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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lot dear for comenting... 😊😊😊😊
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Thanks a lot dear...

loved reading ur comments


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Liked this 1, waiting 4 radev wedding..

Thanks for liking Myra...

and wedding...

actually I had to completed the feelings of Daadima, a bit abt rohan and all which will tkae upto ten parts after that wedding and the story completes... 😉
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Originally posted by: Liashna

Love this part😃


Thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot ashna ji. loved to read ur comment

after a long time...


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Part 34


Radhika smiled as Mrinalini left from home and she checked off wether any other was there...

Radhika went near Vishaka's room and called her

Vishaka came her and her condition was like... her hair was completely disturbed and her clothes had a good amnt of dust on it with some black marks on her face. Radhika tried to stop her laugh and said "Didi, aapka room saaf karna khatam ho gaya/."

Vishaka:Haan////////

Radhika:ammaji aapke saath hain(Is ammaji with u )

Vishaka:Yeah/

Radhika:Di get ur self changed and come down... U had a very good important work to do...

Vishaka:Itna important hain...

Radhika:Haan the most important work

Vishaka:I and ammaji will do don't worry u take rest

Radhika smiled and said come soon haan

Vishaka:Half an hour...

Radhika:Okay di bye...

As Radhika left Amaji dragged Vishaka back and 'Arey chori kyun kaam karne ke liye haan kaha."(Hey why did u agree to do work)

Vishaka:Amma if we do important work na, all credit will go for us. that's why

Ammaji:Haan wo bhi sach hain acha chalo jaldi jaatein hain(Yeah thats right, lets leave)

Vishaka:Dress change karo, main bhi change karungi.(We will change our dress and leave)

Ammaji:Yes, mori beti kitna hoshiyaar ban gayi(Yeah, my chiild became a clever)

Vishaka:Acha abhi jaao(Well leave now)

As ammaji left ... Vishaka closed her door and "Radhika, u did a very big mistake by giving it to me, now I will win."

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Radhika:Kya winning itna papad nahi chalega(What winning... no way)

Dev:Nope I will win

Radhika:Nope Dev this won't suit me

Dev:Kyun western will suit u beautifully, don't worry

Radhika:Ohhh I will wear it but u didn't tell me time na, I will wear at same time after our marriage completes.

Dev coming near to her... "hey arent we married now."

Radhika moving back and as she touched the wall Dev came near and was abt to kiss when Radhika smiled and moving to side "Mr. Dev Purohith ! Jab tak humaara shaadi sab ke saamne na hoga, u are the very Dev Purohith and I am this very Radhika sharma. And upto then no kisses or no western wear."

Dev: Wow... atleast any other chudidaar mein toh change karo, ye official mein tu toh ek HM ki tarah dikh rahi ho.

Radhika:I will change and come but till then kuch shrarat mat karo aur yahi baitoh.,,,,

Radhika went into the wash room and Dev sat at her laptop, he tried to start it but it held a pass word he shouted "Radhika Password batao teri computer ki"

" Secret hain nahi batavungi."

Dev:Kya hum try karo

Radhika:Ur wish

Dev tried to open it using many words like Kanha etc etc... Then he remembered some words of her 'Haan Main bhi pyaar karti hun na , apni Kishan Kannaya se...'

Dev smiled to himself and typed "Kishankannaya." The computer got its access and Dev shouted "Yes. Radh I got access to ur computer,."

Radhika who was under shower smiled and said "U still had ur mind. any way good going..."

Dev was opening it and ... Radhika came out dressed rushing and closed it,

Dev:Kya hua

Radhika had water falling from her hair and she even doesn't have her duppatta in a proper way she kept it in her bag and said "Dev jab humaara shaadi hoga tab hum aapko vusmein kya hain dikhavungi."

Dev:Thik hain... But tera dres kya hain

Radhika looked at herself she was wearing a majenta colour punjabi top which had a collered neck and full hands and a green colour bottom and duppatta.
Kya hua"


Dev:Collar wali, kyun Radh normal pehen sakte hain na

Radh was now drying her hair with towel... "Agar kisi ne mera mangal sutra dekha toh, mere aur tera bhi band bajega."

Dev:Ohhh phir full hands,???

Radhika:Will u show to the whole world abt my Bruises in BBC

Dev laughed and said " Ab tera sab style badal chuka hain, tera hair toh kuch alag sa fashio mein ban gaya tha, and tera dresses oh bolna hi mat..."(Now all ur style was changed. ur hair in some different style and ur dresses not to mention)

Radhika was wearng her mangal sutra in her neck and keeping it inside said "Kya karoom, aap ki wajah se hi hua tha na////////"(What to do,... its all becoz of u only na)

Dev smield and said 'I am truly sorry Radh, I didn't do it willingly, but our of my anger I did it off..."

Radhika turned back wiht sindoor box in her hand and U should never tell me sorry, and may be becoz of that we both atleast proposed each other . other wise best friend hi chalte rahega saare zindagi, and see i got my real family and Sharma Nivas got its sons back. see how much advantage... Kanha sab kuch humaarein ache ke liye hi karega."

Dev smiled and taking the sindoor box from her hand took a pinch and applied it on her fore head. Radhika closed her eyes absorbing all its divinity and later she smiled opening her eyes.s she opened her eyes she had other surprise too there was a big photo of her and Dev indeed to say all their best friends on the wall.

Radhika looked at Dev and: Farewell day ki photos//////

Dev:Yeah see we both are standing side by side holding each other, and all our friends I like this one.

Radhika:Photo toh bahut acha aaya tha, lekin mujhe to Maa bahut yaad aarahi hain, Dad ne bola ki vuske paas Mohanbaavuji, devki baavuji dad aur mom ko saath mein ek photo hain...(The photo was really nice. But I am remembering my mom. Dad said that he had a photo having him, Mohan baavuji, devki maa and mom. )

Dev: Devki aunty and Mohan uncle????//

Radhika:aap jaante ho kya Devki maa mummy ka sister hain(U know, mom was sister of Devki mummy)

Dev:Ye kya...(What?)

Radhika :Haan Mummy ne devki maa ki maa aur papa ki saji beti nahi, she was adopted , actually when dadji's friend died he brought his dauhgter along with him and Sharma ji ne vusko isliye acept nahi kiya kyun ki Mummy ka asli maa aur papa itne paise waalein yaan naam wali khandaan se nahi hain'(Yeah mom was adopted by Devki mom's parents, she was adopted when her parents dies as her parents was best friends of Devki mom's [arents. But Sharma ji didn't accept mom as his daughter becoz mom's family wasn't a big family like Sharma's ad so Dad and Mom ran away and married each other)

Dev:Ohhh

Radhika:I will ask dad and take that photo and get it laminated for me , Maan Bhaiyya and Mrinalini di

DevGood thing...

Radhika got a call and she attended it... "Hello"

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Radhika:Mariya maa aap vus corrier ko lekhe apne paas rakhiye hum jab aavungi tab lenge(Mariya, u take that corrier and keep with u, when I come I will take it)

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Radhika:Acha vo admi ko de do(Fine give phone to him)

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Radhika:Hello! I am Radhika Sharma what is problem U can handle it to our servant

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Radhika:Oh I am sorry sir and I am coming... Please sit in I will arrive in another half an hour/

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'Radhika:ha sir rakhti hoon

Dev Kya hua

Radhika:One importnat post aaya tha, I need to go for Gayathri nivas now itself

Dev:But Khana

Radhika:Wait a minute..

Dev:Wait wait, U had to comb ur hair...

Radhika was combing it fastly covering sindoor and then went to Vishaka's room "Di"

Vishaka came out in a normal top and jeans... "Radhika I am ready shall we ..."

Radhika:I am sorry di I had some good amnt of work and can u make food for today I has to leave

Vishaka:But...

Radhika:Ammaji hain na vo aapki saari help karegi.

Radhika :Gouri... gouri...

Maid came there running and "Jee Didi."

Radhika:U help to, Vishaka in cooking

Maid:Ji/...

Radhika:Sorry, Tum na Vishaka ji aur ammaji ko khana banane mein sahayata karo, hum abhi aayenge.(Sorry u will help Vishaka and ammaji in cooking)

Gauri bend her head and said "Ji"

Radhika called Dev "Dev ji!"

Dev came form his room as an innocent boy and Radhika left along with him...

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Vishaka gave Gauri some money and "Gauri u and all ur maids leave now for today U had leave and we will manage in kitchen."

Gauri:Par/////////

Vishaka:no tum jaao

Gauri:Ji...



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As car reached Gayathri nivas Radhika came out from car in rushing and came in,...

She saw the Lawyer sitting there and did a formal namastey to him and sat there/ "I am sorry Lawyer ji, I thought it was some normal corrier."

Lawyer:Nothing of problem and aapne jaise chaha waise hi kiya gaya tha.(Its of no problem, and I did it in the way u wanted)

Dev who sat beside Radhika too read it as Radhika took papers and Dev frowned,,,,,,,,

Lawyer:Radhika ji The amnt of property u got before one month from Shankar sir, from that the amnt of the property u mentioned will have the Power of attorey in name of Rohan Sharma.

Radhika:Thank u Lawyer ji and don't say anything to Dad, I will speak to him later

Lawyer nodded and looked at Dev "Beti ye..."

Radhika:Not of problem, he's my best friend and indeed he's the Brother in law of pur sister,

Lawyer nodded and left off...

Dev:Radhika Rohan koun hain(Who's Rohan)

Radhika:Kyun jalan ho raha hain kya(Why feelign jealous)

Dev:Nahi par agar tum ne kisi par itna barosa rakha toh itna acha aadmi koun hain dekhne ka man kar raha tha(No shut up, but if ever u trust any one to this extent. who's that good person just wanna know)

Radhika:Vo imarti didi ki hone waale pati hain aur ek orphan hain. Lekin jaha tak Bhabhi ne bataya, he was a good man... and last motnh papa ne di ki property share ko half half karke mujhe aur Bhaiyya ko diya tha,lekin mujhe vo acha nahi laga isliye, di ki jitni share mujhe aur bhaiya ko mil gaye vus ko hum rohan bhaiyya ke naam par likhne ke liye socha tha, Bhai already complete kiya tham, mera toh ab complete huyi hain(Actually he's the fiance of Imarti didi, and last month dad made the property into two alves and wrote in name of mine and bro. Actually I didn't like it. so me and brother thought to dived all the property we got into three halfs and give the third half to Rohan bro. Bro already removed that amnt of property from his share and got it registered in Rohan's name. Mine is remaining which completed now)

Dev: Poor Rohan may be he was planning for marrying some other

Radhika:Nahi, wo toh abhi bhi di ke yaad mein hi rehte hain... Acha Rohan bola toh yaad agaya ek minute Dev(No he was still in memory of Di. yeah, u mentioned Rohan name na... oen minute)

Radhika called Geet ...

Geet lifted and Radhika "Bhabbhi.."

Geet;Radhu, kyun tumne mujh se jhoot bola./(Radhu why u lied me)

Radhika:I am sorry dear and han Rohan jeeju ko kaise hain(I am sorry, hows Rohan jeeju)

Geet:Itna problematic nahi hain aur hum donom toh ye soch rahe ki vusko waapas India Laao(Out of problem but we are thinking to bring him back to India)

Radhika:Yes it will eb good He will get som relief from memories of Ruby

Dev frowned with name Ruby'

Geet:Haan I am trying to convince him and are u staying with dad in PB/////

Radhika:Haan daadima ki thik hone tak humne ye soch ki hum yaha rukhenge(We decided to stay there till daadima becomes alright)

Geet:Tera ghaat kaise hain(Hows ur injuries)

Radhiak:Its minimised and Bhaiyya hain

Geet:Noe he was in hospital I stayed in house

Radhika:Okay Bhaibhi and every problem here was solved

Geet:Dev too

Radhika holding hand of Dev "Haan Bhabhi, its the first solved problem"

Geet:Radhu Kabhi bhi Dev jaise acha pyaar karne waalein ko chodna mat(Radhu, never leave a good lover like Dev)

Radhika:I know, acha Bhabhi main rakhti hun, baad mein cal karungi(I know, okay I will hold for now. will call later)

Geet:Okay/////

Dev:Ruby koun hain(Whose Ruby)

Radhiak:Mera didi(My elder sister)

Dev:Tujhe kitni sisters hain(How many sisters do u have)

Radhika:One

Dev:Then Imarti?

Radhiak:Ohhh actually Imarti ka poora naam ImartiRuby hain, U.S mein mostly she was known as Ruby and Rohan bro too call her Ruby

Dev:Ohhh

Radhika:Kya main sahi kiya tha na(Did I do right thing)

Dev:Kya(What)

Radhika:P.O.A

Dev:U did right

Radhika:Thanks Dev

Dev: Dostoin ke beech hi Thanks-sorry nahi hote hain aur humaare beech...

Radhiak:okay

Dev:good, palace toh acha hain, won' t u show me (The apalce was good, won't u show me)

Radhika bet him on his back and said "Apni sasuraal ko dekhne ka itna shouk hai."(Why are u excited to see ur In laws place)

Dev said "Haan kya karoo, mere kitni sasuraal hain, ek yaha ka aur ek vrindavan ka"(What to , I have these many In laws places. one here, one in Vrindavan) then he bet on her writst play fully and "U can show me right"

Radhika smiled and said 'Dev abhi nahi, maine ammaji aur vish ko chodke aaya tha , We has to go pata nahi kaise tamasha ban rahe honge/."(Not now.. I left Vishaka and Ammaji there. Don't know what the hell they are doing. we has to leave)

"Mere bina kaise jaaonge..."(How can u leave with otu me)

Radev turned back to see asmi there and Radhika went to her and hugged her...

Asmi:Bas bas, abhi abs do din hi hua tha, do saal nahi(bas bas, its only two days, not two years)

Radhika:Hey sab log aagaye, kaha hain saare log...(Evry one came. where are they)

Asmi:actually we all reached today mgn itself but most of us went to keep their bags...

Dev:Par. shalini toh ghar nahi aaya tha(But shalini didn't come to home)

Asmi:Phikar mat, birju and shalini were reaching, they got their flight a bit late(Don'tt worry they are on way,. their flight was a bit late)

Dev:Ohhh, but u know asmi I am nearly shocked when I know the truth abt them,

Asmi:We all tooo, but kitna acha pair hain donom ki, we all love them

Dev:Yeah...

Radhika;Asmi will u rest or come with me there.

Asmi:I will come

Radhika :Then come soon...

Asmi:Okay

Radhika:Nikki aanchu, sab ko bhi aane ke liye kaho na'

Asmi:Radhu main maanta hun, u are now a bg girl but I am not ur servant, Madam mujhe fresh toh hone do(I agree u are a big girl now, but I a not ur servant too.. let me get my self fresh)

Radhika smiled and "U go, I will call them, bahut saaarein kaam hain humeun"

Asmi:Kya, are u both planning to marry tomorrow itself

Radhika:Shut up okay, Theres some other thing, call them to come home, for present we are on a mission

Asmi:I will fresh and come u only call them

Radhika:Okay

Asmi left off and Radhika made conference call to all the 12 friends and told them to reach home and she cut the call.Dev" Are u planning to..."

Radhika:Yes

Dev:U . u can't even control ur love or ur anger

Radhika:They didn't keep with me, they kept wiht u. and How do u expect me to control my self

Dev: Now what will u do

Radhika:Madam ko PB mein rahne ka bade shouk hain na, dekhungi kaise rahogi, aur kitni sukh se rahogi(Madam , had big interest to live in P.B right, lets see how many days will she stay there)

Dev:Oh my god. For vishaka only u are punishing in this way then me, u thought for five years that I hate u. how much will u punish me>>>>>>>

Radhika:Dev ! kya aapko jitna punishment mila vutna kaafi nahi(How much punishment u get, isn't it enough?)

Dev:Wo toh hain(Yeah)

Radhika:Ye asmi bhi na, kitna der karegi... God...(This asmi, how late does she do. god.)

Dev:" Atleast till then show me ur room madam

Radhika:Mera room dekhne ka shouk hain tik hain aao(Well come)

Rahika took him to her room and showed it, Dev saw Radh's dairy... "Hey radhika, what's there in this"

Radhika closed it and "I will show u one day but not today. "

Dev then skeptically "Waise bhi tera ek aur dairy bhi hain mer paas"(I had another dairy of urs)

Radhika:Kya, kis dairy(What which one)

Dev; I think the dairy at the time we spend our college days

Radhiak:Did u read

Dev smirking "Any doubt"

Radhika turned all shy becoz she remembered what all she wrote in it... then she looked at him and " Wo dairy, tumhe kaise mili"(Where did u get it)

Dev smield and "After the week u went off from house, I went into ur room and then I saw it being opened, I read it and then came to know that u love me"

Radhika gasped and "Then why did u do that nautanki on Valentines day"

Dev smiled and " Actually U had to knwo much more than what u know now, acually Maan had no plan of asking me the question abt dream girl, but every thing regarding playing truth and dare, Maan asking me question was my plan.and I just wanna solve the problem that day itself and Maan also told me that u were his own sister on the very day we met in court ////// becoz Maan was the only person in our group who know me much better than armesh and I used to treat him just like vivek Bhaiyya and used to say him every thing... Maan also knows that we both are married... and every day he used to call me and talk for atleast for one hour abt what u did when u are not in here."

Radhiak sat there in gasp... "So that means even the flight was also got cancelled by maan"

Dev:No not at all it was not a game but "What ever he did na, its not his fault, he never deceived u, but he tried to help me"

Radhika still sat there gasping... "Dev please give me some time..."

Dev;Radhika...

Radhika:Please...

Dev left and she sat there, she took her dairy immediately and wrote "I am sorry Maan bro, I misunderstood u, I am really sorry.I remember a day Dad had plan to marry me to Rohan jeeju, but Maan wantedly avoided it off and that day I didn't understand why but today I did it. Really Thanks bro... I am the luckiest to have u as my bro..."

"Yes Radhika u are the luckiest"

Radhika looked back to see Dev standing behind her looking into dairy, Radhika;I told u to leave me right.,

Dev: Haan but I can't take my life off na

Radhiak:What

Dev:Haan if i leave u, i will die, because u are the reason for my life and my oxygen, I can't bear u angry on me at all, so I stood here only

Radhika: Dev! Kya i Radharani kabhi bhi apni Kanha par ghussa kar sakhti hain...(Dev Radha Rani can never bhi anger on her Kanha)

Dev smiled and said "Lekin jab Radha rnai rooth thi hain Kanha vusko maanana ke liye Asmaan-Dharti ek kar deta hain"(Yeah but When Radharani was anger on kanha, Kanha makes Earth and sky into one to make her out of anger)

Radhika:Metaphorical?? Sky and earth can never unite Dev. And I am not interested in metaphory

Dev smiled and said "Ur smile is my oxygen hydrogen every thing..."

Radhika:Don't make me sit on ur head, if ever I sit on ur head, neeche aana bahut problem hota hain

Dev:No problem darling I will bear u for ever.

Radhika and Dev hugged each other in a friendly way. Asmi who came there then "Ahem Ahem"

Radev released their hug and Asmi came in saying "Radhika, shall we leave"

Radhika:Haan asmi...

Radev left to PB...


Precap:Vishaka:Jyaada innocent mat banao. I can even kill u or kill Dev

The next minute the thing happened was Vishaka had some immense pain "Pain becoz some one slapped her, and pain becoz radhika slapped her/."

Radhika warning her "Don't even think of that di. I am not the old Radhika who will fear for u. Time has come when u had to fear for me. and If ever I disclosed all ur things and the things u and ur ammaji done to me, then u both will be threw out of house.'

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Thank u all for ur lovely comments and likes

Hope I amn't boring u

But I am trying to bring some good moments between Radev that's it

and according to precap, u had some idea abt what will be the next part was, but there was another surprise too,

Hope u liked this part and will comment down.

Silent readers lease atleast press like button,,,,,,,,,,

we all are missing CB a lot, so will try to do updates more frequently...

Hari😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
love this FF...i just started reading it 2 days back from the starting and i loved each and every part of it...wished to see something like this in CB also ...u r awesome writer
i just started reading the first part and cannot stop myself till i read all the 34 parts..
haan...ek baat kehni padegi radhika soti bohut hai...lol..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you very much Hari sweet update,so Radhs has started to give back to Visaka.waiting for more soon.tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely Part !! Haste Haste Pet Mein Dard Ho Gaya !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice to read wait for other one
Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for informing me...😊 Loved it...

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