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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kishmish

Yes ... read the chapter again ...

Serendipity ...
"Every girl I showed to him, he kept saying no. Finally he must have gotten fed up because he told me to pick one and he would marry her. So, I picked..." another pause... "who I thought was you... and showed him the picture and he said yes, if I liked her, then she would do."
but ... in chapter 6 ...Nirmala is having a conversation with her Mother ...
True Lies ...
"But he wants you." I heard my mom say and looked up in surprise. That was not what I had been expecting to hear.

"You did show him my picture, right?" What sort of blind man was he?

I saw Amma shake her head. "His parents and other family did. But he didn't. He said his marriage is fixed with Nirmala, not Rima. And that seeing your picture is not going to change the fact. And given that one picture had already been misleading, he would rather just see you in person." ...

Ah ...If his presence in room(their 1st meeting...makes her feel of his presence...then...There has to be a fact that...he must be hoping that the picture mishap has lead back to the lost and found gem!! You never know with these two...and their intuitions ...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry ladies,
My sisters came up for a visit this weekend and hence, no FF writing got done, although they have threatened to stop reading my FFs if I don't update Lavender and BIFA soon... hehe... so they understand your pain.
I just updated KH because (like I said before), that story just comes more easily to me at this juncture. I will update BIFA and Lavender tomorrow once I recover from the weekend and get some good sleep.

Meanwhile, you continue on with your discussions :)

-Devi
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Posted: 13 years ago
D ( Please ignore this)😳, this post is only for discussion as i could not resist adding my US$ 0.02

Went through all the discussions and seeing all the proofs and documentation and feeling unduly sympathetic towards Manu for some reason and getting taken in by all the surprise and shock facial expressions that I assume that he is giving to Niki, I want to believe that

- he decided to say yes to marriage to his mom to get her off his back. 😆
- he thought he will keep rejecting the proposals that come his way. 😆
- he could not believe his stars and good fortune when the name of one Nirmala Malhotra was suggested. Of course he is so smart that he knew her name. Did he not know it when she was a newbie so to speak. 😃 So he did not even look at the photo that was extended towards him. 😆

This I am saying from my vast serial watching experience. He just knew that there was no other Nirmala in the first year, so it had to be her and so he did not even look at the photo which conveniently flew either near the window or was placed upside down ( take your pick) on the table and he had no confusion in his mind as to who Nirmala was.

Now how this idiot is going to explain all this to Niki urf Nirmala is the 'curiosity killed the cat' question.

😆

D, As i said, I love KH a lot, so I am in a win-win situation, whichever you feel like updating. 😆 Sleep well.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sana, thanks a ton. I had missed that chapter.

Now, until that chapter, it appeared that the possibility that the gentleman had known that Nirmala was Niki was high. [I actually pulled out extracts of conversations from earlier chapters:-)] But, Serendipity appears to throw that possibility straight out of the window, leaving that possibility desperately trying to cling onto the bars and attempt to pull itself back. Well, the possibility can still hold onto the bars because it is his mother's point of view.

I do need to mull over your earlier post. But even if you did defend him, by pointing us to Serendipity, you graciously threw the gentleman into a cauldron of boiling soup that is sitting on a lit stove and simultaneously removed the knob from the stove! 😈

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Usha, ha ha. Let's see if Abhimanyu (of the Class of 1979) justifies the Manu creed and lives up to the code of the serial leads. As to how is going to explain all this to her, well, we can only come up with the wildest of guesses. 30 years later, he'll approach Maan and Geet (of the Reel fame) with a script and ask them to make a movie and address a note via a post-script to Nirmala urf Nikki.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16

D ( Please ignore this)😳, this post is only for discussion as i could not resist adding my US$ 0.02

Went through all the discussions and seeing all the proofs and documentation and feeling unduly sympathetic towards Manu for some reason and getting taken in by all the surprise and shock facial expressions that I assume that he is giving to Niki, I want to believe that

- he decided to say yes to marriage to his mom to get her off his back. 😆
- he thought he will keep rejecting the proposals that come his way. 😆
- he could not believe his stars and good fortune when the name of one Nirmala Malhotra was suggested. Of course he is so smart that he knew her name. Did he not know it when she was a newbie so to speak. 😃 So he did not even look at the photo that was extended towards him. 😆

This I am saying from my vast serial watching experience. He just knew that there was no other Nirmala in the first year, so it had to be her and so he did not even look at the photo which conveniently flew either near the window or was placed upside down ( take your pick) on the table and he had no confusion in his mind as to who Nirmala was.

Now how this idiot is going to explain all this to Niki urf Nirmala is the 'curiosity killed the cat' question.

😆

D, As i said, I love KH a lot, so I am in a win-win situation, whichever you feel like updating. 😆 Sleep well.

Whatever the reasons ... They are married now ... 😉 and he does have a mammoth of a task ahead to woo his lady love ... 😳 and only six days at his disposal ... waiting to see how Devi makes him save his skin ... 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hegdemedha

Sana, thanks a ton. I had missed that chapter.

Now, until that chapter, it appeared that the possibility that the gentleman had known that Nirmala was Niki was high. [I actually pulled out extracts of conversations from earlier chapters:-)] But, Serendipity appears to throw that possibility straight out of the window, leaving that possibility desperately trying to cling onto the bars and attempt to pull itself back. Well, the possibility can still hold onto the bars because it is his mother's point of view.

I do need to mull over your earlier post. But even if you did defend him, by pointing us to Serendipity, you graciously threw the gentleman into a cauldron of boiling soup that is sitting on a lit stove and simultaneously removed the knob from the stove! 😈

You are welcome...😊 Sana takes utensil holder...and removes him from the lit stove😆 As for fire...Cuts the supply from cylinder😆

Kahe zamana Ghire hai hum Ishq ki aag mein...
Kya jaane woh jalaye rakhi thi uski tapish seene mein...
Kahe woh aayega na labon pe unka humara naam...
Par kya har koi jaane ruthe huey dil ka payigaaam...
She is khafa-khafa My boy will work on her...Just when Devi Maa finishes her rounds of AK,VR, and KH😆
Usha Jee thank you😳for helping my Chora with Serial watcher skills😆

P.S. Medha you don't believe MAAA 😲ShockedShocked Koi nai...let Devi Mayaaa bring out the truth😆 Which she will once she does rounds of KH(Go for it...D Jab dil mein koi ek junoon jagaye ...toh use mukamil tariqe se apnao😊) and as 3idiots se kaabil bano kaabil kamyabi jhak maarke daudegi...Go ahead readers will track u down...though it takes a lot of time😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Devi,

I have been a silent reader of this fic, but I wanted to let you know how much I enjoy your writing. Your portrayal of the complexity of human emotion and your description of the thought process of each character makes your stories a pleasure to read. 😊

Also, I think you are one of the few authors that make me interested in the mindset of "secondary" characters (i.e Krishna Mama, Johnny, and Varun in this fic). Their reactions provide a way for us readers to better understand the actions of Nirmala and Abhi (or actually confuse us in this case 😉)

I am excited to see what you have planned.

Thanks and Cheers,
DG
Edited by dg30 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey the update were superb! <3 Thoroughly enjoyed both the parts and the way you write interests me even more :D Oh! I never thought about the Abhi-Lalitha kiss situation that way :P But true! Abhi can never cheat :) I hope Nikki understands soon. Well, good one, keep up the great work. Continue soon and thank you for the pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 28: Unfinished Business

I barely made it past the door before he reached out to grab me; I turned around to evade him and felt my blouse get caught on something. In my panic, I pulled away from it and heard the ripping sound almost immediately.

He had grabbed my hand by then and had pulled me inside the room and shut the door behind us. I tried to push away from him, embarrassed beyond belief at what I had admitted …

His grip was strong and waylaid my efforts to get away as he turned me against the corner by the room, putting up his arms on either side of me, the turn of the wall giving him a solid way of cornering me in.

I could feel the hardness of the wood behind me in a long line just to the right of my spine where the tear was a vertical split halfway down my blouse. I tried not to move too much so that the rest of it wouldn't rip away.

He didn't seem to be aware of my predicament and I kept my eyes downcast hoping that he would sense my discomfort and just leave me alone like he had a history of doing whether it or not…

When he was content to stand there without saying anything, I finally bit down in frustration and raised my eyes to his to give him a piece of my mind.

I never did get a chance to work out exactly what it was that I wanted to say to him in that moment though… as soon as I raised my face to his, his arms snaked around my waist to lift me up against him and a split second later, his lips were on mine…

For a moment, I couldn't think at all… all thoughts suddenly blanked out…

The one and only other time that he had done this to me before, his lips had been on and off mine in less than a second, just a peck to shut me up and make me do his budding. But this one…

This one… was something else entirely… his lips did not come down hard, but soft… and it lingered, catching me by surprise…

I tried to pull away from him, my back bending slightly over his arms that were around my waist, but he followed me down, his lips now moving over mine…

I felt light-headed, I thought, although I didn't think I would faint… I felt my fingers grab onto the front of his shirt, but whether to push him away or prop me up I couldn't be sure…

He moved down from my lips to my neck and I heard an almost indistinct moan as I felt one of my hands move up to his shoulder to hold on… it took me a moment to realize that the sound had come from my throat, and I don't know that I would have realized it if not for an answering growl from him. He grabbed me up to him tightly and buried his face in my neck and I breathed him in… his smell was no longer just as I remembered, but something infinitely more… earthy and raw… it was a heady scent and it made me want to sink my teeth into something.

The sensation that I had felt in my belly that day in the rain and then again when I had seen him change came back trifold now, squeezing my insides so badly that it felt as if it was giving off sparks.

I thought I heard him mutter, "Holy f**k!" and wondered at the sacrilege of the phrase just as I realized that he had found the rip in my blouse…

(To be continued… sorry ladies, Have to Rush off to Work now… I have an extremely busy week at Work)

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Posted: 13 years ago
me tooo ...

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