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PART 25

Maan opened his eyes only see Geet was not beside him, but soon heard the shower running in the washroom and sighed tat Geet may be having a bath. He tried to get up when something poked him inside his pocket and than he remembered wat it was. He slowly removed the thing out which was Geet's mangalsutra which Dadima had given him when she had told about Geet's death since than it connected him with his life. He holds it in front of his eyes and keeps staring at it. He remembered how he was feeling restless at the airport and than suddenly he remembered tat he had forgotten the mangalsutra at outhouse. And than it was when he had come to take it but his heart wanted to see his life once before going but destiny had written something else. He never knew tat Geet could sense him and she would make him weak in his decision and he had to forget his own promise made to himself.

Maan: I don't know tat wat I did is right or wrong. But looks like even god did not wanted me to go away from you Geet. par kya humara rishta phir se wahi pyar paa saktha hain. kya hum phir se ek ho sakthe hain. mere gunaah itne bade hain ki, yeh mujhe kabhi chain se jeene denge. Kya inka bhooj humara rishta utha saktha hain. Kya main apne ateet mein kiye hue gunaah bhol kar aage badh saktha hoon. Maine jo sitam tumpar kiye the kya unke gahav main kabhi bhar saktha hoon Geet. shayad inka jawab na mere paas hain nahi tumare paas phir kyu Geet kyu jaane nahi deti mujhe apne aap se dur. Kyu mere gunaah gehare karti jaa rahi ho. Main jaantha hoon Geet, ki yeh Maan Singh Khuranna kabhi tumara Maan nahi ban saktha nahi tumhe woh pyar de saktha hain.
(I don't know tat wat I did is right or wrong. But looks like even god did not wanted me to go away from you Geet. but will our relation get back the same love. Can we be one back again. My sins are so big tat they will never let me to stay in peace. Can our relation take the burden of my sins. Kya I forget my past sins and move forward. Can I heal the wounds which I gave you geet. we don't have answers to this geet than why don't you let me go geet. why do you go on increasing my sins. I know geet, tat this MSK can never give you your Maan and nor the love.)
By now Geet was out of the washroom and as soon as she opened the door she saw Maan holding her mangalsutra. She had realized it long back tat she was not wearing it but did not say anything. She slowly called out to him without making him to know tat she had seen the mangalsutra.
Geet: aap fresh hojaye main neeche jaathi hoon.
( you get fresh I will go down)
Maan: hmm and he quickly hides the mangalsutra without realizing tat she had seen it.
Geet: Jaanthe hain hum Maan ki aap kya soch rahe hain aur yakeen maanye ki aap aaj bhi humare wahi Maan hain jo humse pyar kartha hain. Pata nahi Maan ki jo hua woh kyu hua par hum aapko ish haal mein nahi dekh sakthe. Hum yeh bhi jaanthe hain ki aap apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paayenge par hum yeh bhi jaanthe hain ki aapne tho humse bhi jyada saha hain. Aaj bhi dusro ke gunnah ki sazza paa rahe hain. Par ab aur nahi aapko ish sab se bahar ana hoga. Hume humare Maan har haal mein wapas chaheye. And tats Geet Maan Singh Khuranna's promise.
( I know Maan wat u are thinking and believe me tat you are the same maan whom I loved and who loves me. I don't know why all tat happened but I cant see you like this. I know tat you will never be able to forgive yourself but I also know tat u have suffered a lot. Even today you have been suffering for others deeds. But not anymore and you have to come out of all this. I want my Maan back ata any cost and tats Geet Maan Singh Khuranna's promise.)

Everyone was settled on the breakfast table and were engrossed in deep thoughts. No one did understood wat had happened but thanked the almighty for getting back Maan. they had decided tat no one will ask any sort of questions to him as it may open his wounds again but were unaware tat Geet would be one who would burst out her anger on him today. They were waiting for Maan to come down so tat they could start they breakfast. But as soon as they saw him walking past the table they were worried as to wat was he upto when they suddenly heard Naina calling him.

Naina: Maan bte, aap breakfast nahi karenge kya. Aaye yaha aur humare saath breakfast kijiye.
( Maan, will u not have ur breakfast. Come here and have with all of us)
Maan: Nahi mom, aap shayad bhool rahi hain ki mujhe yaha aap sab ke saath rehna permission nahi hain.
( no mom, I think u have forgotten tat m not allowed to stay here with all of u here)
Naina: par bte ab tho sab solve ho juka hain na, phir yeh sab.
( but son now everything is solved na, than why all this})
Maan: No mom nothing has changed and nor my sins.

Yash: Maan please hum sab aapse maafi maang the hain par please beta apne aap ko ish tarah takleef mat do.
( Maan please we ask you for your forgiveness and please don't give yourself this pain)
Maan: please dad. Don't ask forgiveness. Galati tho meri thi phir.
(please dad. Don't ask forgiveness. It was my mistake)
Vicky: bro, please mere liye maan jayena.
(bro, please for me)
Maan: Vicky, you know tat I cant refuse you but its my punishment and I deserve it.
Dadima: Maan, will you stop all this and come and have breakfast and the way you came back for Geet the same way you will be staying here aur ek baat Geet aapki patni hain aur jaha tak hume yaad hain hume uska mangalsutra aapko diya tha, tho aap ushe woh wapas dijiye. Suhaagan hoke aisa suna gala acha nahi lagtha.
(Maan, will you stop all this and come and have breakfast and the way you came back for Geet the same way you will be staying here and one more thing, geet is ur wife and I still remember tat I had given her mangalsutra to u so please give it back to her, it does not look good tat being married she is not wearing it)
Maan : theek hain Dadima, main ushe de dunga but please don't ask me to stay here I don't deserve it.
( ok dadima. I will give her but please don't ask me to stay here I don't deserve it.)
Geet who all the time was listening to was very much pissed listening to him. she knew now she had to take the things in her hand before its to late.
Geet: tho phir hum bhi yaha nahi rehne wale.
( than even I will not stay here)
Everyone was shocked to hear Geet say tat and Maan turned to see her eyes filled with pain and anger.
Geet: Theek kaha na humne Maan. waise bhi jab aap yaha nahi rehna chah the tho phir hum kis haq se ish ghar mein reh sakthe hain. kya manga tha humne babaji se sirf aapka saath par shayad humari kismat mein yeh nahi likha hain. sab kuch tho kho juke hain hum aur shayad jho kuch rishthe baki hain woh bhi kho denge.
( did I say right maan. anyways when you don't want to stay here than how can I have the right to stay. Wat did I ask to babaji only ur love but I think he does not want to give me tat. I have lost everything and now the remaining relations also)
Naina: yeh aap kya keh rahi hain Geet.
( wat are u saying geet)
Geet: Theek hi kaha hain mom. Aap sab ne meri wajah se inhe ghar se bahar kar diya tha na, tho phir aaj main khud yeh ghar chod ke jaa rahi hoon. Peachali baar inke gusse se humare bache ko bachane ke liye yeh ghar chodke gayi thi aur aaj apne pati ko maaf kar ke jaa rahi hoon.
( I have said the right thing mom. U all have thrown him out of the house because of me, than today myself I will leave the house. Last time I left the house to save our baby from his anger but today I will forgive him and leave )
Dadima: geet. yeh aap.
( geet, why are u)
Geet: Nahi dadima aaj hume bholne dijiye. Aap sab ko jo karna tha kar diya. Maan ne gusse mein akar hume aapne aap se alag kar diya aur aap sab ne bina koi kasoor inhe sazza di dono surato mein tho hume hi dard hua na. Haar tho sirf humari hui na ki kisi aur ki. Humne yeh kabhi nahi chaha ki humare wajah se aap sab alag ho aur nahi kabhi yeh soch sakthe hain. Ish choti si zindagi mein bahut kuch seekha diya hain hume aur shayad ab waqt aa juka hain ki hum yeh jaan sake ki kuch bhi ho Maan hume kabhi apna nahi maanthe. Inka faisla sahi tha ki hum alag ho jaye aur aaj hum aap sab se yeh keh rahe hain ki……………….
( no dadima, let me speak today. U all did want you wanted to do. Maan left me due to his anger but u all punished him without any mistake but both the side it only gave pain to me. I have only lost na. I never wanted you all to separate because of me and I never ever dreamt it. I have learnt a lot in this small life and now its time for me to move as maan never ever thought tat I belonged to him. he was right in his decision of divorcing me and now I want to tell you all tat i……)
But before she could say anything more Maan dragged her with him upstairs. Each word spoken by Geet was making his heart to burn. He could not take any of her words as it was not only hurting him but more than him it was giving her pain. Once reaching the room he pulled her infront of him.
Maan: alag hona chah thi ho na, tho phir wapas kyu aayi thi. Kyu rokha tha hume kal raat. Kyu kaha ki Maan agar aap hume chod ke jaayenge tho hum jee nahi paayenge. Kyu kaha tha ki tumhe sab chod ke chale jaathe hain.
(u want to separate na, than why did u come back. Why did u stop me last night. Why did u say tat maan if u leave me I will die. Why did you say tat all left you)
Geet: sahi tho kaha humne. Humari wajah se aap apne parivaar se alag the aur ab hum nahi chah the ki aap aur unh sab se alag rahe.
( wat wrong did I say. U separated from ur family coz of me and now I don't want you to stay away from them more)
Maan: woh humari sazza thi Geet. kyu nahi samjh paati ki jo humne kiya woh gunaah tha woh maafi ke layak nahi hain phir kyu tum apne aap ko sazza dena chah thi ho.
( it was my punishment Geet. why cant u understand tat my sins are very big and are not forgivable, why do u want to punish yourself)
Geet: kyu ki aap sazza paa rahe hain. kyu nahi samjh sakte aap ki aap mein humari jaan basthi hain. kyu bhool nahi sakthe aap sab. Kyu ushi ateet mein jeena chah the hain jishe hume sirf aur sirf dard milta hain.
( coz u are punishing yourself. Why cant you understand tat u r my life. why cant u forget everything. Wahy do u want to live in the past which only gives us pain and pain)
Maan: Geet, humne tumse wada kiya hain na ki hum tumhe chod ke nahi jaayenge phir yeh sab baatein ab kyu kar rahi ho. Please geet hume humara wada nibhane mein aur muskhil mat dena. I cant see you in pain.
( Geet, I have promised you na tat I will not leave u and gothan why are you talking like this. plz geet don't make it difficult for me. I cant see u in pain)
Geet: dard, kya aapko sach mein humara dard dekhtha hain Maan. kya hum aapko aise dekhkar khush hain. kya kabhi hume humara Maan wapas mil paayega. Bolye na Maan.
(pain, can u really see my pain maan. do u think m happy by seeing you like this. will I get my maan back. Say na maan)
Maan: Main wapas tho aa juka hoon geet ab aur kya chahiye.
( I have come back maan and now wat else you want)
Geet: par Maan..
(but maan)
Maan: ab aur nahi Geet. tum, chahti ho na ki main KM mein rahu tho theek hain I will stay but you will never ever say anything which will make me to change my decision.
( not any more geet. you want me to stay in KM na than ok I will stay but you will never ever say anything which will make me to change my decision.)
Geet: theek hain.
( ok)
With this she moves to go out atleast feeling bit happy tat her words made him to change his decision. But heard Maan calling her and she turns to see Maan holding her mangalsutra and she was happy to see it but realized tat he was giving it in her hand.

Maan: Geet yeh tumara mangalsutra.
( geet ur mangalsutra)
Geet: Haan hum jaanthe hain. Subah aapke haatho mein dekha tha.
( ya I know, I had seen in your hands in the morning)
Maan: woh neeche dadima ne poocha tha ki tum…
( dadima had asked na downstairs)
Geet: Hum ab bhi wahi keh rahe hain Maan. Yeh mangalsutra humari zindagi ka sabse anmol hissa hain, par yeh tabi acha lagtha hain jab humare Maan apna guilt bhool kar hume yeh phir se apne haatho se pehna de. Hum jaanthe hain Maan ki aap wapas tho aagaye hain, par jis Maan ko hum jaanthe hain woh Maan shayad kahi kho juke hain.
( even now m saying the same thing maan. this mangalsutra is the most precious thing in my life, but it loks good only when my maan wil forget about his guilt and will tie this with his hands again. I know tat maan you are back, but not my maan as he is lost somewhere)
Maan: Geet yeh tum.. Main tumare saath tho hoon na.. phir yeh tum pehnalo.
( geet m with you, so you wear this)
Geet: nahi Maan, hum yeh kaise pehan sakthe hain jab ki app humse aisi durri bana rahe hain. hum dekh rahe hain Maan ki aap hain tho humare saath par kya sach mein hain. Hum nahi jaanana chah the hain ki humare saath yeh sab kisne aur kyu kiya. Hume koi farak nahi padta ki agar hume koi zinda bhi maar de par hume humara Maan wapas chahiye aur wahi Maan jo hume apne app se bhi jyada pyar karte the. Wahi Maan jo agar hum unhse baat nahi karte the tho naye naye ideas dhoondh lete the hume manane ke liye. Wahi Maan jo hume bina kisi bandhish ke pyar kiya karte the, wahi Maan jisne hume wada kiya tha ki woh hume apni har ek khushi denge.
( no maan, how can I wear this when you are away from me. I can see maan tat u are with me but are u really. I don't want to know why did this happen nor want to know who did this. I don't even mind if anyone kills me but I want my maan back.the maan who loved me. The same maan who was never short of ideas to manofy me when I did not talk to him. the same maan who never knew any limits to love me. The same maan who promised me to give all happiness)
Maan: yeh itna asaan nahi hain Geet. humare gunaah maafi ke layak nahi hain. jab hum apne aap ko maaf nahi kar sakthe tho tum, hume kaise kar sakti ho. Zindagi ka sabse bada gunaah kiya hain hume, ek aisa gunaah jo koi shetan bhi na kare. Apne haatho se apni zindagi tabah ki hain humne. Jaanthi ho Geet shayad hum ek baar yeh bhool bhi jaye ki humne tumare saath kya kiya hain par yeh kaise bhool sakte hain ki hum humare bache ko maar dala. Ush bacho ko maar dala jishe tumne humse bachane ke liye yeh ghar tak chod ke chali gayi.kya yeh sach kabhi badal saktha hain Geet, ki business tycoon Maan Singh Khuranna ne apne gusse mein aakar apne hi bache ko marne ke liye chod diya. Kya yeh sach kabhi badal saktha hain Geet, ki hum apne pyar ko nahi bacha paaye. Bolo na Geet kya yeh badal saktha hain.
( its not so easy geet. my sins cant be forgivable. When I myself cant forgive me than how can u. I have committed the biggest crime in my life, even a devil wont commit it. I have destroyed my own life with my hands. I can atleast forgive myself for torturing you but how can I forget tat I killed my own child with my hands. I killed tat child whom u wanted to save from me and left this house. This truth can never change geet, tat business tycoon MSK killed his own child in his anger and hatred. can this truth change geet tat I could not save my love. Tell geet tat can it change)
Geet gets angry and holds his color and warns him.
Geet: Mr. Maan Singh Khuranna, aap hote kaun hain yeh decide karne wale ki aap gunegar hain ya nahi. yeh decision sirf aur sirf humara hain. jab hum aapko kabhi galat nahi maante tho aap kaise maan sakthe hain. Aur ek baat, hum aapko sirf ek week ka samay dete hain agar aap yeh guilt ki bhasha bandh nahi ki tho aap soch bhi nahi sakthe ki hum kya karenge. Taq juke hain hum Maan aur bardash nahi hota humse, nahi jee sakthe aise, hume humara pyar wapas chahiye, humari humari har ek woh khushi wapas chahiye jo aapne kabhi dene ka wada kiya tha aur yeh mat samjhana ki hum sirf aapko chetavaani de rahe hain yeh Geet Maan Singh Khuranna ki dhamki hain Maan Singh Khuranna ke liye. Just a week time Maan, and than you see wat I do. Its better u come back to me or I will show you the real Geet Maan Singh Khuranna. So your time starts now.
( Mr. MSK, who the hell are you to decide tat u are guilty or not. This is purely my decision.when I don't blame you than who are you to do. And one more thing, tat if you don't forget all this language about guilt in a week tat you wont even know wat I will do. I am tired maan and cant take this anymore, I want my love back, I want all my happiness back which u promised to give. And ya don't think tat m just saying this but m warning you MSK tat GMSK will do wat she says now. . Just a week time Maan, and than you see wat I do. Its better u come back to me or I will show you the real Geet Maan Singh Khuranna. So your time starts now.)

Maan: Nahi Geet, yeh kabhi nahi ho saktha hain. jis Maan ka tum intezzar kar rahi hoon woh kabhi wapas nahi aa saktha. Hume zindagi bhar aise hi jeena hoga, ek aise bhooj ke tale jo hum kabhi bhool nahi sakthe. Main apne gunaah ke saath aur tum apne ish pyar ke saath jo tumhe sirf aur sirf dard detha hain.
( no geet, this can never happen. Tat maan will never ever come back. We have to live like this for our whole life, with a burden which can never be forgotten. I with my sins and you with your love which only gives you pain and nothing else)
Geet: Nahi Maan, aap galat hain. Humara pyar hume kabhi dard nahi de saktha kyu ki humara pyar hume kabhi dard mein dekh hi nahi saktha. Haan yeh baat sach hain ki hum zindagi bhar humara ateet hum bhool nahi sakte par ek nahi shuruvaat kar sakthe hain. jo humne ateet mein kho diya hain ushe phir se paa sakthe hain aur hume humare pyar aur babaji par pura yakeen hain ki hume humara Maan wapas milega aur unke saath woh saare sapne jo hume kahi kho diye hain.
( no maan, u r wrong. My love can never give me pain coz my love can never see me in pain. Ya its true tat we can never forget opur past in our life but tat does not mean tat we cant start a new life. we can maan. the things we lost in our past we can get it back and I have full faith in my love and babaji tat I will get my maan back and he will give me all my dreams back)

Na jaaney itni mohabbat kahan se hain aapke liye,

Ki mera dil bhi humse rooth jaatha hain aapke liye!!!!!

Aaj hum aapko bata de ki aap ho kaun humare liye,

Humare liye aap humari duniya hain,

Chu kar guzarthi hui hawa ho aap,

Jismein hum saas lethe hain!!!!!!!!

Humne jo maangi thi woh dua ho aap,

Zindagi bar ka sukoon ho aap,

Bas aur kuch nahi humara pura jahan ho aap

Aur ab aapko paakar hum khona nahi chah the hain.

With this few words Geet left the room. But her word started to play with Maan as they were not mere word but her unconditional love for him which he did not deserve and which had the power to bring tears in his eyes.
Maan: kyu karthi ho humse itna pyar Geet, ki hum humne aap ko sambhal nahi paate. Kaise kahe ki yeh dil tadapta hain tumare liye. Kaise kahe ki tum ho kaun humare liye, par humare gunaah hain hi itne bade ki hum kabhi yeh keh bhi nahi paayenge.
( why do u love so much geettat I wont be able to handle it. How can I say tat I want you in my life. how to tell you wat you are for me in my life, but my sins are too big even to think tat geet)
Tumhara dukh hum seh nahi sakte
Apne dil ki baat tumse keh nahi sakte
Hamare girte hue aansuo ko pad kar dekho,


Woh bhi kehte hai ke hum aapke bin reh nahi sakte…

Yeh khuda aisi taqdir na bana kisiki,

ki woh apne pyar ko aisi tadapta kabhi dekhe.

Precap: Maan's time over and GMSK in action.

So here's the next part. I know you all wanted to see GMSK in action but believe me I had to give this part. It was a need to show why Geet had warned him now.

So will be waiting for your likes and comments.. I would really request all the readers to please don't remain silent and like and comment as its very important for any writer. They motivate the writers to write and hope so you understand. So I kindly request all of those who read to like and comment ……

And one more important thing… as you all know my college reopens on 19th June. So hence forth I will not be able to update regularly but will still try. But before tat I will try to give atleast 3-4 more updates with full of maaneet moments…

Love you alll….

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Posted: 13 years ago
Yippeee me first to comment 😃

Brilliantly written part Shoba 👏

Geet has caught Maan's weak point and I am sure she will leave no stone unturned to bring him out of his guilt

I so loved Geet Maan Singh Khurana's Dhamki 😊

now waiting eagerly to see Geet Maan Singh Khurana in action
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Posted: 13 years ago
me 2nd😃😃😃😃😃
oyee phir se awsm update 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I WANT MAANEET MOMENT😳😳😳😳😳

GMSK in action😲😲😲😲😲😲

waiting waiting waiting waiting
I hate to wait like MAAN SINGH KHURANA 😡😡😡😡

plz UPDATE soon 😛


Edited by URME - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
mee 3rd...😃

awesooommeee update...
finally my GMSK in her full to wala action sherni mode...

waiting for more maaneet

overall 👏 hats-of
loved ur update...
Edited by crazy_125 - 13 years ago

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