Kagaz ki Kashti-Luv tht Sacrifices Life(MG) THRD 3

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anmirza

@anmirza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#601

Awesome but very emotional update =(

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Krupa

@idunno

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#602

one thing i didnt understand why she didnt told him truth?she said sorry she will not talk to him but didnt said reason for that,secondly it was shiv's plot to seperate maneet? to take his revange?

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anieePm

@anieePm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#603

wow yaar

totally loved it

commenting after long time

was on rest

and how r u

awesome update

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sakshi

@tanvi04

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#604

its very painful apne gusse main maan ne ye kya kar diya i hope ki ab to usse akal aa jaye pls update next part soon eagerly waiting for next part

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tich.1990mg

@tich.1990mg

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#605

Teaser

both entered their room,, all maan can see aloofness and fear in her face... he had tried to talk to her but she just held mahika close to her,, some part of him is tormenting in it, still can't do anything... he just silently watched her moving in their room slowly,, her pace was very slow and when he tried to take her in his arm she backed off fearing he may take her baby from her,, he closed his eyes feeling miserable,, seeing so detachment from his love, made him vulnerable...

he saw her slowly placing mahika on teh bed and sat beside her, her face was blank, no emotion was there except her motherly love... he never thought she had been going through so much... he had seen mahika crying but never guessed she was missing the warmth of her mother... he often came to the room when geet was sleeping to check her whether she is ok or not but never realize his aloofness can never be good for her... though she was sleeping everytime but he failed to see the sleeping pills she was taking all the days..

he cried seeing her cradle like a ball but protectively holding her baby with her arms,, she is just staring at the joy of bundle like she is seeing her for the 1st time,, his harshness just shook her whole existence..

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Geet, maan called her but all he can see her moving from the place... he held her hand that is clod now, she didn't tried to remove it but just standing there like a dead body which had no heart beat... he slowly turned her and tried to search something but all is blank, her eyes had lost the shine in it,,, her eyes that only showed love and longing replaced by fear and unknown distance...

he tried to touch her face rubbing her cheeks with his thumbs but she walked away leaving him feel the remorse, the damage he had done in his anger...

tears spilled out from his eyes as she saw mahika staring at him with her big doe shape eyes and smiling... he saw geet,, she was just lifeless... she lost her smile her reason for live only because of him...

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sapna sharma

@kamiya

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#606

awesome update

i don't like that maan snatch the baby from geet

poor geet

nice teasr

now maan's remorse for what'd he do to geet

poor geet became lifeless

Edited by kamiya - 13 years ago

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mandeep

@mandy15

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#607

fantastic update dear:)

i m speechless...

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#608

feelng sad 4 maaneet
bt yaar geet b na mahaan kam bna kre acha hoga..
kya jaroorat thi shiv se dosti ki
wen she knws how mch maan hate shiv..
uff dono ke dono stupid n
hai
so kisi ki side nhi leni..
babaji dono ko thodi akal doh...

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#609

awesome update so emotional and sad ...uff maan ka gussa usspe tumhara yeh shic aag mein ghee daal raha hai ..dekho kya kar diya phir se hospital pahucha diya na geet ko...apne shiv ko control karooo naaa ...

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#610

OMG!!!tum tease karne keliye hey teaser diya hey shayad...
ab neend nahi aayegi😭
its too emotional...😭its really very painful...😭😭

when r u updating dear...
update soon..

geet's coldness towards maan and her fears are justified...
i too wanted his punishment..
but after reading teaser ...😭hope every thing gets fine
can't wait so long after reading this teaser

Edited by maaneetmaahi - 13 years ago