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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shria

lovely update😳 just loved the way abhay rectified his mistakes😉
thnk god mish & varun got to know the truth😛
i hope that piya also gets to know the truth soon😊
who was that master?😲
this ff is becoming interesting😉continu soon...

Master you'll come to know later on who he is. That will remain a mystery for now. Thanks dear😊. Glad you liked it

Originally posted by: mandy1024

I am in love with this FF n u guys are doing an amazing job 👏 Abhay is redeeming for whatever he has done n he single handedly wants to take on the gangrels? Shocked But I want Pia also to have her revenge as it was not just Abhay but even she who suffered loss at their hands. When will Pia know the truth n when will they get together? Embarrassed Eagerly waiting to see Abhiya together. Now Pia knows it was Abhay who cleared her name n she also knows that whatever reason he is giving now is lame Tongue I hope she gets to know the truth n Abhiya get together n teach the gangrels a lesson? BTW who is the master? Shocked Was he talking to Jeh's bro BTW? This just gets more n more interesting with each update. Do continue soon 😃 U girls rock 👍🏼

Mandy, Piya will come to know the truth very soon😊. And the master means the gangrel master. His identity will be revealed later on. I am really happy you liked the update😊. We'll continue soon😊

Originally posted by: pkyekrox

Sooo sorry for the l8 reply!! U shld punish me!! :D
But lovely upd8!!
-Gauri

Thats ok Gauri. I know you were busy with exams😊 so no punishmentTongue. Thanks dear😊

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Gunner

Amazing update Guys! Loved it👍🏼

Thanks😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smdosi

Love it yaar...but whoz dat unknown caller...wen will abhiya be a couple..? N when willl piya knw d truth..? Thnx 4d pm n do pm me next time!

The unknown caller will be revealed in the next update. Abhiya will be a couple very soon. First the misunderstandings need to be cleared from Piya's side. Will PM you😊

Originally posted by: flora212

WOW DUDE...U BOTH HAS DONE GREAT WRK...I GUESS PIA WILL BECOME DEDECTIVE AND FIND OUT ABOUT THE TRUTH...ABHAY..AWWW...HOW MUCH HE LOVE HER BUT HAS TO STAY AWAY!!! JUST LOVING THE STORY MOVING...KEEP IT UP!! UPDATE SOON...

Thanks nafi😳, we will update very soon😊. Abhiya will be together soon

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Good boy Abhay!

Now I like ya even more!...
Piya tried to kill herself, a selfish moment of weakness..
But Piya for heaven's sake never ever let that thought cross your mind again...
'"Fiesty! Me likey!" Wow me double likey that😃...
Gangrels watch out...
Whoever is this master, he surely is hell bent on keeping AbhIya away.
Good update guys!

Hehe, chalo I guess you arent angry at abhay anymore Nidha😆. And dont worry, after this all misunderstandings will soon be clear and abhiya will be together but they'll keep fighting😆

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

superb update.m glad to see abhay has changed so mch & sorted out d misunderstanding. Thanx 4 d pm

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: dumas

ok this is the second time posting and it did not go through it took abhay for varun and misha to talk to pia they are her friend when she tried to tell them the truth they lift her alone but it took the enemy for them to believe they are not friends of her abhay protecting her with out her know loved it and now he has back up loved the update thanks for the pm

Glad you liked it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
update >?????????
update >?????????
update >?????????
update >?????????

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

nice update anji and peehu. i liked that abhay cleared pia's name and pia also found out about it.

Thanks Dishu😊

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story pl\z update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story

We will update soon😊

Originally posted by: TeDylove

wow really lovely update!!👏👏 waiting for know who is master and after pia..😳

You'll find out soon Chanu😊

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Beautiful...I am just loving this ff and this side of abhiya...u both r just awsome

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: darkcocoa_renu

Gals...u both jus rock!!luvd abhay's redemption...apne abhay ki yaad dila di..
Obviously the colors of abhay raichand r changed!pia has becum a detective again..hehe..
Alina z such a sweet gal...m in luv vd her here..diz gangrels..arghh..
Is pia falling 4 abhay or jus an attraction?
Waiting 4 abhia's reunion..

Its an attraction for now but she'll fall in love with him soon😊. And thanks dear😊

Originally posted by: Monami_50

Nice update.Its gud 2 see that Abhay's clearing up the mess he created.Alina is a sweet and supportive sis-Abhay's lucky 2 hv her.Who is this master and the person talkng 2 hm?I'm eager 2 know.Hope Piya finds out the truth soon

You'll find out soon enough. The isunderstandings between abhiya also will be cleared soon

Originally posted by: _Chandni_Sadia

very nice up date dear ,waiting for next

Thanks😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Wow nice update

Piya is confused about abhay behavior now n is not buying into abhay lame answers about abhay's answers and she caught him too once
Who was that person n who was he telling that abhay is melting for piya?
Was that person a gangrel? Or Jeh's brother's spy.
I am loving this ff keep up the good work

That person in a gangrel spy who is in mount college to keep an eye on abhiya. The mystery will be cleared as the ff progresses so stay tuned😊

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

awesome update guys👏 Abhay is ready to do anything for pia nw nd he has fallen for her too...ab nw who the hell was that informer😡i wanna brk his neck😡

Hehe, calm down Juhi, his neck will be broken very soon😆. Ab thoda time toh lagega. Glad you loved the update😊

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

nice update... hope abhay soon left dis stayaway mission...

yup, the stay away mission wont be required for long😊

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Excellent update!

I love that line - "Abhay could have kissed the professor if he wasn't a 48 year old man" 🤣

I wonder what will happen now. Will that man on the phone find out...and when he does, what will he do?

I am so eagerly waiting!

Hehe, I love that line too😛. The man on the phone will find out. The mystery remains whether Abhay will be able to catch up to him before he informs the gangrel master

Originally posted by: luckdiya

"jst wnted 2 let u knw
i m free 2ngt
so my place or urs?" dis scene reminds me of pkyek
😍
thks 4 dat
nw cuming 2 d updt
abhay hs clrd all d misunderstanding..glad he did dat..
b'ful updat
continue soon

thanks Diya😊. We will continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: barki

finally kuchchh bate clear to hui. thanks for updating👏

😊

Originally posted by: Divya6696

Wow guys.. do-do updates..!! thank u..!!
Amazing update..

Abhay all set for redemption.. he cleared all the mess.. so sweet..
Piya confused on Abhay's behaviour.. interesting..

Who was the person at the end of the update..? Jeh.. or someone from the Gangrels..??

Update Soon.. :) :)

That person was a gangrel spy. His identity will be revealed soon Dhrish. Hope you like the next update too😊

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

awesome update guys...wow..so piya did know that abhay helped to clear her name..lets see how she reacts now...and hope abhay redeems..but don't punish him too bad😳...and who was that person on the BB?

That person was a gangrel spy and dont worry, we wont be too hard on Abhay😆

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

😃 lovely update!
So love story has started frm abhay's side,it s good dat he s now trying 2 clear all d pain dat he gave 2 piya nd acting as her guardian angel bt at d same tym is rude 2 her 4 her safety!
Piya s also finding sumthing diff in his behaviour,hope she will find out d truth soon!
Dat person? 😲 he s surely frm d gangrel n keeping an eye on abhiya!arey abhi to love story shuru bhi nahi hui aur kabab mein haddi pehle hi!
Continue soon!

Hehe, abhiya ke story me always you'll find kabab me haddi or in Sid's case, kabab me handsome😆. We'll continue soon😊

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

Chapter 8-Amazing update👏...Abhay finally noes d truth


will comment on chpter 9 after readin it😊

Thanks😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --faroo--

wow very nice update and now piya is also falling for her andabhay was soo good i am glad that varun and misha and piya r agian toether and who is this mystery man maybe its jeh and neel or someone else btw very nice update update soon peehu and anji :)


thank you...the mystery man will be revealed in next update...


Originally posted by: Rmuk

Wow amazing update both of u!!!
So abhay is rectifying his mistakes good.
Omg abhay will take revenge alone.
Continue soon


thank u


Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

I m loving this FF more and more so Abhay cleared Pia's name infront of her friends n Pia knows it now waiting for Pia 2 know d whole truth but I didn't wanted Pia 2 forgive Varun n Misha so easily thoda toh bhaav khana chahiye tha usko maaf karne se pehle


thank u



thank u

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

Great update girls 👏

I love this FF of yours. i assumed Pia would understand something weird about Abhay's behavior. i hope she finds out the truth too. It was sweet of him to make amends on everything he has ruined 😳
Now he wants to hunt the gangreals. its becoming dangerous. Is master and Aryan same? 😳
thanks for the PM 😊


piya will start suspecting everything...and will find out everything soon...no master and aryan are not same..








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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyFanSuku

just awe-some up date ...very interesting story ,please continue it


Originally posted by: minibsp2007

thats really nice so now abhay was rectifying his mistakes but he can't stand pia's question answer round as usual i think pia too will know the truth shortly


Originally posted by: pkyekrox

WOWEE!! Abhay was SOO protective of Pia!! Loved it!!
Whos aftr Abhay on the BB?! I hope u tell us sooon!!
-Gauri



Originally posted by: abhiyarockz

lovely update guys...👏

but who is master???😕

continue soon...

thanx for pm!🤗


Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Awesome update anji & peehu.I so loved it.Abhay is now angel 4 Pia.he wants 2 c her happy but can't tell her he loves her.But Pia is smart too so she realized Abhay is helpig her.I guess those enmies of Abhiya r keeping eye on thm.Cant wait.Plz cont..


thank you so much everyone...piya will figure out everything soon...and spy will be revealed in next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
CHAPTER 10: REVELATION
(written by anji and me)


[PART 1]


Abhay and Alina had a mission in hand. They had to find out about gangrels and the cave. All they could think right now was chand's study. Abhay and alina sneaked into the house from the window but to their surprise Vihaan was already waiting for them," you think you guys can sneak in into the house?"

Abhay rolled his eyes," we weren't sneaking in. and what are you doing in my room? I should be the one asking why are you sneaking in my room"

Vihaan crossed his arms across his chest," I know what you both are planning. Don't! just leave the things as they are. If you feel even a ounce of courtesy towards this family, then don't. "

Abhay was calm," I feel a lot more than courtesy vihaan but I also feel love. Yes, abhay raichand, whose heart is dead, feels love. I feel love for my angel, I feel love for piya. those gangrels destroyed everything. I lost everything. I feel pain when piya hates me for no reason. What am I suppose to do? Leave everything as it is? It has already been done since a century and I am not ready to sacrifice anything more."

Vihaan tried to reason," do you think finding them or hunting them will get you revenge? No abhay, its destruction. You don't know what they are capable of doing. You have no idea. Please abhay, I beg you, don't do this. this will bring danger to all of us. please for our survival abhay, please"

Abhay- I don't care vihaan. You are worried about survival? Really vihaan? I didn't expect this from you

Vihaan- abhay I beg you. you are everything to me. you are my friend, my brother, please don't. I cant lose you. please dont make my sacrifice go waste

Abhay narrowed his eyes," what sacrifice are you talking about? You sacrificed nothing vihaan but I lost everything. I was hating someone who wasn't at fault. And now I am bearing her hatred for no reason. Please vihaan let me do this for them.

Alina interrupted," vihaan, please just let us do this for once. Please trust us for just once. We promise you we wont do anything that would bring danger to us or our family"

Vihaan couldn't argue further. What could he do? A part of him knew that they were right but another part of him was filled with fear. He too wanted everything to end but not at the cost of losing some loved one. He didn't k new what to do. He couldn't decide. He left everything on time. Only time would tell what would happen and how many lives will be lost.

...

Abhay and alina broke into chands study. It was filled with lots of books, journals and folklore. They looked to find out something related to gangrels or cave but they just couldn't. they went through each and every book they could think of to find some information.

"what crap alina! There is not even a single info about them. How long are we gonna just turn pages" abhay scowled

Alina shook her head," so impatient abhay. Did you really think it would be so easy to find such things. Have patience. We would surely find something. Keep looking"

Abhay was frustrated. It was almost 2 hours and they couldn't find anything. Abhay was walking around the study when he realized something odd in one of the corners. He felt as if he saw the shelf moving. What was that? Curiosity kicked in and he just slid the shelf. And then he realized this a secret walking room. How typical of him. he should have thought.

Alina and abhay both smiled at each other and went inside. Abhay switched on the lights and was shocked to see room filled with different books and journals. He was sure that he would find something here soon.

Abhay and alina took out every book from the shelf and kept turning pages but still couldn't find anything. Abhay decided to take a around of the study when a big fat book fell out of no where. He picked up the book and was about to keep when his eyes fell upon a sketch of cave. He immediately rushed to the near by table followed by alina. But what he read shocked him completely.

This cave is the protector of two most precious stones which is waiting for its right owner. it is located deep inside the forest of manali. It can only be seen when owner will make its appearance. It can be felt by witches but cannot be seen by them. A witch can locate the cave but can never see it until the rightful owner allows. No one can enter it except the owners. It is rightfully said that once the stones will reach to its owners, the most powerful black blood vampires, gangrels would meet its end. But till now, no one has ever seen the cave. It is considered as myth by the world of supernaturals.

"a myth? Its not a bloody myth. I am the owner of the stone. I have to reach this place today itself. Alina, help me. find this place", abhay yelled

Alina- abhay relax. Its in manal. Its not far from dehradoon. We can leave today but first we need the exact location. We know its in the forest of manali. Here it is written that witches can feel it. that means even I can feel it.

Abhay- can you find this place?

Alina- I guess so. I will summon the spirits of my ancestors. They might help us to locate it. lets leave before anyone knows about it.

...

They stood in one of the deserted road of manali. This was the place where the dark lushy forests start. Alina closed her eyes summoned the spirits. The weather became dark and windy. The visibility reduced. There was no ounce of sunlight. The tress and plants were dancing with the wind. She kept repeating the spells. She realized that she was now surrounded by spirits.

Alina yelled," help us. please help us."

Spirit 1- what do you want?

Alina- we are looking for the cave which is hidden inside the forest. Please help us find its location.

Spirit 1- why do you want to know? Whats your motive

Alina- i have the owner with me. we want to reach there. gangrels, we need to finish them

Spirit 2- we might help you but do you know its consequences? It is dangerous. You could be killed

Alina- I know but we have to do it. please help us.

Spirit 2- we can only feel the cave. We can make you reach there but we cannot help beyond that.rest is your call.

Alina-we are ready

Spirits- follow us

...

They stood in front of cave which only abhay could see. He was stunned to look at it," look alina. We did it. we did it"

Alina smiled," yes we did it"

The spirits had disappeared immediately after the help. Alina stood there as she was still unable to see it," abhay, I cant see it though I can feel it. The book said that owner had to allow the witch. So allow me"

Abhay smiled," yes, you can see the cave"

As abhay said that, the cave was visible to alina too. She was ecstatic. Finally, wait was over. Alina knew she couldn't enter but abhay tried to enter. He tired to walk in but he wasn't allowed. It had the invisible shield which was forbidding him to enter. Whenever he touched the shield, it was thrown back.

"damn! Why cant I enter it?", abhay said

"try again abhay"

Abhay kept trying but he couldn't. everytime he tried, he was thrown back with immense force. Abhay was losing his cool," why cant I enter?"

They thought, trying to figure out when suddenly alina said," may be you cant enter alone. You need piya too. I think the cave will open only when both the owners will try it together"

"I think you are right. What now?", he sighed

"Lets go. If the cave wont open without Piya, then its useless standing here."

Alina and Abhay didn't notice when a dark figure came and hid behind the trees watching them intently.

Abhay was irritated,"This just gets better and better. How will I bring Piya here and if I do, how will I explain all this to her. I hate it Alina. Staying away from Piya, I just cant do that. I cant ignore her when I am helplessly falling in love with her"

Alina was sad,"I know bro. And I don't think you should have to stay away from Piya. I don't care what Vihaan says but I think you can make this work. You can tell Piya the truth. She deserves to know who really killed her parents. She never has to be in any danger. You and I will always keep her away from this fight with the Gangrel".

Abhay smiled hopefully. "You are right Alina, I can protect her, I wont let her be in any danger. I just want her to not hate me"

Alina smiled and hugged Abhay."I am so happy you are telling Piya the truth. Finally! You 2 should always be together. That's how destiny planned it".

A few feet away, the man stood watching Abhay and Alina. He heard everything. "Damn, Abhay Raichand knows the truth and he and Piya will unite soon. This cannot happen. I cant tell Master about this. There will be a huge uproar. I wont let Abhay and Piya win. I know the location of the cave now. I will make them retrieve the stones and then I'll kill them. Master will be very happy with me"



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Edited by --peehu-- - 13 years ago
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[PART 2]


Piya and Tara were at the breakfast table. Tara was as usual busy with her work calls. Piya finished her breakfast and waited for Tara to finish her call. She was impatiently eager to ask Tara the question that had been bugging her since yesterday. Once Tara got off the phone, Piya hesitantly asked- Tara, um…About mom and dad. I want to know how they died.

Tara froze. This was the first time Piya had asked Tara about their parents' death ever since she told her who was responsible. Tara prayed Piya hadnt found out the truth.

She calmly answered back- You already know Piya then why are you asking. It was Abhay who killed them.

Piya- Yes I know but are you sure?

Tara was shaken up now as she remembered that night.

The Gangrel Master had slit her parents' throats as she watched. She tried to attack him with spells but none of her spells were working against him. In that moment she had realized that he was no ordinary vampire. He remembered that cold voice so clearly as if it was yesterday. He whispered in her ear while gripping her neck tightly, 'I wont kill you Tara Dobriyal because I need you to be my messenger. Now listen very carefully because your sister's life is at hand. You will tell Piya that her parents were murdered by the vampire Abhay Raichand. You will convince her of this and if ever she chooses to believe otherwise then I will hunt her down and slaughter her. So do we have an understanding Tara?'

Piya clicked her fingers in front of Tara to get her attention- Tara, you didn't answer me.

Tara snapped at her- Of course I am sure. Why would I lie to you? I saw Abhay killing them with my own eyes. Is that not proof enough for you? Or do you think that bloodsucking vampire is more important to you than your own sister!

Piya was surprised at Tara's hostile attitude- I am sorry Tara. I didn't mean to imply that I don't believe you.

Tara sighed- I am sorry too Piya. I know I have been a little edgy lately. Handling a whole company all alone is really stressful. Anyways, finish your breakfast. I'll drive you to college.

Piya groaned- Tara, why cant I take the car?

Tara- Because I need it today. Come on. You'll make me late for work.

...

Abhay saw Piya entering the college. He wanted to go up to her and tell her everything so that she doesn't have to hate him anymore. His mind kept warning him that this is dangerous both for him and for Piya. But his heart yearned to be with her. He wished he could find a way to work things out. Maybe he could tell Piya the truth and then he could always protect her by keeping her away and not let her fight. The more he thought about it, the more he was convinced that he should do it. He kept staring at Piya as she walked towards the class. He moved towards her but Piya didn't look up at him. He was going to call out to her when someone pulled him away. Tara pulled Abhay inside an empty classroom. Her eyes were blazing.

Tara was red with rage- What do you think you are doing?

Abhay shot back- What is your problem? Why do you always have to come in my way?

Tara- Because unlike you, I actually care about Piya. I care about whether she lives or dies. You promised me you'll stay away from her but till now I haven't seen you abide by your word. Piya is starting to doubt if what I told her all this years is not the truth. If it continues like this then she'll find out herself soon enough.

Abhay- Then let her find out. It will come out sooner or later. Please Tara, I cant stay away from her, I cant bear the thought of her hating me. I care for her as much as you do, even more. I know I promised you I'll stay away for her safety, but Tara I cant do that anymore. I promise I'll never let her fall in danger. I'll protect her and keep her away from this fight. I'll fight the Gangrel myself.

Tara's didn't soften to Abhay's pleadings- You think its that easy. The cave remains closed Abhay and that's the lock on your powers to fight the Gangrel's Master. Piya's slayer powers will not be triggered till that cave opens and neither will yours. So you are useless against them right now. So tell me, how will you protect Piya. They will kill you before you are even able to raise a finger. They are that powerful. So I suggest you get over yourself and leave Piya alone before you get her killed.

Abhay's eyes filled with tears of frustration. He stormed out of the room. He got his car and headed home without even informing Alina.

...

After the classes ended, Piya headed for the parking lot. She had Tara sent over her car. Varun had offered to drop her home but Piya refused. She wanted to be alone right now. She was in a bad mood ever since Tara clarified to her that Abhay had indeed killed their parents. For the first time in 200 years, she wanted to believe that this wasn't the truth. Maybe Tara was mistaken. Why did she want to believe that Abhay didn't kill her parents? Why was she growing soft towards Abhay? Piya felt ashamed of herself. She was willingly letting her parents' murderer go Scott free just because she was beginning to get attracted to Abhay. Piya stood beside her car and leaned her head. 'I want to get out of this mess'.

Meanwhile Abhay was almost on his way home when he got a call from Jeh. He half considered not taking the call but something told him that he should pick up.

Abhay answered in a sharp voice- What do you want Jeh?

Jeh- Abhay, listen to me. I know you know about the Gangrel and don't ask me how I know because I don't have time for explaining. Abhay a Gangrel spy is here and that to in mount College. This means that he knows the truth has been revealed to you. Your life is in danger and so is Piya's. We have to find the spy before he reports back to his superiors. You are no way ready to fight the Gangrel right know. At least not before opening the cave. Find Piya fast and I'll try to track the spy.

Abhay was really scared now; not for his own life but for Piya's life. He cant let anything happen to her but he wondered why Jeh was helping him.

Abhay- Jeh what's your deal? Why are you helping me? Our races have been by nature born enemies. Hell, your brother has always openly shown his contempt towards me. Then why?

Jeh- Hatred has to die one day. For me it has died sooner than for Aryan. Even he will realize this soon enough. Now find Piya.

Abhay cut the call, got into his car and rushed to reach Piya's house before its too late.

Piya leaned her head against the car. She sensed someone's presence behind her. She turned around and a splash of potion was thrown right at her. Piya's body convulsed in pain as she hit the ground. The pain was excruciating and she was unable to move. She looked up to see a man standing over her. Her eyes widened in shock. It was Samarth. Something was wrong. His eyes were blood red. He wasn't human. 'Why Samarth?'

Samarth glared down at her. She blacked out before he could even answer.


Edited by --peehu-- - 13 years ago

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