Dad hate her but I love her Pt 7 Pg 47 *COMPLETED* - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Hey completely love the story.

cant wait to hear Arnav s dhak dhak😉

Why is Khushi crying 😭

Plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Hahahaha 😆 I loved the parts you've written in brackets such as (he means an anarkali dress) I found it sooo cute for some reason!

The hair on his suit part was hilarious!! Loved the Update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Very nice. Thanks for that long update and pm. Luved the story in Arnav's point of view. Eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
awesome...i felt as if IPKKND has started all over again...
do send me PM if u can for the next update.
Edited by naaza_deen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry guys I knew i said that I'll update after long comments but the update was read. Plz give it a read. *Bit Long* on the demands of my friends.

The story goes in Arnav's mind. Its his point of view.

The most intense Dhak Dhak Arnav has ever felt. Which was not even shown in IPKKND. I bet you guys will like it.

And you can lie to me but not yourself. So if at all you liked and and still not commenting then it means your lying to me but not yourself. So plz drop in your likes and comments. Sorry if any mistakes.


Arnav:

I stood up suddenly when I saw her. There she stood at the door holding a coffee mug. 'Does she know that I drink black coffee?'

She was looking something different in that blue and white dress. But what? Sweet...? Cute...? Adorable...? Bad...? No, no, no, definitely not bad. I quickly turned around and my eyes fell on the glass of the window. It reflected her image and next to her was mine. We both wore same colours today. Didn't know why but this 'same colour' thing was making me happy I know it was too silly but still I liked the way they matched and specially our images on the glass which were close to each other. It felt like as if a couple were standing close to each other.


Wait, wait, wait Arnav! Couple...? Where did this come from in your mind? Her presence was so strong. For a second that area of my mind was back. Just her and nobody around her except me. She was pulling me and mind so strongly towards her with just her eyes.

I couldnt let myself lose in front of her. After all i'm ASR. I sat back on my chair.


"Yeah come in. What did you bring?" I asked her in stern voice to cover up what was going in my mind and I did it good. Though I knew what she bought I still asked her. She thought I was really a rude and stern man. But didn't know why I didn't wanted her to think like this about me.


"Sir it's your black coffee." she replied with a low voice by placing the cup at the table. She knew about my coffee taste and timing? I was stunned at that.

What happened to her? Suddenly such a low voice?

"Okay." I just replied and kept it simple so that my mind's thoughts wouldn't get revealed.

"what were you doing?" I asked her to really know what she was doing as the curiosity which was rushing in me nearly was killing me to know what was she thinking. 'About Me?'

'Uhhhu... Arnav why would she think about you? You are her boss. And what are you thinking? You want her to think about you?' Asked one practical part of my mind.

'Yes' came the instant reply from the other part of my mind. What was going one with me?

"Uh... sir I was filing up some of the vouchers of Mr. Mehta." she replied.

"Sir You called me? Do you need any help?" she asked. Her voice was so musical and rhythmic. Every word she spoke was so perfect and neatly arranged.

For a second I was lost and forgot why I called her up. And then was back to my senses.


"Uh yes. I have some work." I gave her one deal paper and said her to write it down. She immediately took the paper and sat in front of me on the chair. How innocent she looked. Those deal papers were of last year and were of no use. But luckily it didn't held any sign of last year.


I was hitting the keys of my laptop with rage as to why is she coming in my mind again and again?

'A small peek at her won't matter much Arnav.' Said one part of my mind.

'No Arnav she'll get to know that you looked her.' said the other part of my mind.

'Yes Arnav' 'No Arnav' 'Yes Arnav' 'No Arnav' 'Yes Arnav' 'No Arnav'

It was so damn confusing that what was going on in my mind?

I ducked my head in my laptop screen. I couldn't resist and for a second I looked at the glass on my table. It was holding her reflection. And suddenly I took a look at her from the corner of my eyes.


Damn man! She was looking so pretty. She was sucking up the pen in her mouth. It means she was thinking something deeply. But what? It developed a strange curiosity in me to know what she was thinking. Was it about me?

'No Arnav not again! Why you always want her to think about you?'

Half an hour passed and suddenly she broke my staring by saying.

'Sir it's done. Anything else?' she asked with serious and stern voice. What happened to her? I think she doesn't like me. And it's all because of the seriousness I showed her.

Wait if it was my seriousness then she would have back answered me. But she didn't. Problem was surely something else. How can I take up the nerve to ask her?

'Arnav what are you thinking? What if even she has a problem? Why are you so bothered about it?'

And even if she asked why would she say me? She already thinks I'm a cruel man who always hurts people don't care about them and shows money power to everyone. She thinks of me a monster and nothing else.

'excuse me Mr. Raizada why are you bothered about what she thinks about you or what not?'

'is everything alright?' I asked her with low voice trying to keep it as soft as I could so that she doesn't gets scared away.

'Woh... Sir woh humare Babuji...' (Uh… Sir…..My dad) she trembled and stopped instantly. Her eyes moistened up.

'have I hurt her?' I thought to myself? And the next moment I could ask her anything she ran down to her desk.

What was the problem? She was saying something about her dad. Is he alright?

I again saw her from my cabin's window. She was wiping her tears and some were consoling her? Does others know about her problem? If yes the. Why not me?

And then it struck to me that she has not argued with me even once today. She was quite all along. Something as surely wrong. But what?

This bloody curiosity will kill me some day. I was never so curious about anybody. Then why is she bothering me so much?

I called up aman and asked him if he know the matter.


'Sir... Actually her dad is not well and is in Icu. That's the reason's she's been working so hard today as she needs to pay the hospital bills.' he replied with a strange confusion in his mind as to why was I asking impersonal things as I never do that in office.

'What happened to him ?' I asked him? not bothering what he might think.

And he don't knew about it and walked off the cabin after replying.

And the moment he left I was all restless. 'Her dad was in hospital and she don't bother to say me? Why? Am I that bad that she don't bother to say me?' I was all fumed up which was difficult to control.

'Why she dint said me? Why not me?' I was literally screaming inside my heart.


One thing I was sure of that she will not tell me about her dad or her problems. It was 4.30pm by now. I left office informing Aman that i've got urgent work and that he should take care of the office in my absence. I went and sat in my car.


Half an hour passed and it was 5.00pm. Time to leave for employees. Even she was going. He eyes were still swollen. It means that she was still crying. Wish I could do something.

I was all set in my car. Her next step was that she hired an auto for city hospital.

I got down to hire an auto too so that nobody should know what I was upto or where I was going.


God! not even single auto was waiting. It was so difficult to hire an auto. They all talk so rude. Does every citizen who travels in auto faces such problems and abusive talks of them? Does she also faces such problems? Does she also has to handle such talks of the auto fellows?

I would that man him if anybody does it. I dint know why was I so angry?

I silently followed her in an auto not letting her know. She reached and got down and gave money to the auto driver. I said my auto driver to stand a bit far so that she doesn't find me.

"Madam change nahi hai." (I don't have change madam) auto driver said her in a rude voice.

"Ji…. Dekhiye humare paas toh change nahi hai." (See.. I don't have change) she said in a low and dull voice.

'Doesn't that auto driver understand that a girl is already troubled? Why he needs to trouble her more.

I could see the meter from my auto it was fifty rupees or change and she gave him hundred rupees.


Doesn't that manic have change just for 100 rs? I was so getting angry and that auto driver's behavior was irking me down like hell. She needs to meet her father and this pig was behaving as if he's losing world. I gave 100 rupees change to my auto driver and said him to help Khushi without revealing my name. he took money and quickly got down and exchanged the money with her.


She pushed in the money in his hands with anger and walked in.

I too got down after paying the meter and walked in.

I walked slowly trying not to reveal my self. But she was no where to be found. I didn't knew her father's name so just asked the receptionist about Mr. Gupta. And she said second floor operation theatre on left.


There was a strange cramp of fear in my stomach after listening the name of operation theatre. I asked the reason for admission of her father in hospital and she said heart attack due to blockage in veins.

I walked up hurriedly as if my dad was in hospital. I was never so stressed and tensed.


I took two to three steps at a time. I saw Khushi from the corner of the wall near stairs. She was consoling everyone. She was brave enough to handle everyone not revealing her feelings in front of everyone. She walked upto the temple that was there in hospital. Talking to DM. She was doing this from the first day she entered office. She also placed an idol of her onto her desk. It was pure form of her worship. Tears were falling from her eyes so much.


I couldn't see her like this. She walked back to them with a glass of water for her mom. Her face was red and eyes swollen because of crying. She was feeling it difficult now to control her emotions for her dad.


I so desperately wanted to console her. Give her a shoulder when she needed the most but dint know how to do it and if she would think something wrong about me. I went to the reception on second floor and cleared the bills. I turned around to go and she was there. Yes she was there standing. She broke the tears and suddenly ran towards me and hugged me.


I was shocked for a second. Did she…… Yes…… No….. She did…..? Really…...? Yes…...! Yes she hugged me. I was not dreaming. My eyes were shot out , I don't know what kind of emotion was it, shocked, surprised, amused, happy, dreamy, hot, sweet, strange, flying, mesmerizing, right, good, wrong, bad…..

No, no, no…. definitely not wrong and bad but it was really something else. Even Maa and Di used to hug me but I never felt this shocking feeling. Then what was this?


I could feel everything inside me all of these and dint know from where I was hearing a strange sound again. No this time it was not of anklets. It was something like drums banging on in my chest.


Now I could clearly hear a solid Dhak Dhak sound somewhere from not outside but inside and then realized it was my own heart that was beating so fast. I went all numb. It felt like I would pass out and faint on ground any moment.

Why? Why? Why it beat so fast? And why only when she was now so close to me? She was always there around in office but this thing never happened.


I was feeling her pain in real, in my heart. I was actually feeling her pain. And at the same time I was feeling so complete. Why? my other side of mind was polluting me. It was continuously hammering 'you are complete' along with that Dhak Dhak and same colour matching clothes.


I dint wanted to but automatically my hand got placed on her back to hug her in return to console her.

Oh! My God. This time I felt a solid heart beat with more louder Dhak Dhak. It felt like huge gaint sized drums in my ear. As if I have inserted a stethoscope in my ear and listening to my own heartbeats.

Dhak Dhak! Dhak Dhak! Dhak Dhak!


Precap:

The most intense realization of Arnav you guys have ever seen or read, not even in IPKKND.



Guys Shyam is not cruel or wicked in this FF and Plz send buddy request for updates as i cannot add everyone but if you send the request then i will accept it. And plz drop in you precious comments.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
loved it yaar
waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
👏👏thnaks...awesome...fabulous...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i can't believe it😕 is this really ASR!!!! so sweet 😛 khushi,i m so happy for u😃 you wrote wonderfully😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful...👏...mind talk was soo real...⭐️
loved it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was completely awwesome the topic u chose for ur FF was awesome and thanks for the PM continue sooon and once again thanksss😊

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