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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: --Siva--

OMG! Jabeen, you are ending this FF? Really? Why??


Poor Anjali.. Felt really bad for her.. Isn't she a very normal girl who believes in fairy tale and ends up broken?? I feel pity! Glad she found solace in Aman, finally she's getting what she deserve..!

Tragedy Ahead?? Please!! Hope there is happily ever after for these 2 couples!

Thanks for the PM dear!


Thank you for your lovely comments as usual! :) I think its best to end my FF after 2 more updates because it will leave more of an impact!😆 Most welcome for the PM. Hmm i'm a horrible writer. I know everyones going to hate the next update!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Res.<3

Last exam on Friday than i'm free to update!

Update will be on Saturday guys.

Finally you can find out who dies!🤗

Thanks for the amazing comments and encouragement!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
I wish the lovebirds survive and wud not mind if Shyam dies... will wait for saturday.. and Best of Luck for your Exam...
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Posted: 14 years ago


Okay. That's it. I'm definitely done! After negotiations with this update & myself, I have officially decided after this update, ONE MORE & than the epilogue which will be posted this week it self. Many of you are going to be furious at me 😆 But before you attack me with chappals, Here's a clue. It's not what it seems, It's worse! 😳 Curious? I hope so. Will be looking forward to your comments! And sorry it's been so late. Exams finished yesterday & It's 2:15 here so. WHOOT! 🥳

RECAP: Anjali's story! 😭 Shyam's out of jail, Arnav's gone to collect Khushi.😳

Part 13- broken glass

"No this goes there. Khushi. Tu bhi na"

She slapped her forehead in frustration as she re-arranged her room for the third time. It had been the fourth day she left the Raizada mansion and even after having a conversation with Arnav last night, her mind still didn't feel content. She had a feeling it was going to be a bad day. A really bad day which lead her to do what she did when she was nervous. She sighed as she looked at the plate of jalebi's next to her & fell on to bed. She stared at the picture's around her bedroom wall and smiled, than picking up the photo frame next to the bed, she grasped her hand and tenderly stroked Arnav's picture before bringing it to her chest and hugging it tightly. She closed her eyes to get some peace when she suddenly heard the door being banged on and rushed to check what was going on.

She opened the door immediately aggravated and was about to scream at the person banging on her door furiously but instead her facial expressions changed from a round 'O' shape to a small smile.

"Arnavji" she whispered as he embraced her and put his shoulders around her petite form.

She smiled as she rubbed his back and inhaled his scent. He smelt bad. Really bad. Scrunching her nose, she put her hands onto his shoulders.

"Arnavji. Didn't you take a bath?" she giggled and then suddenly turned serious. "Arnav, You here. What are you doing here? Di? What if she?"

"Shhh" he whispered as he put his fingers onto her soft lips.

"You're coming home"

Khushi stared into Arnav's eyes. Alarmed.

"Arnav. How can I? But"

"Di said. She understands" Arnav said nodding his head and giving Khushi one of those 'laad governer' type expressions.

"And you need to pack" He said smiling, His tone changing and becoming soft.

Khushi smiled as she looked at Arnav. Giving him a quick kiss on his cheek as she ran into her room with a smirking Arnav following. He looked around the room, a tender expression on his face. It was beautiful. It was full of photographs of the family. Of him, Anjali, Nani, everyone. The photo that touched him the most was the one sitting across him beside the bed. It was a picture of him standing beside the pool side. He smiled as he led his hands amongst Khushi's waist and exhaled her scent. He kissed her neck and Khushi closed her eyes.

"Arnav!" She murmured.

"Go on Khushi"

"I.."

"Go on"

"I've finished packing!"

Arnav grumbled as he watched Khushi giggle. He shook his head as he remembered when he had confessed his love.

FlashBack-

"Khushi"


"Yeah"


"I love you!"


Khushi smiled,


"And I LOVE.. jalebi's!" hehe she giggled.


"Khushiii!"


"Arnaaav!. Okay Arnavji, I need to go and help naniji, come home soon okay! Love.. oops byeee!" se smiled and cut the call.


Arnav smirked as he stared at his phone.


"I don't care Khushi, I'll def make you confess your love for me"

Flashback ends-

He shook his head as he met an impatient Khushi.

"Arnav! Come on lets go. I haven't seen Nani in so long. And even Payal jiji! I miss Laxmi as well" Khushi pouted as she saw Arnav smile. "Khushi. We've all missed you." She smiled at his response. "Don't worry about Di Khushi. Everything's going to be fine" Arnav smiled reassuring her and giving her that hope and encouragement she needed.

"Let's go."

"Arnav stop!"

He stared at her enquiringly.

"Well. The thing is when I entered this house, I entered alone. But now that I'm leaving, I want to leave with my foot and your foot together." She blushed as Arnav put his hand over here's and kissed his sweet & innocent wife. "Chalo Khushi". They both left the house unaware of what was going to happen next. If they stayed a minute longer, they would have discovered the broken glass, the picture that had just broken after they had left.

O0O0O0

"Amanji! I can't connect to Chotte. He's not answering his phone! What if? What if Shyam has already got to them!?" Anjali yelled panicking as Aman drove the car as fast as he could.

"Anjali, Calm down. Everything's going to be okay! Where are they? Where does Khushi live?"

"Amanji I don't know! I'm sorry I really don't know. This is all my fault! If I told Khushi not to leave, If I made chotte not have to make a choice, Than maybe this wouldn't have happened" Anjali replied as tears fell down her face.

"Anjali just calm down. Lets keep going. They must be somewhere here?" Aman replied, anxiously. Where was he meant to look for Arnav or Khushi? He didn't even know where to begin. And Shyam could be anywhere.

O0O0O0

"Khushi. Do you want some chaat? Before we go home"

"Nahi Arnav! I want to go home first. I miss everyone really badly."

Arnav nodded as Khushi watched the chaat shops passing by. She licked her lips as she smelt the Pani puri and Chaat masala.

"Okay okay! I'll have some chaat. Come Arnav, Let's eat chaat" she clapped her hands excitedly & started smiling. Arnav just stared at his angelic wife. Her smile was definitely contagious!

He smiled as he watched her munch on chaat and lick her lips with content. She laughed as she said a joke with the shop keeper. And he just stood there watching her. Until she came forward and shook her head, she put some chaat into his mouth and he gulped. She giggled as she watched him & than rain began to drizzle down & landing droplets of water onto them. Khushi smiled as she looked up into the sky and began twirling around laughing loudly. The drizzle came onto her hair which was now completely soaked and Arnav was mesmerized. There was nothing more beautiful than spending the day with his beautiful wife. Eating chaat. And in the rain, dancing he concluded.

"Arnav." Khushi walked up to him.

"I LOVE YOU!" She screamed loudly. So the world could hear.

"ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA!" She screamed. " I LOVE YOU!" she said as she ran to hug him and he held her tight. The words echoed into his ears as he closed his eyes and a tear fell from his eye. Khushi Kumari Gupta loved him.

"Arnav." Khushi walked up to him.

"I LOVE YOU!" She screamed loudly. So the world could hear.

"ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA!" She screamed. " I LOVE YOU!" she said as she ran to hug him and he held her tight. The words echoed into his ears as he closed his eyes and a tear fell from his eye. Khushi Kumari Gupta loved him.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mzNZG2ebuUI[/YOUTUBE]

O0O0O0

"Saale Sahab. Or shall I say ARNAV Singh Raizada?" Shyam whispered as he looked down on his prey. He had been crouching down above the cliff for 45 minutes wondering whether he was in the right place. The secret detective he had hired to keep an eye on Khushi had informed him of her whereabouts. And when he discovered she was with Arnav, he had decided to finally end it all. For better or for worse.

He clenched his fists as Khushi admitted that she loved Arnav. He watched bewildered. What was happening? He thought before anger clouded his face and he loaded the trigger. He glared at Arnav who had his eyes closed and was hugging Khushi tight. His Khushi.

O0O0O0

Arnav had held Khushi tight with excitement. He was ecstatic and because of his excitement, He began twirling Khushi around in his arms. He danced, He smiled, He laughed, and He lived. And then it was all over. In that one second. It was done. It was gone. Arnav Singh Raizada had died.



P.S I made an index!


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2994063/jabeens-i-n-d-e-x-new

Edited by -JollyJabeen- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
First of all...After so many trys I finally got the first place🤪
And finally you updated after so many weeks...By the why how were your exams?

The update was ek dum bindass! I loved it.
It was worth waiting.

It was so sweet how Khushi had put a photo of Arnav next to her bed😳
And she screamed to the whole world that she loves Arnav Singh Raizada😍

Wouldn't that be perfect in the actual show If Khushi would do that too with rain over them?😆
I am too filmy,na?

The words echoed into his ears as he closed his eyes and a tear fell from his eye. Khushi Kumari Gupta loved him.


This line...is just my favorite line.Epic! ❤️

But you know somehow I haven't the feeling that Arnav has been shot...It is Khushi.

Khushi is Arnav's life and she got shot..so that's why Arnav Singh Raizada died..Am I right or right?😆

But If you will kill Arnav or Khushi then...


If you will kill Shyam then...





Edited by Ri_luvs_ArShi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiya, Jabeen!

This is my first time commenting on one of your works and I have to tell you, it's awesome! I wish I had that type of skills! 😳

It was written brilliantly, man! Great work.. 😛

Thanks for the PM and continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
DDD: nooo Arnav can't die that creep wa should die!!! lol
so happy that u updated after so many days :D
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .BlueButterfly.

Hiya, Jabeen!

This is my first time commenting on one of your works and I have to tell you, it's awesome! I wish I had that type of skills! 😳

It was written brilliantly, man! Great work.. 😛

Thanks for the PM and continue soon


Thank you so much Preeti! Awww i'm touched! 😆😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SaJanLuv14

DDD: nooo Arnav can't die that creep wa should die!!! lol

so happy that u updated after so many days :D


Are you sure Arnav's dead? 😆😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing!! <3 Well written 👏

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