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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#371

OMG!!
I somehow missed this note.
I'm really not happy with your decision Maria.
This story is one of the best AR ffs on IF.
Plz don't pay heed to the responses.
They bwill slowly increase and even if they don't then also it's my earnest request to not disappoint your regular readers.
We have been there with this ff since day 1 and you are discontinuing this ff for those who have not realized it's worth.
I can't believe that u deleted the whole folder in an unhappy mood.
I understand how it feels when people don't comment.But that does not means that a writer should stop writing.
I request you to kindly re-consider your decision.
In the end it's your wish.
But I will be really sad to see such a masterpeice of work being left incomplete by a wonderful writer like you.
Girl you really write very well.
Plz have faith in your readers and try to continue Yarian.
I'm in love with Yarian and this is the ff apart from Nikita's where I've posted my longest comments.
Plz don't discontinue it.

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teenorchid

@teenorchid

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#372

seee mariiiaaa.. Ab tou asma b aa gayi

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ojaswi

@ojaswi_kajen

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#373

hey i jst read ur ff...

it is awesome...

nice one...loved it...

spl ARS frndship bond was soo nice...

fab one...cont soon...

nd add me in ur PM list...😊

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teenorchid

@teenorchid

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: ojaswi96
hey i jst read ur ff...it is awesome...nice one...loved it...spl ARS frndship bond was soo nice...fab one...cont soon..., nd add me in ur PM list.

yar she is discontinuinggg

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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#375

what is dis yaar? atleast continue 4 us, ur loyal readers...dont get disheartened by da no. of comments dear! honestly ur not perfect in writing but r good in whatever u write... still its ur decision whether u wish 2 continue or not

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#376

Thankx Every one for your likes on previous part:)

Part 10(AR)
They both broke off the kiss due to much needed breath but don't leave each other,their foreheads were joined.Arman open his eyes.He gazed at riddhima,her eyes were still close and those petals arman wanted to feel them again..but he stop his temptation and move away from riddhima.Riddhima open her eyes and saw arman standing there gazing at her with love in his eyes.Riddhima again felt drowned in them arman came closer to her and peck her lips again and whisper:
"Riddhima go will see you at night"
By saying this he left from there..Riddhima kept staring at hi retracting figure.She move her finger on her lips and close her eyes..this was not the first she was kissed but the the feeling was so heavenly that brought a totally new feeling inside as if she was kissed for the first time..She close her eyes over the kiss but can she??A hell no,she thought.But neverthless she close her eyes and took a deep sigh and went out side to sid and tamana.She besides Sid.Sid ask her through eyes what happen??but she was not in her senses,she just look at him and then move her gaze to arman.She saw arman throwing ball ,she kept staring at him.She want to go to him and...she don't know what...She just want to go him!
Confuse she just left from there with out meeting arman or saying anything to Sid.Sid try to stop her but tamana held his hand..
After match over arman came to locker room.He gaze at the same corner where he just kissed riddhima,their first kiss.This thing brought an exciting feeling inside him..He kept looking at that corner ..he felt sid congratulating him and hug him.But arman was in his thought he just look at him an without saying anything.
Sid felt looking at him,he felt dejectedly,first riddhima and now arman.Both of his freinds moving away from him.He want to stop him but tamana stops him.She pulled him towards her and kiss him.She kissed her so passionately that sid forgets everything.He caught her by her wiast and kept kissing her...
Tamana knew how to control sid now..But she is unaware of the fact that by doing this she is changing the fate of sid,riddhima and Arman but including herself!...
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Whole day riddhima close herself in her room analyzing that what is between her and arman..what is happening to their freindshiip,why she was not able to stop that kiss.*The kiss when ever she thought about that kiss she felt hot around her ears.She moves her finger at her lips and close her eyes to felt arman's touch...

Arman on the other hand was planning for tonight,now he cant be just freinds with riddhima,he know that now he loved riddhima soo much that he want her beside him..he had fallen deeply in love with her.He wants her beside him..today was the evidence that he couldn't afford to loose her and he couldn't see her with any one else..tonight will be the night when he will confess his love to her.he is sure that she will accept his love...
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Riddhima look at her image in the mirror.She was happy with the way she looks,just according to arman's taste.She wears red dress,knee length and has a butterfly bow around her waist.She just apply lip glose.The thought of a date with arman send shivers down her spine,she is very excited,nervous,happy.A mixture of these feeling.She felt like a bubble inside her which would explode any moment. Her chain of thought broke by the horn.She quickly wears her heel and carry her pouch,she went downstairs.She had already told her father that she is coming late.She went outside lock the house and quickly went to car.
As soon as arman eyes land on her,he was spell bounded,she was dressing just like he likes.Arman smiles to him..Riddhima came and sat beside her.
Arman mumble a hi to her and so does she.Arman:"You looking beautiful"
Riddhima felt buterflies in her stomach.She kept looking down and mumble:"you too looking great"
They both reach the hotel.The drive was silent.Like a gentleman arman opens the door and led her inside the hotel.There they have their dinner that too silently.After dinner arman says:"Riddhima tonight I am taking to a special place"
Riddhima smiles but didnt say anything,she was feeling umm,she dont know that she was not even able to speak anything.So they both just drove to that special place.They both reach there.Riddhima come out of the car and was spell bounded to the place.It has been too many years that she visited here.It was the place where they for the first time met.Riddhima gave a teary smile to arman.Arman help her hand in his and led her inside the park.They both kept looking at the park as if revining there childhood memories,both have sweet smiles on there faces.They felt tiny rain drops on there face.Riddhima smile but gave a aghast look.Riddhima know he hates rain.Rain started to fall heavily,arman was going to run to his car but riddhima held his hand and ask him:"Lets dance"
Arman:"You surely gone mad"
But riddhima didn;t listen to him,she forcefully drag arman to the park again and then she slowly place his arms around her waist and her hands around his neck,she was soo into her masti that she not realise their closeness but arman was totally aware of their closeness.He jerk her more closer,then riddhima look into his eyes and realise there closeness,arman was slowly moving his face more cloer to her.Riddhima breath got heavy she caught arman neck tightly and slowly close her...Arman came so close to her that there lips was just few millimeter apart.Arman kiss her cheeks,slowly.He was totally intoxicating by riddhima presence but riddhima open her eyes she saw arman gazing at her lips,Riddhima slowly de tangle him from her hands.She suddenly jerk him away and start laughing while running.Arman felt extremely irritated with riddhima this act.He too start running behind behind her..
Matai jan meri jan hai tu..
Matai Jan meri jan hai tu...
Jan Le meri jan hai tu..
They both kept running like kids,when arman try to catch she doge him and run away from him,Suddenly her foot trip she was going to fell down when arman caught her by placing his arms under her head
Lag jaio na nazar mera pyar ko meri..
rab se ye mai na ki thi guftogo..
They both fell on the ground but as ground.Riddhima was under arman and arman;s hand was under riddhima head,they both kept staring at each other..
Duniya ko bhool jao..
Naino mai kho jao..
Aye mujhe to nazar char so...
Arman slowly moves his face more closer to her ,and this time with out delay he kept his lips upon her,kissing her softly.They both kept kissing each other.Finally out of breath they broke the kiss but didn't move away..arman carase her checks with other hands and whisper against her lips:"I love you riddhima".Silent prevailed there,both didn't say anything but kept staring at each other.This time riddhima took initiative and place her lips upon him...
Jan le meri jan... Meri jan hai tu meri
Jan le meri jan..Meri jan hai tu
Matai Jan..Jan hai tu meri...

Very Important do read
Boring I know but i love this part and guys this part and the part after this which will be Season 1 of yearian last part will be written by me.. Season 2 will be written by some one else!...I am working on that part bcz that part is very important and yeah that part will pm part..it will not bad or something trust me guys after reading that pm part you guys will cry loll..

Leave your precious comets plz!
love
maria:)

Edited by XxDeansChickxX - 13 years ago

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#377

Thankx Every one for your likes on previous part:)

Part 10(ArSh)
They both broke off the kiss due to much needed breath but don't leave each other,their foreheads were joined.Arman open his eyes.He gazed at Shilpa,her eyes were still close and those petals arman wanted to feel them again..but he stop his temptation and move away from Shilpa.Shilpa open her eyes and saw arman standing there gazing at her with love in his eyes.Shilpa again felt drowned in them arman came closer to her and peck her lips again and whisper:
"Shilpa go will see you at night"
By saying this he left from there..Shilpa kept staring at hi retracting figure.She move her finger on her lips and close her eyes..this was not the first she was kissed but the the feeling was so heavenly that brought a totally new feeling inside as if she was kissed for the first time..She close her eyes over the kiss but can she??A hell no,she thought.But neverthless she close her eyes and took a deep sigh and went out side to sid and tamana.She besides Sid.Sid ask her through eyes what happen??but she was not in her senses,she just look at him and then move her gaze to arman.She saw arman throwing ball ,she kept staring at him.She want to go to him and...she don't know what...She just want to go him!
Confuse she just left from there with out meeting arman or saying anything to Sid.Sid try to stop her but tamana held his hand..
After match over arman came to locker room.He gaze at the same corner where he just kissed Shilpa,their first kiss.This thing brought an exciting feeling inside him..He kept looking at that corner ..he felt sid congratulating him and hug him.But arman was in his thought he just look at him an without saying anything.
Sid felt looking at him,he felt dejectedly,first Shilpa and now arman.Both of his freinds moving away from him.He want to stop him but tamana stops him.She pulled him towards her and kiss him.She kissed her so passionately that sid forgets everything.He caught her by her waist and kept kissing her...
Tamana knew how to control sid now..But she is unaware of the fact that by doing this she is changing the fate of sid,Shilpa and Arman but including herself!...
*******************************
Whole day Shilpa close herself in her room analyzing that what is between her and arman..what is happening to their freindshiip,why she was not able to stop that kiss.*The kiss when ever she thought about that kiss she felt hot around her ears.She moves her finger at her lips and close her eyes to felt arman's touch...

Arman on the other hand was planning for tonight,now he cant be just freinds with riddhima,he know that now he loved Shilpa soo much that he want her beside him..he had fallen deeply in love with her.He wants her beside him..today was the evidence that he couldn't afford to loose her and he couldn't see her with any one else..tonight will be the night when he will confess his love to her.he is sure that she will accept his love...
****************************
Shilpa look at her image in the mirror.She was happy with the way she looks,just according to arman's taste.She wears red dress,knee length and has a butterfly bow around her waist.She just apply lip glose.The thought of a date with arman send shivers down her spine,she is very excited,nervous,happy.A mixture of these feeling.She felt like a bubble inside her which would explode any moment. Her chain of thought broke by the horn.She quickly wears her heel and carry her pouch,she went downstairs.She had already told her father that she is coming late.She went outside lock the house and quickly went to car.
As soon as arman eyes land on her,he was spell bounded,she was dressing just like he likes.Arman smiles to him..Shilpa came and sat beside her.
Arman mumble a hi to her and so does she.Arman:"You looking beautiful"
Shilpa felt buterflies in her stomach.She kept looking down and mumble:"you too looking great"
They both reach the hotel.The drive was silent.Like a gentleman arman opens the door and led her inside the hotel.There they have their dinner that too silently.After dinner arman says:"Shilpa tonight I am taking to a special place"
Shilpa smiles but didnt say anything,she was feeling umm,she dont know that she was not even able to speak anything.So they both just drove to that special place.They both reach there.Shilpa come out of the car and was spell bounded to the place.It has been too many years that she visited here.It was the place where they for the first time met.Shilpa gave a teary smile to arman.Arman help her hand in his and led her inside the park.They both kept looking at the park as if revining there childhood memories,both have sweet smiles on there faces.They felt tiny rain drops on there face.Shilpa smile but gave a aghast look.Shilpa know he hates rain.Rain started to fall heavily,arman was going to run to his car but Shilpa held his hand and ask him:"Lets dance"
Arman:"You surely gone mad"
But Shilpa didn;t listen to him,she forcefully Drag arman to the park again and then she slowly place his arms around her waist and her hands around his neck,she was soo into her masti that she not realise their closeness but arman was totally aware of their closeness.He jerk her more closer,then Shilpa look into his eyes and realise there closeness,arman was slowly moving his face more closer to her.Shilpa breath got heavy she caught arman neck tightly and slowly close her...Arman came so close to her that there lips was just few millimeter apart.Arman kiss her cheeks,slowly.He was totally intoxicating by Shilpa presence but Shilpa open her eyes she saw arman gazing at her lips,Shilpa slowly de tangle him from her hands.She suddenly jerk him away and start laughing while running.Arman felt extremely irritated with Shilpa this act.He too start running behind behind her..
Matai jan meri jan hai tu..
Matai Jan meri jan hai tu...
Jan Le meri jan hai tu..
They both kept running like kids,when arman try to catch she doge him and run away from him,Suddenly her foot trip she was going to fell down when arman caught her by placing his arms under her head
Lag jaio na nazar mera pyar ko meri..
rab se ye mai na ki thi guftogo..
They both fell on the ground but as ground.Shilpa was under arman and arman;s hand was under Shilpa head,they both kept staring at each other..
Duniya ko bhool jao..
Naino mai kho jao..
Aye mujhe to nazar char so...
Arman slowly moves his face more closer to her ,and this time with out delay he kept his lips upon her,kissing her softly.They both kept kissing each other.Finally out of breath they broke the kiss but didnt move away..arman crase her checks with other hands and whisper against her lips:"I love your Shilpa".Silent prevailed there,both didnt say anything but kept staring at each other.This time Shilpa took initiative and place her lips upon him...
Jan le meri jan... Meri jan hai tu meri
Jan le meri jan..Meri jan hai tu
Matai Jan..Jan hai tu meri...

Very Important do read
Boring I know but i love this part and guys this part and the part after this which will be Season 1 of yearian last part will be written by me.. Season 2 will be written by some one else!...I am working on that part bcz that part is very important and yeah that part will pm part..it will not bad or something trust me guys after reading that pm part you guys will cry loll..

Leave your precious comets plz!
love
maria:)

Edited by XxDeansChickxX - 13 years ago

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Shweta

@LiveLaughLove..

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#378

hey thanks 4 continuing great work

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#379

Maria this part was simply amazing.
OMG!! AR kissed again...
The song sequence was awesome.
AR are just amazing.
I just can't understand why AR's relationship would make AR and Sid's friendship different.
You have simply mesmerised me with this part.
I really loved it..
I don't have enough words to appreciate you Maria.
Plz update the next part soonest.
P.S.- I'm sorry I didn't see your post regarding the song that day.I'm still not able to listen the song.
Take care!
love you.

Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 13 years ago