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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivamala

Please translate in English my Hindi language is very limited.

Dear I am trying my best to translate in english well from nest update I will give the english translation in brackets for hindi dialogues , but I hope u know the basics like Mom, uncle etc etc
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Artemis678

Very Nice Hari. Loved This One.

Thank u so much nici...

loved to hear it from u by the way what happened rey, u are not online now a days🥱
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chayya55

great ff dont even think of ending it in a few episodes

waiting for the next update

Thank u chaya didi...

really love to read ur comments and hope I will be able to continue ti till when Avina come back 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maia22

i am liking the story pls do continue

Thank u maia dear, but missing u to the core now a days... please make ur time to come here and post...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Hari,pls don't end this.It's a very beautiful FF. Pls do continue.

Thanks a lot dear and haan I will continue atleast till when Avina come back in some other show . 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anu17

nice update Hari..

sorry ha for the late commneting case exams na these days

I knwo dear... Hope every thing went good with ur exams.

By the way I am mising u a lot on FB now a days. but congrats on becoming a sizzler, 😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditeeash

nice and sweet update...loved it...keep going...

Thanks a lot dear...

I will try my best to give the best in all my three ff's 😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ushasri

very nice update hari and pls dont stop ur ff

Thanks a lot usha di...

I will try my best to keep this FF active, but the replies always dissapoint me 😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 15 - Kashi Maharaj's Prediction coming true!!

Devki was very worried for Radhika as she even doesn't lift her phone. Devki, Daadima, and Mohan were sitting in hall waiting for her. Devki was the first to Saw Dev coming in, she also saw Dev was holding Radhika in his arms.

Devki ran to him and asked "Dev, Radhika ko kya hua"

Dev signalled her to be quiet and said in a low voice "Nothing aunty, Radhika is sleeping.Wo bahut tak gayi hain(She was very tired na). that's it"

Devki:Oh thanks Dev, u took this much efforts

Dev:No aunty, shes my employee and u sent her on my pressure and its my responsibility to bring her back

Devki smiled and Dev said "Aunt, I will make her on her bed and will come... one minute"

Devki:Okay Beta

Dev went up and made Radhika sleep on her bed. When he was abt to come, Radhika heldhis hand in sleep and was mumbling some thing which Dev can't hear. Dev thought of listening it, but as his Manners didn't allow him, he left from there slowly getting his hand released.

Dev came down and narrated the whole incident. Mohan and all thanked him and he left for his home.



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Mohan was striking the hair of Radhka who was sleeping. Devki who came in saw it and smiling said "U na, She's not a small kid, 23 years her age was. U are forgetting ti ad was still treating her as a small kid"

Mohan:Devki, even if she gets 70 years age till be she is that small Radhu only for me. See she didn't change. She was still the same Radhu.

Devki:Haan bahut pyaari hain meri bachi.(Yeah my daughter s very lovely)

Mohan smiled and said "Haan Devki, generally fathers feel their daughters as burdens but for me she's my Lakshmi. Becoz of her only I got my sister and u got ur brother back."

Devki:Ji hum baat kar sakhte hain lekhin yaha nahi, humaarein room mein jaayiye(Can we talk abt this in any other place, not here?, can we go to our room and talk)

Mohan nodded and they left into their room.

"Devki ! Today one thing happened in office"

Devki removing her jewellery "Kya hua"(What happened)

Mohan sitting on bed " Pandit ji came with an alliance"

Devki:Kiske liye(For whom)

Mohan leaning on bed "Radhika"

Devki turned back in a jerk and said "Kya"(What?)

Mohan:wahi toh, lekin we should not even forget that she was 23 right

Devki:Haan I know, par... (She was getting remembrance of rishi's words)

Mohan:Par kya(What But?)

Devki:Nahi ji, I still remember Maha rishi's words. His words will come true. May be there's some one born for her, why should we be hurried and take a wrong step

Mohan:I am also thinking the same, and I just wanna leave her marriage decision to her.

Devki:Dekhenge vuske kismat mein kya likha tha(Lets see whats written in her fate). U don't see any alliances for her until we encounter any similar situation as Maharshi said

Mohan nodded and Devki came beside him and slept in his arms...

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Radhika woke up with a jerk as her phones alarm ringed and she rubbing her eyes watched around. A big family photo on her side wall looked at her reminding her she was in her bed room

Radhika was not knowing what happened ,she came out of her room and was checking...

Radhika know every body will be sleeping so she went into her room and checking the tables to see if any notes will be there, but there was none. Radhika"Chalo, will ask maa later, now I should bath and leave for temple"

Radhika came out bathing and changed her self into a pink colour plain chudidaar and came down. He saw the servant and asked him "kaka, Kal raat hum ghar kaise aagaye/"(How did I come yesterday night)

Servant :"Betiyaan, aap toh office mein hi sgaye na, isliye Dev babu aapko yaha tak laaya"(U slept in office na, Dev babu brought u home)

Radhika:Dev!!

Servant:Haan kitni acha aadmi hain. Bahut seeda hain...(Yeah, very good and simple person)

Radhika was thinking "i didn't sleep in office. I slept at ghat as my car had a puncher.May be he saw me there and brought me here. then he can tell it right. Why to say that I slept in office."

Radhika checked her time and said "Kaka... I am leaving for Mandir, say it to Maa aur Baavuji" and Radhika left

Radhika was walking on the road and was thinking "What was wrong with this dev, some times just be like am sworn enemy to him, but some times concern for me as if I am his lover. "

Radhika felt some one pulling her dupatta and looked back... Nandu was there

Radhika:Nandu

Nandu:Didi, why didn't u come to Mandir yesterday

Radhika:Humein maaf karna. wo hum, Delhi gaye the(Sorry dear, I went to Delhi)

Nandu smiled and said :Will u go today too"

Radhika:Kaam hain nandu(Yeah. I am working there)

Nandu:Thik hain, u are going to Mandir na

Radhika:Haan

Nandu:Chaliye

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Dev woke up early in mng and came out as a jogging. But people are looking at him weirdly which made him uncomfortable and he decided to Jog along the side of ghat.

As he reached ghat he got the desire to swim and he removed his shirt and jumped into water.nandu who went there then only came running to Radhika and said "Didi, didi. wo bhaiyya" (Didi, that brother)

Radhika:Koun? Kya hua nandu(Whom? What happened?)

Nandu :Di wo America wala bhaiyya hain na, wo toh Yamuna mein drown ho raha tha(That bro who returned from America , he was drowning in Yamuna)

Radhika dropped the garland in her hand and rushed there... she saw Dev in water and she know well he doesn't know swimming. . Radhika too doesn't know swimming and Yamuna was in full flow. but she didn't cared. she too jumped into water. she tried to reach him but felt herself drowning...

Dev who was swimming heard some jumping sound and looked back. a small boy was screaming "Any help... my sister is drowning in water.. please help"

Dev drifted towards that side, he swim faster to reach and Dev got her form back. he catched her and moved towards shore.,,,,,,,,,

He made her lie on floor and then he saw its Radhika...

Dev didn't understand why she jumped into water

Nandu came there and said "America Bhaiyya. I told di that u jumped into water and she came here rushing and she too jumped. why I don't know. she was mumbling that Dev doesn't know how to swim... kanha help him like that some thing"

Dev looked at him , he remembered that the boy was the one in the dupatta incident

Nandu leaned near radhika and was saying "Di di. vutho na.."(DI. Di. get up)

Dev pushed her at tummy level to bring out water and she did spilled out water but was still unconscious...

Dev said to a crying Nandu " We will take ur di to her home and I already called doctor. not to worry she will be fine"

The boy rubbing his tears "Will di be as usual playing with me"

Dev stroked the boy on his head and said :Haan

Dev took radhika again into his arms and moved towards Sharma nivas in dead speed.

By the time Dev came there, all were awake as Dev informed Mrinalini and every one was worried. Doctor came and did some examinations and said that "she was into unconscious state , I gave the injection, she will get sense in 1 hour.But u people are very lucky. she was in a state of shock some times it will lead to coma too"


Devki was more worried for radhika... she sat beside her holding her hand and Mohan at her legs side while daaima at head side striking her hair . Mohan looked at Dev and asked "kaise hua"(How does it happen)

Dev:Uncle...

he narrated every thing and Mohan looked at Devki, Devki too was stunned. he words of Maharshi's were ringing in her ears


Devki and Vaishali went to mutt which was beside the temple. As that mutt was organised by people of Purohith trust vaishal and devki easily met the kasi maharaj ji who came for opening of mandir.

Vaishali:namastey maharaj

kaasimaharaj: Rajpurohitain ji , Devki ji aayiye baith jaayiye

Vaishali and Devki went to him touched his feet seeking blessing and sat there

Kaasimaharaaj: mandir ki sthaapna ki tayariyan kaise ho raha hain

Vaishali:aap ki kripa se sab kuch samay mein ho raha hain

Kaasimaharaj ji: Devki ji aap jske baarein me poochne ke liye yaha aaya ho vo bahut kismat wali hain aur radha ka pratiroop hain. Vuski shaadi toh jaroor apni kanha se hi hogi, lekin aisa hoga ki vuski pyaar mein todha sa mushkil aajaye lekin vo aur vuski kanhaaa humesha ek hi rahoge

Vaishali: maharaj, kya ap bata sakte ki vuski kanha koun hain

Maharaaj: Rajpurohitain ji, bhagwaan ne mujhe vuska naam bolne kaa aagna nahi diya tha, lekin main ek keh sakhte ki jiske liye ye radhika apni jaan bhi dene ke liye tayar hogi, wahi vuski kanha hain.

Vaishali:dhanya waad maharaj


Nandu crying :I am a bad boy, becoz of me didi came to know. other wise it would have never happened.

R.P who came there listened every thing and cupping Nandu said "Every thing will be for our good only. Don't worry bachu."

Vaishali too nodded and looked at Devki. she was also feeling the same Devki feeling

Dev was thinking to himself "Sorry Radhika! U was in trouble becoz of me please forgive me..."

After one hour Radhika woke up and every one was happy. Mohan hugged her tight from side and kissed her on fore head.

Radhika looked at Dev and said "U are fine..." and smiled

Dev came near her and said 'I am fine okay! U sleep."

Dev was indeed angry on her but controlling it

Vaishali:Radhika u need rest. sleep we all will be here.

Radhika:Nahi kaki, I had work to do, Indeed see today i didn't do prayer too...

Mohan:Radhika Vaishali is saying right u need rest

Nandu:Haan didi, I will go to temple, u need not worry

Radhika getting off from bed "I am fine, why can't u people understand. Nandu, chalo hum jaayenge"(Nandu Lets go)

Dev:Radhika

Radhika:haan

Dev:Well I will leave u till temple

Radhika:No need, I can manage

Devki:Dev she will say like that only u take her to temple.

Dev nodded and Radhika made her baby face. Dev taking the car keys "Chale"

Radhika followed him

Dev started the car and Radhika got into it along with Nandu

Radhika was looking out from the doors the sun was rised already but the only relief was that there was still time to aarthi

Dev asked her "Why did u jump into river when u doesn't know how to swim"

Radhika:I thought some one was in danger

Dev:Yeah but for others what is necessary to keep ur life in danger

Radhika:Yeah but I always feels, even if I am in danger I can save ones life right

Dev:Then u better learn swimming

Radhika:Kyun

Dev:If u fell in river again

Radhika in her mind "U are there na"

Dev:Are u there

Radhika:Haan no necessary. but any how I am planning to learn swimming

Dev:That's good

Radhika:Please stop the car

Dev:Kyun(Why)

Radhika:We reached the temple

Dev:Oh sorry.

Radhika came out of the car and ran into the temple.

Dev continued to look at her...


Nandu:What happened, why u are looking at my sister

Dev:She's under doctors observation right , now she ran up as if nothing happened to her

Nandu:Di cares for Kanha a lot.. when it comes to his work, she won't care any thing or any one, but today only she cared for u and the result was she was late. Any way Thanks Bhaiyya. I am leaving

Dev smiled and said "Whats ur name"

Nandu:Nandu, aapka naam

Dev:Dev

Nandu:Pranam Dev ji and he ran up.

Dev smiled and sat there in the car.

Pandit ji who came there then saw Dev and asked him "Beta, aap?????/"

Dev:I am Dev . R.P ji ka chote beta hoon(I am the younger son of R.P)

Pandit ji:Acha acha, andar aao beta, aarthi ka samay ho raha hain, humaare yahaan aarthi bahut acha hota hain(Oh I got u, please come in, its time for aarthi and here we always have beautiful aarthi)

Dev:Maaf kariye, lekin mujeh in sab par vishwaas nahi hota hain. aap jaayiye(Please forgive me, I don't believe in all these. U please carry on)

Pandit smiled and left in...

Dev was playing with his phone when he heard a beautiful song from up "Orey Kanha..."

Dev as if was in trance came down of the car and went up as he was ascending each step the voice was getting more clear. There was some mystic in the voice he went there and stood at the side of a pillar. He was trying to get the face of the girl, but as there were people all around she wasn't visible. He stood there silently appreciating the voice.

Radhika who was infront singing the song was closing her eyes and was singing with much devotion but the only problem was she was getting the face of Dev infront of her which make her smile and sing with much devotion...

Dev too closed his eyes and folded his hands in devotion for the song but when he closed his eyes he got Radhika infront of his eyes. he didn't bother but indeed smiled more seeing it.

As the song finished Dev opened his eyes and tried to see the girl, but he can't see her as there were lots of people around her praising her and saying good words to her.

Dev thought to wait but he got a call from Birju and asked him to come to home immediately as they got some mail from Canada group

Dev unwillingly turned to go when Pandit ji came there and said "Prasad le lo beta" (Take the Prasad )


Dev nodded and took the prasad and went off thinking if ever he stayed there a minute he will get attracted to that voice...





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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved It To The Core !!!!

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