New AbhIya SS:Never Let me Go(EPILOGUE*pg88*Jan14)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

update kab plan kar rai ho?😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: _Sonu_
Wo Tanzie...That was a superb update...👏⭐️
Loved it...esp. the part when Abhay was slapped...Pia's reaction was hilarious..😆

so they are now gonna have this love-hate relationship..

and I'm yet to start reading Till d end of time..So I dont know much about Aryan from there..

I hope I'll finish reading it sooner..

And Abhay left Pia coz he thinks she was responsibke for Shreya's parents death..😲

I hope this is a misunderstanding..

Continue soon Tanzie...

Thanks Sonu. glad u liked it. yes, its complicated relationship of love and hate. Oh, you havent read till the.. Aryan is Abhay's brother in that. This misunderstanding has truth in it too.. atleast some..

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
What a thappaddar update. I loved it. look I know Abhay had his own reasons for doing all that and i do feel sorry for him as he just found out about his unborn but he still deserved each and every slap if more are to come. I kinda love this granny 👏

I know you guys wuld love the thappad 😛 😆 no he doesnt deserve it because its not his fault. he was vruel I know but he has good reason for that. so both sides are guilty...

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta
awesome cs n chapter
loved it
So Abhay loves Piya
Is Piya really responsible for his sister's accident I think thats mystery here and the root cause of the hatred of Abhay towards Piya
I have a feeling dadi will be a key to bring Abhiya together
cont soon
thanks for the pm

Thank you Pari. Yes Abhay and Pia both love each other. She is somehow responsible. you are right, dadi will play a important part 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
@Pavi, wait to know the answer😛😆

@Naf, yes I will update tonight😆

REALLY WOWOW...ME CHALI ME CHALI,CHALI FF KI GALI KOI ROKENA MUJHE ME CHALI ME CHALI🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
LOL tanzie sorry 4 late comment coz my net was in buri halat.But koi na. yea I got it from your MB posts that your net is disturbing 😕I so loved ur update.It was fun 2 read. 1) Abhay thinking abt his past where Pia kissed him & he was 1st angry & thn rude lke always😆 2)Abhiya's interaction in hospital.Pehle abhay was all caring but thn again the khados monster in him start doing somersault😆.But wht Pia's prank actually did tht Abhay's sis died?😕 she is somehow responsible for sure. abhay loves her but he wont admit it easily. 3)Pia's Go away Abhay Raichand mission was coolio 4)My fav was dadi's entry.The way she slapped Abhay.Pia's heart was dancing.LOL I bet she must b shouing in her mind once more:P.Abhay ka Man ego hurt ho gaya Pia k samne chata padha:P😆 & izzat ka faaluda:P.Ab Pia & dadi both woman will make bharata of Abhay Khados Raichand😆 Yea Pia was dancing inside 😆 Abhay and Pia will mutually make their bharta 😆
LOL I was laughing whn I read in ur CS tht arnab died wid shock coz Pia married abhay,thn had miscarriage😆.LOL both Abhiya brought death 2 their parents Koi shock se mara koi electic shock sai:P😆 & yeh dono ek dusre k attyachar se marenge😆 very well said... tu bhi na 🤣

Originally posted by: --Siva--
Tanzie, are u sure,.. This is not a dark one? No twists? NO magic..? Are u sure, U r Tanzie, only?? I doubt cos the lady I know was queen in twists and dark magics that sometime i felt she herself is a witch!😃😉 you crack me up big time seriously.. 🤣 are mein itni buri nehi hoon... no dakr but i cant promise about twists 😛 😆 yes im a witch 😈

Interesting start! Abhay's loved ones are dying in freaking accidents? Tanzie's touch there?😉 more to die

Pia was reason for Shreya's parents accident? and that is why they separated? And when did they separate? may some months before cos she had suffered a miscarriage 6 months before! no they separated around 11 months ago or so. she was 6 months pregnant when he had her miscarriage.

Nice start dear!

Update soon!

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Eowyn
Tanzie sweetheart, belated Happy Birthday...
I have been offline for a long time and didn't notice it's your birthday!😳
OMG!😆🤣
AbhIya are hugely entertaining in here Tanzie...😆
Those fights are to die for😆... thanks a lot dear 🤗 they are very entertaining yeap 😆 as i promised i will stay away from all supernatural, mafia etc in this SS 😆 will try to put humor 😊

'Shirtup Dobrial?'...🤣...
Rajlaxmi Raichand has become my instant favourite...
Now what prank could Piya possibly play that will lead to an accident?

I am nuts reading so many AbhIya ff's at once...
But kya karein...can't resist when my favorite writers come up with such superb works...🤗 Rajlaxmi has gained enough popularity with a slap on ARs face 🤣 pia is somehow responsible but what Abhay did was no good too. thanks a lot for getting your time and reading 😳

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
Amazing update...
firstly i luv Dadi😛🤗
Luved each & evry bit of it🤗
Intrstin precap😛

thank you. 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

YAY me first Tanzie first n foremost hats off to u 👏 For coming up with a simple story that has such complex characters like Abhay n Pia ⭐️ Its really tough. Its probably easier to write on goody goody people or maybe an out n out negative character but to write something on complicated characters is so so tough n u pull it off with such ease that it almost seems effortless! 👏 Only u could come up with something like this 👏

So Pia knows Abhay ruined her life for a prank she had played earlier on? Then y didn't she try to win him back? After all she was the one who started it 😭 I feel thoroughly bad for her as she had to go through the trauma of losing her father n then her child I could see Abhay still loves her but doesn she love him enough to make the mends? Coz I am sure Abhay might give it a try or maybe I might be wrong here 😕

I felt really horrible for Abhay here. I am sure it must've been helluva difficult for him to throw Pia out of his life. I am sure he would've cursed himself a million times over while doing that Atleast him throwing away the frame, then getting it back n keeping it in place tells the same 😭

Shreya is a sweetheart 😳 Loved her. I hope she gets Abhiya together again 😃 And I also hope her wish comes true that of bringing Abhiya's angel back 😊

Lovely update Tanzie n I am looking forward to the next chapter. The title surely hints at some cat fights n intense moments 😊

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

That was one beautiful and emotional update Tanzie.

The way you described Abhay's mind and heart battle was awesome.

and i can understand Pia's pain too. Losing a child can be devastating for any woman, and to live with that pain is extremely tough.

Edited by ..dishu.. - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

such an emotional update😭
just loved abhay's & shreya's conversation😉
abhay & piya,both knows each other insinde out😳
dadi was realy crazzy to ask piya to live in abhay's room😆
next chapter's name sounds too good😆
continu soon...

Edited by shria - 13 years ago