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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful writing!!
Im speechless.. it is a sad update but i love it.. and with this kal ho na ho background sound make the difference ;)
thanks to pm me ;)
And Ramadhan Mubarak to you and all muslims! ;)

Edited by farista12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
THANKU SO MUCH FOR EVERYONE WHO LIKED AND WHO COMMENTED I AM SO SORRY I DON'T HAVE ENOUGH TIME TO RESPOND THEM BACK.

RAMADAN KAREEM EVERYONE

LOVE
SANDY
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HEY
RAMADAN KAREEM TO ALL
WELL THIS LAST PART AND I KNOW THIS IS TOTALLY CRAP AND I NOT SATISFIED WITH THIS PART.
DO LET ME KNOW SO LATER I CAN ADD ALTERNATIVE ENDING OR BETTER ENDING


PART 11 (LAST PART)



His phone rang Akash called him. He attend the call...next moment his heart skip the beat. He turn on his heal and run out of mandir manically cursing himself for leaving hospital, tears following out of his eyes he didn't seems to be affected by them. For once in his life he didn't cared he is Arnav singh Raizada.

He reached hospital just within few minutes. He ran inside and stood right outside her ICU room, Watching he laying there she was breathing... ...!!!!

He ran inside and cupped her face in his hand give damn about protesting doctors.
Khushi listen to me
please khushi...!!!



Khushi stood in pitch dark, for once in her life she wasn't feeling scared of this dark but welcoming this darkness to embrace her and take her away, take all her pains, hurts agony away from her. She saw a light a strange sort of light which was more whitethen usual one. What she saw there made her very happy, her amma babuji standing there opening their arms all ready to take her into her arms. She also wanted to run into their arms to feel their warmth, their love for her. she wanted to cry in their arms,complain why they left her behind and went away, why all this happen with her. She saw another light same sort of more shining and white one, she saw Arnav's parents. She smiled at them. Her mother in law she smiled back at her. She was happy to meet them.

Khushi come to me beta i am waiting to take you in my arms, my motherhood is thirsty to shower my love upon you. i am thirsty to love you my doll. Her mother cried.


Khushi bahu, you're coming here with us its good to have you here but my arnie my son he will be alone. He needs you betiyaa. He must be alone. Shanti Arnav's mom pleaded her.


Khushi's eyes were welled up with fresh tears.


No betiya how can you go to him again and him family don't you realise how much he hurted you. He used you for your benefit for his family's benefit.


No bahuriya my Arnie love's you, you know that he wanted you by his side that didn't meant he used you. Arnav's mom defensively spoke.


Khushi unable to think straight she turn her back to them. She cried cried and cried she was feeling tired as she walk constantly for thousand of years. He body was tired and giving up. She heard faint voice which she can even recognise in crowd.

Khushi!!! please khushi!!!!
you can't do this to me khushi!!!
dammit Khushi open your eyes please khushi!!!!

No betiya he's trapping you no don't go!!!
He will again hurt you.

No bahuriya he needs you,
he love you go to him.

DHAK DHAK DHAK DHAK

Khushi please i love you khushi open your eyes
i can't live without you
please khushi don't do this to me,
don't leave me like ma did.
why everyone i love leave me alone when i want tobe with them.
I am sorry i hurted you khushi, i love you khushi
Arnav Singh Raizada will die without you Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada

Khushi felt some one shaking her body to break this trance she open her eyes to break this disturbing sleep and saw her husband crying and wardboys pulling him out of ICU.

Ar..Arnavji...she whisper.

Arnavji...doctor heard her calling her husband he order ward boys to leave him and let him meet her wife.

He came running to him and started showering kisses on her face, don't do this to me ever ever again...khushi...he choked on his words, else next time i will be the one who will be loosing life first. i will die if something happens to you. Why you did this to save me from that bullet, that bullet was for me. Khushi he took her hand in his and cried in relief to have her back.

KHushi patted his head pulling his head up. she wipe his eyes ... you..don't...look...good...while crying, i am fine Arnavji i am fine. Please don't cry like this.

Arnavji...go, Arnav snapped his head up, Di needs you...she...will feel bad...if you will not be at her side, go

Khushiji...Khushi heard anjali's voice. She turn to look at door and saw her standing there with teary eyes. Her red eyes told khushi she was crying from long.

Di...She called in faint voice and gesture her to come near her.
I am sorry khushi ji iam sooo sorry Anjali sobbed loudly. No di please no, don't cry its not good for your child. please. Arnavji please... take care of her tell her to not cry make her drink some water... She needs rest why are you allowing her to even sit for so long she needs rest.

Nani,amma babuji, buaji, Akash, Payal, Nk, Mami came inside room.
Everyone cried and asked forgiveness. Nani kissed her, Buaji blessed her after disturbing her Nandkishore. Babuji cried silently looking at her pale doll. Her husband stood in corner look at her quietly. He had almost lost her today.

Khushi i am not going to talk to you...you was little baby sister but what you did for me you made me realise i am far older then you not in age but in deeds...you...you..ruin your life for me...you married Arnavji (her way of saying Arnav's name clearly showed how much she is hating him) just becoz he blackmailed you for this marriage. You should have let him do what ever he want why you scarifice yourself for me. Payal cried holding her hand.

Jiji don't please...i just sacrifice my dreams for the man i love. Yes i do love him for long back but never admitted it because i thought Arnavji never love me he hates me.


Arnav stood there suprise how Khushi was defending him after what he did to her.

Betiya Nandkishore has blessed us with daughter like you. I was so wrong...sob... i was so wrong to make u realise you are not our blood. Not being our daughter you did so much for us everytime i doubt if we have some blood related child he would also not do such scarifices for us. We are really luck to have you.

Khushi smiled through her tears and gesture her to come close and hug her. Buaji wipe her tears and went near her. Khushi wrap her arms around buaji little forcefully.
Haye rey NK sankadevi maroogi kya(sanka devi are you going to kill me). Buaji struggle to take breaths khushi kissed her and unwrapped her arms. Raizada and Gupta smiled slightly seeing khushi getting back to life.

Doctor came Well i can't allow huge rush in ICU and Mrs Raizada still need to take rest. I can allow only one person here andwill ofcourse Mr Raizada else he will Make hell out of this hospital he already had disturbed many patients here. Khushi smiled feeling embarrassed.

Everyone left the room except Arnav and Khushi. Arnav sit beside her on stool held her hand in his. don't you dare to play such stuntagain Khushi singh raizada have you imagine for once what i have been through...Dammit kuch ho jata tumhain...mera kya hota (if somthing happens to you...what i m going to do) Khushi gave him weak smile.

What's so funny Arnav glared at her. Khushi lean upwards and pecked his lips feeling satisfied Arnav is back to her normal self. She knows he repented alot. She will obvioualy make him go through hell once she return back home. Seeing him in vulnerable state crying like a child she could still feel his possessiveness from his grip on her hand...he was hell scared.

Khushi was satisfied now dark clouds named as shyam manohar jha has shed away now and now its time to spread happiness she knew She need to become everyone's support. She cannot live without them...thought they treated her like shit but still she loved them. Today she chose him over her parents just because she want to live a life with him. bear his children, love him like his wife.

Yes she want to be with him with whatever or who so ever he was.

do hit like and do comment.
LOVE
SANDY

Edited by sandy1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW
It was so nice😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Man what was that girl...khushi...she instantly fogive him and wants to spend her life in that house which has shown her helll...
and with a man who claims he love her and who beleived the worst of her character and made her life helll...
I am seriously disappointed with u khushi...😕
Edited by nareshSV - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hehehe i read it before u pmed me for this update as i was curious to know what happened in the end 😆
once again a fab update 👏
khushi has a big heart ... she forgave all those people who hurted her
amazing work
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful ending :) khushi has a big heart 4 forgiving em all after wht thy did to her :D hope u do write epi :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

wonderful ending😃😃

finally no shyam in their life👏👏only happiness

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Posted: 13 years ago
jus beautiful!!!

gr8 writing👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
👏wonderful end... made me cry 😭

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