doesn't know what would have I done if ever u wasn't there here today.

Radhika gave a faint smile and thought to her self "Kanha, he was asking me the suggestion to know abt me. what a situation I am in. the sarcasm of the situation was out of world"

Radhika :Can I ask u a thing

Dev:Haan

Radhika:That girl... I mean not to say any thing wrong, but why are u interested that much

Dev:I know it will be strange to listen me interested to know abt a girl but, she knows every thing abt me, and may be meeting her may get me every thing abt my past and may be she was a good girl. why would I loose the friendship of a girl whom looks like I believed utmost.

Radhika smiled and said "Right."

Dev:Radhika another word is there...

Radhika:haan

Dev :May be I would have forgot my memory, but I know what my mind set would have been. I hate girls now, that's a different thing becoz of an incident that happened after I lost my memory, i doesn't wanna discuss abt it, but I can at least guess how my mind set would have been then, and I doubt I loved her.

Radhika:did she say any thing to u like that

Dev"No she doesn't but why will I even share my dates unless I love her.May be there's some thing which I hided from her too. May be...

Radhika un easily nodded and said "May be..."

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Radhika was in her room.sitting in the easy chair beside the window looking at the mountains in the distance.The full moon and clouds are playing hide and seek game and in a normal day she would have been smiled and enjoyed the view or would have been msgd to Dev saying how beautiful it was here. but today she was having some thing in her mind... she has many thoughts running inside her brain...

'Does we share any love relation...'

Radhika got up from there and went into the balcony...

'I just doesn't wanna miss that girl as my friend now.'

Radhika uneasily moved from there and sat at the swing.

'I doubt I loved her. '

Radhika shifted her position on the swing again un easily...

"Betiyaan, aap toh office mein hi so gaye na, isliye Dev babu aapko yaha tak laaya"


Radhika stood up she went in and felled on her bed...

She was remembering all her instances with Dev. Her first meeting with Dev in the Disco and was getting pulled to him, next later their meeting in P.B when Dev lifted her and swirled her round. Next their meeting at Party, next she working with Dev and Dev bringing her home. today mng she was jumping into water and he saving her ...

Radhika had a smile tucked on her lips and said " Dev u are mis understanding our relation Dev, we both are only best friends.. and we share that only. "

"Are u saying this words to Dev or urself ?"

Radhika looked up to see her very form smiling standing there.

Radhika asked her "Who are u ?"

Radhika 2 laughed and said "I am ur inner sense. Ur inner person."

Radhika said "What do u mean by saying that I am saying it to my self."

Radhika 2 smiled and said "Warna kya Radhika...U feel ur self attracted to him... U always think of him, even indeed forget ur self and work for him. But still U think that u don't love him"

Radhika frowning "I promised to Mrinalini didi that I will bring his memory back and trying to do that, and jaha tak baat kaam ki, vus khadoos ke saath kaam karna hain toh aisa hi honi chahiye." (And upto where the talk was abt work, workign with that khadoos means I has to be like that)

Radhika2:Acha... then how can u feel him around u, or can say when he looks for u.

Radhika:Don't u know how friendly me and Dev used to be.

Radhika2 :haan. then why did u cry every day when he didn't speak to u, why did u crave for him for two years, why did u let ur self in hell.

Radhika:Kyun tum jaante nahi ho. jis insaan se main 13 saal apni chaya ki tarah banaya, jis insaan se main apni choti pe choti baat banake rakha tha, jis insaan mera zindagi mein apni maa-baap aur ammaji aur Kanha ji ki tarah ek important part ban gaya, vus insaan jis ki good mng se main uth thi hoon, jis insaan vuski gud nyt dekhne bina main nahi soti hun, vus insaan mujhse do saal baat nahi kiya, vo bhi bina kaaran se, humko kya lagega...9Don't u know, I had made him as a shadow or mirror of mine for 13 yers. he had been my important part for 13 years, and he is that person with out whose gud nyt I won't sleep and with whose gud mng I wake up. That person didn't talk to me for 2 years , i even doesn't know whether he's alive or not. Won't I supposed to cry?"

Radhika2 smiled and said "Radhu isn't it called love."

Radhika:He's my best friend.

Radhika2:Is there in this world that best friends can't be lovers...

Radhika:How can I love my best friend.

Radhika2:Okay what love means for u, what did u need from any person u love.

Radhika:I don't need crores of money but need that much love from him, no mention even he doesn't work but he should care for me. Should know abt my very small necessities, should take care of my happiness and when I see him I shouldn't remember any other person when he is in front of me.

Radhika2:Radhika ek din please forget that he was ur best friend Dev and see whether u feel for him or not. then U will know what I said was right u love him.

Radhika:It will never happen

Radhika2:Hain na, whats wrong if u do a trial for one day

Radhika:Okay, but I am saying u it will be a fail trial.

Radhika2 smiled and disappeared.

Radhika looked around and once again lost in thoughts she was thinking of what her inner voice was saying " Is it... No no no how can it be, he's my best friend, may be my inner voice is mis leading me."

"Radhu... Radhu..."

Radhika came to the door and opened it to find Vishaka beside it. Radhika was surprised..

"Di"

Vishaka:Wo... actually u didn't eat food right, so I thought why not I accompany u in ur dinner in ur room, am I allowed.

Radhika:Of course di, come in

Vishaka came in, it was first time she was coming into Radhika's room... she liked the way the candles were lit and the room was. it was having a pleasant atmosphere.

Radhika:Sit di.

Vishaka sat on sofa and said "Radhu, eat na"

Radhika:Nahi di, mujhe khane ka man nahi hain. (No di, I don't have any mood to eat)

Vishaka:Kyun, tabiyat tikh toh hain na, koi gadbad nahi hain na(Ur health was fine right, there's no any illness na)

Radhika surprising "haan di, meri tabiyat toh thik hain, bas Khane ka man nahi hain" (Yeah I am completely alright, but doesn't wish to eat)

Vishaka:Office mein kuch problem hain kya. (No problem in office na)

Radhika:Aisa kuch nahi hain di, dost se thoda sa jagda hua tha. 9Nothing liek that too, a small quarrel with a friend)

Vishaka:Oh... koi bhi tum se jyaada din tak naaraj nahi ho sakthe hain,9Oh... none can be angry on u for long time) they only come and will talk to u.

Radhika was surprising... 'what happened to di '

Vishaka: Actually I came here to ask u one thing.

Radhika frowned...

Vishaka: I know I behaved badly with u all these days, I just wanna ask u sorry. I know one sorry can never substitute or erase all the pain I gave u by my taunting s or my behavior, but at least it can tell u that I changed. I know it will be difficult to believe, but what can I do to prove that I was changed, I don't know.So, I just want one more chance, I just wanna prove my self as a good sister and good daughter. Radhika will u give me that chance.

Radhika was having tears in her eyes, but she controlled them and said "Di, u doesn't know how happy I was today and I never had any anger or bad intentions for u di. And for sure, u are a good sister. No need for u to say sorry to me di. Becoz u are my sister. "

Vishaka hugged Radhika and Radhika to returned the hug.


Later Vishaka and Radhika chatted for a long time, and Radhika came to know much about her. She indeed felt sad for her some times when she described Radhika about why she used to behave like that and the words she used to get and her insecurities.Radhika too talked to her abt her self and the way she used to love her and all. "

Radhika thanked Kanha a lot for "making Vishaka changed"

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At same time Dev was standing at the window of his room...

He was getting remembrance of Radhikas smile and her face...

Dev:Damn. whats happening to me, why was u getting into me Radhika.

" Till I won't mind, ebcoz u know me from a long time means, I too would know u and might have understand ur mind set. May be its ur mind set that u don't do. then its ur way, every person in this world wouldn't be of same kind right. so I won't mind. '

Dev:How can be u so good Radh, I love ur voice, I love ur face. U make me see things in a different way, what shit is this Radhs. I always love to hear ur voice, and seeing ur smiling face will relieve me, why. Whats wrong with u rey...

Daadima:Whats up Dev ? why are u talking in ur self.

Dev:daadi maa, aap kab aagaye...(dadimaa, when did u come)

Daadima:Abhi Dev. lagta hain kuch pareshan mein ho.(Now only, looks like u was in a tension)

Dev:Nahi Daadi, actually I had a friend , he had some problem and he asked me for a solution and I am thinking abt it.

Daadima:Oh... whats the problem.

Dev:Daadima, darasal baat ye hain ki, he know a girl, generally wo bahut reserved hain, and he won't talk much to girls, but with this girl na, he wanna listen to her, he wanna seee her and even he was saying that he gets relieved when he see her. and He was not knowing why he feels that way to her. He was thinking that he was doing some thing wrong/

Daadima smiled and said " Dev, tell ur friend that he was not doing any wrong, he was loving her."

Dev:Love...

Daadima:Haan..Jab kisi ko bhi kisi aur insaan se baatein karne ka, aur baar baar dekhne ka mann kar raha hain toh, vo jaroor vus ladki se pyaar karne lage hain(When a person feels to hear other person, or see her, it means they were in love with her )

Dev:Lekin, he barely knows her , How can he love her.

Daadima:Dev! It was never said thta u love a person when u know them for days or years, to fall in love one second is enough/ Its a scientifically proven fact.

Dev:But How can he believe her, how can she be trust worthy/

Daadima: Dev, I don't know wether it may be ridiculous .. but definitely if any one love a person that person would be trust worthy atleast to the person who loves her. And indeed a man will select a girl only when she is trust worthy to him.

Dev:How can it be known.

Daadima:That won't be known from out side, we will have our sixthsense, which automatically will identify such a person and make us fall in love with them. That only some called destiny...

Dev:Is it true...

Daadima:Its true, if u want as k ur friend to test that girl.

Dev smiled.

Dadima:Lekin ye friend hain koun, Kahi Birju toh nahi hain na,\(But who's this friend?., don't tell me its Birju)

Dev:Birju ko itna scene nahi hain... vo toh daily ek ladki ko change karte jo hain. (Birju doesn't have this much scene, he changes a girl a day)

Dadima:He didn't find his true love yet, the day he finds he wil no longer do it.

Dev:I doubt does it ever happen.

Dadima: Dev, I know u won't like to discusse these things, but love indeed exists, and the day u ge it na, u will be the luckiest person in the world/

Dev:Love and all is rubbish and that too with girls... no way they are not at all trust worthy/

Dadima:Tere saath kya hua, aur kis liye tum aisa nafrat karne lage ho mujhe maloom nahi, lekin saari lakiyaan ek jaise nahi hote hain. (What happened with u I don't know, but all girls are not one)

Dev: Haan every one won;t be but most will be the same.

Daadima shook her head and said " Acha Dev... wo kal evening we are coming to Delhi and Radhika need to be early here, so will u permit her to go by 4:00"

Dev looked at Daadima and said "Okay"

He was angry on Radhika...

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PRECAP:


Radhika was wearing a pink color chudidaar having the dupatta on her head and was closing her eyes singing the bhajan. every one there were having their eyes closed and beside Radhika Vishaka was doing the aarthi.

Dev leaned to a pillar and was seeing Radhika's face, her face has that smile radiating when she was singing the bhajan and the smile was adding much to her already existing beauty which Dev wondered that Kanha himself might get lost if ever he saw her.

Dev who was lost took his flute and started to play in accordance...

Radhika smiled more as she heard the music she felt her self singing the song becoming Radha and Kanha playing the flute...

Mohan,Devki,Mrinalini , Vishaka and Ammaji opened their eyes and turned back to see Dev playing the flute while Radhika was singing and Vishaka signaled to Devki that whether she should stop. Devki whispered to Vishaka "No Vishaka u shouldn't stop the aarthi in middle, u continue ur self. "

Vishaka nodded and Mrinalini thought to her self " Ye kya, Kanha looks like history is repeating it self warna ye kya hain. "

Mohan looked at Ammaji who had a frown on her face, the previous day incident only disturbed them a lot about Radev and this incident was much more disturbing, but still they kept quiet.
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Thanks a lot for ur comments,... I appreciate all ur efforts in coming ehre and commenting.Hope u people like my this update too, and I say all of u thanks for bearing me to this extent 😉 But always love u all...

Hari 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
great update waiting for the next one
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THANKS HARI VERY NICE UPDATE
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interesting update ...i like radh playing double role with dev ...also dev confusing talks ...
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lovely update hari waiting for the next part
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Beautiful update.Hope this time there would be no confusion between RaDev.

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