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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was today Geet's 16th B-Day she was getting ready for college.Geet was searching for the perfect dress to wear. She had thrown all her dresses on her bed, that's when her phone rang.

G:Hi Meer
M:Happy B-day Geet
G:Thanks Meer
M:Are you ready. I am going to pick you up in 15 minutes.
G:No Meer I really don't now what to wear today.
M:Wear that red dress Pinky gave you before heading to Italy for a week.
G:Thanks Meer that will be perfect.

Geet got dressed and went downstairs.

G:hey mom how do I look.

Rano turned around.

R:Hmmm it's okay
G:Ow eh dad don't I look great
M:whatever you mom said
G:Eh you guys remember na It's my b-day today
R:Geet are you a child ke we will celebrate your b-day. Please grow up.

That's when the doorbell rang. Geet went to open the door.

G:Hey Meer
M:Geet what's wrong you look sad
G;Nothing
M:Hmmm Okay so what did your parents gift you
G:Ow I told them to gift me nothing woh kya hain na I already have everything I want (poor geet lied)
M:Geet your impossible you now that.

Meera and Geet entered the college building. Tia came to them.

T: Hey geet happy B-day
G:Thanks Pari
T:You now I am so feeling dreamy today
G:Huh why
T:Because we got a new classmate and he is so dreamy hayyeee

Meera wacked Pari on her arm.

M:Stop day dreaming and chal
T:I am not day dreaming he is real
M:We believe that darling but he is not your dream Man
T:hawww you stay away from him
G;Girls stop it let's go before we get late.

They entered. The New guy was sitting there talking to a bunch of guys. All the girls where drooling over him.

T:That's him Mr. Dreamy
M;Oef whatever

Meera walked over to them and hugged yash her BF.

M:Hey yash
Y:Hey sweets.
T:Hi yash. What's the name of your friend
Y:Maan meet my GF Meera and her friends. That's Tia.
T:Hi Mr. Dreamy
M:Hi and it's Maan. Maan Singh Khurana
T:Hayyyeee your name should be DD
M:DD
T:As Dhak Dhak.

Meera hit Tia on her arm.While Maan looked in shock at Tia like she had lost it😆.

Y:Please don't mind her she is always like that. And that is Geet.

G:Hi

Maan's heart skipped a beat when he saw her.

Maan's monologue
Well her name should be DD. Cause she mad Maan Singh Khurana's heart go Dhak Dhak.Maan you just met her true to control and formulate a normal Hi.

M:Hi Geet nice to meet you.
Y:Oh teri I almost forgot happy B-day Geet
G:Thanks
M:Happy B-day how old are now
G:Thanks and I got 16 years old

Everyone went back to their seats as the class started. At lunch the girls where sitting together.

T:Haayyyee I can stop dreaming about him

Yash came from behind with Maan.

Y:You can't stop dreaming about whom
T:My Mr. Dreamy

Maan's monologue
And I can't stop thinking about my Ms. Dreamy. Dahm it Maan your sounding like Tia. What's wrong with you.

Meer: Tari you started again
T:Kya karoon yaar he stole my chain hosh
M:excuse me
T:OMG I didn't see you sorry, was to busy dreaming about you and yes I would love to go on a date with you

Maan looked at her in shock okay this girl was a true mental.

M:I am sorry but I never asked you on a date
T:Then ask me now who is stopping you
M:Isn't it your friend Geet's b-day today
T:haan toh
M:Maybe I should ask her
T:No need she doesn't like boys
M:MATLAB
T:matlab she thinks all boys are jerks
M:Ow like that

Suddenly Geet head shot up.

G:Kyu what where you thinking.

Maan's monologue
Finally kuch to boli

M:No woh Tia said it in such a way that I thought
G:Hawww how could you think like that about me
M:Nahi Geet I didn't believe it that s why I asked clarification na
G:Hmmm phir theek hai

Maan smiled at her. Such a doll face he thought.

M:So Geet why do you think all boys are jerk
G:Never saw a nice boy around

Geet giggled.

M:But I mean you never went through something
G:Bad no never had a bf or fallen in love or something like that but just have seen so many broken hearts around me that it scares me that's all
M:Are you scared to fall in love
G:Not allowed
M:Matlab
G:Woh mom will decide whom I will marry
M:Ow that's great right
G:hhmmm

Maan felt that Geet was sad like there was something wrong, in her eyes there was a weird kind of loneliness. He wanted to now what it was. But how.

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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ME FIRST!!!😉

Aww you converted my poem into such a beautiful pic!!! Its looking lovely!!!!!😃

Am so so so so so so so so so happpyyy!!! Cant even say a thank you since its not allowed!!!😳

Lovely update dear!!!👏

Hating Geet's parents!!😡

How can they behave in such a casual manner hurting their daughters feelings that too on her B'day in fact 16th Bday???😡

Me got serious doubts that are they even her real parents???

Geets friends are really sweet!!😳

Haaye Maan fida over Geet in first glimpse!!!😳

Uff yeh Pari bhi na!!!

After Maan all the time… Bechara he was getting worried for his izzat!!😆

Poor Geet she respects her parents wishes and they are so mean!!😡

Awesome start dear!!!👏

Love you a lott!!!!😳
Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Awww poor Geet
lovely part !
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

why geet's mom n dad like dis...dey cant even wish on her b'day...i hate dem...

awesome update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc update...actually cute update...
Geet parents aise kaise behave karte hai???unke dimag ka screw dhila hai kya?
Maan n geets 1st meetin ws shooo cute...
Waitin fr d nxt part
Thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Loved the update..
Geet's parents r so yuck!!!
Loved pari's dreamy moments..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh poor geet, i guess geet's parents do not give her time at all
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1
nice part...
she has good friends...
why are her parents like that?
so Maan is liking Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Lovely part but why geet's parents are so weired.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one..
geets' parents 😕😕😕🤔
pari is r8 maan mr dreamy..mera b😆😆😆😆😆
maaneets frst meet..shoo cute na 😳😆😆😆




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