Love To Hate U-kriyansh SS #2 ch13 pg87 24'jun - Page 44

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow was the only word that escaped my mouth...


kria ki jagah i was gonna strangle rey for knowing abt sharon's likes and dislikes...

the "fir mile ya na mile" seared my insides...

simple yet touchy...

khud k saath saath kria ko bhi rula diya...


the shareyam convo was damn awesome...


i was jumpiing like hell all around...


swaron are such great friends...


seeing kria accept his love in her mind made me grin ear-to-ear until that nail-biting cliffhanger of yours...


m rite now anticipating that maybe it has something to do with the bet...



update soon...cant wait for it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome. . . .
Superb. . . . .
Thank god tat al the mes got sortd up. . .n nw the truth i known by kriya. . . . .
Bt wat was tat?the last line. . .plz no more twistz plz. . Or else i vl sink my heart out. . .
BTW,it was realy awsome. . .n nw m egarly waitng 4 the nxt update! . . .
So,wen r u going to update nxt?hmm. . . ? . ? . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow... Mazing two updates... Just loved them... Especially the part where rey and kriya were together in the room... Loved the way you expressed what kriya felt then... And rey's concern for kriya... Very beautifully written... Really looking forward to the next update :D... Hope you update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yippiie!!
Congoss for 10th chapter completion...:)

and updatee...Suppeer cute...:)I luvdd it...
aaaww the part where Rey wiped her tear was soo sswweet!!:$
n i'm supah happy that atleast Kria now
knows bout Rey n Sharon!!:D
and then..u stopped...Ya right!!O.o
really update sooon...
n thanx for PM...:)
Edited by Anyaa_012 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update but chota sahi naam for u cliffhanger queen lol
cant wait for d next update and congo for 10 updates🥳
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii!!! 😉 okay i know many of u are ready to kill me!! im sorry for cliff hangers! 😆 u c tat will keep readers on hold with chaps 😳😛

okay again today's chap is short..
i dont have time tats y short updates.. considering im updating daily inspite of xams i think tats justified 😳

okay meet me at the bottom of d post
😆


CHAPTER 11


My smile my happiness was once again vanished with few seconds.. wen I heard
'guyss be ready!! Im so gonna win the bet!!!' rey declared with proudness.. swayam and Sharon looked at each other..
BET ??? WTH ?? WAT BET ??
Ek hi toh bet lagi thi!!! and wo bet b jeet gaya tha!!!! Ussi bet ki wajah aaj tak AGS ke bajah uski PERSONAL ASSIST banke gum rhi hoon!!!!! Koi aur bet ?? W*F IS GOIN ON ??
'hahahahahha!! Kria ?? NOWAYS!!!' swayam chuckled
"OYEEE!!!!! 3 days more for prom night!! And watch out!! She will accept my proposal!!! Haan' rey defended himself
'REY ?? I doubt!!!! We all have seen wo tumse kitna nafrat karti hai infact tere naam se b chid jaati hai and wo aur tere pyaar mei pagal ? and tera proposal accept karna is an impossible task!!!! Rey just forget it' Sharon smirked
'OH HELLOOO!! Tum log na bas dekte rho!! REYAANSH SINGHANIA kabhi nhi haarta GOT IT ???'
Both swayam and Sharon shook their head In disbelief!! Rey was getting more defensive..
'Okay don't belive na ? deklenaa aaj wo meri saat date pe jaa rhi hai' rey said proudly
Swayam+Sharon :WHAT ??????
Rey smirked 'I TOLD U !!! I will never lose!!!! Sooo guys!! Ready hojana!! BET HAARNE KE LIYE!!'
'WILL C' swayam and Sharon groaned.. while rey started laughing hard and the duo also joined
I felt my heart break into MILLION pieces and all reflected his evil laughter!! How did I not know this ? he was always been a casinova!!!! Nd how how ????? how did I allow him to come closer to me ?????
I ran to my room jumped into my bed crying hard slamming the door behind..
I don't knw wether any tear was left in my eye!! Since the NEW YEAR (almost 6 months ) I have been in this terrible state crying alone at nites not countable how long.. but for me the pain love gave was also a bliss unless this day came!! I feel so stupid for falling into a guy who never knew people owned something called 'feelings' DAMNNN!!!
And all this was done just for some random bet ? was I a material ??? they cud bet on! And swayam ?? Sharon ??? who are my so called BESTIES for GOD SAKE!!!!!!
And WTH was dis bet anyway ???
It was then I remembered a particular convo of Rey and Swayam after I took over AGS position.. I was in fire escape crying out for my misery!!! Thinking why did I fall for a silly bet ??? due to wich I became Rey's Personal Assist DAMN!!!! And I found swayam and rey standing by the doors of fire escape.. swayam was laughing hard.
'dek bhai wo baaki ladkiyon ki tarah nhi hai!!!! and if u say she is having a crush on u .. I CAN NEVER BELIEVE IT and I wont believ either if u say ki TUJE B WO PASAND HAI!! array apne aap ko dekh Ladkiyan tujpe marti hai aur tu hai ki un sab ko chodke USKE peeche pada WATS WRONG WID U MAN!!' swayam said still laughing
'HOW CAN U TALK SO LIGHTLY ABOUT HER ? bada dost banke ghumta hena uski haaan!!!'
'dost hoon isliye bol rha hoon!! She is not like other gals and tuje b jaanta hoon tu kabse yeh pyaar wyaar mei vishwaas karne laga ?? im jus concerned about u too bas!!!!'
'DEKH DON'T TEST MY PATIENCE!! Mei bol rha hoona she likes me! Bas tu maan kyu nhi rha hai'
'how ?? kaise maanu !!!!'
'agar wo mere pyaar mei pagal hogayi toh ??'
'NO WAYS!!!'
'agar prom nite pe mei usse propose karu aur wo YES bole toh ??'
Swayam went silent
'Toh Toh apna Love sabke saamne confess kardoonga!!'
'WHAT ? TU AUR SABKE SAAMNE APNA LOVE CONFESS KAREGA ???'
'HAAN SABKE SAAMNE APNE GF KO KISS BE KAROONGA' swayam smirked
'FINE THEN !! IT'S A DEAL!!!' rey forwarded his hand
'agar usne reject kia toh ???'
'TOH MEI.. 1 Saal thak DANCE CHOD DOONGA!!!' rey said seriously..
I cud c swayam taken aback by rey's bet..!!
WTH I thought ?! REY DANCE KE BINA EK SAAL THAK ?? NO WAYS!! matlab at any cost he will win dis bet
And kiss ladki ke baare mei baat kar rhe the yeh ?? rey toh Sharon se pyaar krta hena ? and swayam wo kisse pyaar karta hai ??
CONFUSION!!!!!

and gradually all my efforts of telling dis matter to sharon went in vain and i forgot abt this .
I came back from tat incident! DAMNNN TAT GAL WAS ME ????
I HATE U I HATE U REY!! I cried harder..
As I wiped my tears I felt his foto frame under my pillow I took it out and started staring at it.. the trail of past ran thru my eyes..

i doubt im not a human bieing!!! was i matter to be betted wid ??

one bet wich made me get closer to rey wen i badly wanted to be away wid him

another bet wich is making go away from rey wen i badly wanted to be wid him


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tats all for today

was this a cliff hanger ??? i dont think so!!! i have cleared the last cliff hanger i left u in..

next update is a flashback of their college times.. il try my best to put whole FLAHSBACK in one single update!! all what happened that one bet because of wich kria became assist GS and second bet thingie is already revealed.

so i hope whole story fits in one update.. so next is gonna be big.. either il update today only or else 2mrw evening..

and yes vaishali im doing dis for u.. as u badly wanted to read PROM NITE chap!!!

but trust me u will regret it for asking me to update PROM NITE chap faster!!!!

and moreover i gues u have seen the half view of Rey's POV thru this ?? isnt it ?

NO DEMANDS BUT PLEASE DONT DISAPPOINT ME!!

review and likes time 😛

new readers pls add arsha_rockx in ur buddy list for pms 😳 sending requets to nams_arsha wll not help 😃

Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yippie first one to comment

awsm update

what type of friends swaron are !

in teenon ne toh kriya ko sirf bet purpose ke liye rakha hua hai!

Update soon
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res
unres...
wow do kiya update hai👏👏👏👏
meri gussa gayab...
the way u portrayed kria's feeling...
superb...
hmmm yeh bet ka funda intresting hai!!!!!
i really want kria to behave rudely with shareyam coz of her MU...
it will be fun to watch her agressiveness...
till now we have seen her in vulnerable state now i wanna see her as a heartless person...
thats my wish but story toh already prepared hai so can't force u on that...
and rahi baat prom night ki...
di agar aap nae bhi kehte toh hume pata tha ki prom night mai kuch acha nae hone wala...
sab uske baad hoga...
but i hope yeh thoda practical ho unlike movies ki ladki ko sach pata chalta hai and voh ladke ko rokne bhaagne lagti hai...
ab jaldi jaldi update karna...
and and and...
soon u gotta be my teacher
Edited by aditi061 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally u updated and dis 1 was not a cliffhanger shit yaar bechari kriya feel pity on her shit kaise frnds hai swaron aur rey woh bhi shit now cant wait for d next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES
UNRES

how cud rey do dis to kria !
Sumthin is cookin in ShaReyAm's mind !!
N Nams it was nt a cliffhanger !
M vry eager to read d nxt update !!
Edited by kriyanshluver1 - 13 years ago

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