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Posted: 19 years ago

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continue soon 👏 👏

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Part 16:-

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A:

Aao sunaun pyaar ki ek kahani

Ek tha ladka ek thi ladki deewaqni

Voh bhi hasne lagi thi yeh bhi hasne laga tha

Dono samjhe nahi the yeh jo hone laga tha

Aao sunaun pyaar ki ek kahani

Jo bhi kehna na tha voh bhi kehne lage

Jo bhi sunaa na tha voh bhi sunne lage

K:

Aa rahi hai hasi mujh ko iss baat pe

Kis tarah pyaar main dono khoo ne lage

A:

Jaan ne wali baat yeh thi anjaani

Ek tha ladka ek thi ladki deewani

K:

Voh bhi hasne lagi thi yeh bhi hasne laga tha

Doono samjhe nahi the yeh jo hone laga tha

Aaoo sunaun pyaar ki ek kahani

Ek tha ladka ek thi lawani

Voh bhi hasne lagi thi yeh bhi hasne laga tha

Donosamjhe nahi yeh jo hone laga thaa

A:

Aaoo sunun pyaar ki ek kahani

Cut

Director—too good u people r the best

a- thanks

d- hope u both get a grand success for ur album

j- ok then angad I think its time we got to levae to catch the flight

a- yaa kripa are u through with ur packing

k- yes angad what about u

a- well I was thinking if u r through with urs then I please do mine

k- sorry angad iam quite busy u do it ur self

a- please

k- sorry

and then kripa went from that place leaving angad shocked

a- what the hell got into her head

j- why what happened between u two

a- nothing really

j- ok then lets make it fast

angad somehow managed his packing and they all left for the airport …in the flight also kripa managed to get a seat far away from angad where as josh and mishty sat together …but alas for kripa her plans failed because angad some how managed to convince the person sitting next to kripa to take his seat instead and thus he got a chance to sit next to kripa

a- hey kya hua why are u soo damn upset

k- please angad don't disturb me iam very upset

a- and why r u upset

k- angad I have ot talked to my friend for a few days soo

a- ohh who is this lucky friend of urs

k- well I can"t tell u this

a- okk but kripa always remember this iam also ur fried

not as good as him angad kripa thought prithvi could understand me better and today if he would have been here he would have been my major support in what I was going to do because he is always there for me I wish prithvi would come as soon as possible and a tear dropped from kripa's eyes

a- hey its okk listen iam always there for u as a good friend

k- thanks angad

a- err kripa who ghar jaa kar we have to handle the situation

k- don't worry angad I will take care

a- thanks

and soon enough the flight landed at the mumbai airport and soon enough all of them reached home

at the khanna mansion

simone- angad aaj ghar main choti si dinner party hai

a- bhabhi kya uss main kripa aayegi

si- ohh kripa ki badi chinta hai tumhe

a- voh she is my good friend

si- haan

karthik – haan aur josh and family bhi aayegi

a- and whats the occasion

b- kar- well that's a surprise

a- hey iss there a good news ( and he looked at simone)

si- well there is but not as u got it

a-ok then I will wait

and soon enough in the evening angad got ready before time and waited for kripa and soon enough suryavan came and angad looked at the enterence to see if kripa followed him but alas!!!

a- uncle kripa nahi aayi

s- nahi beta she is not feeling well

a- kya hua usse

s-pata nahi naina I want to talk to u

n- kya hua surya did u talk to kripa

s- haan and she said no

n- what

s- yaa she said no that she did not want to marry angad

angad heard this and was totally shocked and soo were the others who had been present there

j-wispering to mishty- what the hell is this I thought they were in love

m- yaa mee too but maybe that's fate

a- uncle what is all this

n- beta main batati hoon voh humne tumhara rishtaa kripa ke saath tay kar diya tha per ussne mana kar diya

a- mom yeh aap kya bol rahi hain

n- beta hume laga u both r compatable for each other

a- noo mom not at all sorry but even iam not ready no wonder kripa din't cdome she must be feeling soo damn embarrassed

n- sorry beta

a- its ok mom but now onwards please ask me before doing such a thing

a few days had passed away after this incident and it had surely created some distances between kripa and her dad because he din't like her decision little did he know ….soon surya gave the news of kanan coming back from us after her studies when kripa gave angad this news he started dancing with happiness

a- kripa she is coming back wow

k- angad now we will get late remember we have to pick her up

a- yes yes ohh no kripa main toh khushi main bhul hi gaya tha

k- ab chalo

soon the flight landed at the mumbai air port and we see a girl dressed up in mini skirt and a spaghetti

as soon as she came out angad ran towards her madly and hugged her

and kripa saw this and felt very sad very very sad

a- soo ur back

kanan(ka)- yaa

a- well I want u to meet some one

he went towards kripa

ka- hey u must be kripa right my sis

k- yaa

ka- soo kripa how do u find mumbai

k- well its good

a- ok then lets go home

it was the longest drive back to home for kripa with angad and kanan sitting in the front seats and giggling and enjoying themselves soon the Sharma house came and kanan went inside and angad caught kripa's hand asking her to wait

k- what iss it now

a- well kripa tomorrow iam gonna talk to my parents about kanan and u have to talk to surya uncle about this because kanan will not be able to talk

k-ok angad I will do that now bye

a- bye kripa thanks

kripa then walked to her home with tears in her eyes and the feeling of loosing someone gripped her

will she loose him forever!!!!!!!!! What will happen now

I know it was a very boring part but please wait as interesting parts are here to come

Hope u all like it please post ur comments

Love

apra

Edited by apra - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part!!!! 👏

i feel soooooooooo sorry 4 kripa!!! 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: blah_blah

awesome part!!!! 👏

i feel soooooooooo sorry 4 kripa!!! 😭

well more sad parts comming up for kripa

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Posted: 19 years ago
it wuz so sad n continue soon n awesome part n get angad n kripa together instead of kanan ASAP
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Posted: 19 years ago
i feel soo bad for kripa.......but bring them back together would be nice
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Posted: 19 years ago
That was a fab partt apraa jee do cont doon.....an also LP!!!!!!gr8 job...


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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: bhumishah

it wuz so sad n continue soon n awesome part n get angad n kripa together instead of kanan ASAP

yaa i will try but thats the story

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