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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

Hayyo rabba I was freaking right the last time round you seriously need to put health warnings on your ff there is no doubt in my mind after reading this chapter many of your readers like me had bit of fainting spell or such similar effects

Okay your chapters seem to be getting better than the last which was so expected what wasn't expected was the fact that they will be this good that you have us blessing you for thinking of starting this ff

Hum keh rahein hain agar assse hi app update deti rahi naa toh sach mein readers ko kuch ho jayega khushi ke mare

Oooh I hope that our girls are ready to be wooed by their respsctive partners man just the thought is making me wanna jump in joy and start dancing but I wont because then my family will think I have lost the plot but then they don't know what fantastic and awesome ff you have written

I really am at a loss to say much because this update seems to have to robbed me of much coherent thought but I will nonetheless try to do justice to this piece of fabulous chapter

Hayye main sachi main marr jawan finally the idiots maan and arnav have decided to give love a chance and also begin their journey to getting their soulmates with them

They have both especially arnie baby have decided that they will marry no other woman but their soni and afreen

Wow I can just picture the two from now unleashing their love which will have the girls reeling in shock thinking that these two dusht daanav and raakash are capable of loving them beyond the limits hayye

Ahh but a small request if you don't mind would it be possible for our girls not to readily fall for their love too quickly and easily after all inn dono ko tadpane mein bada majaa aata hai ji but this is all up to you dear

Well well well I didn't think that ASR and MSK would have it in them to realise the love and have the brilliance to actually have a go in wooing their lady love but glad that they are

I bet they will be needing all the help they can get from their family members as well as each other to see what will get their soni and afreen in love with them

I am afraid I cant say much more than this as I am still reeling from the shockers that you had managed to give in this chapter hope you understand my state and forgive me for not putting more comments

Cheers for pm and see ya Saturday now

Haayyo Rabba! If you guys fainted, then who will read my FF yaar? Hey Geet Ke Babaji, Hey Khushi Ke Devi Maiyya Mere Readers aur reviewers ki raksha karna!

You are blessing me for thinking of starting this FF!!! If I had known this would be the response I would get for starting this FF, I would have started it in December when I thought about it. By now, the story would have been completed too. It took me four months just to gather my courage and write it down!

Oh God! I made you speechless; you - the person who loves to speak. Wow! I am patting my back currently. This is the best compliment you have given up till now.

Maan and Arnav have taken their decisions ab girls ki baari hai!

Arre Waah! You understood my intentions perfectly. Maan and Arnav are going to shock Geet and Khushi out of their wits. Poor girls!

Regarding your request, if girls did not fall quickly then the story would not move faster. Already I think this story will take 80 chapters, if I drag more then I might get bored writing. I hope you understand. But don't worry; there is lot of drama left before the actual confession will happen. Going by your reviews, I am sure that you are going to enjoy this FF a lot. But, yes; one thing I could guarantee, dono ladke bahut tadpenge before they get their girls. He He He!

Maan and Arnav's brains are like tubelights when it comes to love, der se hi sahi par chalega zaroor! They had to realize their love, Anjali and Dadi's lectures had to work right?

I hope by the time I paste this reply, you are out of the shock. Because next few chapters are going to take away your hosh!

Cheers! And thanks for the superb review!

Edited by Analeez11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Siaa-

Soni's convo with NT was really good..Good that she spoke her heart out. Arnav's imagination is running very wild these day's :P

For a change, we have the three men in love and with a severe bout of insomnia and a bonus with it they imagine wonderful things..I love it!!!

Finally..Finally Arnav and Maan decided they would woo and win their lady love at any cost!!! That's great!!

Have not commented much before and I started reading this FF just a few days back. Would like to tell you that I love your style of writing and describing :) The way each character is given space yet the lead pairs are quite dominant is why the the story so different and unique.

I love readin it!!

P.S Thanks a lot for the pm's :)

Thanks for the review!
You liked the NT Soni convo! Wow! I am pating my back.
I always felt Arnav was very imaginative guy, dont know why!
Yes, mission to make her fall in love begins!
Thank you for your awesome compliments! I am happy that you love to read it! And i hope i keep on entertaining you!
Next update is up!
Edited by Analeez11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

awww...
simply mindblowing
i told you na i could imagine and now you made my imagination too far wid jiya dhadak dhadak...
my fav song...
maan and arnav lag jao kaam par your lady love will make you do the hardest thing to make them fall in love with you...
yar u r too gud...
me speechless...
this is best so far...
actually each and every update is unique...

continue soon...
me waitinggg


Thank you!
Thanks for the review!
You imagined the Jiya Dhadak Jiya Dhadak Song sequence. Wow! I am so touched!
I am happy that it is your fav song!
Yes, Maan and Arnav are on the mission!
You are speechless! Wow!
Thanks for the compliments!
Next update is up!
Edited by Analeez11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 31
fantastic...
Arnav Khushi
my God this Arnav is one specimen for sure...
the way the guy was so confused and hallucinating were too amusing...
one possessive man...
OMG did he actually realize and decide to MARRY?
i cant believe it...
but the scenes were excellent...
this time i enjoyed their scene so much than the usual...
oh ho now hes confused and apprehensive about Khushi's feelings...
well Khushi does feels something for him or at least in the beginning she did...

Maan Geet
lovely...
Khushi felt or feels something for Arnav but our darling Geet urf Soni has taken from the mangetar part and still me not sure what she feels from within...
though she drools over Maan, well who wouldnt when hes one heck of a sexy handsome hunk...he he he...
poor NT she didnt get the desired reply from Soni darl...
Daadima and NT have to do some plans i think...
well maybe that wouldnt be needed the man himself is all prepared and in the mission to make Soni darling fall in love with him...

both the guys are in the determined way to make their lady loves to fall for them respectively...
hai this is too good...
am so enjoying this...
i think Khushi will be easy but Geet too might fall easy...
cant say with these 2 determined lovers...
Arnav's hallucinations one day gonna embarrass him so much in front of everyone...
my God he imagines too much...
Khushi and Geet the guys are coming ur ways so be prepared...
why is Arnav so obsessed with the red color saree?
looks like after marriage Khushi will have only red wardrobe...
but the thing that had me roll with laughter so much was Arnav...
the guy is really one master piece...

small scene 2
OMG did I actually kiss them both?
THUD...
thank u dear...
didnt expect this scene at all...
thanks for the dedication too...

Thanks for the awesome review and superb compliments!

I eagerly wait for your review every time and the length of this review has made me very happy!

Arnav is one piece. Uske ke jaisa koi nahi!

Yes, Arnav actually decided to marry. I hope his thinking and decision sounded logical to you. I always wanted Arnav to marry just because he did not want Khushi to go away from him. But some thing else happened in the serial. So, I showed that in my FF.

Khushi is attracted to Arnav, nothing more. Pyaar abhi hoga jab Arnav will show his caring side to her.

Geet is one confused soul, think about it. You are robbed of your memory and a guy comes up claiming to be your fianc. The guy's behavior is so confusing that you just don't know what to do or say next! Even though I put Geet in this situation, I actually sympathize with her.

Dadi and NT will keep on planning; after all they have only one goal i.e. see Maan married. Yes, they won't need it as Maan has already decided to do something about it. Now the real fun begins!

Khushi will be easy to fall but not Geet. There are two twists left before Geet falls for Maan. Remember, she sees Maan only as her fianc. And I want her to fall for Maan not because he is her fianc but because he is a great person.

Arnav's hallucinations; you gave me a idea. I will work on it and tell you later. But remember, in the jalebi scene in chapter 27, Arnav was smart enough to save him from embarrassment. So, I am sure he can save himself from any embarrassment caused by his imaginations.

Arnav is obsesses with red saree because it is his fav color and the red saree he gifted her showed her curves perfectly to him. (I personally believe that in Indian wear, saree makes even a skin girl look damn curvy and sexy; so may be Arnav is influenced by my taste)

Red wardrobe!!! I don't think Khushi will allow it. She will kill him with her lecture of right and wrong!

Yes, you kissed them both!

THUD!

Hello……

Hello….

Hello...Deepa are you there?

Lagta hai behosh ho gayi!

Thanks for the awesome review aur hosh mein aa jaao toh mere chapter 33 ko review kardena!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

Lovely update.

Anxiously waiting to see what Maan will do to win his Soni.⭐️

Thank you for the review!😃
Next update pretty soon!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kvarsha

awesome updateee...

loved ittt...
so maan and arnav are in mission to make their lady love to fall
for themm so fun begins here😆😆😆...
ohh god shock of life tht arnav decided to make khush fall
in love wwith him😆😆😆..
update soon w8ng for next update...
thnx for pm😆😆

Thank you!
Thanks for the review!😃
Yes, Mission of love begins!
You got a shock by Arnav's promise! Wow!
Next update is up!
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CHAPTER 32. MISSION 'MAKE HER FALL FOR YOU' BEGINS!

Place - Arnav's Room at Shantivan

If you asked his family, they would tell you that Arnav's Singh Raizada's favorite pastime and hobby is gardening. But if you would see him now, you would assume that his hobby must have changed. The reason behind your assumption is that these days all Arnav Singh Raizada seemed to do is pacing in his room. So it would be safe for you to assume that Arnav Singh Raizada had changed his hobby from gardening to pacing around.

Arnav sighed as he completed another round of his room. Now I am sure all of you must be thinking; why was he pacing and sighing? Simple; yesterday was Saturday which means today is Sunday which also means the poor lover boy cannot see his lady love today. What seemed worse is that he had to put forth his plan of wooing her today. The first day of wooing her and he could not even meet her. Arnav groaned and asked himself why there existed a Sunday?

Place - Room No. 207, VIP ward, GoldLine Hospital

Maan and Dadima entered the room to see a fully ready Soni sitting on the bed and swinging her legs while waiting for them. Dev had gone to bring the discharge papers while NT met the Doctor for last minute instructions. Maan stood still as he was transported to the day he brought her home for the first time. He remembered how she had fallen into his arms while trying to stand. He smiled as he remembered how he had picked her up without saying anything. As he looked at her, she raised her eyes and looked at him. Maan gave her a smile and walked towards her. Without giving any regards to decency, he picked her up, motioned Dadi to follow and walked off. All this happened in a minute leaving Soni stunned for a second. She suddenly remembered this was how he had picked her up when he brought her home first time. She blushed and shyly smiled but soon remembered that there existed a Dadima who was currently with them. "Maan, yeh aap kya kar rahe ho?" Maan looked at her and smirked, "Apni honewaali patni ko ghar le jaa raha hoon. Kyon tumhein kahin aur jaana hai kya?" Soni narrowed her eyes, "Hey Babaji! Aapko sharam hai ki nahi, Maan? Dadima saath mein hain." She looked at him worried and embarrassed. "Koi baat nahi, Beta. Humein aap ignore kijiye. You continue your romance." Dadima piped up and Soni's whole face turned red. She buried her face in Maan's chest while Maan winked and smiled at Dadi. Dadi gave him thumbs up.

Place - Shantivan

Arnav lazily walked downstairs. It was breakfast time and he so wished to go to sleep. His heart was feeling heavy due to 'Afreen deprivation'. At least in his sleep he could meet her. But unfortunately, he had to come for breakfast or his Di would have been worried. And the last thing he wanted was for his Di to know his problem. Already, he had one Khushi to woo; he did not want his family to know his problem or worse give him ideas on how to woo her. He so did not want hear his Maamaji give him ideas and he did not even want to listen Akash and Di's suggestions. He was ASR! He did everything his style.

Arnav smirked as he got down the stairs. As he was about to put his left foot on the next step, he raised his eyes and looked at the living room. His heart stopped beating for a second and started beating faster. His eyes widened and he started taking steps back. There sat Khushi in-between his family chatting and laughing with them. He turned around and ran full speed to his room. He closed the door of his room and stood there panting? What the hell was future Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada doing here? Maybe, it was his imagination. But then he remembered two points; one is that his imagination would have never shown her in anything but in saree. And this Khushi wore a suit and two is that if she was his imagination his family would have not been able to see her. He swallowed. What the hell was Khushi doing here? If she came to know that he was Payal's Jethji then? He worriedly looked around shaking his head. His face took on a worried expression. Sach khula toh pataane ke pehle band bajegi. Kuch socho Arnav bitwa, kuch socho! He returned to his favorite pastime; not gardening. I am talking about pacing. Suddenly, he heard his Di on stairs, "Khushiji aap abhi tak humaare Chote se nahi mili na. Aayiye hum aapko unse milwaate hai. Waise thode ghussail hai par dil ke bahut achche hain humaare Chote."

Khushi smiled happily as she walked up the stairs. Anjaliji and Naaniji had invited her home. She decided to go as she was missing Arnavji and she thought this would be a good distraction. After meeting everybody and chatting with them she decided to go home when Anjaliji started insisting that she should meet Chote and then go home. She finally agreed after a lot of insistence from everybody. Anjaliji's Chote seemed very short tempered. But Khushi loved kids; she was sure she would like Chote too. She wondered about this Chote's age. Das Baara saal ke toh honge hi. Warna tera se bade umar ke ladkon ko aise pyaar waale naam se koi bulaaye toh pasand nahi hai! She wished she had brought this Chote some gifts. This way at least they would have easily become friends.

Arnav looked around in shock. His Di was bringing Khushi over here. Uh OH! What to do? Where to hide? He looked below the bed. No! He won't fit there. He looked at the wardrobe. No! He would not fit there either. He looked at bathroom and poolside. No! He was not safe there too. He could not even shout as Khushi might recognize his voice. What to do? What to do? He suddenly was struck with an idea. He smirked as he pulled out his mobile.

Khushi was walking up the stairs behind Anjaliji when she felt her phone vibrate. She pulled it out only to get a message from Arnavji. She smiled happily at his name and opened his message. Her smile turned into frown. He had written, "I want to meet you right now. I am waiting at our regular point. Do come or else I will come to your house." Khushi gulped and worriedly bit her lip. Hey Devi Maiyya! Kahaan fasaa diya aapne humein? Rakshas ko bhi abhi soojhi humse milne ki?

Arnav shook his head as he heard his sister knock on his door. "Chote?" Oh no! Khushi Kumari Gupta! Leave now! Dammit! Why can't you understand? Mere pyaar ki ship ko chalne se pehle kyon dubaana chaahti ho, Afreen? He hid in the bathroom as his sister opened the door of his room after not getting response from him. "Chote?" Arnav pressed the flush tank and Anjali understood. "Lagta hai Chote bathroom mein hain. Aap thodi der pool ke paas rukiye, woh abhi aate honge." Arnav felt like pulling all his hair from his head. Why can't his sister understand? Suddenly he heard Khushi replying, "Rehne dijiye Anjaliji. Hum ab chalte hain. Humein thoda kaam hai." Arnav heaved a sigh of relief. His plan worked. "Lekin thode der toh rukh jaayiye." Arnav groaned. Di jaane do na use! Kyon uske peeche padi ho? Khud pyaar karne ko kehti ho aur jab pyaar karne ka mauka mila toh khud problem khadi kar rahi ho? "Nahi Anjaliji! Woh aafis ka kaam hai. Toh jaana toh padega hi! Abhi boss ka message aaya hai. Koi tender ke wajah se, poore staff ko aafis bulaaya hai.", his Afreen spoke and Arnav felt proud. So you also want to meet me, Afreen! Anjali sighed and soon both left his room. Arnav poked his head out of the bathroom and looked left and then right. Uff! No one was there. After 10 minutes, he sneaked downstairs to check. The coast was clear. Khushi had left. He turned to go back to his room when he remembered that Afreen must have left to meet him and he was here in Shantivan. Oh Shit!

The Raizadas and Jhas were shocked when ASR literally flew out of the house in his casuals. "Chote ko kya hua?", Anjali questioned and Shyam replied, "Rehne dijiye Ranisahiba! Kuch kaam yaad aaya hoga Office ka!" "Par in saadhe kapdon mein Office gaye Chote?" Anjali was confused. "Chodiye Anjali Bitiya! Arnav bitwaa ka kauno bharosa naahi! Kab ka karde!" Nani sighed as she replied.

Place - Near Laxminagar

Khushi huffed as she waited for Arnav. Hey Devi Maiyya! Ab main kya karoon? Mujhe bulaaya aur khud nahi aaye! Rakshas! Suddenly Arnav arrived and just like last to last Sunday, he was dressed in casuals. Her heart started beating faster. Itne handsome lagne ko inse kisne kahaa tha? He got down from the car and walked towards her. She swallowed as her heart threatened to burst out of her body. He stood in front of her and she spoke, "Dekhiye! Humein pata hai aap humein ek din bhi dekhe baghair nahi reh sakte! Toh jee bhar ke dekh lijiye. Hum sirf do minute ke liye yahaan hain. Yahaan aate waqt humein buaji ka phone aaya tha. Unhonein humein ghar turant bulaaya hai." Arnav sighed. There went his plan to spend the day with her. Aah! Well! Better luck tomorrow! At least he got to see her! He cupped her face and kissed her forehead. He mumbled "I missed you!" and walked away.

Khushi shook her head. Itni aasaani se nahi Arnavji! She caught his hand and he turned around puzzled. She stood on her tiptoes and cupped his face. She kissed his forehead leaving him in a shock. "Aapko kya laga? Sirf aapko hi haq hai humaara maatha choomne ka! Humaara bhi haq banta hai aapke maathe ko choomne ka! Aakhir dost hain hum! Ab humaara hisaab bhi baraabar hai!" She turned away and skipped to her house leaving a stunned Arnav behind. He walked to his car and sat inside. Slowly, a smirk came on his face. Ok Future Mrs. ASR! Aapko toh poora haq hai! So, you believe in hisaab baraabar. But I was thinking, I kissed your forehead so you kissed mine back! So what if I kissed your lips? Would you kiss me back? Or would you shy away? After one month, I intend to find it out, Afreen!

Place - Soni's Room at Khurana Mansion

Maan helped Soni adjust on the bed after he placed her on it. He sat besides her adjusting her pillow. Soni was on the bed in a sitting position while leaning on the pillow. She looked at him baffled. He was behaving different today. He was acting like a …..Like a fianc today! A loving fianc! But why the sudden change from angry tycoon to a sweet loving fianc? Dev entered the room and placed a pocket stereo beside the bed. "Bhabhi, I know aaram karte karte aap bore ho jaati hongi. So, I got this for you. I know you love bollywood music." He smiled at her and walked off. Soni smiled in delight and took the stereo in her hand. She fiddled with it for a moment and put on the music while Maan sat by her staring at her smile. Soon, soft notes of flutes flew around the room.

Maan stood up.

Main Toh Bas Teri Chaahat Mein Chaahoon Rehna Sada

He picked up the blanket.

Main Toh Bas Teri Kurbat Mein Chaahoon Rehna Sada

Saaya Bhi Tera Main Hone Na Doon Juda

Maine Tay Kar Liya

He pulled the blanket over her lap. He sat beside her, cupped her face and kissed her forehead.

Tere Ishq Pe Tere Waqt Pe Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera

Teri Rooh Pe Tere Jism Pe Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera

Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera

Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera

Her eyes widened and Maan smiled at her.

Main Toh Bas Teri Chaahat Mein Chaahoon Rehna Sada

Main Toh Bas Teri Kurbat Mein Chaahoon Rehna Sada

Soni moved her head. "Ouch!" Her hair got stuck behind the pillow on which she was leaning. Maan came closer to her and hugged her. She sucked in her breath at his proximity. Her heart started beating faster.

Yaadon Mein Tujhko Rakhoon

Baatein Bhi Teri Karoon

Itna Deewana Hoon Tera

She could feel his breath on her neck.

Raaton Mein Jaaga Karoon

Din Bhar Bhatakta Rahoon

Main Toh Yahaan Se Bas Wahaan

He gently pulled her hair from behind the pillow and caught her shoulders. He slowly made her lean on the pillow. She met his eyes and they stared at each other.

Tere Ishq Pe Tere Waqt Pe Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera

Teri Rooh Pe Tere Jism Pe Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera

Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera

Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera

Maan sighed and got up.

Main Toh Bas Teri Chaahat Mein Chaahoon Rehna Sada

Main Toh Bas Teri Kurbat Mein Chaahoon Rehna Sada

"Main tumhaare liye juice bhijwaata hoon." Maan told her and walked out of the room. As he entered his room, he leaned on the wall and sighed. Juice was just an excuse. He wanted to get away from her before he did something inappropriate; like kissing her. He wanted to fall for him first. Staying so close to her was taking his toll. He wished he could show her how much he loved her. He lied on the bed and drifted of to sleep.

He saw her standing on the terrace in the silver saree he had given her. He smirked as he walked towards her and pulled her closer. She leaned on his chest and he hugged her.

Baahon Mein Tujhko Rakhoon

Dhadkan Mein Teri Sunoon

Aa Itna Nazdeek Aa Zara

She pushed him, blushed and tried to run away. He caught her hand and pulled her back. He hugged her from behind and kissed her cheek. She closed her eyes.

Jismein Duaaein Rahein

Har Dum Wafaaein Rahein

Doon Tujhko Aisa Ek Jahaan

She turned and buried his face in his chest. He placed a kiss on her head.

Tere Ishq Pe Tere Waqt Pe Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera

Teri Rooh Pe Tere Jism Pe Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera

Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera

Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera

Maan bent down on his knee and raised his hand silently asking her hand. She shyly placed her hand in his hand and nodded her head.

Main Toh Bas Teri Chaahat Mein Chaahoon Rehna Sada

Main Toh Bas Teri Kurbat Mein Chaahoon Rehna Sada

Saaya Bhi Tera Main Hone Na Doon Juda

Maine Tay Kar Liya

Place - Kitchen of Khurana Mansion

Soni walked towards the kitchen. It was Monday morning and she had planned to make parathas for everybody in the breakfast. She entered the room and stopped in her tracks. There in front of her stood Maan Singh Khurana facing against her attempting to cook something. She looked at him in shock. Hey Babaji! Inhein kya hogaya? "Maan, aap yeh kya kar rahe hai?" Maan turned around and smiled at her. "Woh tum thaki hogi na. Isliye maine socha ki aaj parathe main banaata hoon." Soni's eyes turned misty at his words. He did this for her. He wanted to help her. So unlike him! Instead of shouting at her for cooking when she was not well, he actually decided to help her. She swallowed the lump in her throat unable to say anything at his thoughtful gesture. Suddenly, Maan winced. He was dicing the onions and his finger got cut. Soni noticed and her eyes widened. "Hey Babaji! Jo kaam karna aata nahi hai woh kaam kyon karna!" She marched towards him and grabbed his finger. He dragged him to the sink and washed his cut while mumbling about how he did not know how to take care of himself. Maan smiled tenderly. She really cared for him, didn't she?

Soni took out the first aid box and applied a band-aid on the finger. Maan could not resist himself. From the moment he accepted his feelings for her, all he wanted to pull her close and hug her. His right hand snaked around her waist and Soni was pulled close to Maan. He left no gap in-between them. She looked at Maan and swallowed. Her right hand clenched his vest tightly. Her heart started beating faster and she started taking heavy breaths. Maan noticed a strand of her hair coming on her face. He pushed it away while his fingers ghosted over her cheeks. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. She opened her eyes and he leaned over her. His lips moved closer to hers and their lips were about to meet when, "Bro! Where are you?" They came out of the trance. Soni stared at Maan and pushed him away. Maan was not expecting the push and released his hold on her. She took her chance and ran away. Maan cursed his brother as he dragged his hand through hair in frustration.

Soni ran into her room and sat on the bed. She placed her hand on her heart and willed it to slow down. She liked Maan but wanted to know him more before taking such a strong step; a step which could not be taken back. She wished she had her memory; at least she would not have hurt Maan's feelings. Hey Babaji! Kitne armaan rakhe honge unhonein humaare shaadi se! Aur main hoon ki unhein paas bhi aane nahi deti. Par main bhi kya karoon Babaji? Pyaar ke baghair yeh sab mujhse nahi hoga! Please madat kardo, Babaji! Is dard se Mujhe chutkaara de do! Yaa toh meri yaadaasht waapas laa do! Yaa toh Mere dil mein unki jagah banwaado! Mere Dil Ko unse pyaar karwaado!

Place - Outside KC

"What the!", Arnav said with annoyance. He had the right to be annoyed. He had come to pick Khushi up and she asked him a favor. He was happy to get anything for her, and what did she ask for? His dear Afreen wanted to visit mela, the local fair and that also with him. Was she mad? He, Arnav Singh Raizada, will visit the mela! Sheesh! No way! Never! Wait a minute! This is a good way to impress Khushi. Yes! Perfect! Khushi's Arnavji is going to visit the mela with her. "Ok!" "Humein mele mein jaana bahut pasand hai. Hum jaante hain ki aap jaise paise waale aise chote se mele mein nahi jaate par aaj mele ka aakhri din hai aur…", Khushi stopped speaking as she realized what he said. "Kya kahaa aapne? Aap chalenge?", Khushi turned around and looked at him with bright eyes and 100 watt smile. He nodded his head. For a second, he thought he was going to get a hug or better a kiss but Khushi disappointed him by sitting in the car. "Chaliye Arnavji. Jaldi chaliye! Phir ghar bhi toh jaana hai." Arnav sighed. Pyaar mein kya kya karna padta hai!

Arnav and Khushi entered the mela and looked around. The mela seemed to Arnav like mixture of colors, noise and people. About on that, the speaker seemed to blare about a missing child. He resisted from hauling Khushi away from here. Khushi held his hand and dragged him to each and every stall available. Khushi refused to go on the giant wheel as they had yet to see all of the mela and they had very less time. She wanted to see everything around. He did not mind it. As long as she held his hand, he did not mind anything. They soon reached the ring stall. Arnav looked around confused. What was the game about? Noticing his puzzled look, Khushi explained the game to Arnav. The player would be given three rings for 10 Rs. which he had to throw from a specific point at any of the items spread in front of them. If even one ring fell on the item, the item will be given to the winner. But reaching the item was tough. Arnav and Khushi looked at the items placed over there for winning. Khushi noticed a beautiful set of Jhumkas. She smiled at them. Arnav noticed her glance and smiled at her. Whatever, Mrs. ASR wanted, she gets it.

Khushi looked in shock as Arnav paid 10Rs. and got hold of the three rings. "Arnavji, yeh aap kya kar rahe hain?" Ignoring her questioning, Arnav threw the first ring. It did not hit its intended target. "Rehne dijiye, Arnavji." Khushi tugged at Arnav's hand. Arnav shrugged her hand off. He threw the next ring. Again the ring did not hit the intended target. Khushi sighed. "Aapse nahi hoga, Arnavji." Arnav turned and glared at her. How dare she think that about him? He turned and looked at the jhumka. He closed his eyes, focused on Khushi's smiling face and smirked. He opened his eyes and threw the ring. The ring landed right on the Jhumke. Khushi's eyes widened and she looked at Arnav. Arnav took the jhumke from the stall owner and turned to her. "Main pehna doon?" She shyly nodded and removed her current earrings. Arnav came closer to her and she showed him her right ear. He moved closer and placed the jhumka in her ear. She shivered as she felt his breath on her neck. She swallowed as her heart started beating faster. She closed her eyes. He turned her face to the right and placed the Jhumka on her left ear. He took a step back and spoke, "Hogaya!" She opened her eyes and looked at him. She blushed and turned away while Arnav smirked at her blush. The loud speaker started telling about how the missing child has been found and now they will back to playing songs. Soon, Arnav and Khushi started wandering around and the loud speaker played the song.

As the music started, Arnav took Khushi's hand in his.

Mere Dil Pe Fateh Lehraane

Meri Rooh Ko Bhigaane

Khushi looked at him and smiled shyly.

Ga Ga Ga Sa Sa Re Sa Sa Re Sa Sa Re Sa

Ga Ga Ga Sa Sa Re Sa Sa Re Sa Sa Re Sa

Ga Ga Ga Sa Sa Re Sa Sa Re Sa Sa Re Sa

Ga Ga Ga Sa Sa Re Sa Ma Pa Ga Re

Arnav tugged her and she came closer. Their shoulders were almost touching while their fingers were intertwined with each other.

Mere Dil Pe Fateh Lehraane

Meri Rooh Ko Bhigaane

Yeh Noor Kahaan Se Aaya

Iss Baat Ko Allah Jaane

Jaane Allah Jaane

Jaane Maula Jaane

Iss Baat Ko Allah Jaane

He looked at her. You really captured my heart, Afreen. You came out of nowhere and won over my heart. You won over me.

Mere Dil Pe Fateh Lehraane

Meri Rooh Ko Bhigaane

Yeh Noor Kahaan Se Aaya

Iss Baat Ko Allah Jaane

Jaane Allah Jaane

Jaane Maula Jaane

Iss Baat Ko Allah Jaane

Iss Baat Ko Maula Jaane

As notes of flute floated in the air, Khushi left his hand and ran towards a stall. Arnav noticed the stall was of Bangles. As he stood by her, she spoke up, "Humein choodiyaan bahut pasand hai." Arnav filed that into his brain for later reference. As she tried the bangles on her hand, he stared at her; her smile, her eyes. He just wanted to stare at her for eternity.

Dagmagaane Laga Hai

Guroor Bhi Sharabi Ho Gaya

You have changed me, Afreen! Arnav smirked.

Mit Gayi Meri Hasti

Koi Husn Inquilaabi Ho Gaya

She was struggling with one pair when he pulled her hand and helped her with them. She looked at him and sucked her breath at his touch.

Tirchhe Kuch Teer Chalaane

Ghayal Karde Nazraane

Yeh Dard Kahaan Se Aaya

Iss Baat Ko Allah Jaane

Jaane Allah Jaane

Jaane Maula Jaane

Iss Baat Ko Allah Jaane

Iss Baat Ko Maula Jaane

She paid for the bangles and showed her bangle filled hand to him. He smiled at her and nodded at her in approval.

Allah Jaane Haaye

She turned and walked off to the next stall.

Maula Jaane

He stared at her.

Allah Jaane Hoye

He swallowed as his hands trembled to pull her close.

Maula Jaane

He walked towards her, grabbed her hand and turned her around. She looked at him questioningly.

Allah Jaane

He cupped her face.

Kuch Mila Hai Aaj Hawaa Mein

Saanson Mein Ghungroo Kaise Khananakhan

She pushed him away but he grabbed both her hands in his and held them tightly.

Aasmaan Hai Pairon Ke Neeche

Warna Zameen Pe Kaise Neelapan

He pulled her with a jerk and she crashed into his chest. He hugged her tightly.

Haar Ke Jeetne Ka Silsila Mil Gaya

She hugged him back.

Jannatein Mil Gayi Ya Khuda Mil Gaya

He closed his eyes and kissed her on her head.

Rubaru

She moved away from him and blushed.

Mere Rubaru

He smirked at her.

Kya Noor Hai Mere Rubaru

She turned to run away when he caught her hand and pulled her back.

Iss Baat Ko Allah Jaane

He grabbed her from behind and pushed aside her Duppatta. He kissed her at the base of her neck.

Iss Baat Ko Maula Jaane

He felt someone tap him and he opened his eyes. Khushi stood in front of him looking at him weirdly. He realized that he was day dreaming and smiled sheepishly. She shook her head, grabbed his hand and dragged him to the next stall. He stared at her dreamily.

Mere Dil Pe Fateh Lehraane

Meri Rooh Ko Bhigaane

Yeh Noor Kahaan Se Aaya

Iss Baat Ko Allah Jaane

Jaane Allah Jaane

Jaane Maula Jaane

Iss Baat Ko Allah Jaane

P.S. Both songs are sung by Rahat Fateh Ali Khan Saab. Chaahat is featured in the movie Blood Money featuring Kunal Khemu and Amrita Puri while Allah Jaane is featured in the movie Teri Meri Kahaani featuring Shahid Kapoor and Priyanka Chopra. Both movies are released in 2012. I chose these songs because Chaahat's lyrics suited what Maan felt while the lyrics of Allah Jaane suited Arnav's situation. What do you think?

Precap - Finally a chapter without song! He he he!

But both couples will be present and romance will be there. Don't worry.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Such a fantastic update. The courtships of Maaneet and ARHI sound very interesting. Wonderful choice of songs. Looking forward to next update.
Edited by fffan123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
maan hayyyeee
full on geet akka soni ko impress krne laga hua hai
nd arnav hahahha
kaise hide kr raha tha from khushi awsome
loved it

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