Abhiya SS : deal of love ch 10 upd pg 81 - Page 48

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Posted: 14 years ago
@ nafi , neetu , yumna , sheenu , Trisha , arunsunita : m sooo sorry for being late , schools just started soo was busy with activities , will upd tomorrow pakka 😃
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Chapter 9 :

IN CAR TRIP TO MAHABLESWAR

samrat and gunjan were just chit chatting while misha and kabir were playing psp 3 and piya was looking out of window and abhay was looking at her lovingly .

Samrat : chashmish don't u feel great

Gunjan : why would I feel great ? Aisa Kya hai yaha

Samrat : u sitting beside me chashmish ! Girls yearn for the this chance

Gunjan laughs softly : jao jao , I wonder who girl want to be with u , Pura din toh u r lying lazily at home , office mein kyu nai jate ?

Samrat thinking : main kyu nahi jata ? ... Kyu main nahi jata ? ... Why don't I go ? Why why ?areee haa my bhabhi is angry and my best friend abhay is pareshaan how can I go ? I m loyal friend

Abhay spoke from back : oye loyal friend my foot , I know tu yaha pe kyu hai ! U r here for ..

Samrat cutted him by throwing a water bottle at him : main tere liye hi Hoon !

Piya : abhay mujhe toh batau samrat yaha kyu hai !

Abhay : sach batau mujhe nahi pata , main toh Aise hi guess kar raha tha

Piya rolles her eyes : u mad abhay

Abhay : ya atleast is bahane u talked with me ( then he started singing song piya o re piya and tat too in piya's ears )

Piya nodding her head in no : mein pareshaan pareshaan pareshaan pareshaan !

Later piya fell asleep on abhay's shoulder , abhay was looking at her he kissed her forehead and he also fell asleep on piya's head and later piya woke up she looked at the sleeping abhay and thought " why does he looks so cute when he sleeps " then gave him a big smile and closed her eyes again . There was big break which woke up abhiya , abhay looked up and found tat kabir was driving car while misha was fighting with him on sum random reason & samrat and gunjan were sitting on second row staring at each other , abhay and piya widened there eyes seeing sajan staring each other .
Abhay : yeh Kya ho raha hai bhai ?

Samrat : kuch kuch nai pyaar ho raha hai

Gunjan hit samrat : yeh bakwaas kar raha hai jiju we just playing staring game ( just then samrat snapped his finger in front of gunjan's eyes by which gunjan blinked her eyes )

Samrat : I won I won !

Gunjan : tats was cheating ok

Samrat : everything is fair in love and war

Piya : btw how much time more to reach there and where r we going in mahableshwar ?

Kabir : 2 hours more bhabhi and we going to Kate's point first btw mishu I hav a surprise for u

Misha : Kya ?

Kabir : waha jaake pata chal jaayega .

After almost 3 hours they finally reached there destination Kate's point , misha stretched her hand " finally !!!! " said misha , they were having there fun time eating and chatting they also played the blind fold game and then abhay took out his camera and after tat he was unstoppable he constantly clicked piya pictures while piya was running from him , it was like game of chor police , " I don't remember the last time I came on holiday " said abhay , " u know what even I dont remember " said kabir playfully , " oye guys Ab where r we going " asked misha , " boating ! " replied kabir " no mujhe boating nai jaana I wanna go shopping " replied an excited gunjan , " why u girls soo crazy about shopping huh ? " said samrat , ' why u boys soo crazy about wrestlings , video game , bikes , cars ... " replied gunjan , " ok ok u win I lose , Khush ? Btw abhay why u look soo lost ?" asked samrat , " kuch nai yaar woh shaadi ki 7 hour shopping yaad aagayi and crazy srk movie after tat , wat an headache it was ! " said abhay just then piya hit him on his legs with her shoes " dare u say anything about my srk and tat movie was awesome " said piya angrily and went away and everyone burst out laughing seeing the poker face of abhay , " chal mish will show u the surprise " said kabir , they all went outside and saw 4 shiny bikes , " oh my god !!! " said an super excited misha , " u like it ? " asked kabir " I loved it kabir wow tat blue one is my " as u wish " . Then all three boys took there bikes while misha took 4 th one , while gunjan and piya was staring misha indicating her too take them along with her bike ," wat ? I m not taking u both ok , I love riding alone only soo aage badho ! " said misha , " chashmish no other option u know ,u hav to cum along with me " said samrat , gunjan looking at other side finally sat along with samrat on bike , " ok fine but drive slowly " said gunjan , and samrat along with gunjan went kabir also was gone only abhiya were left , abhay horned the bike indicating piya to sit , piya having no other option finally sat but at distance , " u know my piyu u just can't sit at tat distance u will hav to hold me anyways " " just drive abhay " " ok then " , abhay started the escalator in full speed and to prevent from falling piya had to hold abhay tightly " told u ! Waise piya wanna see sum stunts " said abhay and after tat he removed his hands from bike " abhay please concentrate on driving mujhe nahi dekhne yours stunt ! " , " u didn't like this one Tikh hai then will show u another one " said abhay and he started driving bike at very very very high speed , piya was getting relli scared and she hide her face in abhay's shoulders " please abhay drive normally , u scaring me" said piya , " come on piya , I m driving after such a long time and u telling me not to hav fun " said abhay increasing speed , the actual reason of abhay doing this was piya , with the Increasing speed piya use to hold abhay tighter and abhay loved tat , and after sum time roaming around city all of them reached the open shopping market where many many many shops were there with diff types of items , loud music was playing one of shop , food stalls were also there and whether was just perfect .

Gunjan : this looks fun

Piya : it surely does

Misha : whatever me going to eat , not interested in shopping , koi aa raha hai mere Saath ?

Kabir : I m cuming , mee too hate shopping oye sammy tu bhi chal abhay ki toh majboori hai ( abhay glares at him ) why u staying here for shopping

Sammy : main woh ... Actually I m not hungry and from many days hav not buy anything soo m staying here

Kabir : as u wish

They all were having own lil fun time , trying diff things laughing and giggling , abhay and piya buyed a lot of things , although piya was angry with abhay still she bought many many many things for abhay , abhay was making piya laugh constantly , they even had pani puri aka gol gappa and also barf gola ( yum ! ) , even sajan and mishka had a lovely time , misha and kabir had an competition of eating and also buyed few funky stuff and played few games while gunjan and samrat were having a lovely time shopping with each other ,samrat even buyed balloons and chocolates for gunjan , both were slowly having a change of feeling for each other , then abhay suddenly went sum where on his bike , piya was worried for him and angry too tat he didn't told her he was leaving .

Piya : samrat u know where abhay hav gone

Samrat : he has gone for sum imp work bhabhi he will be back soon

Piya : how long will he take ?

Samrat : pata nahi , join us na bhabhi we going to eat sumthing

Piya : no I m fine , I will just wait here

Gunjan : no ways u cuming with us chalo

Piya went along with them but she didn't sit she was just standing there looking at the road Hoping soon she would see abhay cuming as she was getting bored without him although sammy gunjan kabir and misha were with her after almost 2 hours abhay came back and saw piya sitting on chair quietly , he slowly went their and kissed her cheeks , piya was hell shocked and she screamed .

Piya : abhay where were u ? Itni der kyu Lagi ? I was sooo bored ! And wat where u doing huh ? And u know U scared me , how can u abhay ?

Abhay: sorry sorry sorry Ab chalo mere Saath

Piya : kaha ?

Abhay winked at her : it's a surprise so Ab sada sawaal mat pucho and chalo . Bye samrat gunjan misha kabir , dont wait for us .

Before piya could say sumthing abhay grabbed her hands took her away on the bike.

Piya : abhay where the hell are we going ?

Abhay smirked : no no piya we not going to hell we going to heaven

Piya : u and your silly jokes


Then after half an hour they reached away from city Between many trees and plants stood a big magnificent house decorated with blue and yellow lightings and daisy flowers , a beautiful table was outside the house which had candles and flower , soft music was playing everything was just perfect ! Piya was touched seeing all this .

Piya : it's beautiful abhay , u did all this ?

Abhay Jokingly : na na , mere bhoot ne Kiya

Piya observing everything : hahaha very funny , so this is to attempt to earn my forgiveness Huh ?

Abhay liftting his hand asking for her hand : you can say tat

Then he took piya towards the table where there was a big margarita pizza and 2 bowls of red pasta with cold drinks , then he pulled a chair for piya and piya sat looking impressed with abhay finally abhay sat on his chair

Piya : Menu is great abhay , I m lovin it

Abhay : I knew u would love it , I know your all choices

Piya : waise abhay can I ask u a question , i always wondered how at such young age could set such a huge business I mean did u got in heir of your dad

Abhay sighed , he looked at other side and again looked at piya : well tat ... Actually tat was because my one oath

Piya let out small giggle : oath ? What oath ? M


Abhay : well when I was like 17 my mom passed away cause of accident , dad was very very depressed and slowly our business detroited , dad sold our house for my study fees then one day my dad learnt that he was suffering from cancer , it was at initial stages but because of no money , my couldn't afford the expensive treatment and after sum times I lost my dad , tat day I took oath , because of money I lost my dad now I will work soo hard and earn sooo much money tat even my seven generation would not face the problem

Piya's eyes were almost teary : hats off to you abhay , sooo much happened with you still you didn't broke u fought with situation

Abhay : all because of samrat and kabir , u don't How much they supported me piya

Piya : they r your true friends abhay , u know abhay why I decided to meet u without seeing your photo or even without knowing u

Abhay : why ?

Piya : cause my so called dad told me tat it was my mom's Last wish tat I marry her best friends son

Abhay : so much for your mom , u really love her Piya

Piya : whatever she did for me uske samne yeh kuch bhi nahi

Abhay : matlab ?

Piya : My mom was my everything , when I was 15 me and my mom where gone to shopping , then a bike driver driving recklessly came towards me , he was about crush me but my mom pushed me and she was at my place , she died on the spot ( a tear rolled down piya's cheeks )
I killed her abhay

Abhay : no piya , why do u think like tat , it's not at all your fault

Piya : if I wouldn't be there then my mom would not hav to sacrifice her life for me

Abhay : it's tat stupid bikers fault not yours ok

Piya did not say anything , After a lil silence abhay asked piya's hand for dance , piya gave him a warm smile gave her hand , abhay played the song dil ibaadat song and hey both started dancing along tunes , both where lost in each others eyes experiencing the pain of their past lives at the end of song , abhay holded piya from her waist

Abhay still holding her said softly : please piya forgive me , let everything be back to normal , cum back home piya , I promise it will never happen again

Piya : and agar hua toh

Abhay smiled : then misha ka bat haina , I will myself give u tat myself ,u can kill me to death

Piya kept her hand on abhay's lips : don't talk about death abhay ,fine I forgive u

Abhay gave her a big smile and slowly said : u know piya I never told u but I love you piya , I really love u from my heart , actually pyaar toh main tumse tabhi karne laga tha when I first met you , I m nothing without u piya

Piya ( a tear rolled down her eyes ) : I so long waited for this moment abhay , I love u too ,I cannot live without you abhay ,I love you

Then they had an bone crashing hug , almost after 5 mins they parted and abhay lovingly cupped her face both were just lost in each others eyes , abhay slowly moved towards her lips and they were only few inches away them And finally their lips touched each other they kissed each other , initially it was a soft kiss and soon it turned into a passionate one , abhay's hand moved from piya's waist to whole back , desires were cuming out of them they kept teasing and sucking each others lips then they parted for breathing but abhay didn't had enough he again kissed piya on her lips but this one was a hard one , so hard tat they almost forgot to breathe , they were teasing and playing with each others tongue and now finally they parted . Then abhay carried piya in his arms and started walking inside the farmhouse , he went towards the bedroom and finally put down piya . Piya was feeling very shy and was blushing too hard so she started moving away from abhay but abhay grabbed her hand , he pulled piya towards him , desire and passion was over him and he moved his hands over her hands , he then slided one side of her dress and kissed over there then he moved towards her thoart , he kissed her neck then on her collar bone and he also kissed near her chest , piya was blushing hard , she moved Away from him but abhay quickly pulled her and pinned her to wall , piya closed hear eyes , she could feel abhay's breathe and abhay kissed her passionately on her lips , piya with equal passion kissed him back , piya kissed abhay's cheeks , forehead and neck but this only increased abhay' s desire , he hungrily kissed her all over her face then he took piya in his arms and placed her on bed , piya unbuttoned his shirt and abhay removed her dress , soon there no piece of clothing between them , abhay didn't let any part of piya untouched ,he kissed her every were and tat night they became one body one soul ...


MORNING

Abhay opened his eyes and found most beautiful sight of world before him , his piya was sleeping peaceful in his arms , he kissed her lips softly and piya opened her eyes she gave abhay big warming smile and kissed him back

Abhay : good morning wifey

Piya : yesterday night was most beautiful night of my life abhay

Abhay kissing her forehead : mine too , waise piya don't u think we should go on a honeymoon

Piya giggled : no ways abhay , wapas jaake too much work we can thing after 1 month

Abhay smirked : fine then tab tak ghar chal jayega for this ...

Piya Lightly hitted abhay on shoulders : u sooo naughty

Abhay : wanna see more of naughty abhay ? ( he moved really close to her but piya stopped him )

Piya : no thank u mr. Raichand , wats the time now ?

Abhay : its around 1

Piya screamed : wat ? Around 1 tats too late abhay , gunjan misha samrat kabir wat must be thinking abhay , chalo jaldi

Abhay : chill piya we are husband wife afterall ( he said holding her tighter )

Piya : leave me abhay let me go ( Piya got up holding a white sheet around her )

Abhay : not fair , u know piya we r not finished yet , I will be back

Piya going in bathroom : we will see


SOMEWHERE IN MUMBAI

A dark toned man took gun and shooted at an already frightened and bleeding boy .
The man : 1 down , 4 more to go ... And laughed evilly


Precap : T ki band bajana ( this time pakka😆) and more about tat man and abhiya moments


This upd I m dedicating to my forum bestie Sonu and my another bestie bhamiti , they both helped a lot , thanks Sonu for the support And suggestions , u lovely , love ya and well bhamiti I should be thanking her for each every upd as she always was there for every upd and gave suggestions for every upd... love u my bestie u the best .

So how it guys hope u all liked it , I suck at lovemaking scenes personally I didn't liked it , hope it's upto mark , do hit like button and give your lovely comments , TC guys .

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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update ⭐️ I like the way you handle Mishka and Sajan's story at the same time 👏 Abhiya both have a sad past 😭 it's nice they shared it with each other. Pia forgave Abhay 😃 and their part was so romantic ❤️ That new entry looks real evil. I like the precap... cont soon n thx for pm 😊
Edited by .tanu. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update.I loved it.So finally Abhiya r together & u were ok in romantic scene.Loved gunjan-samrat & Mishka.plz cont..😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovly update finaly abhiya r together who was that man??kya uska abhiya se koi connection hai????
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally piya forgive abhay ...precap is looking interesting nice abhiya scene thanks for pm

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