FF: THE GRUDGE CH-6 UPDATED *pg 44* NOTE PG 47 - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: flora212

thanks renu...well what the dark figure is and what it did u will know later...



eagerly waiting for it. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya_kapi



eagerly waiting for it. 😳

my pleasure😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Nafi u are saying sorry for long update?
U know na we love to read long updates and no it was not at all boring.
it was superb, I am wondering who is the dark figure, let's see, update soon.
Loved it and thanks for the pm.

thats great that u didnt find it boring...😆the dark figure wont be reveal soo soon..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Awesome update 👍🏼 but did pia really died??? or some1 took her away??? wat was chand speaking abt??

thanks 4 pm, is u r name nafeesa coz ever1 here is calling u nafi?

well u will know everything when right time comes...and yes my name is nafisa whats urs??
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spn-abhay

awesum update

who is the dark figure?????
chand was talking about whom😕
continue soon
thanx 4 pm

THANKS A LOTS...CHAND RAAZ WONT COME SO SOON...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyFanSuku

very nice up date ,thanks for pm
and who is dark figure ?

thanks..u will know when right time comes
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ---Priya---

nafi really sorry for being late...you know nah that m lazy... 😆 finally read all 3 updates 😉

they were awesome... loved them all...
is abhay gona meet piyali in kabir's party.. i think she is his mysterious partner 😉
continue soon...

🤣i know piyu darling that u r soo lazyy..and thanks fr liking them!! aha u r the one who is nearly to guess the dancing partner!!😆 hmm but may be u r wrong!!😉 just wait and watch..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: .tanu.

Awesome update ⭐️ You described Abhay's pain very well. So his powers were taken because he didn't kill Jeh. The nightmare was written brilliantly. I think Pia didn't die and that dark figure has something to do with is. Waiting for the party... thx for pm 😊

thanks...u will know soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
GUYS THANKS FR COMMENTING AND LIKING THE UPDATE...SORRY I COULDNT REPLY TO EVERYONE!! WILL TRY MY BEST NEXT TIME...
Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER- 4

(THE MYSTERIOUS DANCING PARTNER)

The next day, in the morning'.riachands were sitting on dinning table taking their breakfast. Everyone was there except abhay!!!

Soniya squeaked- hey guys abhay nahi aya abi tak??

Haseena sadly- must be in his room'may be didn't got up. Let me see..

Aditiya stopped haseena- no mom'not u'he will come by his own!

Haseena- but'

Aditiya- mom he needs time..

Haseena understood what he meant..so sat down..

Chand who was behind newspaper spoke up- did u tell to abhay about the party???

Adiyiya ran his fingers through his hair- err'no!! not still'I will tell him, don't worry!

Chand closed the paper and put it on'

Chand was about to say something when they heard foot steps'

Abhay ' good morning everyone!

Soniya smirks- good morning bhai!!

Aditiya smiles- aha u wake up!!!

Abhay smirks- why??? U didn't expect???

Aditya shrugs- nope'I mean yes but not so early!!

Abhay got what he meant'he was actually teasing him fr getting late!!!

Abhay smiles back to aditiya'

Haseena didn't spoke a word as she was afraid to spoil mood of abhay so she remain quiet!!

After a while, chand said sternly- abhay I am going to office!!! U come soon'today we hv important meeting.

Saying this he left, abhay heard what chand said but ignored it!!!

Abhay ate half of his breakfast and went to his room. Aditiya looked at his mom who looked sad'and gave nod that he will manage..

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Abhay sitting on his revolving chair and using his tablet'

When someone knocked on door'

Abhay arrogantly- come!

Aditiya entered and cleared his troat..abhay looked above.

Abhay smirks- adi mujhe pata he kit um yeha ho! I can smell u..

Aditiya smiled- I know that'but u know I was trying to become gentleman!!

Abhay laughed- hmmm I see'u an d gentle!!

Aditiya pouted- not so funny!!!

Abhay giggled- ok ok'so u want to say something!

Aditiya surprised- yeah but how u know??

Abhay smirks- ur face expression is telling'

Aditiya hesitantly- err'u knoe'err'that today is kabir birthday party!

Abhay smiles- so u need any suit to wear'

Aditya quickly- no no..i have many'err I want ti say r u coming?

Abhay glared- aditiya u know well'I hate this stupid partys!!

Abhay got from his sit but Aditiya followed- arre yaar'it will fun! Come na..

Abhay gritting teeth- I said I DON'T ATTEND THIS BLOODY PARTYS'

Aditya trying to make him accept- bhai what will u do by sitting home?? Playing games in laptop!!!

Abhay snapped- I am not kid..i hv other wrks to do'

Aditiya smirked- but u r acting like a kid..abhay u hv to attend the party!! Don't do anything but please attend the party tonight'it's a masquerade ball!!

Abhay arrogantly- get lost..

Aditya- bhai please'u will be refreashed!!!

Abhay- aditiya when I say NO means NO!!!

Aditiya naughtily- got it'u r afraid of women!! Right?

Abhay looked at aditiya confused- what???

Aditya cuckled- ofcourse u hate girls'as they always r behind ur izzat!!!

Abhay angrily- what the hell??? Adi get out!!

Aditiya- abhay come on'u hv to come!!! Please'at least fr me..

Abhay looked at aditiya pleading face and thought for a while and then said " ok fine!!'

Aditya hugged abhay in excitement.

Aditiya- thanks abhay! U r the best brother in world!

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Its already near to 10 at night..only half an hr is more to leave fr the party. Soniya is standing in front of mirror and all her clothes r messed up on bed'

Soniya to herself- damn it! Ek bi accha dress nahi he'sarre purane hogayi he'.arrrgh..

She throw her last black gown'

Soniya sat in fraustation on bed'when aditiya entered getting full ready!!

Aditiya surprised- oye sonu!! Ye kya'u didn't get ready till now??

Soniya gritting teeth- dekh nahi raha kapre nahi he panne ke liya!

Aditiya looked at her with wide eyes fr sometime the brust out in laugh.

Soniya confused- what??? Has kiu raha hai?

Aditiya trying hard to talk in between laughs- oh god..sonu!! u don't hv dresses?? To ye..ye..sab kya hai on ur bed??

Soniya angrily got up- what the hel?? How can u think I will wear such stupid dresses!! These all has became old..

Aditiya shocked- what? old?? But u just bought this last week!!

He picked up a golden gown..

Soniya snatched it from him- u wont understand'today is masquerade party! And I don't hv suitable party dress..

Aditiya- but this dress is great!! Iss me kya kharabi he?? Ye na panne se tum heroine thori na banjao gi!

Soniya angrily- u know what u r khanjooz and makhi jooz'agar abhay hota na'to wo meri liya ek nayi dress khareed ke lati! Huh..

Soniya went near the door of room leaving dumb aditiya!!

While abhay entered smiling..

Abhay ' ah so my sis hv no dress to wear ha??

Soniya pouts- look bhai adi is making fun of me'

Abhay giggles- don't worry.. me hu na! adi to hai esi..here take this!!

Abhay gave a parcel to soniya..and winked at aditiya.




Soniya screamed in excitement seeing a beautiful purple gown..

Soniya- wow abhay! This so awesome..thank u soo much!

Abhay smiled- anything fr u.

Soniya hugs abhay..

Aditiya naughtily- aha'so miss greedy has got new dress! So get ready soon..

Soniya angrily- don't call me that!

Aditiya grins- miss greedy..

Soniya took a pillow and ran behind aditiya- shut up!!

Aditiya shows tounge and ran while abhay nods his head thinking they can never change..

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Its exactly 10:30'everyone has began to arrive in rathords masion, its really decorated like real masquerade ball'red lights r every where and the whole room is dark..this has put a gorgeous effect on whole hall!!!

Every one has worn dark colour clother looking very much gorgeous with their masks!! No one could be identified in this dark maskes'.

Just then the Riachands have arrived'haseena and chand has appolized to Mr. Rathod fr not attending the party as they hv some important meeting'


Abhay has worn his black stunning suit with red tie and a golden mask showing his crystal blue eyes from the holes'he was looking super hot!!


Aditiya has worn dark grey suit with black shirt looking extremely handsome with his silver mask '


Soniya has worn a purple gown looking very beautiful with a matching mask'her shining light green eyes were piercing through the holes!!

Kabir spot them who was wearing a white tux'and white mask'

Kabir scremed excitedly- hey riachands'welcome..

The three riachands turned in their direction and said in unison- happy birthday kabir..

Kabir came near- hey guys thanks!! Great to see u all'where is uncle and aunty??

Aditiya smiling- sorry dude they cant come'urgent meeting! And I guess they told uncle..

Kabir smiles- oh its ok..atleast u guys came..

Kabir looked at abhay who was standing all with blank expression- hi abhay..great to see u back!! How r u? When did u came,,

Kabir forward his hand to abhay to shake hand.

Abhay shaking hand arrogantly said- I am fine'

Kabir noticed that he was rude enough and he didn't like this attitude of abhay. Aditiya noticed this and he calmed down the situation..

Aditiya quickly- ah bhai came yesterday!!

Kabir smirks- hmm he must be tired..why did u bribng here! He needs rest..

Abhay glared- no thanks..i am ok!

Aditiya smiling- hey guys chill'u both r talking like..ek dudre ki salo purani badla le rahi ho..

Abhay glared at aditiya and adi gulped.

Kabir cuckles- ok by the way abhay aj ke din to apna kala kapre pat pehenta..

Abhay angrily- none of urs business!

Kabir changing topic- hey miss riachand! I must say u r looking great today!

Soniya embrassed- thanks!

Kabir saw that DJ has came so he decided to hv some dance..

Kabir smiling- will u be honour to dance with me..

Soniya smiling- sure..

Kabir led soniya to dance floor and indicated to DJ to start music..

Aditiya saw them both dancing and thought he would try on someone then noticed abhay who was giving a boring look to the dancing floor..

Aditiya in mind- uff..how bhai can be soo boring and sadu?? God how me..i mean aditiya riachand hv such a sadu bhai!! I really need to change him..he needs to be cool like me..not an arrogant one! What to do?? How to do??

Aditiya came from his thoughts hearing abhay voice- huh..soniya ko uss kabir ke saat hi dance karma tha??

Aditiya irritated- bhai stop become so much possessive..they r just dancing man!!

Abhay frausted- u will not understand!

Aditiya scrastily- better I don't..

Aditiya saw T coming towards them..

T running her fingers on abhay face- hey babes'lets hv a dance!

Abhay shrugged her hands- noo thanks!!

Aditiya smirks- hey come with me..

Aditiya winked at abhay and went from there..

Abhay sighs- adi u r mad'

Abhay went near bar and ordered drink fr him..

As he was sipping the drink, he felt a strong faint aura'abhay looked here and there!!

Suddenly it disappeared'abhay was feeling restless'

Abhay in mind- what was that??

Abhay shrugged of the thought and began drink his drink'

On the other hand soniya felt a powerfull aura which was disturbing her lot'she tried to concentrate but due to kabir presence she was not able to do it properly'

Kabir became suspicious that maybe she is not feeling well'

Kabir- soniya r u ok??

Soniya nervously- ye I am great!!

Kabir worriedly- r u sure..

Soniya smiling- yeap!!!

Soniya again tried to focus on the aura and felt that its too much powerfull...

As kabir saweyed her to other side, soniya could feel that its much more stronger..and she looked at three girls whom just entered the party..

One of them was wearing a beautiful attire and maybe she was only the girl looking soo much beautiful in the party..



Soniya felt that the aura was coming from this direction but from whom..

Is some supernatural has entered the hall?? Who was that??

From whom it was coming??

Suddenly she saw two boys coming from back and soniya became confused'

Is the aura coming from boys??

Then she saw all of them leaving and the aura fades'

Soniya was sure that one of them is from supernatural world'but she couldn't get why this aura was so much powerfull as far as she knows that none powerfull aura is present except of Margeret's and she is dead now!!

Abhay was not getting that aura more..he thought it was his hillutition'

As he was sipping his drink, he again felt it'and much more powerfull and attractive..

Abhay enhales the scent and looked his left side'and so two girls standing, one was wearing red gown while other was wearing a white gown and her wavy hair opened'showing a golden look..

Abhay felt that she knows that white gown girl..her white fair skin was showing full effect on her body' she was really too beautiful in the party!!

Abhay was having a mysterious pull towards the girl'her wavy hair was moving like a wave when she was talking!! And her smile'uff..it was so cute!!

Abhay shrugged of the thought angrily that what the hell is he thinking??

Abhay then concentrated on the strong scent which coming..he felt that it was coming from one of the girl!!

After a while, he noticed that a boy came a offered the other girl to dance and she accepted happily and went away leaving the girl with white gown alone'

Now abhay was clear that the aura was coming from this girl'but how?? She is soo innocent and then how can she belong to any supernatural world!!

But the aura was too strong and dangerous'she was standing whole alone!!

Abhay in mind- who is she?? What is happening here?? The powerful supernartural person?? But..i have to check it out!!

Abhay thought fr a while and then walked towards her'the girl was feeling bored was clearly written on her face!! As abhy came near, he felt that her face resembles someone but whom??

Abhay went near here- hello young lady!! May I have honour to dance with u??

The girl turned her head towards abhay and looked upwards with her wide eyes'she looked at the blue eyes and felt a pull towards him.

They had an eyelock until abhay broke the silence!!

Abhay in his husky tone- hope u don't mind to dance with me'

The girl remain speechless and kept on staring at abhay.

Abhay has obsererved her eyes, it was a light grayish brown eyes or u can say light brown eyes with grey reflection. Abhay was getting drown at the baby eyes'

Abhay coming to sences and gave his hand offereing her fr dance.

The girl without breaking eyelock put her hand on his'and the felt current ran through their body.

Abhay protectively held her around her waist and led her to floor'

Suddenly the DJ changed the music to 'main agar kahoon''and all the lights were off accept a deem light which was focusing on them..

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Abhay swayed her around and pull her towards him such that her front hitting with his chest'

Tumko paya he to jese khoya hu

Kehna chahu bi tu tumse kya kahu

Kisi jaban bi wo labs hi nahi jo jinme tumho kya tumhe bata saku

Abhay twirls her around...

Main agar kahoon tumsa a hassi

Payana to me yahin he kahin

Tareef ye bi to such he kuch bi nahi

The girl back hits abhay chest such as her back facing him and abhay put his arms around his waist'her hair were giving abhay an iliac smell..the girl could fell his warm breath on her bare back and loosing herself..

Abhay leans near her neck and rubbs his lips there..abhay was totally lost in her that he forgot fr what motive he was dancing..he tried to penetrate her thought but her closeness was effecting so much'he felt that all these years he was waiting fr her'he felt that he knows her well'

Tumko paya he to jese khoya hoon'

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Shokhiyo me doobiya adaya chere se jahlki hui he

Julfo ki ghane ghane ghataya shann se dhalki hui he'

Abhay faces her towards him'and began sway according to musinc and lost in eachother'abhay cupps her face and kisses on her cheak'the girl closes her eyes!!!

Lehra ta achal he jese badal..

Baho me bhari he jese chandni'roop ki chandni

Abhay let her go far then again pulls towards him'

Main gar kahoon ye dilkashi'

He nahi kahi na hogi kabi'.

Tareef ye bi to sach he kuch bi nahi

Tumko paya he to jese khoya hu..

Abhay has flashback of pia ans his in her birthday party'

( flashback )

Pia dancing with abhay facing her back and abhay hugging her from behind'

Tum hua meherba'to he ye dastan..

Abhay gave a trail of kisses from her shoulder to neck and pia groans..

Abhay faces her to him and pushes apart and pulls back'

Tum huai meherba to he ye dastan..

Ab tumhara mera he ek karwa

Abhay bends her down'

Tum jaha me waha'

( flashback ends )

Abhay twirls the girl around'

Me agar kahoon humsafar meri'

Apsara ho yum ye koi pari'

Abhay pulls towards him such that they could feel eachothers breath'

Tareef ye bi to sach he kuch bi nahi..

Abhay rotates her around and at last bends her down..

Both lost in own world'

The music ends and abhay make her straight and pulls her by her waist..

The girl hand still around abhay neck'abhay looks at her rosy lips..and bends to kiss..

The girl closes her eyes in antiception and leans forward'

Their lips were about to meet when'..

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GUYS I AM REALLY SORRY IF THE DANCE SEQUANCE IS NOT GOOD AS I AM NOT GOOD IN WRITING THE DANCING STEPS...AND SOORY IF THE CHAPTER IS BORING...

Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago

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