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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81

lovely update nisha..
looks like shaan has something deep inside his heart for the opinion he has regarding woman..
so he needs time to open up abt that to khanak..hope he discusses it with her..
looks like both r very much in love with the other yet they r not aware of that..
where her heart lies..good thought..
awaiting the next part..


Yep. There are a lot that the two need to know about each other. Not just facts but their ideals about life are so different ke time tou lagay ga. Thanks for your lovely comment 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: IF_rida

That was superb
i loved the conv... amazingly penned
i loved the part that finally he has realized she imp to him and he sought her acceptance
nice that she is ready to give him time ... coz that one of the imp things that a relationship requires
her opinion and views are penned beautifully
hmm exactly the confusion where her heart is
its nice that their camaraderie is not affected by the unanswered ques
eagerly waiting for the next part
update soon... em luving it


Thank you Rida! You are absolutely right about relationships need time to develop. Both are trying to act maturely but both are new to such a situation so they get a bit cautious sometimes. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aasma1

Awww loving hopefully there friendship will bloss into something new...

I just wanted to say in about a weeks time I am going to be working 12-15 hour shift so I wont be able to comment much but I will defo read and if I only comment which a word please forgive me... hwn I bave time I will defo let u know how I feel about yhe updates


Hopefully it will! 😊
It's alright Aasma. It's so nice to know that you'll still be reading the tale. I just hope your shifts don't get too hectic for you. Good Luck! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: k.krithika

Loved it Nisha 😃

Beautifully written as always 👏
I am also eagerly waiting for his answer like Khanak
Somewhere i feel his past experience would not catch up or affect Shanak's present because when he asked her to trust him he was genuine and honest he asked time to figure his own feelings and he wants his theory to be proved wrong by only her his true women 😉
I feel it has got to be someone's life experience which he had seen that would have made him feel all women are materialistic i dont think he loved someone earlier it's just my POV
And Khanak's heart is with Shantanu the girl is in love with him and same goes to Shantanu 😉
Loved every bit of it ❤️
Thanks a lot 😃
Love u always 🤗


Thank youu!! Can't tell you how much I loved your comment! 😃 The bold part was spot on and another one of your opinions is something interesting but how true it is, only time will tell and when time does tell I'll remind you of it 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sangitasengupta

Read part 21 & 22 together !! What can I say? This is a story which touches my heart!!


Very deep rooted !!


Sangitaaa! Thanks a lot. Your comments always make me smile 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

it was such a lovely update nisha😊

loved each and every bit of it
update next very soon
this is getting more and more interesting😃


Thanks a lot Jalis! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks a lot! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ktymfan

loved it:::::::::...Waiting fr nxt...i m loving ur shanak yar all the moRe nw...😛



Thank you. It means a lot! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys! Thank you so much for all your wonderful comments. I have replied to each one of them individually.

I'll post the update today...or -if I don't find time- no later than tomorrow if all goes well. I'd also like to mention that since I've started writing longer updates, as I explained in my updates earlier, it might be difficult for me to update regularly. Rest assured I'm hoping to update at least twice a week at least. Of course I'll update more if I have more time. 😊

It's just that I have to prepare for three standardized tests as well as get my other studies in order. The sooner I get into the flow of studying the more frequent I'd be able to update. 😊


Loads of love,
Nisha!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 23

Manya came into Khanak's room and jumped on her bed, lying stomach down on it.
"Di?"
"Hmmm?"
"Kya kar rahi ho aap?"
"Kaprey set kar rahi houn almari mein."
"Uff ho Di that's not what I meant."
"Tou phir?"
"Phir ye ke Di Shaan bhai ko aye huwey ek haftey se bhi ziyada ho gaya hai. What do you think about him? Ab tou aap ye bhi nai keh sakti ke you don't know him."
"But I don't know him."
"Jhoot mat boliye Di! Bataye naaa...I'm your one and only sister aur behn se aysi baatein chupate nai hein."

Khanak laughed involuntarily and walked up to Manya. Sitting on the bed, she said:
"Jhoot nai bol rahi Mannu. I don't know him well enough."
"But you know him thora sa right? Itna tou pata hi hoga ke you can decide potential hai ke nai?"

Khanak thought about it for a moment. Potential? Hmm...now that was something she had never given much thought to. She had thought about it once or twice but never given it much importance. Usually, her analysis asked one of the two answers of her: yes or no? But here, Manya had a point. Life was about discovering yourself and those around you, right? It's a journey. And so it marriage. So, all that she really needed to find out was whether their relationship had any potential. Potential to be successful. Potential to keep them happy. Potential to compromise equally. Potential to build up to a point where they could stand solid through thick and thin. Potential to develop into love.

She had always dreamt of a man who would sweep her off her feet and then make her fall in love with him even more with each passing day meanwhile he'd love and care for her exceeding any expectations that she would have of him. An eternal couple besotted by each other.

But that was her dream. Now that she closely looked into the everyday life of herself and her man, she could see the increasing love developing out a growing understanding. The care and tenderness resulting from an observation of how much the other meant to them. The fairytale was real. It was only the end which she could see which made her think that it was only a dream. If she and her beau worked for the same end, it would be real. Her dream would be real.


As Khanak went through her fairytale dreams, Manya carefully read the cocktail of emotions that flitted across her face. Thoughtful. Distant. Confused. Dreamy. Aspiring. Realisation. Hope.
"Diii!" Manya jolted Khanak out of her thoughts.
"Kya Mannu. Pata nai mujeh," said Khanak whilst attempting to get up from the bed but Manya was quick to pull her down.
"Chupao mat Di. Tell me na. Bhai seems to be so nice. There seems to be no air of attitude or snobiness about him. He's so nice. And Harsh aur mere saath bhi wo time spend karte hein."
"So?"
"So what? Don't you get it?"
"Get what Mannu. Fazool mein mera tima na waste kero. I have work to do."
"Work to do! Di. Please okay. The guy OBVIOUSLY likes you. Why would he spend so much time bonding with your family otherwise?"
"Maybe because this is his father's best friend's family and he's our guest? It would be rude to not sit with us."

Manya rolled her eyes.
"Oh stop this drama Di! He pakka likes you. Ab baat ye hai ke do you like bhai?"
"Mannu," said Khanak holding her little sister's chin between her thumb and fingers, "act your age. Ye matchmaking choro aur concentrate on your studies."
"Not fair Di. Aap topic avoid ker rahi ho. And mein koi itni choti nai houn ok."
"Acha meri behn!" said Khanak holding her hands in front of Manya making an apology sign. "Tou Detective Manya Jadeja wants to know whether I like Shaantanu?"
"Jeee!" exclaimed Manya, sitting up on the bed with excitement.

"He's a nice guy but I don't know where this thing will go. And abhi it's not clear whether I like him or not."
"Acha. So how does he make you feel?"
"Kya Mannu tu bhi. I answered your question aur ab ye kacheri band ker ke parhne jao," Khanak lightly scolded Manya and tried to get up from the bed.
Once more, Manya pulled her back down again.
"Dialogue aur bahana dono ache hein but ek masla hai Di."
"Kya?" asked a confused Khanak.
"Ke jo aap ke do do laal gaal hein na, they are a dead giveaway," winked Manya and quickly got up and left the room before Khanak could pull her ears.



*****


"It's been over a week Sunil. When is Shaan coming back? Na tum bata rahey ho na Shaan." asked Manvi.
"Aa jae ga Shaan once the intial details have been sorted out Madhvi. Don't stress over it," replied Sunil.
"Don't stress over it? Sunil, of course I'll stress over it. Out of the blue you decide to send him for the project. And iss se pehle tou aysa kabhi nai huwa."
"He needs to become responsible Mads, mein ussey practice de raha houn bas."
"But itne suddenly kyun responsibility deni thi?"
"Madhvi, he's 26. Ab nai seekhay ga tou kab seekhay ga? And then, before he starts a family he needs to be well-settled and responsible."

"I just hope iss trip pe wo Khanak pe clear ho jae."
"I hope so too," replied Sunil.
"I mean, wo larki itni typical and boring lagti hai ke I'm surprised ke Shaan even said ke he'll think about it."

Suni stopped drinking his tea and stared at his wife.
"Matlab?"
"What matlab? They just don't go together."
"But tumhein tou koi masla nai tha iss rishte se. That's why you went to London with me. We've gone over this Madhvi." Sunil was harsh and direct with his reply.
"Yeah. I went over because you and Chitresh are good friends and the girl was brought up in London. But seriously Sunil, I was disappointed. Wo tou kisi angle se London-bred nai lagti."
"She is simple and not totally western, I agree. But what's wrong with that? At least she's not conniving and materialistic. Kitni sundar aur susheel bachi hai."
"Whatever Sunil. I'm not saying the girl isn't nice. I'm just saying ke she's just not Shaan's type."
"Maybe Shaan ko thori akal aa gai hai. I'm happy he's giving it a thought."
"Of course you're happy Sunil, but tum dono dostoun ki dosti ko agay barhate barhate I won't let my son fall prey to you guys."
"Don't be silly Mads, of course mujeh apne betay ki chinta hai. No one is forcing him."
"Then I already know his decision," concluded Madhvi.



*****


Next evening:

Shaantanu was looking for Khanak around the house. He had checked her room, the terrace and the kitchen but without any success.
"Aunty," he address Alpana when he saw her in the living room, "aap ne Khanak ko dekha hai kaheen?"
"Oh beta she's out with friends, Friday night hai na."
"Oh okay. Thanks."
"Waise why don't you go out and see the town too? Thora enjoy winjoy kero."
"Akele kya maza Aunty. Tomorrow maybe."
"As you wish beta," smiled Alpana.

Shaan started to go up to his room when he had another thought.
"Where did Khanak go Aunty? I mean do you know when she'll be back?"
"Sorry beta can't help you there. But ek kaam ho sakta hai."
"Jee kya Aunty?"
"Come here, let's talk."




Okay guys, here's part 23. Sorry for the delay. Hope it makes up for the time lag.
Spoiler: Something big coming up next week! 😉
Personal satisfaction: I have been so caught up the last few days that I thought I won't have time to update today but my promises kept be true to my word and I've updates 10 minutes before the "tomorrow" ended by my standard time 😃
Edited by ABlank90 - 13 years ago

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