'EK ANCHAHA SAFAR' Thread 2 Epilogue 29-5-12 - Page 33

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Posted: 13 years ago
@tamanna- i will update tonight chaahe jo ho jaaye dont worry... 😊 my pc is irritating me with sudden shutdowns and office 03 doesnt even gives backups but aaj to update pakka hai...
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kitna time lagega dear pls tell😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..

kitna time lagega dear pls tell😭



bas aadah ghanta aur 😭😭
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🄱 kal padhungi update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update is ready... :-) will post 2moro... power cut... This time i m gonna go to c cafe 2 post otherwise (grrr)

@meena.. , tamanna, uteem - ur wait is almost over guys.. Plz abuse my problems a lil taki bhag jaaye saari ki saari...
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iss power cut ki tho😔
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power came 5 mins ago... get ready for the update guys...
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Posted: 13 years ago

next page 😊

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Epilogue

Everything seemed to be perfect in their lives' Days went working, evening for family and nights went in each others embrace' Pari was doing well with her school. She wanted to be as her mami.. a perfect girl.. Although she was so small but always tends to copy her mami ka dressing style walking style eating style and talking style' All of the family members used to laugh at her antics'.

Sanchit was extending his business and was happy with his family.. even though he was alone but his family never let him think so' he always try to keep them all happy and plays the role of a responsible and caring family member'

Asmi, who was now expecting again, was in her 8 months of pregnancy, had become weird' Sanchit always warned maan to be ready when he is going to be father he will have to jhelofy his wife's mood swings too'

Maan always took it lightly and ignored his jiju's talks thinking he is just letting out his frustration' Geet always took care of Asmi and was at her side '..

After few days Asmi gave birth to a small little boy whom his mamu named as Vedant' everyone seemed to be happy' meanwhile Geet came to know she is expecting'. She was so exited to tell it to her husband but was so confused how to explain it to him.. She was thinking numerous ways to tell him and was not able to finalize how to explain it to him non-embarrassingly'. She watched several movies did several rehearsals and finally gave up'.

One fine Day Maan was sitting in the lounge.. Geet brought tea for him and sat beside him' she was playing with her dupatta and looking downwards' Maan saw her and said

Maan:- whats wrong jaan???

Geet looked at him stunned and said

Geet:- nahi northing is wrong everything is to be alright' haina babaji' kucch bhi to nahi aap apni coffee pio na'

Maan:- that is why I am asking you Geet' you are very well aware ki I don't drink tea still you brought it for me and now you are asking me to drink my coffee??? Is everything alright???

Geet:- oh !!! mai bhi na' sorry I'll bring coffee for you'..

She stood up and was about to leave when he held her hand and made her sit next to him'.

Maan:- Geet look into my eyes'''

She wasn't''

Maan:- Geet look into my eyes''

She didn't

Maan:- Geet Jaan I said look into my eyes'.

She did''

Maan:- I can clearly see the desire to tell me something' what is stopping you jaan'. Do tell me'. Is everything fine??? Kya hua meri mishty ko???

She was unable to control her blush so she hugged him and said'

Geet:- woh Baat hi kucch aisi hai ki'.

Maan:- kya baat hai Geet' mai picchle kucch dino se dekh raha hu tumhe tum khoyi khoyi rehti ho' koi problem hai'.

[I am watching you since last few days' you seem to be lost somewhere]

Geet couldn't control now' she was dying to see his reaction' she gathered all her courage and said

Geet:- we are gonna change ourselves''.

Maan broke the hug and looked at her questioningly

Geet:- don't look at me like this'..

She kept her palm on his cheek and said smilingly

Geet:- you are gonna become a horse and I am gonna become a maid soon'.

Maan:- (confused) whattt????

Geet laughed out loud and said

Geet:-yes we both are gonna become maid and horse respectively'..

Maan:- Geet is there any play or what in pari's school' if yes then tell her I wont participate in such a weird concept'..

Geet:- nahi baba' there is nothing like that'. And by the way pari ke mamu pari is having her vacations'.. there is someone else who wants you to be his horse'..

Maan:- who the hell wants to be in the living hell to dare to mess with MSK and his wife'.

Geet :- there is someone and MSK and his darling wife will become the anything for him and that too with their own pleasure''.

Maan:- Geet' it isn't a fairy tale right??? Then stop behaving like a kid'.

Geet:- it is indeed a fairy tale and you are my prince charming'.

Maan:- oh ya'.. a prince charming horse right' stop it yaar' and by the way who is the one who has the courage to make me a horse' koi magician hai kya???

Geet who was now pissed off with her dumb husband spoke

Geet:- Junior MSK but hope who aapki tarah buddhu na ho'..

Maan stood numb there, still at his position for few minutes as if he was assimilating the news he just got or still trying to understand properly the words of his wife''

Geet was looking at him with his change of expressions from confusion to shock then to happy and then to be on cloud nine''.

He simply cupped her face and kissed her forehead and said

Maan:- simply a thanks' to be in my life as a candle in the dark, as a flower in the desert, as a water in the burning heart, to make my life complete' fully complete'''

Geet smiled at him and kissed his forehead and said'.

Geet:- same to you Mr. Khurana'..

Maan:- Geet let us break this news to everyone' dadima and di will be super happy'

Saying so he started to rush when she held her hand and said'.

Geet:- everyone knows''

Maan:- whattt????

Geet:- haan sabko pata hai'.

Maan:- am I the last one to know????

Geet:- no' pari doesn't know yet'.. so technically she is the last one to know aur vedant ko bhi nahi pata hai'.

Maan:- Geet they are kids''

Geet:- toh kya karu??? They are kids right but who is behaving like kids now'. Complaining why am I the last one' har baat me chik chik karne ki purani aadat jo hai' haina,' pata nahi kya samajhte hain apne aapko'.

Maan:- but geet mai to'.

Geet:- kya mai to huh'. Instead of being happy ki you are gonna be father you are cribbing ki youy are the last one' aapko samajh nahi aata kab kaisa reaction dena chahiye' chadoo'.. go and sit somewhere muh fula ke ki you are the last one to be told'. Chadddo mainu ki'.

Saying so she stormed off to her room and threw the door on his face with the best possible force leaving a astonished Maan behind'.

He kept on looking at the door for sometime then looked back and found his jiju enjoying the situation'.

Sanchit:- look I told you'.

Maan:- jiju don't smile' I have never seen her so angry'..

Sanchit:- now many such things are gonna happen Maan which you have never seen experienced or expected'.

Maan:- but abhi se'.

Sanchit:- hmmm kiddo ke case me thoda jaldi gussa ho gayi ' go and calm her down'

Maan:- are you sure' kucch phenk ke to nahi maaregi'.

Sanchit:- (laughs) see the Great MSK is scared of his wife'

Maan:- (straightning his expressions) no never' I am going' you are gonna see.

He went straight to his room finding the door to be opened and Geet siting quietly reading the magazine'.

Maan went to her and kept his hand on her shoulder'. Geet shewed him away' he does it several times but the response was same'.

He finaly held her through her shoulders and made her face him'. He then held his both ears and said'

Maan:- I am sorry mishty' ab maan bhi jao na'.

Geet smiled at him and said'

Geet:- okay'.. but see what am I reading'.

She showed him a book instructing learning and tutoring different stages of pregnancy'

Maan found her sudden change of mood weird and remembered his jiju's warnings and smiled'.

Maan:- I need this book more than you jaan'.

He hugged her and she kept her head on his shoulders'.

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Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 13 years ago
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Months passed and maan was always there by Geet's side ' bearing her every illegal or legal demands as lovingly as he could' beside this he took care of everything required'.

He held his ears in front of his jiju realizing his mistake of taking his words for granted and agreed with him completely

Days passed merrily and Geet gave birth to a boy in return she got two whole weeks of Maan off form office because they had a bet on whether there will be a boy or a girl'..

Maan lost the bet and he had to be at home for her'' he pleasantly accepted as he wanted to spend time with his son'.

Maan was sitting beside Geet watching her and his son lovingly when dadima entered'. She saw the family and smiled through tears'.

She came to them and asked'

Dadima:- humare prince ka koi naam socha hai aap dono ne'

Maaneet realized that they haven't thought on the issue and looked at each other asking with signal if the other has thought the name'..

Dadima:- nahi socha to ab soch lo'''

After thinking for a while both maaneet looked at each other and spoke in unision

Maaneet:- Gaurav

Both smiled and looked at each other with a calm smile and dadima looked at them in aww thinking how both of them thought the same thing''

Dadima:- Gaurav'..

Maan:- haan dadima'. Our small little khurana is the connection between us and Gaurav is the one who was the only one who brought us together'.This is the only reason ki I and Geet chose this name'. haina geet'.

Geet nodded her head smilingly''

After 4 years'. Geet gave birth to an angel whom she named as Maansi' because she looked like Maan and her eyes were as same as those of maan' deep brown speaking eyes'.

When Gaurav saw her he was kinda possessive for his mother'

Gaurav:- mamma??? Who is she??? What is she doing in your lap??

Geet smiled and kissed his forehead and said

Geet:- baccha she is your little angel' aapki chhotti behen

He only grasped two words 'aapki chhoti'

Gaurav:- meri chhoti'

Saying so he looked at Maansi and caressed her head lovingly'

Geet was stunned on hearing those words from his mouths and tears formed in her eyes realizing the history repeating itself'.

After 3 years''

Geet was roaming here and there with the food trey in her hands and was looking for her kids when she saw Maan engrossed in his file'. She thought of teasing him so she went near to his ear and shouted

Geet:- Maaannn

Maan was so shocked and surprised that all papers flew away' before he could say anything she againg shouted'

Geet:- siii''. Maaannn siii

Dadima laughed out loud watching her and at the condition of her grandson'..

Maan looked at her as if he would burn her alive and said'..

Maan:- Geet tum baccho jaisi harkate mat kara karo ab tum do baccho ki ma ho'. Atleast for your age's sake stop behaving like kids'

Gee:- aello'. Maine kya baccho jaisi harkate ki Mr. Khurana' mai to aapki beti lo bula rahi thi'.

Maan:- oh really' this is your old tactic Mr. khurana to tease me with my daughter's name'.

Geet:- dadima I teased him kya???? Ab meri beti ka naam hi (shoutiung) Maaansiii hai to use (shouting again) Maaansiii hi bulaungi na'.

Dadima:- bilkul''.

Maan:- yes yes' you are gonna support her only na'. aapki laadli jo hai'.. but do tell her she is the mom of two kids so she should stop behaving like kids'.

Geet:- Oh! Mere baccho ke papa'. Apne baccho ko khaana khial ke dikhao to maanu' I took the name of lunch and see both of them disappeared'. Bilkul apne papa peg aye hain'.

Maan:- yes all bad habits belong to papa only na'. mamma ki tarah to sirf 24 ghante bolte hain dono' which is a very good habit'.

Geet:- filhaal to baatein aap kar rahe ho' if you'll make them eat then only I'll take your words'.

Maan:- okay they are playing in the garden'

Geet:- garden dhoop me' mai nahi chodungi dono ko'

Saying so she rushed to garden and he followed her'.

She saw them both playing with the flowers there'.

Gaurav:- nahi meri cchoti' you'll get hurt'

Maansi:- bhaiya' I am thleee don't tall me toti'.

Geet smiled with tears watching her kids when maan came from behind and said'

Maan:- end of emotional scene Mrs. Khurana' its fun time now'

Saying so he grabbed the trey of food from her hands and moved towards his kids''

Maan:- hmmm so what are my kids doing???

Both of them saw their father and hugged him and Maansi said

Maansi:- daddy bhaiya ne bola we are hidind from mamma

Gaurav:- meri chhoti' buddhu who humara secret tha'. Nahi daddy hum to khel rahe the'.

Maan caressed their heads and said''

Maan:- Mamma come here''..

Geet smiled and came to them'..

Geet:- yes daddy'..

Maan:- mamma we are goanna play a game with our kids' so are you ready????

Geet:- yes daddy mamma is ready' but my kids are ready or not???

Kids:- yes we are ready'.

Maan:- so I and mamma are sitting her with this plate of food' boring food of course'.

Geet glared at him'.Maan ignored...

Maan:- what you have to do is answer a question' who answers maximum questions will get maximum prizes in the form of food bites' so who wants to win???

Both of them shouted exitedly:- me me me me..

They both deliberately asked them the questions they are well aware of and within few minutes the food plate was empty'.

Geet smiled at Maan

Geet:- congrats daddy'

Maan:- thanks mamma'

Gaurav:- mamma daddy' you both are our mamma daddy' u both call each other something else'.

Sanchit and asmi entered the garden just then with the kids so sanchit spoke

Sanchit:- oh really !!! what do they call each other gaurav beta???

Gaurav:- namaste fufaji'..namaste bua'. Nothing fufaji they both call each other'.

Maaneet:- no gaurav no'.

Gaurav:- why daddy??? Am I doing something wrong' is this bad manners mamma'.

Asmita:- no beta'. Daddy is only scared of me'..

Gaurav:- daddy''. bua is so sweet don't be scared of her and haan they both called each other "Jaan"

Both Sanchit and Asmi together shouted

Sanita:- ooohhh jaaan'.

Geet:- meri pari mere prince mere paas aao'

Navya and Vedant came to geet' Navya was a bit older now and Vedant was a year elder to Gaurav..

Geet:- ab my these two kids are gonna tell me what your mamma and papa call each other'

Smiled vanished from their faces and they bothy looked at Geet in surprise'.

Vedant:- mami papa calls mamma Shona''

Maaneet:- ooohhh Shonaaa

Navya:- but mamma calls papa sweetooo

Maaneet laughed out loud and said

Maaneet:- ooohhh sweeetuuu

All four of them laughed at their kids while their kids got engaged in playing with each other'..

And as every story says'

An They Lived Happily Ever After'''''''.

Chalte the apni apni dagar
kismat laayi saamne ek anchaha safar

Thi woh zindagi ki misaal
Tha woh patthar bemisaal

Kismat ne khela ek ajab khel
Aur hua aag aur barf ka mel


Yu to aag deti barf ko jala
Par aag kab barf bani use b pata na chala


Uski maasumiyat uska woh bin maange diya pyaar
Cchu gaya dil hua teer aar paar


Uske pyar ne diya patthar jaise dil ko tod
Kya kar pata agar hota koi aur


Diya zindagi ke har mod pe saath
Har pal paya apne haath me uska haath


Tha zindagi me andhera charo taraf magar
Roshni ban gaya ye "
Ek Anchaha Safar"



@all- I am so sorry for the late update... hope you like the update... so for this ff , for the last ttime plz do press like button and plz do comment...



Loved the safar of Ek Anchaha Safar with all your support... thanks a lot sincerely...



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