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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Beeni update soon😊



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Posted: 13 years ago

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Plz update soon Beenish



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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry guys for being late as i really didn't have much time now a days as my examz are approaching so not get enough time for write the ff...hope my be you like it as i didn't understand its up to gud mark or not...if you like then hit the like button and give your precious comments on it too...


CHAPTER 13:

DOBRIYAL MANSION:

After spending time with abhay the few hours later Piya sitting on the bed with misha and both were talking continuously ''''

Misha: so tell me in detail now

Piya: I told you everything now what you want to hear more''''I too love him and we are together now''

Misha smiling: and

Piya: and what mish?

Misha: tell me about the kiss''''did you kiss him

Piya sternly: shut up misha''.move from here now and went from there to her wordrobe''selecting the dress for her

Suddenly piya cell rang''..misha looked to the flashing number and whistle ''..

Misha: ohh your darling call

Piya running to her and snatch the cell phone from her''don't you dare to do that misha''

Piya attended the call: hey abhay

On the other side abhay: be ready in 20 minutes

Piya confuse: but why?

Abhay: don't ask so questions just ready we are going for a date

Piya smiled: what on a date

Abhay: now quick

Piya eneded the call and looked to misha smilingly''''

Misha: wow so you are going on a date''how lucky you are that duffer Milan never took me to a date''..let me help you'''.you should be look hawtt today piya after all your first date''

Piya : i know mish''..and smiled

Piya after 30 minutes came out from the bathroom.outside misha standing impatiently waiting for her'''..

Miaha: come out piya'abhay calling continuously yar

Piya standing infront of her''''wearing a saree and loosely bun her hairs some few curls remain open'''wearing a diamond earings matching with the silver border of her saree''.with wearing silver bangles''''

Misha looking to her and without her wish her mouth slightly open ''..she cant believe on her eyes that what she had seen now'.did piya her sister''...the great piya dobriyal wearing a saree for a date''

Misha amazingly: you look relvishing piya'..i cant believe it you wear a saree for a date'..i mean abhay is so fashionable handsome hunk and you select this

Piya smiled: yes because I like it''..and thanks for a compliment and headed to the way down going to see the fuming in anger abhay'''.

OUTSIDE HOUSE:

Abhay walking from here and there..waiting for piya whom has been late for 20 minutes'''abhay saying''.why always women can't come on time why they take so much time just to dress''''.fuming in anger and continously cursing in his breath'''then in tracks he stopped when the same jasmine aura stuck in his noses'''..without moving his back

Abhay: you are late''..now we don't go its your punishment'.i have waiting for you for now for so long and you''.turned turned around to face her and say something more but he remain still to see her'''''abhay staring her without blinking the eyes

Piya looking his face smiled: abhay

Abhay coming to senses: you look beautifull piya''..and look her up to down ''..piya seeing that hesitatstely smiled like abhay scanned her through his eyes''''

Piya confuse: why are you looking me like this?

Abhay smiled: we are going for out not in the party'''why you wear this and wink her

Piya sad: you don't like it now looking to her too''

Abhay without answering: come lets go

Piya and abhay seated on their respective front seats and abhay take piya to a long drive''''both are silent ''nobody say a word to each other'''.abhay stealing glances to piya which looking outside the car don't even once see him back''''abhay sensed her sadness and smiled a little knowing the reason too well''''''

Abhay held her hand with were placed on her lap and tightly entwined his fingers to her'''this act make piya to look him with curious eyes'''.abhay looking to the road bring her hand near his lips and placed a soft kiss on her hand'''

Abhay still holding her hand: how you think I don't like it

Piya not getting looks: what?

Abhay : I know you wear this saree because of me''

Piya getting now: why so

Abhay: because I like sarees and I love to see you in this'''you care a lot of my everything '''''..my taste that which I like or not I am really impress piya'''..the girl who wears top with jeans doing this for me I never thought so and show his dimple smile to her''

Piya shyly smiled: its because I love you abhay and I want to become the one which you like to see me'''and I know your taste''..

Abhay stopped the car: look to her and pulled her into the hug''I love you ''I like you in every form piya'''.nobody can ever take your place in my heart'..and back to see her smiling blushed face''''

Piya: I promise to you too I only belong to you nobody else''..

Abahy: stop blushing like this its make me insane and then you know what I demand making piya scarlet red''

Piya hitting: abhay '''.i am hungry'lets go to some restaurant'.

Abhay: ok shona

Abhay and piya headed to the caspion sea hotel where they took the corner seat near the window''''from where the view of sea clearly seen''.piya eat the food and abhay only seeing his princess'''with a lot of piya force abhay order a wine to give company piya in something''''.than both moved from there to spend some quality time alone from the world'''''.

RAICHAND HOUSE:

Misha,kabir and sid entered the house and after seeing the Milan misha brust out in anger''..

Misha: I can't believe you'''you are not the brother of abhay

Milan give confuse look to priya and alina''..

Alina: but what happened misha'''..we all the blood related

Misha: I can't believe on this and pointing towards Milan who were hell shock to see misha like this''..abhay is so caring and romantic'''he care a lot of piya ''..you know he take out piya on a date alone with him and you never bother about me

All hearing this look amazed'''the first one who break the silence''.

Sid: so you mean abhay and piya

Alina suddenly laughed: see I told you sid something is cooking''..look they are in love too

Kabir: they go on a date

Priya: abhay didn't tell me all this

Milan: so what they go on a date''spending some time alone without you all mads

Misha: so you know about that already fuming in anger more

Sid: wow so all dobriyals fall in love with raichands and wink to alina making her smile''.

Kabir: they both are so clever'''.didnt show us all this

Misha shouted in all this mad talk: shut up you all''''I am saying this all that you guys are so unromantic 'never '.you never ask me for this'''.

Milan laughed aloud: you girls are seriously mad'''

Priya hearing this: what we are not'you guys are insane'''..kabir you always say you love me but you never take me out as officiall date and pouted in anger

Kabir hell shock: priya but I take you daily whats this officiall?

Alina: with full authority ask a girl to come out with you as a lover

Sid: you all crazy

Misha: yes we are'''and all started fighting

Sid:first come abhay back I will ask him why he did that make our life hell

Alina: see my brother have guts that you don't have

Milan: misha listen I gave him that idea

Misha: so what abhay took the lead not you

Kabir: I m innocent in all this priya

Priya: ya very like a baby who didn't know about this to take his fiance to a date

Sid: I will kill abhay yar

All went go for an hour than suddenly Milan shouted stop all of you''''all looked to him''..and than said''. someone is here and go the main door of house and opened it''''..

Milan look numb to see the person who is standing in fornt of him and showing him a beautifull smile'''.

Priya coming closer to Milan: whos'e this and looked to the person standing their gate'..

Milan shocked: you

The person coming into the house showing her smile to all raichands and than eyed to dobriyals'''..looking back to raichands said: hello buddies'''how are you all''.

Misha,sid and kabir looking confused to the raichands childs expression that must something serious'''''''..

HILL POINT:

Abhay tyring to pick piya in his strong arms but piya protesting for this and pushed him aside''''.

Piya: abhay please try to understand I walk by myself

Abhay: no you can't''.. the place where I take you is very shapehy'''..you will not adjust and stop pleading because this not be gonna work'''..and pick her up in his arms'''after in few minutes of ride abhay stopped in some place and down the piya from his arms'''..

Piya looking to the place standing on the hill''''..piya memorized to see such a beauty'.from here the whole dehradun can be seen'''..the chripping of birds can heard from there very clearly''..the wind blowing can feel you like touching you when moving the noise of it heard your ears''''..you can see sun set saying goodbye to you from here just only you''''''

Piya smiled: its so beautifull place ''''..i can never see such a scene in my life abhay''''

Abhay moving and sit on the stone: I know its my secret place''''..when I feel lonely and sad I came here and my all sadness placed peace in my heart spending time here'''''

Piya smiled: so no one knows about this place than why me

Abhay looked to her: you are special to me that's why

Piya looked down and knotting the edge of her saree: thank you

Abhay sensing her nervousness smirked''stand and taking steps towards her and standing near her'''''

Abhay: you do a lot for me and I don't anything'''.you accept me and my life than I also have to accept you whole heartedly'''..

Piya looked up to his face: why you love me so much

Abhay take her hands: why not give me some reasons that why I can't love you'''..you have a pure heart'''you care a lot of others'''.make me feel good when I am with you'..i feel so lucky to have you piya'''

Piya shyly smiled and moved from there but when she placed the next foot the saree trip in her foot and she about to fall when strong pairs of arms held her from the bare waist'''.

Piya looked to abhay who held her closely to his chest'''.both looked to each other''..

Abhay making her stand but still held her close not letting her go from his arms''.piya struggling to move from his grip'''.

Abhay pulled her more strongly to him and held her nake waist making her blushed more'''..

Abhay huskily: you think you move fronm me without giving me gift

Piya hesitately looked him: abhay let me go

Abhay: no shona and moved his hands from the waist to her back up making her shiver

Piya shivering: what are you doing

Abhay smirked: you look good enough to eat shona

Piya wide eyes: what you want

Abhay making his hands up down: only you and right now a official first kiss

Piya: what

Abhay : please don't make me more impatient now

Piya smiled: but

Abhay held her face and bring his lips near her and slightly kiss her lower lip than looked to her''.piya also looked him and to control the blushing closed the eyes making him the lead'''..abhay kiss her upper lip slightly and than slowly pulled her lips more into his and sucked them and give a long lingering passionate kiss to her''''.piya too responded him and held from back of his head and moving her hands in his thick hairs making him more wanting'''.both were kissing like they have no end for this'''''only when piya moved away when both needed the air to breath'''''Piya panting and support her forehead with abhay forehead'''.

Abhay smiled: I want more and kissed her cheek and trail his wet kisses to her nose'her chin than kiss her throat and than kissed her neck and bringing her more closer to him''.placing wet kisses to all over the neck'''''.piya moan in between kisses'''..abhay kiss her shoulder making her moan louder his name'''..

Piya: abhay and hugging him shyly to hide her face from him

Abhay stopped in his ways and control his urgues and looked to her: lets go from there and placed a long loving kiss on her forehead'''

Piya smilingly: its really a special day for me

Abhay: corrected shona'''for us

Both laughed aloud'''suddenly abhay cell rang'.after receiving the call abhay smiled vanished''''.

Piya: what happen abhay'''you seem tense

Abhay: dad call he wanted me to come home''.

Piya sad: ok so you must go I will go myself

Abhay : common you also go with me

RAICHAND HOUSE:

Abhay and piya entered in the house walking in hand in hand'.all of the persons here present looked them'''.

Abhay sensing tension in environment: whats wrong '.why you all look shock''.piya also looking the raichands seeing them tense and look the presence of her siblings too here'

Milan coming to him: actually abhay'.chand cut him off

Chand: someone here to meet you and indicating the person sitting with the back to abhay and piya'''.

Abhay look slightly taken and grip the hand of piya tighten'''.piya to feeling that and look to abhay''..abhay moved further with piya wanting to look the person'''.abhay eyes in shock fully open to see her'''

Abhay with dry voice: Maithili

A girl with straight with brown hairs looking to abhay ''.her eyes shinning in happiness to see abhay''..

Maithili standing to see him and suddenly run to him and hugged him give him a bone crushing hug'''

Maithili happily: missed you abhay

Abhay taken a back and separated her from him and let out the hand from piya hand: what are you doing here? get the hell out of there''..how dare you even step in this house'''what you want from us now

Maithili: abhay please stop being rude to me''you should be happy to see me'.we are friends abhay

Abhay shouted: sorry to disappoint you Maithili but we was friends and now I don't want any relation from you''..get out now and grab her arm and drag her out of the house and pushed her out from the door ''and never try to come here again

Maithili: but abhay please listen to me

Abhay shut the door in front of her and look back to his family'''.

Abahy angrily: why you have entered her in this house 'what she want now

Haseena assuring: relax son'.its just she want us to tell she is in the town from now on

Abhay slowly: hell with her

Priya: abhay its ok nothing going wrong this time

Alina frustrated: I cant understand why all this happening

misha,kabir,sid and piya standing silently watching their conversation'''..like that nobody observe or may be didn't notice them''..milan looking to them and understand their confusion '''

Milan: we talk about this later'..its late now

All looking to him nodding their heads'''

Chand: lets go haseena we have a meeting remember to clan'..

Haseena hesitate: ya

After they went out'''misha looking to Milan direction with daggers

Milan: what now?

Misha: you tell me whats all this'''.who is the girl?

Abhay angrily: its non of your business

Piya looking stunned with this behavior of abhay''

Kabir trying to handle the situation: misha shut up yar

Sid: its late guys we have to go

Alina: heyy please stay

Misha: know its enough we have to go

Abhay without seeing piya left from the hall move to the upsatirs to go to his room''piya just standing and looking the way from where abhay vanished'''.all see disappointment in piya eyes'''.how the beautifull day of her life become like this'''only just the reason of that girl''..maithili

Kabir shaking piya to her shoulder: lets go

Piya : yes bhai

Milan coming closer to them: you all go only piya 'you will stay here for sometime''..nobody dare to ask why should piya stay here because all know well only piya handle this time abhay and no one else'''.

ABHAY ROOM:

Piya standing outside of abhay room'''.and the words of Milan chanting in her mind'..piya abhay is really broken now''..i know that you heard the name of Maithili from abhays mouth''.so you will only the one who make him feel better'''

Piya slowly knock the door but no response''piya entering in the room''..the room are in full dark only the source of light is in the room is moon'''piya closing the door look around to see abhay but no one is around'''..

Piya calling abhay name: abhay'where are you? Moving to the corner side of right

Abhay coldly: why are you here

Piya turned back and see abhay sitting to the dark corner on the arm chair backing his head back to the chair

Piya: why I have no right to come your room smilingly to him

Abhay: I don't want to talk anyone now'.you may leave

Piya coming closer to him: I am not anyone mr.abhay raichand''I am the one whom you love

Abhay: you are sometime irritate me'.you know

Piya: I know but abhay whatever your past was you didn't change it

Abhay a bit angry: you don't know anything

Piya sitting near him on the floor: then you have to share with me and held his hand on her

Abhay jerk her hand: I don't want too

Piya a bit shock of this: why are you behaving rudely with me?

Abhay: I don't like it anything now leave me please'''can you

Piya again smile: no never

Abhay: than stuck here..i damn care about

Piya: whats wrong abhay'.maithili is your friend

Abhay standing on his feet : one thing I clear you'''..she is nothing to me

Piya standing near him supported her hand on his shoulder'..

Piya with sadness: just relax abhay I didn't drag this topic more'

Abhay looked into her eyes which were filled with tears: I am sorry'..i didn't mean to you what I said'..it's just I am not good now

Piya : it's ok '.please just calm down

Abhay cupped her face and kissed on her forehead: you understand me a lot''

Piya smiled: I am trying that '.

Abhay held her form shoulders: its just I don't want to see her anymore

Piya: its life abhay''.its unpredictable'.but we have to face it with our love ones''sometimes we will have to bear consequences which we never thought of'..listening these words abhay eyes burn with anger again''.abhay hold on piya shoulders become tight''..piya looking to abhay face surprised''.abhay giving wild daggers to piya'''.piya become scared to see that side of abhay'''.

Piya sacredly: abhay please calm down''.i didn't mean to hurt you''..

Losing the temper abhay throw piya back to the side and moved near the window to calm himself'''.abhay closed his eyes'''after a minute when abhay feel relax he slowly opened his eyes''''.and than a reality strike him '''..did he push piya aside''..his piya''.he really did that'''.slowly abhay look his right side and his eyes become wide in shock''..the beauty of his life'.his piya lying near a chair and shivering in pain and may be in fear'''.

Abhay shouted: piya and run for her''

Abhay touching piya with very carefulness''..piya didn't move from his touch'''didn't show anything'''..

Abhay holding piya in his arms and took her to on the bed''piya is sobbing and didn't meet the eyes of abhay which was in full regret now

Abhay: I am sorry piya'''..touching her face'''piya look at me'..i don't know what gone into me'.piya and than a moan escaped from his mouth looking the side of piya forhead bleed''..touching her forehead''..shit I did this to you''..i am so sorry 'I don't want that piya''

Piya crying now: leave me ''..don't touch me'''you are not my abhay''..he never did this to me

Abhay with guilt: let me help you piya and moved forward and held her head and placed his lips on her bleed forehead''.after healing her he moved back and look her tearful face

Piya with trembled hand touched his cheek: are you alright abhay?

Abhay kissing her hand and hold her hand: it's you whom I should ask that

Piya smiled: I am fine '.look you have heal me'..but promise me you never did this to me ever again

Abhay in a low voice: I promise''.i am sorry piya'..i love you a lot it's just the same words remind me of Maithili and I out of control'''..sorry piya''''.you are my life'I can't live without you'..i can't imagine my life in which you are not with me''.

Piya hugging abhay: it will never happen'..i will live with you in every step of your life even if you tried to keep me away from you got that''I am with you like a glue'''.who never leave you

Abhay hugging her tight: I love this glue''.love you shona

Piya sensing abhay get back to his normal condition: love you too

Abhay backed from hug: you want to know about..

Piya cut him off: no abhay'.when you will feel want to share with me then tell me'..it's not hurry in it alright my sweet baby

Abhay smiled: baby?

Piya laughing: yes you behave like a small baby

Abhay: I am not

Piya: yes you are

Abhay looking into her eyes: I am sorry it's our beautiful day which I turned into the dark one

Piya with sad smile: I know its become bad but not dark ok''..i enjoyed it with you and now after the small fight it's just like perfect day to me''''.don't be upset'I like to see you in smiling mode'''.

Abhay coming closer to her: me too and I want to apologize with you in my special style''

Piya in confuse expression: what?

Abhay bring piya face closer to him and suddenly kissed her on lips'''piya eyes wide with sudden act '''abhay give piya a hard kiss and sucked her lips''.after some seconds piya too responsed him'..both were kissing each other to forget the future what bring for them'''abhay only left piya when she needed air to breath''.

Abhay back look piya: you like this treatment?

Piya smiled shyly: I love it

Abhay smirked and held her chin forced to her in his eyes: than we may be daily fight and use this treatment

Piya hitted abhay: shut up''.don't you dare

Abhay pulling her more closer to him: I don't want any fight for this'if you want I will give this treatment to you daily without hesitation and again kissed her hard on her lips''both were lost into the passion'''..forgetting about the time and place'''





Edited by bellaaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow so lovely update ... Abhiya moments are great ...
Misha and the gang are so good too ... 😊 whats with this maithli ??

and good luck for exams and update when you can ...😊
Edited by xxAqeelahxx - 13 years ago
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All the bst 4 exams😳.Awesome update.Abhiya date was fab.I loved their bonding.Gals vs boys fight was hiliarious.Misha nai milan ka bharta bana diya.All boys were accusing Abhay 4 taking Pia out 😆😆.Oh whts metz & abhay story?Loved last scene.Plz cont..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
best of luck for your exams very nice chapter i like all abhiya scene thanks for pm

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