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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Gunner

Amazing Update NafišŸ˜Ž

Thanks for the pm😊

thanks sheena😳
thanks dearšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear

Originally posted by: TeDylove

wow sis lovelu update..and tu secrete badhati hi ja rahi he..šŸ˜† hummm..abhay miss piya so much...waiting for your next update..😃

yeah i know sis meri secrets itni jaldi khatam nahi hone wali...thanks..šŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
jhangi and yamna- thanks a lot fr likingšŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Saayaniz

Oh waooo ! just read the 2nd chapter ! really amazingšŸ‘! Abhay is that handsome ! & Piya ka vut ? awsm concept šŸ˜†! but answer me 1 thing . why every ghost wears white dresses ??😲????

šŸ˜†šŸ˜† it was not pia ghost and i dont know why ghosts always were white clothes..🤣and thanksšŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

hey awesome thread.Is pia soul calling Abhay?But thn who is piyali?OH I hope Abhiya meet each other soon.Wht happened tht night ki Abhay hate chandeena?PLz PM me😳

well thanks shristi..u will know soon what happened that night but not so soon..šŸ˜†piyali entry will be soon..šŸ˜†
Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luckdiya

hiii srry 4 d late replyšŸ˜†

nice updt...abhay is bck...hp abhiya meet each othr soon...grl were drooling over abhay... šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
thx 4 pm

thanks diya..and its ok!! abhaiya will meet soon but not so soonšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

amazing dr!!!!!

so dat was pia's sole in d jungle...
now abhay is back!!! i hope every hing will be fine soon!!!
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm

well u will know what was in jungle as the story proceeds..and thanks

Originally posted by: abhiyarockz

amazing update flora!😊

so abhay is finally back...šŸ˜

but why he hate chandeena???šŸ˜•

continue soon...

thanx for pm!šŸ¤—

THANKS,,,U WILL KNOW SOON WHY HE IS ANGRY WITH CHANDNEE, HE DOESNT HATE THEM
Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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THANKS A LOT TO ALL WHO HAS COMMENTED AND LIKED THIS FF..😃
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CHAPTER-3

( THE NIGHTMARE )

Abhay screamed- piaa..aaa..

Everyone got shocked to see his sudden outburst'and turned to see his direction towards upstairs. But no one was there then why abhay shouted like this??

Haseena went to abhay and put hand on his on his shoulder trying to comfort him but damage has already occurred. Abhay shrugged of her hand rudely and gave disgusting look!!

Haseena hurt- a..abhay..whats wrong? R u alright?

Abhay mocking- yeah I am more then alright!!

Saying this he ran to his room upstairs with full of his vampire speed leaving everyone shocked!! Madhu was more then shocked to see abhay vanish in a sec..she looked at arnab who seemed normal.

Madhu worried- arnab yeh kyat ha? Abhay itna tez kiu bhaga!! How did he do that??

Arnab coldly- not now madhu..will tell u later!

Madhu became silent seeing the room full in tension.

Hassena was feeling guilty and heartbroken but one thing she was sure that in this all years her son is mourning pia death but never saw her in illusion or imagination'or if he did then he never screamed her name'then what was that?? Is pia back??

These thoughts were interrupted by soniya who put her hand on hasina shoulder..

Soniya- mom we need to talk!

Suddenly Aditya entered and was surprised to see everyone all quiet..

Aditya confused- hey guys whats wrong?? Itna chup kiu ho sab??

Soniya glared at aditiya to keep quiet'

Aditiya understood that something went wrong but didn't got what was wrong??

Aditiya mently connected to soniya- hey sonu abhay kaha hai?? Aur akher hua kya hai??

Soniya sadly- bhai is again sad and all of sudden he shouted pia name?? I don't from where pia came and I guess its his imagination!!

Aditiya worried- oh god'what to do now?

Soniya ' I guess we need to let the dobrail go now'then we will see..

Aditya- u r right!

Soniya smiling towards dobrails- amm'guys I think u all should leave..bhai must be tired!! Come later ha'

Madhu worried- but what about abhay?? Is he sick??

Soniya innocently- I told na he is tired'lagta hai business matter!! I mean he must be worried about business!!!

Madhu was about to say something when arnab interfere- I think u r right..hum abhay se baad me baat karenga..

Arnab to hasina- well hasinaji hume ab chalna chahiya!! We will come later..

Hasina smiles and nods her head. Madhu was confused but remain sielent!!

The dobrails left but before leaving misha yelled- oye riachands ke bacche jab abhay thik hoga na mujhe bulana'samjhee!! Tum logo ko pata hai na mom dad mujhse chupke ajate hai yaha..

Soniya laughed- yeah sure tumhe to sabse pehle me bulaungi'

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Abhay is sitting on his bad angrily. In anger he has already broke flower vase made of glass. He felt that pia was here not only felt he saw her'abhay was becoming restless!! He went near window and open it'a gush of wind blow on his angelic face. Abhay closed his eyes'and a smiling pia came infront of his eyes!! He opened his eyes and sadness was clearly written on his face.

Abhay wishpered- pia why?? Why u left me? I am alone without u'I don't want to live but I even cant die!!! why u r giving punishment to me!! Pls come back'just once!!! Plsss'

Abhay again closes his eyes and a tear trickle down..he heard knock on door! Abhay quickly rubbed the tear and with stern voice abhay said " come in !"

Haseena came in with full of foods in tray, all was abhay's favourite food'

Haseena sadly- abhay u must be hungry and tired..eat something and take rest!

Abhay yelled- mom please just leave me alone'I am not hungry!! I am thirsty..i wnt blood!

Haseena shocked- but u always prefer human food'

Abhay interrupted- don't forget mom I am a vampire too'vampires doesn't eat human food!

Haseena trying to understand- but u always loved human food..and u don't drink blood oftenly!! Why now?

Abhay closed his eyes tightly and uttered something under his breath'he opened after while and his crystal hypnotic eyes were replaced by fierce dark blue colour with burning light'

Haseena got nervous seeing this although she is vampire herself but right now her son is in full of rage and he has transformed himself into vampire again..not an original one but he is most powerful with ultimate powers'

Haseena stammered- abhay why did u transformed urself into vampire??

Abhay rudely- to show u that a am a vampire too'

Haseena stammring- bu..tt abhay we only transform like this when we need but all of sudden..

Abhay sternly still his eyes dark with rage- listen mom I am not in mood to listen to u..just leave me alone! I am fine'

Haseena nervously- ok do as u like..

Haseena put the tray near abhay table and walk out of his room in vampire speed..

Abhay roared- I hate myself'

He crused the nearby table with full force..

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Everyone was sitting in the hall'all in full of tension!! By this time chand has also arrived as aditiya called him to come home soon'chand knew that something went..

Soniya saw haseena is coming down all sad..

Soniya ran to haseen- mom, mom r u alright?? What bhai said? Is he alright?

Haseen smiled sadly- what should he say..he is in his same mood!

Soniya asked- mom I am not getting? U r looking worried! Whats wrong!

Haseena worriedly- yes..i don't know I just asked abhay to eat'and he angrily transformed himself into vampire again!

Aditiya shocked- what??? Again?

Chand sternly- doesn't he know that its not good! It will bring danger'the danger whoich still didn't came! He shouldn't do that! He knows well that we only transform ourself into vampiric form infront of our clan and whenever we need blood fr our energy and power! Is he lost his mind??

Haseena firmly- I tried to explain him but he just sais he is thirsty and need blood!

Chand scrastilly- huh..no need to explain him! He knows well'we told him many times!!

Soniya interrupting- I guess we should not discuss abot abhay now as we all know him well..i guess we suppose to be discussing about the incident which abhay did infront of everyone!

Aditiya surprised- yes and I am not getting from where the hell he saw pia..in all these years abhay didn't did like this! What does it mean?

Chand intruppting- wait..i guess that time is very near!

All looked at chand confused and said in unison- what time?

Chand smirked- hv u all forgotten?

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Dark in the forest near that dark masion'inside it a life is living'a life which full of grudge..grudge to take revenge!! Its only waiting fr the time of her arrival..

A picture is hang on the wall a beautifull girl with straight hair and wearing a lime green lehenga seems like its her engagement day'


The pictured flashed into'

A handsome fair boy with hypnotic eyes is very happy as he soon going to be engaged, he is just waitng fr his beloved to come'

At last his wait over and he could see the beautiful young girl coming down from upstairs smiling shyly and looking at him with all love..

She came and stand near him..

The young man smiled- u r looking beautiful my love!!

The girl blushed at his compliment- thank you..

Scene changed..

Fire has caught all over the house,,every one is running to save their lives!!

But a man is standing in fear'he is all panicked as he is not able to find his fianc! A blood tear trickled from his blue eyes.

The man cryingly- piaaa..where r u,/ pia kuch bolo?

He tried to concentrate but he was not able to..then he remembered his power has been taken fr few days as a punishment fr not killing JEH'

But he was not in mood to loose hope'he has to find her by any how'

Scene shifted'

A girl in a room which locked and fire has surrounded her..she is asking fr help!

Suddenly someone break into the room by breaking the glass door..

The man screamed- piaaa'.

Pia tried to run towards him but a wooden cupboard fell infront of her which burning with fire'she got afraid and backed off..

Pia crying- abhay mujhe bachao?? Abhay mera damm ghoot raha hai'abhay mujhe bachao!!

Abhay shouted- pia try to come..

Suddenly a big log fell on abhay head and he fell down..he knew he was not dead as he is already dead..

Abhay tried to give her his hand..but the fire grew soo fastly that it seems impossible to her..

Pia trying to reach him- abhayyy'

A steel rod fell on pia head which hitted badly..blood oozing from her forhead..

Pia uttered weekly loosing herself- abhay..help!

Abhay felt his heart shattering- pia'pia..haat do! Pia koshish karo!

But it seems pia is going down, pia wishpered- abhay!!!

Abhay screamed- piaa..

Then suddenly a gush of black smoke blurred everything, he couldn't see her more'where has she gone?? The black smoke became more darker and darker and then he saw a dark figure standing infront of him'but before he could see anything, everything went blank'

Abhay wishpered- pia..

Abhay jumped out from his bed, he shouted " piaa!!!"'he became restless..he looked at surroundings and realized that it was again his worst nightmare which he is experiencing from last past years. But something was different today he saw a dark figure..who was it???

Abhay was getting more restless but he decided to shrug of the thought and went near his table and closed his eyes and opened after sometime..his eyes turned to dark lightening blue and calmed down after sometime returning to its original blue colour!!

Abhay looked at the glass full of blood and drank it in one gulp'

Abhay sighed- I wish I could live in peace'

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In the whole everyone was worried about what chand has said'

Haseena asked- r u sure this could be the reason??

Chand smirked- I guess..as I know no one believe that they exist!! But I hv a feeling there must be something..

Haseena- chand but they were vanished from our world long ago as the last spieces died'

Chand sternly- no haseena'only one member is left which will be the most powerfull!! Anyways we should stop this discussion here..as I want now abhay to move on his life and enjoy!!

Aditiya excitedly- dad got an idea!!

Chand frowned- what now?? Please don't give ur stupid ideas!!

Aditya proudly- dad,,I am sure this is not stupid one one!! Its jhakas'

Soniya rolled her eyes- jhakas'huh!! U and ur ideas are same!

Aditiya frowned- shut up sonu..u don't know anything!

Chand angrily- don't start again! Adi go on..

Aditiya smiled- hey why don't we take abhay to kabir' birthday party!

Chand smiled- oh I forgot..its tomorrow! It's a masquerade ball right??

Haseena sadly- but will abhay agree..

Aditiya smirked- mom leave it to me..i will make him up!

Aditiya to himself- so Mr. Abhay Riachand u will come with me by any how'to the masquerade ball party !!

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NEXT CHAPTER:- THE MYSTERIOUS DANCING PARTNER!!!


Guys i am really sorry if its boring and long...so forgive me..

Do comment!!

Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

yipee me first...

hey flora!😊

superb, fab, awsome update...šŸ‘

continue soon...

thanx for pm! šŸ¤—

Edited by abhiyarockz - 13 years ago
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Wowww FANTASTIC UPDATE DEAR:-):-) REALLY AMAZING:-):-)

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