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Ek Duje Ke Vaaste ..
..an un-conditional bond of pain ...😭
hi awl ...hw r u friends ..??
hopefully u enjoyed the teaser ..😳.
here i am with part 9 of my 1st SS ...
do let me knw hw is my ANGRY YOUNG MA(a)N ...😉
PART 9
stairing at each other geet drifted into a peaceful sleep while Meera came in and said that he needs to go out and look as geet's DAAI JAAN wants to meet him ...he was a bit concious with the thought what they will be thinking ...and then the thought knocked his mind was RANDHEER ALAUWALIA .....how will he react to this and will they allow them to be 2gether ..knowing all about the past ...about his marriage ...
he came out with a lot of questions playing in his mind and went towards the waiting room ...while adi told him that armaan and meera has told daai jaan and randheer everything and now they are waiting for him ..
as he came in the room he saw a lady on wheel chair almost like his dadi in age ...geet had told abt daai jaan to him earlier ...and now he is in-front of the lady whom geet respects the most and cares for her alot ...she is in tears ..
Daai Jaan : kaisi hai meri bachi ...woh theek hai na ...uss ko kuch hua to nahi ..
Maan : woh theek hai ..aap fiqar mat kijeye ..doctors ne kaha hai 1 ya 2 week lage gein uske bruises bharne mien magar uske baad woh bilkul theek hojai gi ...kuch nahi hoga humari geet ko ..
Daai Jaan ( some how calmed herself and asked with a straight face ) : tum hi maan ho ... geet ke best friend ...
Maan nodded positively and daai jaan continued ...
Daai Jaan : 11 saal ki thi jab tum se mili thi pehli baar ...aur tum shayad 13 ya 14 ke ...hai na ?
Maan : ji ...
Daai Jaan : jab geet wapis ghar aai tou woh humari geet nahi thi mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai kitna rooyii thi jab uske papa ne ussko hostel bheja tha ...ghar se ghar-waloon se door nahi jana chahti thi ...magar jab wapis aayi tou aisa laga jaise usko wapis aane ka hi dukh hoo ..
phir ek din usko ek tasveer se baat karte dekha ...aur jab dekha tou uske maa-papa ki nahi balke kisi aur ki thi ...kisi larke ki ...tumharii
jab tumhare bare mien poocha tu bolti gayi ...aur phir laga jaise ruke gi hi nahi ...uss din wapis aane ke baad pehli baar uski aankhoon mien mene woh khushi dekhi jab woh tumhare aur apne baree mien bata rahi thii ...mujhe yaqeen nahi hua tab ke geet ko kisi se itna lagaoo kaise hugaya ...woh tou kabhi armaan aur meera ke elawa kisi se baat tak nahi karti ...
phir mujhe laga bachpana hai ...kuch waqt guzrega aur bhool jaye gi ...magar mujhe kya pata tha ke 16 saal ki geet ki aankhoon mien jo mene dekha woh bachpana nahi balke pyaar tha ...aur isska ehsaas mujhe tabh hua jab mene geet se shaadi ke liye kaha ...
tab pata chala mujhe ke woh aaj bhi apne dill ki baat kisi aur se nahi ussi tasveer se karti hai ...10 saloon se jis muskaan ke saath humare saamne woh jee rahi hai ...woh tou bas kisi ka vaada poora karne ki ek koshish hai ...
mien darr gayi thi geet ki aankhoon mien woh junoon dekh kar ...woh apni poori zindagi akele beetane ko tyaar thi magar kisi aur ko woh haqq dene ke liye nahi ...
buhat koshish ki magar woh nahi maani ...phir aakhir haar kar apni bachi ki khushi ki liye mene uss hi ko kasam mien baandha aur iss shadi ke liye razii kiya ...magar mien galat thi ...
mien galat thi maan bete ..aur tumhari geet sahi ...sahi kaha tha ussne .
SOME YEARS AGO IN SPAIN..
its geet's room ...daai jaan is here to convince her for marrying randheer ..but geet is trying her best to make her understand that she cant do it as she does'nt love him and her heart only belongs to maan ...
Geet ( all scattered into tears ..) : daai jaan please apni kasam waapis le lijeye ...plzz daai jaan mujh se ye nahi hoga ...
mien kaise kisi aur ko apni zindagi soonp doon jab meri aatma pehle hi kisi aur se jori hai ..kaise daai jaan kaise ...
aakhir kaise kisi aur ko apne upar woh haq dedoon jab mere har saans par maan ka naam mene khud likha hai ...
mie ye nahi kar sakti daai jaan ...nahi karti ..
Daai Jaan : geet putar zindagi aise nahi guzaari jaati ...kisi na kisi moor par ek saathi ki zarorat parhti hai ...jo aapka haath thamle aur aapko zindagi ke mushkil safar mien himat de ...
Geet : daai jaan ...maan ke liye mere pyaar hi meri taqat hai ..aur iss ke sahaare mien kisi bhi mushkil ko haara sakkti hoon ...kisi bhi takleef mien maan aur mere saath ki yaadien hi kafi hain mujhe hosla dene ke liye ...
Daai Jaan : geet ye sab baatien kitaabon mien achi lagti hain ...asal zindagi mien nahi randheer acha larka hai aur tujhe khush rakhe ga ...aur phir hum ne kab kaha ke aaj hi shaadi karle ..
Geet : daai jaan mein ye kabhi nahi kar poongi ...kaise kisi aur ko woh saath vachan de doon jab mene apni zindagi maan se kiye huye vaade ke naam kardi hai ...plzz samajhne ki koshish kareye...😭
PRESENT
everyone was in tears and maan was again drawn to the past of the re-union party's night and the airport ..her teary eyes made him feel the same pain again ...and this time after hearing all what she have to face the guilt ..the pain was now tenfold more than that of what it was at that moment ...
Daai Jaan : uss ne theek kaha tha ...woh apni zindagi sirf tumse kiye huye vaade ke liye hi jee rahi thi ...
tab hi tou dekhoo aaj tumhain uski zarorat pari aur woh aagayi yahan bina kuch aur socha ...
sach mien uski aatma tum se jori hai ...tab hi tou tumhari choot ka sooch kar uski rooh kanp uthi aur woh bina kuch kahe ...sab kuch... !!
sab ko peeche choor kar yahan aagayi ...😭
Maan : mujhe maaf kar degeye ..ye sab meri waja se hi hua ...meri waja se aaj woh iss haal mien ...
Daai Jaan : tumhari waja se nahi ......tumhare liye ..
tumhare liye woh yahan hai ...
listening to all this RANDHEER , who till now a mute spectator of all this moved outside the room in a great pace ...
everyone was now concerned how will he react listening to all this ...and worried at the same time as geet is still not well enough to handle this fuzz in her life ...
maan made his way out of the room after sometime and was looking for randheer ...trying to make him understand the past ...but cldn't find him ...he was at panic knowing wht dostor has said ...
no mental stress as her BP is still not stable ...
he rushed 2wards geet's room n then saw Randheer standing at the entrance n geet was stairing at him without blinking even for once ...
as soon as maan entered n saw geet still he went 2wards her n took her hand in his n geet made her told tightened on his hand ...seeing her pale face maan asked randheer to go out of the room in ( Typical MSK tone ) but he refused ...😡
next Armaan came in n saw the created scene he tried to get Randheer out of the room ...
but it was too late as geet was again un-consious every1 was once again at panic n maan was now turning the whole hospital upside down calling for the doctors ...
after sometimes doctors came out of geet's room ...
Maan ran 2wards them n inquired abt her health n Armaan n Randheer followed him ...
DOCTOR :- dekhye mujhe nahi pata yahan kiya hua ...par plzz agar aap unko zinda dekhna chahte hain tu unko mental stress se door rakhna buhat zarori hai ...unki halat aisi nahi hai ke woh ye sab bardaasht kar paaye ...
Aur iss baar unki behoshi ki waja bhi unka BP hai ...unka BP achanak buhat high hugaya tha jis ki waja se ye hua ...
Randheer tried to go inside geet's room but armaan stopped him n forcefully lead him outside the hospital ...
Mr. Khurana mene aapko saaf saaf kaha tha ke unhe koi mental stress nahi hona chahiye ...ab plzz aap dhyan rakhye n han mene unko seductives diye hain jis ki waja se woh agle 4-5hrs ke liye behosh rahen gi ...till then let no disturbance for her at all ...
Maan : doctor can I see her once ...just once after that I wont trouble u ...
Doctor : ok but don't disturb her n just for 5 min.s only ..
N he went in geet's room ...In side geet's room maan sat beside her n holding her hand n stairing at her endlessly ...
Maan : sorry mishty I again failed ...failed to stop him but not now ...ab mien kuch galat nahi hone doon ga ...ab se all problems approaching u will have to face MSK first ...
I don't knw wht fate has decided for us but I wont let u hurt this time ...jo tum chaho gi waisa hi huga jis mien tumhari khushi hu ...
Mien jaanta hoon u still love me I don't need words from u but I don't want to hurt daai jaan with my behaivour with that Randheer ... par mien tumhain takleef nahi pohanchne doon ga ...jab tak tum theek nahi ho jati I wont let him near u ...not at any cost...
iss baar mien kisi ko tumhari khushyan tum se door nahi karne doon ga ...phir uske liye mujhe kuch bhi kyun na karna pare ...
take care Mishty ...ill see u soon ..
with that he pecked her forehead n left the room determine to shoo off that Randheer for the time being till geet recovers fully ...
He met with adi n asked him about randheer n got to know that he is with armaan ...n ordered him to be here n call him when geet gets her conscious ...
Outside Hospital armaan was trying to make Randheer understand that geet is getting worried facing him so better stay away from her atleast till she is fully recovered ...
but he was adamant on only one point that he is her fianc her wld be husband its his duty to take care of her n that MSK has no right to shove me off from here ...
Armaan : try to understand Randheer gudya needs some time ...she is not in the state to handle such a fuzz in her life now ...
Randheer : that's what I am telling ...she is not well so better tell that maan singh khurana to go away from our life n let us live in peace geet is my fianc n I knw hw to cure her well enough ...
Armaan : plss Randheer put ur ego away from this matter n try to understand gudya's state ...right now she needs maan beside her...
Randheer : u r wrong armaan ...she doesn't need him ...she doesn't love him anymore ...if she did she wldn't hv agreed for me ...so now she is mine ...
A dangerous voice came from back which was calm enough but still had an effect that made Randheer shudder for a sec ...
Maan : let geet decide it herself Mr.Randheer Aluhwalia ...
Armaan n Randheer turned n saw maan standing in front of them with a stiff body posture ...but his voice was calm ...
still armaan was the one fearing his out burst knwing about his temper since school time n now the whole world is scared with this MAAN SINGH KHURANA ...
Randheer : who the hell are u to dictate me ...ill do wht I want u r nothing ...just nothing at all ...geet is my fianc n no one has the right to stop me meeting her ...did u get that ..😡
Armaan was standing num fearing for the worst outcome from maan's side but it never came he was standing still with a blank face ...like he didn't heard any of it ...
n randheer
Who was till this moment fighting back his fear n was trying to sound firm was now actually sweating seeing him still ...
Randheer : you don't have any rights on her ...u left her n now she is only mi...
But before he completes his sentence he felt himself lifting up n maan was holding him from his throat up in the air ...👏... armaan tried to free him frm the iron grip of maan but cldn't do much n after few sec maan left him ...
Maan : don't even dare to say that again ...( his voice was hoarse as well as threatening )
Armaan : maan plss ill talk to him ... u just leave him to me ..
Showing his hand toward armaan he stopped him ...glaring at Randheer with a look which could have killed him if possible ..
Maan : now listen to me very carefully Mr. Aluhwalia coz ill say it one time n I really don't spare people for the second time to repeat myself ...
Jab tak geet theek nahi ho jaati tab tak tum uss ke saamne nahi jauge ...kisi bhi halat mien nahi ...
Randheer : par ...
Maan : don't try it ..mujhe who karne ke liye force mat karoo jo mien nahi chahta ...tum ne jo kuch kaha who buhat tha ...shukar karo mene tumhain abhi tak zinda chora hai ...
...par ye bhi sirf geet ke liye aur uss ke liye mien kisi jaan le bhi sakta hoon aur apni jaan de bhi sakta hoon ...
Aur han ek aur baat ...tumhari geet se mangni hui kyun ke mien chahta tha ...geet tumhare saath gayi kyun ke mene jane diya ...hum alag huye kyun ke hum dono apne gharwaloon ki khushi chahte hain ...galati se bhi ye mat samajh na ke iss mien tumhara koi filthy plan ya claim chale ga ...MSK ko rukna iss dunya mien kisi ke bas mien nahi hai ...
Aur jahan tak baat geet ki hai ...tu iss ka faisla who khud kare gi ...par tum galati se bhi meri baat ko mazak mien lene ki galti mat karna jab tak geet theek nahi ho jati usske aas paas bhi mat aana warna tum MSK ka who roop dekho ge jo aaj tak geet ki dunya mien kabhi kisi ne nahi dekha ...😉
Randheer : do wht ever u want MSK ...I dnt fear u ...mien geet se pyaar karta hoon ...I dnt care of wht u r or wht u will do to me ...who meri hai ..
This is it ..maan lost the last bit of patience in him listening to his constant claim over geet he took a step forward n punched him hard straight on his face which made him bleed and with the second punch on Randheer's stomach he was blown away at a distance ...
before maan cld go further to beat him till death Adi n RV came thr n Armaan went towards Randheer n took him out of maan's sight...
Adi : sir.r.r relax leave him sir ...plss
RV : plss bro clam down ...
But was it enough for MSK to let go off a person who claimed his mishty to be his fianc since an hour ...he was seething in anger to take his breaths away ...
RV : plss bro atleast geet ke liye hi sahi ...plss andar chalye already sab buhat pareeshan hain ...
Unknowingly RV said the correct words ...the mere mention of her name was enough to calm MSK ...😊
Maan : u go in RV n take care of daai jaan n dadi...
Adi : r u ok sir ...i shall get u some water ..
Maan : wait adi ...1st tell me hw is geet ..doctors aaye thay uss ke cheack up ke liye ...n wht the hell r u doing here I told u to be with her ...
Adi starting stamperring listen to the alarming voice of MSK after a gap of 2 days ...😆
Adi : sir..rr who ac...tual..ly I saw u with Randhe...eeer from the win...dow n ca..me he..rre to se..ee u ...but geet is fine doctor were asking about u ..n
Maan : fine do one thing ...call the IG n Commesioner of police n tell them that I want all the shooters responsible for this incident behind bars within 48 hrs or else ill choose the place for their next transfer...
Adi : but sir 48 hr ..
Maan : thts enough time for them if they try to ...n yes I dnt care hw ...but one thing is for sure ill make each n every person's life worst than hell so that they will ask for death ...
Adi was shuddered seeing the rage in his eyes ...but he knew its just coz this time they have hurt MSK's love ...n he will make them pay big time ..
Maan : leave adi n I want this to be done at any cost ..
Adi : alright sir ..
With that maan made his way towards geet's room n saw her through the glass window ...she was sleeping peacefully looking just as dew drop but her face ...it was dull n he knew the reason...
After some time nurse came out of geet's room after checking her BP n told maan that doctor wants to meet him ...
Doctors told him that she is gaining her conscious back but due to weekness she is still in her sub-conscious state ...n he needs to be with her as much as possible since she was only mumbling his name since half an hour ...so it will be good if he'll remain close to her ...
After a detailed discussion about geet's health he was on his way back to geet's room but meera came to him n asked him to make dadi agree for going back KM as she is here since morning ...after a lot of efforts dadi went to KM n maan made his way back to geet's room ...
But was now burning in anger seeing armaan along with randheer who was already bandaged in her room n geet was now fully in conscious ...
he took few steps in randheer's direction to turn him black n blue all the more but stop in his track with a meek voice came from non-other than his mishty ..
Geet : maan plss I told him to be here ...i want to talk with
him...
PART 10
PRECAP :-
what u expect ..????? 😉😆😳
so this was part 9 ...thnxxx a ton for awl ur comments n like ...😳
do let me know hw do u find our angry young man in this ...
n whats ur opinion about Randheer's claim ...😉
plzzz do give me ur response as it will help me do better ...😊
keep supporting me n sorry if thr is any mistakes ...
luv ya 🤗
SOBIA ..
Ishaani
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