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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 26
awesome part...
i always get the thrill to read this dear...
sigh...
especially Maan and Geet scenes are too wonderful...
Maan Geet
only Soni has got the power to handle the MSK...
her antics and words and action and attitude makes Maan go dumb...
her tying the tie and talking back and giving dhamkis and taking care were all so beautiful...
Dev is such a foodie...
kahi mota na hojaye and Soni and NT make him fast...
he he he...
hes too scared of his Bhabhi...
when Maan himself is scared and worried why wouldnt Dev...
Daadima and NT should get new packets of pop corn soon...
the dhamki will always work from now on and Maan will dance to Soni's tunes always...
Khushi's reaction to the phone was too funny...
and Maan reacting to the news was awesome...
Soni thanking Babaji and Daadima doing that and NT also should have done that and Maan would have got more confused...
so the habit has rubbed off on Maan too...
love this Soni character dear so sweet so bubbly so lovely...
lucky Maan...
now Daadima can rest and enjoy as Soni has taken the responsibility of Maan...
Arnav Khushi
wahan Soni aur yahan Khushi...
they women have got the control strong and hard on these guys...
Arnav is scared that Khushi might come to know about him...
Khushi's concern was so nice...
and OMG Maan knows about Arnav's daily schedule...
awesome...
the teasing should happen soon...
cont soon dear...

Thank you for such a long review!

Even I get thrilled when I read your review. He he he!

Soni has a hold on MSK because she thinks he is her future husband aur Maan kuch kar nahi sakta is bare mein! Ek Baar sach khulne do then MSK ke saamne Geet ki bolti kaise bandh hoti hai dekho!

Dev is not a foodie; he is just a lover of his bhabhi's ghee laden parathas!

Dev is a comic character here who will sometimes become serious when needed like in chapter 3 when Maan shouts at NT.

Wow! I cant believe you found Khushi and Maan's reaction to the phone funny! I never thought of myself as good comic writer but you liking it gave me a lot of confidence. I will try to put more comic scenes, now that I know I am good at it.

Arnav is scared of Khushi knowing his truth so he does her bidding. Ek baar sach ko saamne aa jaane do then the flirting Arnav from the serial (during Payal's mehendi, haldi etc.) will be back with a bang flustering Khushi into silence.

Thanks once again for your awesome review!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: additishah

Hey kalpana! I'm on my phone right now so won't post a long reply since u know how irritating it can be to type from a phone but just read ch.24 to 26 and oh my gosh they were just amazing. Maan and ASR fighting with their feelings. Them getting attracted to Geet and Khushi in the rain and their cute non-Jhoks are amazing. I like geet and khushi's bossy attitude as well :)

No problem! As long as you have reviewed, it does not matter when you review or how much long you review! Thanks for the compliments regarding the scenes! Thanks for reviewing!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

when will u update?
waiting...

Haila! First time someone is waiting for my next update!
I have read many reviews where readers wait for the writer to update but never thought someone would wait for my FF too. Thank you!
But we have net problem here. It is weak here but gets strong mostly at night. I generally replies smaller reviews through my mobile. And I read the longer updates through mobile and type it offline. Later I copy paste it at night. So, till the rainy season ends the updates will be at night except sometime when I have a strong net in afternoon like last saturday! Sorry for the delay!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uteem

update???????????????????????????????????

Please wait for few minutes. I am editing it.😳😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 27. ARNAV MISSES KHUSHI, GEET ATTACKED

Place - Arnav's room at Shantivan

It can be rightfully said that Arnav Singh Raizada was shocked when he saw his Afreen, also known to the world as Khushi, lying beside him on his bed smiling at him when he opened his eyes drowsily on an early Sunday morning. Infact, he was so shocked that he actually rolled off the bed and fell on the floor and shouted 'what the!' at the top of his voice. After convincing his Di, who had come into his room hearing his yell, that he was perfectly alright thank you very much, Arnav turned towards the bed only to notice Khushi missing. But this time Arnav was well prepared. He knew that Khushi he saw on his bed was just a mirage; an illusion and nothing more.

After his jogging session and taking his bath, Arnav, dressed in his casuals, walked towards his poolside. Unlike last Sunday, today he remembered that it was a Sunday. He may be obsessed with Afreen but he was not foolish enough to repeat the same mistake again. After all he was Arnav Singh Raizada; he had an image to maintain.

As he reached the glass door separating the room and the poolside, he stopped in shock. There sat his Afreen, dressed in the red saree he had gifted her, smiling at him. She was sitting by the pool and her left hand was into the water, playing with it. Arnav smiled tenderly at her. His brain told him that it was a hallucination; she was not here. She was to go to her home today. So, how can she be here? But he could not resist himself. He pushed open the sliding door and entered the pool area. He sat beside her. She smiled at him mischievously and splashed water on his face. "What the!", Arnav covered his face with his arm. After few seconds, Arnav realized that there were no water droplets on his face. He moved his arm from his face only to come across an empty poolside. He glanced at the pool and looked away only to jerk back and stare at the pool. There stood Afreen in the pool fully drenched, wearing The Red Saree. Arnav gulped and closed his eyes. She looked delectable! He opened his eyes as he heard her giggle. She looked at him and pouted. She raised her hand towards him expecting him to pull out of the water. To help her, Arnav extended his hand but could not reach her. He bent a little more to help her but unfortunately for him he lost his balance. "SPLASH!" Off went Arnav Singh Raizada into his own pool.

Arnav emerged from the water only to notice a giggling Di who was standing by the poolside with a towel in her hand. Anjali kept on giggling keeping her right hand on her mouth. Arnav glared at her but his glare had no effect on its victim because of his dripping and messy hair. To Anjali her Chote looked less like a tycoon and more like a drowned puppy. She sat down on the recliner and tried to catch her breath. "Enough, Di!", Arnav told her as he waded his way through the water towards the edge of the pool. This set off Anjali again and she started laughing. After few minutes of non stop laughter, Anjali took a deep breath and spoke, "Ek toh poolside pe aake baithte hain phir paani ko dekhke muskuraate hain, phir aap haath badhaate hain, phir paani mein gir jaate hain. Ho kya raha hai yahaa par Chote?", she wriggled her eyebrows. "Stop it, Di!", Arnav grumbled as he walked past her. His dialogue again got Anjali laughing.

As he left a laughing Anjali behind, Arnav decided that he had enough. He realized how strong Khushi's hold on him was! He kept on seeing her everywhere. This was not good! He had to get rid of this obsession! He has to be away from her! Yes! He has to stay away! No more Afreen in his life! He had it with her. From the time he had met her he had been obsessed with her and this obsession was turning unhealthy. No! No More, Arnav! No More of Khushi! No More of Afreen! He heard his phone ring. He went and checked the screen. It was Khushi calling. He felt his anger going up. He fumed. NO! I won't allow you to have such a strong hold on me, Khushi Kumari Gupta! I am ASR and no one can control me, not even you, Afreen; not even you! He disconnected her call.

Place - Bus Stand

Khushi looked at her mobile in shock. How dare Arnavji cut her call! She tried calling again but he kept on cutting her call. She huffed; then thought that he must be in a meeting. But today was Sunday! How can he have a meeting today! She tried calling again but it was of no use. He refused to pick up and kept on cutting the call. Uff! Rakshas Kahin Ke!, Khushi thought in anger and walked off to the bus. Jaise kal woh baat kar rahe the lag raha tha ki jaise sach mein humaare baghair mar jaayenge! Par ab dekho humein bhool bhi gaye! Rakshas kahin ke!

Place - Khurana Mansion

It was Sunday night and Soni was sleeping peacefully. The day had passed beautifully for her starting with an argument with Maan over parathas and ending with an argument over lassi during dinner. Overall it was a productive day for Soni and she had happily gone to sleep. But the night seemed scary for her. It turned the God of sleep decided to give her a nightmare. Whether it was a nightmare or a memory only we know!

Soni was running as fast as she could but they were gaining ground; they meaning the men following her. She noticed that she was in a jungle and the men following her were carrying swords and sticks. Her face seemed covered by her Duppatta and she noticed that she was wearing a blue salwar kameez, the one which she had got in the hospital. She ran while she looked back frequently. They were gaining ground on her. She soon reached the main road and saw a jeep being driven on the road. She ran towards the jeep and came in front of it. The jeep stopped an inch away from her and she slumped on the bonnet tired of running so much. Next thing Soni knew was that she was being pulled up by her arm and came face to face with none other than Maan.

Soni shifted in duress in her sleep and the scene in her dream shifted. She was standing by the jeep and Maan was fighting against the men. He saved her! Soni thought. She turned and tried to run away but she was caught by one of the men. She struggled to free herself when the man whispered in her ear, "Ab kaise bachegi mujhse Geet?" and she felt a pain in the back of her head. She realized that the man who had held her had hit her from behind on her head. The last thing she saw while she was fainting was the man checking her and declaring her dead. No! She was not dead! Please don't let me die! Please don't! Soni pleaded.

Soni woke up with a jerk. That nightmare seemed quite real. She pressed her right hand against her chest asking her heart to calm down. She could not sleep anymore. She looked here and there. She was scared; scared that the men will enter Khurana Mansion. She grimaced. She wanted Maan! She wanted Maan near her. Only then she would feel safe. She scrambled out of the bed and ran out. She ran in the direction of Maan's room.

Maan was out of his room to get some water. After taking the water from kitchen he walked towards his room only to hear a whispered "Maan", from behind him. He turned around and noticed see a pale Soni who gave him a smile of relief and hugged him tightly. Maan's brow furrowed. What was wrong? Why she reacted in such a manner? Suddenly, her body shook as she sobbed on his vest. Maan was beyond worry now. He pulled her away from him and picked her up. She caught hold of his vest tightly and buried her face in his chest. He took her into his room and placed her on her bed. He turned to get her some water only to be pulled back by her hand on his vest.

Soni panicked as she felt Maan turn away. No! He can't leave her. She pulled him back and hugged him. After few minutes he hugged her back. "Kya hua Soni?", Maan asked after few minutes. Soni pulled herself away from him but kept her hold on his vest. She looked below and swallowed. "Ek sapna tha; ek bahut bura sapna. Kuch gunde mere peeche hain aur main jungle mein daud rahi hoon. Phir Mujhe ek gaadi dikhi aur main use rokne ki koshish kar rahi hoon. Woh gaadi ruhkti hai aur main uspe gir jaati hoon. Phir ek haath Mujhe pakadke kheechta hai aur mere saamne aap khade rehte ho. Phir sapna badal gaya. Aur main usi gaadi ke paas khadi hoon. Aap un gundo se lad rahe ho aur main wahaan se bhaagne ki koshish karti hoon. Par ek gunda Mujhe pakadta hai aur mere sar pe vaar karta hai. Aur main behosh ho jaati hoon." She hugged him again and sobbed on his shirt not noticing that Maan's whole body had turned stiff and his face had gone pale. Soni closed her eyes and mumbled, "Yeh kaisa sapna tha, Maan?"

Maan hugged her back as he realized that she had seen not a nightmare but a memory from her past; a past scene in which they had met the first time. Maan hugged her tight as he remembered her limp body and faint pulse. He closed his eyes wishing the image to go away. He hugged her tighter assuring his heart that she was alive and well in front of him. As she asked him the question, he replied, "Ek bahut bura sapna tha aur kuch nahi. Use bhool jaao aur so jaao."

After one hour, Soni went to sleep and Maan went to the couch and lied there. Her memory was coming back. Doctor Puri had warned him that she would soon remember everything. But he never felt the time would be so close; the time for their parting. He closed his eyes wishing that she would never remember anything and she would stay here always with him.

Place - Arnav's Cabin at AR

It was Monday morning and Arnav reached his Office with bloodshot eyes and tired mind. He had tossed and turned the whole night missing Khushi and torn between calling her and ignoring her. And the worse thing was that the whole day Khushi kept on calling him every hour. Never had he felt so guilty of ignoring someone. Soon, he immersed himself into his work determined to forget Afreen. But unfortunately, today was just not his day and at lunch hour he realized the futility of trying to concentrate. Suddenly, his phone rang and he looked at the screen. It was Khushi calling. Unknowingly a smile came on his face. He was about to pick up the phone when he remembered his decision to ignore her. He disconnected the call. The whole day passed away with Khushi calling and Arnav ignoring and trying to work. Arnav did not know what was harder to do; ignoring his Afreen or trying to concentrate on work.

It was evening when Arnav took his car and started to drive home. He reached his destination and got out of the car only to stop in his tracks. Instead of coming to Shantivan, he had reached KC. He was shocked. He sat back in his car and rested his head on his steering wheel. No! He cannot do this! He accepted defeat! Arnav Singh Raizada accepted defeat! He accepted that he cannot be without his Afreen and he can't fight against the hold she had on him! He can't ignore her! He just can't! He took his phone and dialed her number eager to hear her voice. But as I said, today was just not his day! Khushi had disconnected his call. He got a message, "Hum aapse naraaz hai kyunki aapne humaara phone kal se nahi uthaaya aur waapas call bhi nahi kiya. Ab hum aapse Dilli aakar hi baat karenge." Arnav groaned and slammed his forehead on the horn. For next half hour he kept on calling Khushi and she kept disconnecting the calls. "Damn!", Arnav banged his hand on the steering wheel and drove himself home. Poor Raizadas and Jhas! They had to suffer a moody Arnav for the whole evening who kept on snapping at them every other minute for one or another reason.

It was dinner time and the whole family was eating quietly after facing the wrath of Arnav for the whole evening. Once the dinner ended, Anjali went to the kitchen and brought out some Jalebis for the family. Arnav, who was still fuming at being ignored by his Afreen, looked at his Di as she came out of kitchen with Jalebis in her hand. His face softened and a smile came on his face. Jalebis! She loved making Jalebis! Arnav thought dreamily. Anjali kept the Jalebis on the dining table telling everybody she was craving them so Shyamji had bought them for her. Unfortunately, she could not eat them all so she requested others to share it with her. Everyone happily took a piece except Arnav. He remembered how Khushi had made a special sugar free just so that he could eat them without worry! Oh foolish he was to ignore her! Arnav felt anger at himself. Suddenly, he sensed someone staring at him and looked up only to be shocked. Afreen stood in front of him, thankfully not in the red saree. After yesterday's vision of her being drenched and standing in his pool, he was wary of seeing her in the red saree. He had no idea what he would do if he saw her in them. She was wearing an orange suit today but her hair was kept open just the way he liked, Arnav noticed absentmindedly. She smiled at him and picked up the plate of Jalebis. She picked one Jalebi and took a bite. She enjoyed it and took another bite. After finishing the whole Jalebi, she kept the plate, picked another one and offered him. He raised his hand to take it. "Chote?", Arnav came out of Afreen land and looked around at his family. All were looking at him and his hand in shock. He looked at his hand which was hovering around the Jalebi plate. Oh Shit! He was daydreaming again! How should he get out of this now? Arnav wondered. Suddenly, he got an idea. He picked up the Jalebi, got out of his chair and went near his Di. He placed the Jalebi near her mouth and spoke, "Ek Maama ke taraf se ek apne bhaanje ke liye." Anjali got teary eyed and ate the Jalebi from his hand. Bach gaye! Arnav mentally wiped his forehead.

Place - Khurana Mansion

Maan entered the house fully tired. It was Monday and Monday tended to be tiring as it was the day after the holiday. Maan walked towards his room only to encounter a sweetly smiling Soni on the stairs. "Coffee lenge?" Maan raised an eyebrow. Yeh kya ho raha hai? He nodded his head and walked into his room. He stopped in his tracks as he noticed the things lying on the bed. His vest, track pants and towel were kept on the bed. He rolled his eyes. Pehle office ke kapde chunne par haq jamaaya, ab raat ke kapde bhi chunne ka haq bhi le liya! Thank God, underwear chunne par haq nahi jamaaya! Maan rolled his eyes. He took the things and walked off to take a bath. As he came out, he noticed Soni sitting on the bed with his coffee in her hand smiling at him. Agar maine kapde nahi pehne hote toh? Kamre pe aane se pehle yeh thoda soch nahi sakti, Maan wondered and shook his head at Soni. As he neared her, she handed him his coffee. He took it and sat down to drink it. As he drank it he noticed her hovering near him. He could not resist himself. "Kuch kaam tha?", he asked her. She nodded at first but then she shook her head vigorously. Maan huffed. This girl has gone mad. "Aap bahut thak gaye honge. Main aapke pair dabaa doon?", Soni asked him sweetly. Maan's eyes widened. Yeh kya naya drama hai? He took a deep breath when he remembered Dev had complained once that the only time NT gave him too much respect and attention was when she wanted something from him. "Toh NT ne tumhein maska lagaana bhi sikha diya?", Maan asked Soni and she replied, "Aapko kaise pata chala ki NT Di ne hi Mujhe yeh idea…", Soni bit her tongue as Maan smirked.

Maan raised one of his eyebrows and Soni looked away. He kept the cup on the side table, stood up and caught hold of her shoulders. "Kya chaahiye tumhein Soni?", he asked her with uncharacteristic tenderness in his voice. Soni was shocked to hear the tenderness in his voice and looked up. Your attention and some time with you! I want to know you more! Soni wanted to shout at him but she calmly said, "Mujhe park jaana hai. Pichli baar gaye the, woh waali." Maan was about to protest knowing that it might be dangerous for her but noticed the sadness in her face as if she was expecting him to refuse. He realized that she rarely got a chance to get out and was cooped in the house 24/7. He sighed and nodded. "Par kal chalenge. Theek hai?" Soni smiled brightly at him and proceeded to surprise him by hugging him, kissing him on his cheek and running away. She ran off not noticing a certain Dadi standing there looking into the room and eavesdropping on their conversation. Maan was shocked by Soni's gesture and sat down on the bed. He took the coffee cup and started drinking not noticing that the cup was empty.

Dadima giggled at Maan's shocked expression and walked off. Where were NT and her popcorns when you need them?

Place - Poolside at Shantivan

Anjali sighed as she lied on the poolside recliner. She missed this; sitting by the poolside and relaxing; taking a breath, forgetting the world. But these days, she was too busy with looking over the household. It was easier to take care earlier but with her pregnancy she tended to be tired easily and hence, she never had time to come to poolside and relax. Today, Maami, seeing her so worn out in the evening, had sent her over to the poolside taking over the responsibilities for the evening dinner and sharing them with Naani allowing Anjali to have some moments for herself. But, even they were getting older, how long they would help her in such a manner? Once, the kid arrived, it will be tougher to handle the household. Anjali decided that once Akash gets married she is going to handover the responsibilities to Payal and concentrate on her kid and husband. For years her priority had been her Chote and Chutke, now that Chutke will have Payal, she will only have to worry about Chote. Oh how she wished Chote would also get married! And then she can focus on her husband. She knew she was being unjust to her husband by putting him third on her priority list even though he did not mind it and also accepted it, but she loved her brothers too much to not to worry. She had promised herself that once her kid brothers got married she would give her full attention to Shyamji and their kid, but the way things were going it seemed she was always going to worry for her Chote. If only her Chote got married, the household would have a badi bahu who would handle her Chote and the whole house. She wanted Chote to get married so that he can experience love the way she was experiencing it but Chote seemed to be not interested in it. But Anjali did not loose faith. She knew that one day; Devi Maiyya will make Arnav yearn for a married life and a partner for forever. That day, Anjali would be the happiest person in the whole world. She smiled, quickly sent a prayer to Devi Maiyya to make her wish come true and put on the radio which Maan had gifted her on her recent birthday. As soon as the songs started, she relaxed and closed her eyes, not knowing that her Devi Maiyya was going to fulfill her wish pretty soon.

An hour later, Arnav entered his room. His Di was sitting by the poolside enjoying some songs. As the door to the poolside was open, he could hear some commentaries about the new movie about to be released this Friday. After changing into casuals, he walked towards the bed. Today was Tuesday and Afreen would be back by Thursday. He couldn't wait to meet her. He wanted to hear her voice, look at her, and see her smile. Arnav sighed sadly. Because of his ego, now his Afreen refused to pick up the phone. Oh how wished he could just hear her once! Just once! But Khushi seemed as stubborn as him; may be more than him. Didn't she miss him? Doesn't she wish to talk to him? He pulled out his mobile and opened her photo. He smiled at her face and traced them with his fingers, his fingers lingering on her lips. He closed his eyes as the commentaries from the radio ended and a song began with some melodious music.

Arnav opened his eyes only to notice Afreen sitting on his bed, her hair open, dressed in a pastel yellow colored saree. He smiled at her and she smiled back.

So Jaaoon Main Tum Agar

Mere Khaabon Mein Aao

Mere Khaabon Mein Aao

Arnav sat up on the bed.

Kho Jaaoon Main Tum Agar

Mere Yaadon Mein Aao

Mere Yaadon Mein Aao

She blushed under his gaze and looked away.

Jaagi Nazar Mein

Soyi Nazar Mein

Har Pal Sanam Tum Jhilmilaao

He caught hold of her chin and made her face him.

So Jaaoon Main Tum Agar

Mere Khaabon Mein Aao

Mere Khaabon Mein Aao

She closed her eyes and her illusion vanished.

Kho Jaaoon Main Tum Agar

Mere Yaadon Mein Aao

Mere Yaadon Mein Aao

Arnav looked here and there searching for her as guitar and flute notes wafted into the room. He lied back on the bed when he felt someone's gaze on him. He turned to his left and saw Khushi lying down beside him, smiling at him. He smiled back.

Meri Khushi Mein Shaamil Raho Tum

Is Zindagi Mein Shaamil Raho Tum

Yun Toh Hai Laakhon Armaan Dil Mein

Mehfil Mein Jaane Mehfil Raho Tum

He went closer to her.

Hoton Se Mere

He cupped her face and was about to kiss her.

Shaam Savere

She vanished again and Arnav in shock looked around.

Yun Hi Sanam Tum Muskuraao

Arnav closed his eyes.

So Jaaoon Main Tum Agar

Mere Khaabon Mein Aao

Mere Khaabon Mein Aao

Kho Jaaoon Main Tum Agar

Mere Yaadon Mein Aao

Mere Yaadon Mein Aao

Arnav sighed as the music started again and got up from the bed and went to his cupboard. He pulled out the red saree and stared at it. He closed his eyes imagining her in it.

Banke Sitara Aankhon Mein Chamko

In Aati Jaati Saanson Mein Mehko

Bas Jaao Aake Tum Meri Jaan Mein

Dil Banke Mere Seene Mein Dhadko

He hugged the saree as if he was hugging her.

Tum Mujhko Chaaho

He imagined her hugging him back.

Bas Mujhko Chaaho

He imagined burying his face in her hair.

Saare Jahaan Ko Bhool Jaao

He came out of his dream and looked at the saree sadly. He kept the saree back and lied on the bed again.

So Jaaoon Main Tum Agar

Mere Khaabon Mein Aao

Mere Khaabon Mein Aao

He closed his eyes.

Kho Jaaoon Main Tum Agar

Mere Yaadon Mein Aao

Mere Yaadon Mein Aao

He felt her kiss him on his cheek.

Jaagi Nazar Mein

Soyi Nazar Mein

Har Pal Sanam Tum Jhilmilaao

He opened his eyes but she was not there.

So Jaaoon Main Tum Agar

Mere Khaabon Mein Aao

Mere Khaabon Mein Aao

Kho Jaaoon Main Tum Agar

Mere Yaadon Mein Aao

Mere Yaadon Mein Aao

Mere Khaabon Mein Aao

Mere Yaadon Mein Aao

"Please come back soon, Afreen. Main tumhein dekhe bina nahi reh sakta.", Arnav whispered.

Place - the Park near Khurana Mansion

Maan grimaced as Soni held his hand tightly in excitement as they walked into the park. He looked at her glowing face and sighed. As long as she was happy, he did not mind the pain in her hand. They sat on a bench in a secluded spot away from the crowd and Soni, as usual, started looking around looking at the kids playing. Maan smiled seeing her happy. She turned to look at him and he looked away. She turned back to observing her surroundings and Maan went back to his new pastime; staring at her. Suddenly, Maan's phone rang. He looked at the screen. Aditya! Aditya would not have called him after hours unless the matter was urgent. He picked up the phone and started talking.

Soni looked at Maan miffed. Har waqt Kaam Kaam Kaam! Park mein aaye hai toh thoda baat karein, saath mein waqt bitaayein par nahi! Inhein toh bas apne kaam ki padi hai! She frowned at him and wandered off. Let him worry about her! Phir unhein meri kadar pata chalegi!

Maan ended the call and looked around. Where was Soni? He looked around but she was not near by. He panicked. He looked around again in worry. What if the goons…… NO! Maan tried to stop his heart from beating fast and started looking around.

Soni giggled from behind the bushes as she noticed Maan panicking and looking around. She smirked. This was a well deserved jhatka to Maan Singh Khurana from future Mrs. Khurana. Hmmph! Maan slowly wandered near to her hiding place with a horrified look on his face. She sighed as he noticed the expression on his face. He was very much worried for her. And she could not do this to him. No, she could not trouble him anymore. This much was enough. She stood up from her hiding place and was about to call him when a hand out of nowhere covered her mouth. She felt another hand on her stomach and a body pressed against her back. She panicked and started struggling against the hold. She tried to speak but the hand on her mouth muffled her voice. Maan was very close to her but he was facing away from her. If only he turned! But before Maan turned, Soni was dragged away from the place.

Maan turned around. He had felt her! He had felt that Soni was right behind him. He dragged his hand through his hair in worry. Kahaan ho tum, Soni? Kahaan ho tum?

Soni was shocked as she looked into the eyes of her captor. The eyes seemed familiar. The man had dragged her behind the water tank and pressed her against the wall. He also had a gun pointed towards her head. She gulped. He removed his hand from her mouth as he spoke, "Ek aawaaz bhi nikaali toh tere aashiq ki jaan le loonga." She remained silent as he uttered those words that meant her Maan's life was in danger. "Tujhe kya laga Geet, main tujhe dhoond nahi paoonga?", he asked her and she felt her heart beat faster. "Main Geet nahi hoon.", she whispered quietly. "Kya kahaan tune?", her captor asked leeringly. "Main Geet nahi hoon.", she said in a firm voice. He laughed at her. "Tu paagal hai? Ya kahin tu Mujhe bewakoof toh nahi samajhti? Tu Geet hai, Geet. Geet Handa. Hoshiarpur ki Geet Handa. Yeh jo tere haath pair par chaabuk ke nishaan hai na, sab mere aur mere saathiyon ke diye hue hain. Samjhi!!!", he roared at her and slapped her hard. She felt blood coming out of her mouth. She stared at him shocked. What was he saying? If what he said was true, was Maan lying to her? If Maan was true, then how did the captor know about her marks? Soni strained her mind to make a head or tail out of the whole mess. But as she thought about it more and more, all she felt was a massive headache from the back of her head where she had been hit and lost her memory. She held her hand on her head and the captor smirked. "Who ghaav bhi mere hi saathi ne tujhe diye hain." She looked at him with her eyes wide. He started laughing like a mad man. But his laughter was cut off when they heard a voice shout, "SONIII!!!!" Both of them turned towards the shout and saw Maan running towards them. The captor panicked and looked at her. If he could not kill he would hurt her atleast. He hit the butt of the pistol on her head and ran away. Soni felt the darkness threatening her vision. She touched her head with her hand and pulled the hand in front of her vision. The hand was covered in blood. The last she saw before fainting was Maan leaning over her asking her worriedly whether she was okay.

P.S. Just a month back on this date, I posted the chapter where Maan scolded Geet making her upset, while Khushi acted making Arnav angry! Do you remember the scenes?

P.P.S The song is from the movie Who Lamhe released in 2006 featuring Shiney Ahuja and Kangana Ranaut. It is sung by Kunal Ganjawala. Has anybody heard this song?

Precap - Iss Pyar Ko Main Kya Naam Doon

Rabba Mere Rabba Rabba

Rabba Mere Rabba

Arnav realizes that he is in love!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it
geet getting nightmares of her past..nd maan feeling ibsecured
loved arnav moments
khuski ke pyar mein pagal.
Nd soni ke new drame everyday
nd soni ka maak ho gya serious
kya hoga
memoty wspis aayegi aur wat
waiting waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago

kuch nehi ho sakta arnav ka...na door rahe sakte na pass ane dete...karen toh kya karen...

m feeling bad fr maan...agar geet bhool gaye esse toh...nehi aisa nehi hona chahiye...

awesome update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
super part love it the songsuper how i wished anjali saw it hahhah and geet attack mhhh waiitng for more
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Posted: 13 years ago
hats off to you dear that was one hell of a good not just good but fantastic update
its already been a month to the time both geet and arnav were mad at maan and khushi ohh time sure is going quick with this ff but i hope not too quick and this ff ends but i know there is still time for that yet
this separation track for our arhi was definetly needed i mean how else will arnav realises the importance of khushi in his life
wasnt that too funny when he was seeing her everywhere bechare arnav toh sach mein deewane ho gaye the khushi ke peeche
par phir in true ASR style he goes and ruins things for himself because he didnt want to be affected by afreen frogetting and not realising its too late for that nowchalo at least khushi made sure that he regretted cutting he phone on her and she did it to him as well making him even more desperate for him to hear her voice
uiima yeh kya ho gaya geet ke saath great as if it wasnt bad enough she has lost her memory but now she is attacked again
but one small query will she when she gains consciousness remember the talk she had with her attacker or not because you said she wont remember anythign till payash engagement
oh boy maan wishes she never gains her memory back so she stays with him forever but dear that cant be possible for too long can it but then you cant really blame the poor guy now can you since he is bitten by the love bug which soon even arnav is going to succumb to
now that is will be really worth reading when arnie realises he is in love but what the bigger question is what will he do with that knowledge
hope to get my answers soon
see you thursday and thanx for pm
sorry if my comments gave you headache

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