Dad hate her but I love her Pt 7 Pg 47 *COMPLETED* - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago
really great update

thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg i love this it is so cute amazing lovely everything amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
ASR has become super desperate! liking this quality in his character... he cant wait to see her :)))

pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

wait lemme shout!!!

U R AMAZING OURSTANDING AWESOME MIND BLASTING SUPERB GREAT BESTTT WRITER!...;/'/'/'/!!!

OMG OMG OMG OMG man so so so in love with ur writings u make me drool over ur updates u make me cry while reading nd u make me crazy 4 the next one!!!

each nd every word was entering my heart nd i was so blown away with arnav''s feelings!
loved loved loved how arnav couldn't resist his self from eating aalo puri loved how he was comparing khushi with those aalo pui nd loved how he was feeling of her with every bite !


what a bloody solid DHAK DHAK DHAK ,i hace started to feel it in my heart while reading! how on the earth u r writing his internel emotionz dis much magically! the sound of payal,her assence her sweet breeze her beauty every thing is making him mad nd u r making us mad ros!

ND OMG!!! he helucilated her? in actual? i was feeling feary while reading that part thinking of some bhoot😆 but it turned out to be simply mind blowing!


I was dumbstruck. It was my hallucination? Me. . . . ? Hallu. . . .? Hal. . . . .? Hallucinating? Really. . . .? I was hallucinating? No. . . . It's not possible. . . . . It's. . . . It's not possible. How can I get HALLUCINATIONS? Me. . .? Arnav Singh Raizada. . . . ? Hallucinating a girl. . . ? That too her. . . Khu. . . Khush. . . . Khushi. . . . ? Khushi Kumari Gupta. . . . ? My breath increased and I was breathing heavily.

solid beautiful lines! LOVEDDD!

nd then the confession~~!!! i swear i have never read such a wonderful piece of writings,i started to cry reading his feelings, MOST AMAZING CONFESSION!

loved how he was dying to see her nd MR.ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA going to gal's house at mid nitr just to have her one bldy glance??? oh my its so dam exciting to think nd oMge he clicked her in his camera in his mob! HOLI UFFF!

hez so dam excited to meet her nd m like dying to feel it how he'll feel after seeing her in office,omgeee plz make her come soon other wise our hero will die 4 ur single glance!

precap is so so so exciting,hez making plans to see her on sunday???LMAO!!!

HOLI CRAP I CANT WAIT 4 NEXT UPDATEEE!
Thank u so much 4 making me a part of dis beautiful journey ros!
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Posted: 13 years ago
i mean this was one of the best realization i have ever read of arnav..plz update soon and some khushi's feelings too
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it sweetie
All parts were super awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx for pm,dear.it's a nice update !!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys its my birthday today. I know I know you all want a treat. And no treat can be better than romantic ArShi. . . Right? Well here's an update of Arnav's feelings deep down inside his heart.

Well in treat you all deserve two updates so I have updated Childhood crush of Raizadas also. All thanks to all those who have dropped in the beautiful comments. I was on cloud 10 not even 9 after reading you comments. Well now enough of my prawachan here you go with an update.

I would dedicate this to all my friends who have given me so nice comments. Specially chandana.s

The anklet sound increased. The breeze slowed down. Dhak Dhak, Dhak Dhak. It increased more and more. And here she was standing at the door with a slight smile on her face. The smile was of her dad getting cured up. It made me happy that she was happy. And I was also happy that her dad was getting cured up. She tied her hairs in plaits today. It was looking cute. The moment she stepped further to walk in she looked up towards my cabin and met my gaze. This was the first time she looked at me with her own wish. It increased my "thump thump" more now.

There was a smile of thanks on her face n eyes including questions. She walked up to her desk and placed her bag on the table. I walked away from there trying hard not to see her otherwise she would understand. This was such a strange feeling I was dying to see her from yesterday night and even in the morning and now when she was in front of me then why was I running away? My ears went all red and were fuming hot. The air conditioner was on still I was sweating. My cheeks too went all red (he means he is blushing but unable to understand). My mind went all blank for a second and all I was thinking about was the way she looked at me. The atmosphere turn all opposite and light as soon as she entered. The breeze went all more soft. Everyone had a smile on their faces after seeing her.

Wow man it was so great to see someone's so great effect on people that too stranger and unknown people. And I am also listed among them. Actually not among but only one and someone who is having a great effect of her on me. It was all unbelievable. My breath stopped for a minute when I saw her. Her pearl white teeth, her silky long hair, her slender body, her free flowing walk, her cute antics and pranks reminding me about my days when I used to play pranks on everyone, her bubbly smile. Oh! Gosh! She is so beautiful. She saw me and started coming up into my cabin.

OMG! She is coming up. I quickly sat in my chair and turned on my lappy. She was standing there at the door.

"excuse me sir may I come in?" she asked. Oh God her voice sent a message all over my body that she was here.

"yes" I said and she came in.

"Sir thank you very much Sir." she was thanking me? For what? Did she come to know that I paid the hospital bills of her dad? What if she will ask me that? And even if she did then what will I answer to her?

" For what?" I just asked and there came a sneeze out of my nose again. I a, sneezing from morning.

"Woh sir you paid the bills of hospital for my dad." she came to know about it. Oh man I was trying so hard to hide it from her but still she came to know.

"Uh. . . (sneezed again) it's okay" I tried to keep it stern and professional otherwise she would understand that what I was thinking.

So she came to know it. Oh God how much I tried to keep it a secret but still it came out. And then a sneeze came again. She suddenly ran out of the cabin. What was that? She ran out? But why? She must be thinking that even she will get cold because of me. And seriously I too didn't wanted that. I didn't wanted her to fall ill. It was nice that she went away. Otherwise what would have happened if she would have gone I'll?

I started working back until I heard a knock on my door. It was her. She was back holding a mug in her hand. I couldn't believe it. She walked up to me and held out the mug. It was coffee.

'Unbelievable' I thought to myself. She was concerned about me? But her. Next words stunned me even more.

"Sir you have cold, have this sir it will cure your cold." she said with all her cheeky smile. I took the mug of coffee suddenly and she was working there in front of me in all files.

Gosh does she even know how cute she looked with that smile on her face? She was looking adorable.

"Sir it's sugar free" she said. So she does know that I take sugar free coffee? Nice.

She was so concerned about me. Her innocence, her cuteness, her adorable nature was killing and winning my heart every second. How beautiful her heart was. How caring she was. Are all girls the same or is she some special one. There was definitely something good about her. But what? Her mind? No. Her heart? No. Her thinking? No. Her values? No

Then what? I thought for a minute. And then.

Her soul. . . Yes she was having a pure and divine soul. She could never think of harming anyone and I was sure about it.

Her name itself brings happiness. She was so pure so nice. She was everything to me.

How can a person be everything at a time? Well the answer is Khushi herself. She is unique.

Gosh I love her so much. My breathing heavied.

She walked down to continue her work. And I walked upto my cabin window to have a glance at her. But the scene shocked me so much and instead of shock now my anger was boiling my blood. An employee of my office well I don't know his name was staring Khushi's back and grinning evilly and Khushi was unaware as she was facing her back towards him. How dare he? How can he even put up his eyes on her? How can he put up his eyes on ASR's girl? He will not live even for a second now. I didn't wanted to create an issue as it would panic my Khushi so I called up Aman and said him to send that bas**** up in my cabin.

There was a knock on my door. There he stood. The pig.

"Well you don't even need to get in you are fired from the job." I scowled.

"Si. . . . Sir. . . . Sir please what did I do?" he was stammering with fear. There was no way I could forgive this man who landed his sick eyes on my girl. I got up from my chair and walked up towards him. He was scared and I wanted him to be scared.

I slapped him hard and fell off rolling down from the steps. I was not scared even if he died. I rushed down in no time. He was standing there without any hurt. There was another slap on his face. This man deserves no mercy.

Everyone were scared but I didn't care. I landed a punch on this guy's face again. While I was jerking and punching him off suddenly I saw her face. She was so scared. Her eyes moistened up. She looked me directly in my eye. Her eyes held so many questions and emotions. I couldn't see her like this.

I held that man's collar and took him out.

"how dare you stare Khushi with such bad intentions." I yelled.

"sooo. . . Sorry . . . .sorry sir." he stammered again with fear.

I said securities and threw him out.

While going back I stole a glance at her face. She was so horrified and scared that she had tears. I had to console her. She was scared.

While going up in my cabin I called her.

"Khushi come to my cabin." the moment she heard my voice her head jerked up and her eyes widened out in fear. She was thinking I would do the same thing with her. She walked up slowly in my cabin and there was a knock. She was here. I walked up and called her in.

"Khushi from today onwards I will drop you home." I said her sternly. She was confused for a second that what was I saying her.

"Sir. . . ." she asked in confusion.

I had to explain her everything.

"Khushi listen. . . That sick man whom I beat up just now was . .. . Was staring at your back." I revealed.

She was shocked and scared. Her legs were trembling in fear and hands were shivering. What do I do now to console her? I walked up near her and placed my hand on her head. She was. . . .cr. . . She was crying. . . .? She was dead scared. All because of that pig.

"Khushi why are you crying? What happen?" I asked her worriedly. I cannot see tears in her eyes.

"Sir woh. . . I wanted. . . . to say . . . . you this thing. . . . long back. . .that. . . That employee of yours always does fli. . . Flir. . . Flirting with all the girl employees but no one ever said you this thing because everyone is scared of you. And today morning when I came to the office her saw me and. . .and he. . . . " she was stammering a lot but stopped suddenly. What happened today morning that I don't know. I was all along there so what happened such thing that I didn't see.

"What happened Khushi say?" I urged her to speak.

"Sir. . . When I came in he. . . . he greeted me. . .good. . . good morning and let. . . let out his hand for a. . . a hand shake. When I did a hand shake he pressed my hand in a wrong way. When I tried to release it he held it more tight and gave. . .an ugly smile. But. . . but I suddenly rescued my hand." she was stammering a because of fear. She was so scared.

My blood was boiling in my every vein. My veins swelled up in anger. He didn't just dared to stare but he also dared to touch her? I really had to do something. I sent her down and picked up the call.

"hello police station. . . ." I registered a complain on his name. Now he won't dare to come near Khushi.

But what if he tries to touch her outside the office? I will drop her everyday if she will not agree then?

But there are also other girls who are facing such problem. There is only one thing I can do. Arrange a cab for everyone then she will agree to come with me when I will say her that I will drop her. Yes this is nice.

The day passed and it was time for everyone to leave.

Today she agreed for the lift after hundreds of request when I asked her as she was already scared but when I reminded her about that man she agreed in an instance. It was some way useful but also wrong to make her agree like this.

The next bright morning came and the alarm rang. I was already late for the office. Today it was 8:45. She must have reached there if not then she will reach anytime. It was hell late man. I had a quick bath took my bag and ran out of my room. I ran down stairs skipping almost two three steps at a time. Everyone were at the breakfast table. Maa was applying butter to toast but today i seriously had no time for breakfast otherwise today i would definitely miss her. While running out I picked up a toast from the table and was rushing out of the door.

"Arey Saale sahab where are you going in this hurry?" jijaji asked me. From his look I could say that he knew what was wrong with me. But still I was not sure whether he knew or not and so ignored trying not to blurt out the truth from my mouth and spoil everything.

Maa was screaming something about 'where are you going' from behind about something but I ignored her. Don't she know I go office everyday at this time. When everyone knows then why do they ask such questions every time and always waste their time in silly family breakfast and they waste my time also.

I reached office in no time. As soon as I entered my mind was shocked to see around. There was no one around in my staff. What was happening? Is everyone on leave? And then it struck me that today was Sunday.

Oh God! That means she will not come. How. . . . . How can I forget that today was Sunday. How fool of me. . . . How will I meet her? How will I see her? Today whole day. . . .

Then I remembered Maa was saying me about this thing only that today was Sunday.

I dint realized it was Sunday as I was so immersed in her thoughts and the thought of meeting her. And the thought of only not seeing her whole day was killing me what if I dint get her? I would rather die with pain.

"Idea" I screamed with excitement.

I took out my phone and dialed her number which I secretly took out two day before from the office register when I went out to see her in the night. After few rings she picked up.

"Heloo." she said in her typical English. Gosh even that was so cute. My mind went blank for a second and then my senses came back.

"Uh. . .Khushi. . . Kumari Gupta. . . You are appointed as my secretary." I informed her.

She let out a sudden shriek with excitement. I couldn't see but I could say that she was jumping with joy as she got promoted.

"Uh. . . Stop jumping as now your work starts. We have a sudden meeting today so you have to come to office." I tried to keep it stern as it should look professional and not personal. I didn't want her to think that I am upto something.

"But. . But sir now?" she asked confusingly.

"Yes right now." I said and disconnected as now I have to check which meetings are pending.

Well Mr. Mehta's meeting was pending and as he said that he is ready anytime for the meeting so I called him and planned the meeting.

God! Now I made her my secretary now she will be always in front of me. I may never have to run around to see her. I can call any sudden meetings like this and can meet her.

All the while she was near me when the meeting was going on. It was becoming hard to concentrate on the meeting. And when I saw the meeting finishing up soon I called off the other meeting too.

The lunch time was up. Her face was the screen of her heart. It was revealing that she was hungry too.

I called in the canteen and ordered lunch for both in my cabin.

Precap:

The Lunch conversation began from a smile and ended with I love You.

The Unexpected runaway marriage. Organized by someone.

Wanna know guys. Well then leave me your comments. I am waiting for them and no one liners please.

Guys there is the greatest twist waiting ahead in ArShi's marriage. Get sticked for the update.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Oops...I res'ed twice😆

Well many more happy returns of the day rose...😳
May all ur dreams come true
What r u wating for blow the candles
Yippeee...Happy birthday honey
Love U

Edited by chandana.s - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lol...Its really funny to imagine Arnav as lover boy n runing around a girl...😆
Arnav dont even get a second to relax from her thoughs😛...Wonder had anyone in his home noticed his changed behavior...🤔
N he is sooo possessive n caring😳😳...He dint even thinked a second before firing the man who is staring at Khushi...😍
Oh god!!!😲He forgotten that its sunday n gone to office😆...*If this what love is then its better to not fall in love🤢😆*
Awesome update👏...Loved it this much 🤗
Precap-Omg!!He said I Love U😳 n Run away marriage😕...!!!!! hmmm might be his dad dint agreed for the marriage...
Waiting for the next part...Update sooon😊
Special dedication for ME...Thank u

Edited by chandana.s - 13 years ago

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