FF:Love Arranged- Part 53 (Pg99) 3 Aug

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janavi07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Good start nisha...liked it...😊...not fully understand what the story...please next part soon waiting for the next update Nisha...

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Nisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Thank you so much guys! The first part was meant to be an ambiguous teaser of sorts, I am glad you guys liked it.

Next part will be up soon! 😊

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sudhareddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Nisha even it short but good start of ff

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Nisha

@ABlank90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Part 2

For the first time in years she locked the bedroom door. Intrusion would not be welcome. Rather, it wasn't a question of welcoming it but a question of what would follow if someone walked in on her smiling at a piece of parchment.

Parchment? She laughed.

It seemed as if her antiquated thoughts about romance hadn't budged from the space they occupied in her mind. Not even after meeting him. He, who was anything but antediluvian. She wondered whether there was anything to be hopeful about. Whether there was any reason to smile nonchalantly because she had received a letter addressed to her by him. Surely, she did not even have so much as a hint to what the letter contained.

She took out the starched beige envelope and looked at it objectively. His handwriting seemed methodical- crisp, thin and perfectly printed.

No, it was plain, simple and boring-her mind argued- don't paint a pretty picture before you know your subject well.

So it was settled then. As she took out a paper knife to unseal the envelope she made her mind to read the letter rationally. No word would be weighed more than it needed to be and no sentence twisted to mean more than it actually did. It was with this resolve that she made the final cut with the paper knife and slowly pulled out the letter- a parchment!

Dear Khanak

I couldn't contain myself from writing you this letter. It is but fair that I be able to talk to you in one way or the other. I wouldn't wish to hurt your sentiments in the least so please do tell me if this prospect is unacceptable to you.
Regards,
Shaantanu Khandelwal

So the second part is here! Looking forward to your comments guys, especially thoughts on the letter! 😊

Edited by ABlank90 - 13 years ago

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jaisyjazz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

yayyy 2nd part is up but ye kya mujhe laga letter me kuch romantic likha hoga lekin ye mahashay to formal banne ki koshish kar raha hai gentleman ban raha hai maska laga raha hai kuch karne se pehle how smart of him hahahahaaa😆

anyways jo kuch bhi likha tha bahut sweet & cute tha

but very small update are demand ke hisab se thoda length badho yaar

next part ASAP😊

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Nisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz
yayyy 2nd part is up but ye kya mujhe laga letter me kuch romantic likha hoga lekin ye mahashay to formal banne ki koshish kar raha hai gentleman ban raha hai maska laga raha hai kuch karne se pehle how smart of him hahahahaaa😆
anyways jo kuch bhi likha tha bahut sweet & cute tha

but very small update are demand ke hisab se thoda length badho yaar

next part ASAP😊

Haha...yes hopefully next week se I'll be giving longer updates. Abhi I'm shifting places and my sister is coming from abroad this Saturday tou beech beech mein I try to find time to write amidst all the preparations. 😊

Glad you liked the part and loved your interpretation of the letter!