MG FF- PARINEETA THREAD 1 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago

sorry sorry for late comment

was on holidays wid family

awsome start

so both of their family already knew abt maan-aneesha relation

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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyy..!!

Eagerly waiting for the update ash...!!

Update soon plz..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice start
maan is eagerly waiting for geet, me also
i don't like this maan and anisha pair
waiting for the next part for geet's entry
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it ...nice start

waiting for Gundi's entry
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally am done with my exams
so updating tonight!!!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

MEE TOO WITH U
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Posted: 13 years ago



hey people...my new animated banner!!😳
credit goes to
shruthe di!!
thank u shooo much diii
i love you umaah!!!
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PART 2


Prem: ahh…jealous han…Maan bhi jaa roops that you like me…in fact you had a crush on me since std 7th!

Roops: ha ha itna sada hua PJ tha! By the way tu itni subah kaise uth gaya aaj?

Prem: ohh teri…bhool gaya…geet uthi ke nahi? She has all my certificates and forms I need them!

Roops: saale…aaj tak apni cheezein khud nahi rakh sakta? Hold kar 2 min…I need to wake her up!

She put the phone little away from her and shouted, "GEET….uth ja…aaj waapis nahi jaana kya? Maan bechara would be waiting for you….."

"…Ek nadi se maine poochha

itla ke chaldi kahan
Door tere peekha ghar hai

balkhaake chaldi kahan…."


hey hey hold on a minute! If you think this song is fit for our gundi, then you are completely and utterly mistaken!

She hard roops shouting, trying to wake her up. She covered her head with the duvet and screamed out, "dilli abhi dur hai bhaiyya…sone do mujhe!"

Roops rolled her eyes!


Roops: prem..tu phone rakh, am going to wake her up. Waise flight kitne baje ki hain?

Prem: its at 3 pm. You guys meet me at the airport okay and yeah tell geet to get my things okay!

Roops went to wake up our gundi. She pulled off the duvet and tried waking her up. She twisted and rolled to the other side of the bed and slept off. Finally getting no success, roops emptied the entire glass of water on her. she sat up screaming, "kaminiii..couldn't you haven woken me up an hour later? Its so early!"

(okay people..many people will think this rude but this is how we people..especially friends talk nowadays!!! Even I do it with my friends! If anyone has any problem, do PM me. Please it's a request!)


Roops: serves you right geet! Aaj ghar jaana hai..yaad nahi? Tada… kal orientation ceremony bhi hai..

Geet seemd least interested. She could still manage to yawn in that condition. And then it struck roops.

Roops (naughtily): umm..teri marzi bhai. Waise bhi Maan won't be waiting for you I guess!

That worked. Geet jumped off the bed and ran to the washroom screaming, " pehle kyun nahi bataya mujhe han? Oh god…if he won't be waiting na…phir to uski khar nahi!"


Roops couldn't stop smiling. True, she had never ever seen Maan, but she knew him pretty well, all thanks to geet. And this geet…she is one crazy girl. Take Maan's name and she'd be right on her feet, ready to fight the whole world.


Roops had met geet in std 6th in hostel and they shared the same room. They had become very close friends…close indeed! Prem joined then in std 7th and he stayed in the boys hostel. The three were the "pakke friends"… "jigri dost" types and the three worked real hard to get into NITs and luckily, all the three got into NIT Delhi. And look at the conspiracy of nature—Maan was already there!


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Maan fell on his bed, disappointed. He was so excited to meet her and this mad girl insisted on going to mumma's place instead of KM. Dadima was a bit sad but then she could never be mad at geet. And geet knew well how to melt her. Dadima had sent all the dishes she had prepared for geet to her place. And geet had promised Dadima to spend a week in KM after her orientation ceremony.

Damn! He couldn't meet her. she reached around 7pm and now its 11! His cell beeped and a smile adored his face.


Anisha: Maan, geet aa chuki hain kya? Aap unse mile?

Maan: kahan yaar…madam apne darshan de tab na! she went to mumma's place and I couldn't see her.

Anisha: phir you could have gone to Jasmeet auntie's place no?

Maan hit his head with his other hand!

Maan: why the hell I didn't think of it before?

Anisha laughed, "Maan, aap bhi na..kya karte rehte ho?"

Maan: ohh god, how can I be so stupid? It had completely slipped out of mind.

Anisha: khair chodiye, you can meet her tomorrow. Orientation ceremony hai na! ab aap soo jaiye…hum phone rakhte hain..maa bula rahi hain!


Maan: acha suno..

Anisha: ji..

Maan: kal shaam free ho? Hum coffee ke liye chalet hain!

Oh god…she was feeling so conscious now. He actually asked her for a date!

Anisha: wo..kal..shaam..

Maan: koi problem hain?

Anisha: umm…pata nahi… I'l confirm tomorrow..

Maan (sad): umm okay..

She could feel the disappointment in his voice!

Anisha: please Maan.. . naraz mat ho.. acha hum rakhte hain..maa kab se bula rahi hain..bye!

NEXT DAY

COLLEGE


The whole campus flocked with people. New students arriving, seniors leaving no chance to rag them..there was a carnival out there! Geet, roops and prem stepped into the gates together. Prem had stayed in the college hostel while roops with her family in Delhi. There was so much thrill, so much excitement. Some seniors gave them evil looks. Prem gulped hard!


Prem: yaar aaj bure phanse..

Roops: seriously, mujhe to inke iraade theek nahi lagte…

Prem: roops, chal waapis chalet hain…god knows what will they make us do!

Geet heard them and rolled her eyes. She had a very different thought all together! She walked ahead and turned to them.


"tum logon ko ho kya gaya hai? Why the hell are you so scared? Roops, I know prem is a bheegi billi, par tujhe kya hua hai aaj?"

Prem: geet…yaar insult mat kar tu meri…

Geet: to kya teri aarti utaru? Seriously guys..life mein sirf ek baar rag hone ka chance milta hai..knock knock SIRF EK BAAR… to enjoy being ragged na! why are you getting scared?

(okay you might feel this funny but this is a real life incident😳! Last year when I went to my new college, my friends were super scared about this thing. On our welcome ceremony, the seniors had called us to the hall at 12pm. Some of my friends went home while those who stayed were super scared. And I was hovering around the hall since 11 am lol😆 and had said the same thing as geet did to my friends!😉)


Some 2nd years were passing by and they heard geet say so and quietly stood behind her, listening intently. Roops and prem gulped hard seeing them. Roops gestured her to turn back with her eyes.

Geet; kya hain?

Prem: te..tere peechey..

Geet: mere peechey kya hain?

She turned to see some guys standing with a smirk. They hovered around her.

Guy1: so..you're not scared?

Geet directly looked into his eyes, "of what?"

wow..this girl has guts!

Guy2: are you ready?

She understood they have heard her!

Geet: try me!


Guy1: okay done! The dean will be arriving anytime soon. Here take this bucket of water and make sure he is wet from the tip of his hair to the tip of his toe! Consequences—at your own risk baby!

They put the bucket full of water in front of her. she didn't reply for a while!

Guy 1: afraid?

Geet: my foot!

Woah… the guys were flat right there! She picked up the bucket and stood near the parking lot. Roops and prem stood quietly watching her.


Prem nudged roops, " aaj to ye gayi! 1st day is going to be her last day!"

Roops: shut up and go to hell! She'll pull it off!

The dean parked his car and slowly walked towards his office. Geet stood beside a car, all set to execute her plan with 100% efficiency. The dean got a call and he stood a few feet away from geet, talking. He hadn't notice her while geet madam was all set. She closed her eyes, took a deep breath in, "on you marks..get set…go"

SPLASH…!!!!


She slowly opened her eyes…hey where was the dean? She found someone standing in front of her…drenched…from the tip of his hair to the tip of his toe! The 2nd years ran away seeing a 3rd year being the scapegoat. They hid behind the cars in the parking lot to see the consequence.


Maan was startled at the sudden cold shower he received! He glared at the girl who dared to do that to him. And his eyes met hers! He was so amazed…he could recognize her anytime and anywhere possible! But then the great MSK drenched…she was sooo dead!

He gritted his teeth, "GEET…."

She looked at him in surprise and then a wide smile followed!

Geet (naughtily): oops…galti se mistake ho gayi!

Maan: galti se mistake han..ruk..abhi batata hoon..

She showed him her tongue and ran away. He followed.

Maan: aaj tujhe chodunga nahi..


She laughed and ran all around the college, dashing with people around. He ran after her..fast. ohh god..they couldn't stop laughing. He finally managed to hold her and pull her back by her waist and hugged her tight, lifting her off her feet. She hugged him back giggling. Finally..she met him!!! She felt she was finally back home!!!

He twirled her around and placed her on her feet and cupped her face, "I missed you sooo much!"

"same here!"

He took a step back and looked at her carefully!

"tu kitni badi ho gayi hain…"

She smiled naughtily, "kya karun..aur koi option bhi to nahi tha naa!"

"nautanki.."

She hugged him tight again, with a beautiful smile adoring her lips!!!

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PRECAP: geet shouting at maan for not letting anyone rag her!😆

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Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow... Me first

Coming to the update... I loved it ... and Geet... she is just awesome yaar... i loved her character... i really enjoyed reading her antics... especially when she dares to put the whole bucket of water on the dean... got to say.. she has got hell a lot of guts...

And i loved Maaneet meeting after so many years and that too this way... Maan totally wet... 😆 and then started their chase!!!! It was so cute!!!!!!

"Pakke friends"... that part was wow...

Am laughing after the precap... Geet is sure a unique piece.. actually a master piece... she is angry with Maan coz he stopped ppl from ragging her...

cant wait for the next update

continue soon...
Edited by shrutheAjay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

dats it...😲i expected a longer update😒

loved da update❤️
n that hug in da end...😳
Edited by gmsRk - 13 years ago

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