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Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous eagerly waiting for next part continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update ,waiting for today's update 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
nicee update ...precap is shocking😲😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi puja u r so sweet and your updat is all so so sweet. but pecap song r all reday ur update .
so plz change the song just like
aaja piya tho pyar du...
aaja aaja o piya(yeh raaste hain pyar ke)
beri piya(davdas)
and
me teri isha me mar ...and so on...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha_maaneet

hi puja u r so sweet and your updat is all so so sweet. but pecap song r all reday ur update .

so plz change the song just like
aaja piya tho pyar du...
aaja aaja o piya(yeh raaste hain pyar ke)
beri piya(davdas)
and
me teri isha me mar ...and so on...



Hi Neha...😃

Thanks a lot for ur sweet comment😃
Regarding the song...'am so sorry...I am ready with the update...and i didn't see ur post before...😕but that's okay...there's always a next time...if u really like the songs u've suggested...can u write a Maaneet sequence with any one of these songs and pm me...I'll try to fit in the song in one of the future updates😳

😳Thanks for ur suggestion😃

PJ⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago

~⭐️Episode 89⭐️~


Scene 1:

The entire way, the silence in the car made Maan and Geet more uneasy. Guru sat with his dad and occasionally looked back at her mum.

"Mamma...aap aur Pappa kuch bolte kyun nahi?"😕

"Eh!😲" she looked at him in surprise, "Guru woh...Pappa gaadi chala rahe hain na...Don't disturb him😕."

Guru nods and sits straight, still wondering why his parents were not talking.😕

...


Scene 2:

Adi and Pinki's home

"Pinki, Doctor ne kaha hai na...No chips...no junk food...only healthy diet...😕"

"Kya Adi...yeh ghaas-phoos aur daal khaane se koi healthy kaise ho sakta hai...Please mere chips do naa..."

"Theekh hai...but remember that baby bhi yahi sab khayega...aur agar baby yeh khayega toh..."

"Nahi nahi😲...I won't eat this...Aap jo kahoge main wahi khaoongi..."

She throws away the chips packet...

Adi's mum comes in and tells them that as per the family traditions they'll have to keep a function for Pinki and the baby...

"Theekh hai Ma...aap jaisa chahein..."

Pinki smiles happily and hugs him...😳

Scene 3:

In Boy's Hostel...where Romeo, Pandey ji and...Manish...a resided...

"Yaar, humein Geet aur Maan sir ke liye kuch karna chahiye...Bechare kitne door-door rahte hain...Ek doosre ko apni dil ki baat bhi nahi bata paate..."😭

"Shriman Romeo, aap nishchit roop se satya kah rahe hain...Maan ji aur Geet ji dono ka virah ab mujhse bhi dekha nahi jaata...Humein avashya unki sahayata karni chahiye..."

"Boys, I have a plan...Oh Wow😳...Manishaa you are awesome...😃😃" boasts Manish...aa himself.

Pandey ji gulps😕 in confusion, and Romeo grimaces🤢...

"Manish...aaa zyaada udne ki zarroorat nahi hai😡...Hum Maan Sir aur Geet ki baat kar rahein hain...koi Shahrukh Khan ki movie ki nahi...joh tum itna excited ho rahe ho..."

"Oh Shut up...Romeo...mera plan toh suno...phir batana ki excited hoon ya nahi?"

He whispers into their ears...and they all join hands in agreement.

"Awesome...ab aayega mazza!!"

👏👏👏👏👏


Scene 4:

The car comes to a halt before Maan's house

Guru gets down first...Maan gets down as well...

Geet opens the door herself and gets down, but her duppatta gets stuck...😲

She turns and sees Maan😳...

Maan removes her duppatta from the car and walks to her😳😳😳...

He hugs her and tears roll down her eyes...

MAHI MAHI

😳😳😳😳😳😳
😳😳

...

"MAMMA!!😕😕"

Geet looks down with a start😲...it was Guru looking at her...and Maan was on the other side of the car, definitely not hugging her. She was just imagining all that...😭😭😭

"Mamma...andar chalein? Pappa wait kar rahein hain."

"Haan beta...chalo."

...

Geet slowly walks past Maan with Guru...While she walks before him; he looks on at her😳...

The wind blows her duppatta over his face😳...he remembers all the old times and slowly removes it from his face😳. Geet doesn't see it...

...

She reaches the doorway...

Dadima sees her and Guru...She rushes to them and grabs them both into a happy hug...😃😃😃😃

"Babaji...aapne meri prarthana sun li...😃" she looks at Maan, "Thank you beta...aapne aakhir apne dil ki baat sun hi li..."

Dadima strokes Geet's hair, kisses her on her forehead and then looks at Guru...She is so overwhelmed with emotions that she is half laughing and half crying...She picks Guru up and kisses him all over...😃

Maan looks at her and says, "Dadima...yeh sirf aapse milne aaye hain...aur kuch nahi.😕"

Dadima stops abrubtly, and looks up at him in shock...😲😭

But Maan is completely indifferent and walks away to his room...

Dadima breaks down tearfully...😭😭😭😭😭

"Daadima aap please mat royiye😭...Main aapko chod kar kabhi nahi jaoonga...Aap jab bhi mujhe yaad karengi...main doda chala aaoonga...😳" says BSK wiping her tears with his tiny hands.😳

Dadima is touched by his words and hugs him...😳

Geet too smiles at her son's innocence and strokes his hair.

"Dadima...main Pappa ke paas jaoon?"😃

"Haan beta...woh aapke Pappa hain...unke paas jaane ke liye aapko kisi ki permission ki zarroorat nahi hai...Jayiye dodte hue jayiye apne Pappa ke paas."

...

Geet then sits on her knees beside Dadima and says,

"Dadima...mujhe maaf kar dijiye😭...yeh sab meri wajah se ho raha hai...Maine unke dil ko bahut dukhaya hai...Maine bahut bada paap kiya hai...😭"

"Nahi beta😭...aap apne aap ko dosh mat dijiye...Hum jaante hai aap kabhi Maan ka saath nahi chodti...aapne toh Sam ki jhooth ko kabhi maana hi nahi tha...par unke bete ke liye...uss bacche ke liye aapne apne pyaar ko kurbaan kar diya...Main jaanti hoon aap duvidha main thi...aur yeh sirf ek Maa hi samajh sakti hai...aur aapne uss mamta ki awaaz ko suna...Main aapko kabhi doshi nahi manoongi...Shayad Babaji ki yahi iccha thi. Hum aapki jagah hote toh shayad yahi karte...aur aisa karne ke liye saccha pyaar hona chahiye...Maan ke liye aapka pyaar niswarth hai...aur aap dono door reh kar bhi sada ek doosre se pyaar karte rahe...yahi aap dono ki pyaar ki jeet hai..."

Geet was moved by her words and hugs her, "Dadima!😭"

"Shaant ho jayiye Geet bete..." she then gets up and makes Geet also to stand, "Bete yahan dekhiye humari aankhon main...kya dikhta hai aapko...khushi aur sirf khushi...Babaji ki leela wahi jaane...par woh apne bhakton ka saath kabhi nahi chodte...aur aaj unhone meri sun lee..."

"Parr Dadima😭...Maan ne abhi tak mujhe maaf nahi kiya hai...Woh ab bhi mujhse naaraz hai..."

"Haan naaraz zarroor hai...parr zyaada samay tak nahi reh payenge...Arre hum jaante hain woh aapko aur humare padpote ko kitna pyaar karte hain...Bas humein aisa kuch karna hoga ki Maan apni dil ki baat ko maan le...ki unhone aapko maaf kar diya hai."

"Paar Dadi...Maine unka dil toda hai...aur unka gussa valid hai😭."

"Of-oh! Geet beta...aap decide kar lijiye...aapko Maan ko manana hai ya unka gussa sehna hai?"

"Dadima...woh toh main bhavuk ho gayi thi...mujhe unhe manana hai...parr woh toh meri taraf dekhte tak nahi...mujhe bas ignore kar dete hain...jaise main exist hi nahi karti..."

"Geet bete😕...aap unka pyaar hain😳...aapki jagah unke dil main hain...toh aapko seedhe unke dil par attack karna chahiye...yeh office-woffice join karne se baat nahi banegi...samjhe aap..."

Geet shakes her head looking confused...😕

"OMG...ab yeh bhi humein hi batana hoga...chaliye humare saath..." she takes her to her room, opens her wardrobe and... "pehle toh yeh boring salwar-kameez change kijiye...and inme se joh sari aapko pasand ho usse pehen kar humein dikhayiye."

"Parr Dadima...sari kyun😕, hum kahin jaa rahein hai?"

"Haan...ja rahe hain...aapke pati ki shaadi main?"😆😆😆

"Daadima?😲" she looks at her in shock.

"Of-oh Geet bete...hum mazzak kar rahe the... aap bhi kitni buddhoo hain...arre aap aisi beautiful sari main agar Maan ke saamne jayenge tabhi toh unko heart attack aayega..."

Again Geet looks at her in shock...😲

"Arre I mean apke pati ka dil pighalega...aur woh apne aap ko rok hi nahi payenge aapko dekhne se...phir dekhte hain kaise ignore karte hain woh aapko..."

Geet blushes😳 and Dadima blesses her...


...


Geet picks up a beautiful sari and goes to change...

She comes back and Dadima's eyes fill with happy tears...

Dadima Geet ki nazar utarti hain...and hugs her...

"Jayiye...jaake manayiye apne Maan ko."

Geet nods and hugs her...

Scene 5:

Maan's room...

Dadima comes there...with Geet hiding behind the door.

They watch Maan and Guru happily playing with each other😃😃😃...

Maan is lying on the bed and is lifting Guru up and down on his knees...Guru is laughing merrily...

"Pappa aur tez...Wooh!!!😃"

Geet looks at them longingly and happy tears trickle down her eyes...😃

Dadima holds her hand and squeezes it assuring her that everything will be fine.

Dadima then enters in...

"Arre baap re...Pappa aur bete toh bahut masti kar rahe hain...Dadima bhi join kare aapko?"

"Dadima?" Maan gets up...

"Maan?" she gives him a motherly look, "Beta humne aapko kitne dino baad itna khush dekha hai...aap phir kyun inn khushiyon ko apne se alag karna chahte hain...Purani baton ko bhool jayiye...Geet..."

"Dadima...please main iss baare main kuch baat nahi karna chahta..."

He picks up his son, and kisses him... "I love you beta..."

"I love you too Pappa😳😳," and he puts his little hands around him and holds on tight...

Geet heart sighs in pain...😃😭😭

She goes away...

"Maan...arre jab se Guru aaye hain...aap unhe apne se alag hi nahi karte...Humein bhi toh unse milne dijiye..." she then looks at Guru, "Aap Dadima ke saath aayenge?"

"Yes Dadima..."

She takes Guru from Maan and leaves...

Dadima informs Nano that Geet and BSk would stay there for the night...Nano is really happy for them...

Scene 6:

As the night progresses...

Though Maan acts as he doesn't care about Geet, all the while he could only think of her...

He restlessly moves in his chair, gets up, walks to and fro and then walks to the balustrade...

His eyes wander to get one glimpse of her...but where is she???😕


Suddenly he hears the tinkling of her anklets...he turns but she was not there...

He was no longer aware of himself...he walks away from his room like he was in some trance...He is pulled towards her, by their true love...which however hard he tried could not be hidden...

Scene 7:

On the terrace...

The door closes behind him...

Geet hums...

"Hmm...mmm😳😳😳😳😳😳😳"

"Geet!😕" he looks around on hearing her sound...but where is she???

The wind blows...and she appears in front of him...in her beautiful, angelic appearance...her sari flying in air...and love in her eyes...


Maan stands there speechless for like ages...lost in her deep eyes...😳😳😳😳

She walks to him😳...and takes his hand...that's when reality hits him...and he looks away...

She sings...😳

Bahon main chale aao—2

Ho...Humse sanam kya parda

Oh..Humse sanam kya parda


He jerks his hand free😡 from hers and turns away...

She hugs her from behind...😳😳😳😳


Yeh aaj ka nahi milan,

yeh sang hai...umar bhar ka...😳😳😳


Shh...shh...shh😡 ( he shushes her)


Geet again comes near him😳😳😳 and takes his arms and puts them around her waist😳😳😳😳


Bahon main chale aao...Oh ho ho

Humse sanam kya parda,

hooo...humse sanam kya parda...


Geet pushes him on to the bed...and sits beside him...😳😳😳

She hugs him😳😳😳...and he's completely under her spell...Involuntarily he caresses her hair, and come close to her...holding her hand...😳😳😳Geet closes her eyes...


...

...but suddenly he pushes her aside and gets up😡...

She tries to manao him😳...but Dusht Danav...uski taraf dekhta hi nahi...😆😆😆

She holds his hand trying to stop him from leaving...propping herself against her elbow on the bed...😳😳😳


And sings again...

Mmm...Oh...Chale hi jaana hai...

Nazar churaake yoon...

Phir thaami thi saajan tumne

Meri kalaaayi kyun...hmmm?😳


He frees his hand...😡


She gets up...sadly...😭


Kisi ko apna, bana ke chod de

Aisa koi...nahi karta...


Shhh...shhh...shhh😡


Maan puts a finger on her lips...

MAHI MAHI!!!

😳😳😳


😳

She puts her arms around him...and looks into his eyes lovingly...😳


Bahon main chale aao...oohhh...

Hooo...humse sanam kya parda...

Oh...humse sanam kya parda...

😳😳😳


😳

She comes closer...and Maan could feel his heart pounding against the rib cage...


Their breaths meet...and Geet melts away in his arms...😳😳😳


But suddenly he pushes her...😡

She loses her balance...and falls from the steps...

Maan sees this in time and jumps towards her to rescue her...

"GEET!!😲"

He too falls...but manages to hold Geet...

They roll down together...but Maan takes all the hits...wrapping his arms protectively around her...

Finally they come to a halt...

Maan is breathless...the first thing he does is...

Ask Geet...

"Geet tum theekh ho na?😲" he takes her face in her hand...they both are still holding on to each other.

She looks at him...with happy tears...and nods...😳

"Thank God😲...I am sorry...main tumhe girana nahi chahta tha...Tumhe pakka chot nahi lagi??😲"

"Maan!😳😭" she takes his name lovingly, tears filling her angel eyes, "Mujhe pata tha...aap apni Geet se bahut pyaar karte hain...Abhi bhi...aur humesha...Aap kyun nahi maan lete...aap mere bina nahi reh sakte?"

Maan gets up and helps her to stand...He then lifts her in his arms and takes her to his room, puts her on the bed...

He silently walks away from the bed...to the switch board..

He switches the lights off...

"Maan?😭"

He finally speaks...

His back towards her...slightly tilted to her side...

"Geet...main teen saal tak tumhare bina raha...aage bhi rah loonga...par main phir se yeh sab nahi hone doonga...kyunki ek baar toh maine bardasht kar liya...par ek aur baar nahi sah paoonga..."

Geet gets up from the bed...and walks to him, tears gushing from her eyes...😭😭😭😭

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"Maan, aisa mat kariye😭...mujhe aise mat tadpayiye😭...Meri galti ki itni badi sazza mat dijiye...Teen saal tak apse door rehna mere liye maut se kam nahi tha...par main majboor thi...main aapki zindagi main problem nahi banna chahti thi...aapko pareshaan nahi dekh sakti thi...Please Maan meri taraf dekhiye...aise mooh mat pheriye...main bardasht nahi kar paoongi..." she pleads to him...😭


Maan too couldn't control his tears...but he couldn't just make his mind to forgive her...he dismisses his own heart's plea...his Geet's plea...and walks out...leaving a tearful Geet in the room


...

~End of Episode 89~

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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing par kab maan maaf karega geet ko continue soon eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
😭😭...he left her alone in the room...I am so sad...sahi me aab to Maan ne pakka aapna dusht Danav wala roop le liyia hai. Bechari hamari pyaari Geet ko kitna sata rha hai...hope he forgives her before she gives up...
Amazing update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb Pooja 👏,waiting for today's update 😉

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