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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay kaan pakadthi hoon iss baar kafi late ho gaya na apni Piggy ko maaf kar dijiye pls

First of all thanks a ton for using my poem in ur beautiful update me so happy sachhi Di mera poem toh kafi simple tha usse khoobsurati ki kashish aapke update se mili :)
i was feeling so proud to see my small thought in ur amazing update

update k kya kehne i am just loving the pace of this story slowly but steadily their relationship is changing:) maybe maan will take some time to realize his feelings completly but yet shuruwat toh ho hi gayi hai

the best part was he was understanding geet's emotions infact he felt guilty jab poonam ki photo accidently unke chote se moment k beech aa gayi but moreover i loved the way geet handled the situation:)

this is called love isn't it?

now regarding the last update dev aur meera ka problem hmm... well maaneet k khayal toh ek jaise hi hai dono ne ek hi baat samjhayi hai deveera ko i guess maybe unhe second honeymoon par bhejna chahiye infact it won't be a bad idea agar unka second honeymoon maaneet ka first honeymoon bun jaaye

waiting for the next part Di and once again sorry for the late comment but ur Piggy was busy


i love u loads kabhi mujhse naaraaz mat hoyiyega will surely comment reguraly now

muahh

urs Piggy (Piya)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its ok dear
we will wait until your workload reduces a bit and you are back to ur schedule
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you guys for liking the last chapter. I understand that a lot of you were disappointed by lack of Maaneet in it. Well, all I can say is that the chapter is important for Maan and Geet as they move forward in their relationship.

Also sorry for late updates. Hopefully things will get better and I will be able to go back to at least two updates a week. Thanks for your patience.

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Chapter 30

As soon as they reached inside the bedroom, Maan turned to say thanks to Geet but stopped short as she fished out her phone.

Maan – "Geet it is 11:00 in the night…kisko phone kar rahi ho itni late"

[Geet it is 11:00 in the night…who are you calling so late?]

Geet just showed her hand asking him to wait.

"Hey Romeo…how r u dude?"

"Acha listen…I need a favor yaar. Can you arrange for a weekend package for a cottage in Goa along with flight tickets."

"Yes, this weekend"

"Yes write down the details – Dev Singh Khurana, Meera Khurana, and Vicky Singh Khurana aged xx, yy and ZZ"

"Hmm…thik hai, send me the tickets by tomorrow morning 8:00"

…..

"Bye"

Geet jumped excitedly on the bed – "Yes!!! Dekhna Maan this is a full proof plan. Three of them just need a vacation. And Goa mein, Meera and Dev can get some private moments as well after Vicky sleeps…nahi"

Maan was in awe as he looked at her exuberance. She was a darling who found her happiness in her family's happiness. He always respected her but today it reached a new height along with a rush of warmth as he realized how effortlessly she had accepted his family as her own. She loved Dev and Meera just like she loved Rahul. She cared for Daadima as much as she cared for her own parents. A new emotion surged through him as these thoughts raced through his mind.

His trance was broken as she threw few clothes on the bed.

"Err…kya kar rahi ho tum"

[Errr…what are you doing?]

"Are, woh meri cousin ne mujhe ek gift diya tha. I think it is perfect for Meera for this weekend. I will give it to her along with tickets."

[My cousin had given me a gift. I think it is perfect for Meera for this weekend. I will give it to her along with tickets.]

Maan knew she was up to no good as she giggled with a mischievous look.

"Yep here it is."

Maan's eyes popped out of his socket as Geet lifted a red…wait is that a see through negligee with a thong….

A reminder guys –

Geet turned to see Maan staring at her hands. Suddenly realizing the enormity of her actions, she hid the chemise behind her back – "woh…woh"

Maan just shook her head and walked to the study before he could embarrass her or himself any further "Yeh ladki sach mein pagal hai…pata nahi kuch karne se pehli sochti bhi hai ki nahi…God that nighty…that was sexy and it's color contrasted with Geet's…shut up Maan…ab phir se raat ko shower lena padega….yeh ladki mujhe kahin ka nahi chodegi"

[This girl is really mad…don';t know if she even thinks before doing anything…God that nighty… that was sexy and it's color contrasted with Geet's…shut up Maan…now again I will have to take shower in the night…this girl will not let me be]

……………

Meera and Dev were quite emotional when Geet gifted them the tickets.

Dev tried to make some protest but Maan silenced him.

"Don't want to hear a word from you two. You both need this weekend. Moreover Vicky bhi hai tum dono ke saath so there are no excuses. Go and enjoy"

Later, while packing, Meera blushed hard when Geet gave her the negligee.

Geet rolled her eyes shying her blush - "Oh come on….you are getting so shy as if it is your first honeymoon"

Meera slapped her arm – "Acha, by the way what is it doing with you?"

But Geet was just unfazed – "uh uh uh…don't worry hun…it is brand new. Never used because don't need to...at least yet" Geet finished with a wink as Meera roared with laughter. (Geet, you are too good at saying truth without letting other person know the reality)

Dev and Meera left with a very excited Vicky.

Sunday

Maan was getting bored as Geet had gone to spend some time with her parents as Rahul was on business trip. Dev and Meera were also on their vacation.

He sighed missing her as he flipped through the newspaper for the second time. Suddenly house felt so quiet without her. She was always running around, doing some masti or the other. Every corner of the house now was covered with her touch and it all felt so empty without her tinkling voice and musical laughter.

Daadima as if reading his thoughts said as she sat along Maan – "Geet ke bina ghar suna suna lagta hai…nahi. Dev, Meera aur Vicky bhi nahi hai aur aap toh kuch baat hi nahi karte. Man kar raha hai Geet ko wapis bula lein"

[House seems to be so quiet without Geet. Even Dev, Meera and Vicky are also not here and you don't even talk anything. I feel like calling Geet back]

Maan kept the paper down – "She will come back tonight Daadima….aur mein hoon na…aap mujhse baat kar lo"

[She will come back tonight Daadima….and I am here…you talk to me]

"Aapse kya baat karein….hum hi bolte rahenge aur app…hmmm…haan…no…bas ho gayi baat"

[What will talk with you…I will only keep on speaking and you…hmmm…yes…no..that is the only talking you will do]

"Daadima!!!"

"Acha baba ab ghuriye mat…hum ek baat soch rahe the. Yeh aapki bike itne dinon se aise hi rakhi hai. Pehle toh aap itne possessive the ki Dev ko bhi haath nahi lagane dete the. Now even you also don't touch it. Agar aap chalate hi nahi hain toh use nikal dijiye. Aaj time hai, why don't you do something about it…hmmm"

[Ok, now don't glare…I was thinking something. Your bike is lying around like that only from a long time. Earlier you were so possessive that you will not let even Dev touch it. Now even you also don't touch it. If you don't drive then sell it off. Today's you have some time, why don't you do something about it…hmmm]

Maan nodded and after giving it a thought went to make some calls. He found a top notch dealer who was ready to tow the bike that very day and also had a ready buyer who was interested in this model of the bike.

After a long time, Maan had started to spend time at home and as Geet was also not around he decided to take Daadima to ISKON temple. Daadima had been asking Dev for this and Maan decided that he should take more responsibility over the weekend to let Dev have some free time with Meera and Vicky.

After temple visit, Maan went to the dealer shop – "Daadima, bas 5 min ka kam hai. Mr. Singh said that buyer will be here at 5:00. I will just meet them, finalise the deal and come. Waise bhi, I am not much bothered about the price so it should be quick."

[Daadima, it just 5 min work. Mr. Singh said that buyer will be here at 5:00. I will just meet them, finalise the deal and come. Moreover, I am not much bothered about the price so it should be quick.]

Daadima nodded. "Haan beta thik hai. Hum bhi andar hi chalte hain aapke saath so that you don't have any tension in your mind."

[It's ok. I will also come with you inside so that you don't have any tension in your mind.]

They went in where Mr. Singh was waiting for them. "Aayiye sir…madam"

Precap – Bike?

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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it...😛
Edited by reachsky2011 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dadi stole geet's line
"main hi baat karti rahungi aur aap hmm...haaan...no karte rahoge"
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
so geet send dev, meera and vicky to goa..
poor maan yaar missing geet and getting affected wuth her
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Posted: 13 years ago
now maan will come to know someone is fixing and maintanig he bike he will be on his metion to know who it is ...might take geet along on the bike ride ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome par, arre ye kya kiya maane geet ki fav bike aab kya hoga.
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan going to send bike geet negligee poor maan



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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear ...ohhho...ab maan babu geet ko miss kar rahe hain...😉

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