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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

congrats on the new thread

They are attracted to each other, otherwise they would not spend so much time together.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Waiting for ur update :)

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karmachameleon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Readers: Sorry for the delayed update! Was little busy''.Thanks for patiently waiting''

So, here is the MAHA UPDATE!!

YES ' you heard it right, or rather read it right ' it's the Maha Update!!

This is my 20^th Chapter, all thanks to you guys!! Chapter 20 and second thread''.ME HAPPY!!

As much as I want to dedicate this chapter to all my loyal readers''..

I WON'T

I would like to dedicate this chapter to my 3 year old, who I have ignored a WHOLE lot to be able to write this much!! Sorry Baby 😕

Without further pakoing you ' ENJOY!!

P.S. Thanks for the tremendous response with the last chapter, I was speechless. THANKS!!

Fate-Mate 20 (Part A)

THIS CONTENT HAS BEEN REMOVED BY THE AUTHOR DUE TO COPYRIGHT ISSUES.

SORRY FOR ANY INCONVENIENCE.

-KARMACHAMELEON

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karmachameleon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Fate-Mate 20 (Part B)

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karmachameleon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Fate-Mate 20 (Part C)

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karmachameleon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Fate-Mate 20 (Part D)

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karmachameleon

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Fate-Mate 20 (Part E)

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Fate-Mate 20 (Part F)

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Koeli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#119

***res***

yippy!!!! See i told you i slack!!! 😳

Off to read now. Will comment later. 😉

Well today my comments will be part basis

Part A

Oh my god i loved the way you have described wet khushi, i mean slightly curly hair, a little bit shorter...that was so practical yet so beautifully described.

I can surely understand what arnav is going through lying her. He is a nice guy who is truthfull and its really nice to see that.

Khushi deep down her heart connects to that night which she hardly remembers but she is surely inquisitive about it unknowingly.

Hmm now off to part B

Part B

Just completed part B. It was a nice continuation. Asuaul chirpy khushi. And dear khushi yeh bhagwan ka hi ishara hai...pehle darga the holy place where you clear all your MU. then the tabiz which actually made both of you meet. then he put the tabiz around your neck on a very scared day...then the thunder which is actually an applued from god. the flowers for the lovely moment of your life then the rain which showered both of you are blessings from the almighty. look at this way then you will know it was destined. Now going to read part C

Part C

Awe she wants to clean his room as she is feeling guilty for messing around. Awe so damn sweet ASR dry cleaned her dress and kept it in his room now thats a point khushi should have noted. Sweet continuity. I which he would have given one of his jumper and track part but i guess salwar thing was thoughtful and unexpected. Off to part D

Part D

Awe he is such a sweet heart. He didnt want to embarrass her at all. Khushi still managed to comeout in front of him feeling odd. Awe did she say THAT? REALLY? Whats going on with her? ASR we can understand that he is falling head over hell for her. But khushi? What is she thinking? Did she actually say Why does she needs to know about the control? is she going to stay in the same room? well though it was a slip of tongue but she said what god had made her say. Awe she wants to dance with him? Cant want for the next part to know...cya in part E

Part E

Dear you made my day...I couldnot have asked anything more than this really. I LOVE THIS SONG and today in the morning i was thinking making an ARSHI VM on this and now i read this. I was like I LOVE YOU SO MUCH...😭 i got a little emotional. Beautiful song lovely war between heart and mind. Excellent potrayal of khushi's feelings. Brillently written. I am glad that ASR didnot hazitate or think a lot before taking the step to dance with her. That was so obvious. and I loved that khushi didnot stop him. Its purely a heart driven situation where the mind doesnot play any role...phew OMG i am scared to read the PART F as it is the last part of this update...

PART F

(Sorry for posting it in caps but i couldnot help...it is not shouting i am emphasizing on the words)

I AM SPEECHLESS. WHATELSE CAN I SAY. THANK GOD I THOUGHT OF COMMENTING AFTER READING EACH PARTS OTHERWISE I WOULD HAVE SURELY LOST ALL MY WORDS AFTER READING HE LAST PART.

I HELD MY BREADTH WHEN I STARTED READING IT

I COULD HEAR MY HEART BEAT AND MY WARM BREADTH

YOU TOOK ME TO THE ARSHI WORLD

WHERE I COULD ONLY SEE THEM, FEEL THEIR LOVE AND THEIR DESIRE.

IT WAS INDEED THE MIST BEAUTIFUL JOURNEY THAT YOU HAVE TAKEN ME THROUGH

THANK YOU MY FRINED FOR WRITING SO BEAUTIFULLY.

👏 I SALUTE YOU.

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