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karmachameleon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

Fate-Mate 23 (Part A)

Readers: Many of you had questions about the job confusion, hopefully you will find your answers in this chapter.

I wasn't planning on writing a Maha Update and this is NOT a maha update, I don't know how I wrote so much! Don't mind the long update. I sort of got carried away!

Again, thanks for liking Fate-Mate, I appreciate your wonderful comments and your support. I do want to thank each of you personally but unfortunately I can't, I am very tight on time with a toddler around. But believe me, I cherish ALL your comments. So do write, I read all of them carefully, I might not be able to reply to them individually but I DO READ all of them. Thanks again and Enjoy the update!

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-KARMACHAMELEON

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Fate-Mate 23 (Part B)

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karmachameleon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

Fate-Mate 23 (Part C)

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karmachameleon

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Fate-Mate 23 (Part D)

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karmachameleon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#445

Fate-Mate 23 Part E

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Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#446

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Sorry dear on my way to airport.

will comment once i read it.

till then chao

edited: OMG didnot expected to be first to comment. 😃

Its FATE dude.

copied the story so that i can read in the flight. 😳

Will surely comment once i get net access in vienna 😉

Read the parts in the plain. still i dont want to comment right now as i will read once again and as you know i will give maha comment like before. 😳

(right now in dubai airport. see how much i am desperate to read your FF)

Part A

you know KC i really like the fact that a girl is waiting for her soul mate whole heartedly. and may be thats the very reason she got to experience her love with him without knowing that. i am waiting for the day when arnav will go and claim her as his infront of the entire world and she will come running in his arms without any hazitation. i would really like her to except ASR not knowing that he is her actual Arnav Singh Raidaza. well i think that would be divinine. and comming to know about the truth after accpeting him would be EPIC. Well its just my feeling. i get carried away reading this FF and some wierd ideas come in my head please avoid it. I loved the comparison between devdas and her life. thought i dont like the picture but today i saw a lot of positive things about it in your writing. thats why my thought went wild.

Part B

Khushi is always very sweet soul. i love the bonding between her and Zubin Aunty. It shows how people respect every single person irrespective of their standerd. I always like the fact and i do follow such thing in my life. I love them, i take advice from them, i give them comfort, thats how it should be. Very well thought i must say.

Part C

At first i thought it was a dream then when it came to really i was smiling all the way. again another piece of writing which hold as lot of inner meaning. His soul mate, his dream, is actually his reality well done honey.

Hmm coming to the tabiz part again i go to a tranz reading about tabiz. trust me being a hindu i still respect this religion a lot. I feel connected, the chanting the draga everything seems to calm me down. Though i am a hard core hindu still i feel connected. This is another reason why my imagination starts flowing in a different direction. I feel i am in dreamland. Well coming back to the update loved it loved every bit of it. surely her DM wanted Arnav to feed her first thats why Mrs Zubin was not there phir se kdrat ki isara hai ko kushi ke palle nahi para. Will wait for few more ishara from DM.

Part D

Well when i was reading this part i was like oh shit yeh arnav kya kar raha hai, how come he knows about her work place and i was dead sure that khushi is gona question him on that.

LOL i loved the whole car scene. it was cute. dheere dheere arnav has started admiring her crazy sides.

ROFL "BANDHU" i can very well imagine asr's facial expression. Overall a light hearted part.

Part E (thanks for getting carried away and giving us this sweet and mixed emotion part)

Well now i could see an authority in khushi's behavior towards him. and i loved it. the way she asked him to come to the mandir (khushi the day will come when he will go to mandir along with you, you have made him come to darga and now i am sure he is going to come to mandir...just waiting for the right time and right situation) KC i would love to see them in a church as well but again please dont change your writing according to what we want. i love your writing anyways.

I loved how she kept on forcing him to have the prasad. its not just a prasad but it showed a lot of authority which is showing in her behavior a lot. I am sure on day she will end up planning everything and he will lovingly accept her sweet yet wify demands 😳. Pehle se hi karta hai but i am sure he will love it when she will start dominating him. as he knows it very well she will only dominate him in a right way, which will be good for him.

KC great update. Loved it.

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smarty94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

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*EDIT*

first of all PARTYY TYMMM!!! i really had a gut feeling tht u wud update today maybe thts why i was up the whole nyt😃 awssuuummm update!!!👏 i like u getting carried away😉 it gives us a loOOng update to live upon😆

i absolutely adore khushi in ur FF, i mean the way he makes him go all crazyy and makes him happy. At first, whn part C started, i thawt he was dreaming maybe, and then he wud wake up with a jolt thinking of his vivid dream, bt i was absolutely wrong. I cant believe she ACTUALLY showed up at 6 in the morning at his house just so, her aunty cud feed her yogurt. Aaawww he is a sweetheart, always available to drop her anywhere she wud lyk, and the way he was admiring her😳 the last bit was awsumm, i'd really lyk to know how she wud react to his action.

okay i may sound hasty and all bt plz do update sOoon😃

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#448

bang on update...😊

to be honest i was loosing my interest in this ff with their continuous not so important blabbering and my love was shifting to your other ff... but this update made me fell in love with your arnav and the story again...

PART A

ooppsss... arnav gave her the job.. but what will happen when she will come to know the truth.. she is a girl with pride i wish she dont misunderstand him... and yeah devdas.. is it your favourite movie..?? i wonder how happy khushi will be...when arnav will get her the best outfit for their wedding making her dressed like aish... n now he even know about her dream wedding so for sure he will make one... OMG... it reminded me of maan and geet wedding..

Aur tum me itni baat hai Dev, dus saal pehle tumhare naam ka diya jalaya tha maine

Aur usse aaj tak bujhne nahin diya

Vo kitne ghanto se jal raha hai, Jaante ho tum?

87600

Aur tum me itni baat hai Dev, ki din ke har pal me main tumhe yaad karti thi'..

Din me pal kitne hote hain Dev? Ye Jaante ho?

Hisaab ke bade kacche ho tum''...

this was my favourite dialogue... loved it... how you used it in your story... just awesome...

khushi is still waiting for her arnav singh raizada... i want her to fell in love with ASR and then come to know that he is arnav... it will be so dreamy... let see how you put up the things...

PART B

Hahaha... arnav is so concerned for her.. lovely...

khushi hate aish... well even i do and for the same reason..

oopppsss... i wish khushi tell arnav the prediction... uuhhhuuu i want her to tell...😭

kit kat... eewww... i dont like it... it should be 5-star...😳

that was sweet of khushi that she wanted to open the door for arnav...nice thought di..

uummm..khushi still misses her father but i'm happy that she has arnav now by her side...

PART C

okay..was first part a dream..?? because i was not able to differentiate...

hahaha... arnav was so confused...that he was thinking its still night...😛

when khuhsi will stay permanently with arnav i mean as her wife... then i guess she is going to stick with zubin aunty...hehehe... aunty your lucky days are not that far...

PART D

ahhaa.. thank you aunty that you are not at home... issi bahane my arnav baby will feed yogurt to khuhsi...yipeee...

aaww... arnav has become her driver now... 😛

little... really..?? well 6:30 is not early... i get up at 4:45...😕

hehehe...loud music that too in morning...and above all arnav is cursing the person without thinking once except his khushi who else can play...lol

i must say you choose your song so well for describing the situation i love it...

PART E

freak...arnav how can you forget..???

He turned to look at her with shock, the car's speed got slower, his mind started racing fast, he told himself ' think something fast, think, think before she starts questioning you again, think, come up with something, something that makes sense, because she needs to be convinced, she won't just take any answer, she will start asking more questions if she is not convinced''..think ASR think fast and think something good! How could I be so stupid? I need to be more careful, it's all because it's too early in the morning, I am not even up yet properly, that's why I am doing everything wrong. I have to say something fast before I am bombarded with her myriad questions. Think something damn it and think fast!...

OMG... this whole para cracked me up...🤣

security guard uncle ji...asr will fire you..hehehe😛

yippeee arnav found her khushi... yayyy...

waiting for love to be in the air soon,...

P.S: how is my princess..?? hope mumma is not avoiding you and yeah baby keep your demands more and more high...

here you go with your hearts

❤️

P.S: your arnav is a super darling and i'm madly crazily irrevocably in love with him...😳

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#449

RES

*EDITED*

SUPER AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT HE IS SUCH A SWEETHEART OMG N THE LAST PART I DIDNT FOUND PEACE BUT I FOUND U CANT WAIT TO READ MORE THANKS FOR THE PM

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moomin4455

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Posted: 13 years ago

#450

These two are sooo adorable! Gloomy and Tsunami will hopefully understand soon that they are perfect for each other. This was a great chapter - I've been reading this through all in one go and love the pace you've set for this story. Can't wait to see what happens when Khushi realises that Arnav has a BIG hand in her getting that job. Can he give me a job like that lol? One where I choose my own working hours - I mean seriously? If that isn't love I don't know what it! 😃

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