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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG dat kid needs a tight slap from Arnav ;) hehehehe poor guy
very well done nyc update next part soon pls
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Posted: 13 years ago

YOU TUBE LINK: SONG : "this is no ordinary love: BY: SADE"

(* pls use headphones...low / medium sound)

THE THING WE DO : " LOVE"

50

LOCATION: LAVANYA'S PARENTS HOUSE

SYDNEY,

AUSTRALIA.

45 minutes back, ARNAV topped the wall. And broke into the house, looking for Khushi, desperate to talk to her and to get her back for the night.

Still no sign of Lavanya or Khushi.

Arnav keeps on looking.

( IT HAS BEEN 6 HOUR 12 MINUTES, SINCE KHUSHI LEFT ARNAV)

In dire situation, Arnav self loathes, hiding behind the trees of the open terrace, under the balcony. His whole body is covered by the shade.

ARNAV WHISPERS:

" JAAN!

WHERE ARE YOU?

I MISS YOU.

MISS YOU LIKE I HAVE NO LIFE LEFT IN ME.

CANT YOU FEEL MY SUFFERING?

HOW COULD YOU MAKE ME SUFFER: LIKE THIS?

YOU TOLD ME, YOU FEEL THE PAIN EMOTIONALLY AND PHYSICALLY.

WELL FOR ME, IT'S NOT PAIN.

IT'S LIKE : DEATH.

HOW COULD I BREAK YOUR HEART? ONCE AGAIN?

MAY BE ITS GOOD.

MAY BE I DESERVE THIS TORTURE.

YOU ARE LIKE A DRUG.

POTENT AND DEADLY.

YOU ARE THE DRUG I AM ALREADY ADDICTED TO.

24/7.

IF I ONLY TOOK A NIBBLE, I COULDN'T HAVE EVER STOPPED MYSELF.

YOU PRESENTED ME " YOU" , SO I COULDN'T HANDLE IT.

I BACKED UP.

WHY CANT YOU UNDERSTAND: THAT THE STRONG EXTERIOR IS JUST A PRETENCE ?

I ACT UNBREAKABLE, WHEN I AM ALREADY BROKEN INSIDE.

AND THE PIECES ARE WITH YOU,

MY JAAN.

I AM NOT COLD,

I AM BROKEN."

(Khushi's voice )

"ARNAV JI!

HELLO!!"

Arnav jumps up in shock .

Did she see her?

Where?

( he looks up at the balcony, and around him, in the kitchen, over the fireplace.

There is no one around. But the voice was clear and precise

At last he spots his GIRL.)

Khushi is standing under the trees, on the second floor balcony. She is turning away from him.

He can only see her back, her hair and the red kameez.

A phone in her hand.

"HELLO!

ARNAV JI!

I JUST CALLED TO SAY THAT , ITS YOU TIME FOR MEDICINE AND I HAVE KEPT THEM IN THE CUP BOARD, I MEAN THE TABLE IN THE KITCHEN. SECOND DRAWER.

JUST WANTED TO REMIND YOU.

GUESS, YOU ARE NOT BACK FROM THE PARTY.

WELL , YOU HAVE FUN.

WE ARE ALSO DOING GOOD HERE.

THERE ARE A LOT OF PEOPLE AND I AM HAVING DINNER NOW.

PLEASE MAKE SURE, YOU ALSO EAT.

EAT SOMETHING, BEFORE TAKING MEDICINE.

OK.

BYE ARNAV JI!

GOOD NIGHT"

She pauses for two minutes, she shakes up a bit, cleans her face with a new tissue from the box and then:

She dials again:

"UMM SORRY TO CALL AGAIN,

I HAVE LEFT THE SUGAR FREE COKIES IN THE LEFT SHELF.

YOU SAID YOU WILL TRY SOME. BUT..

UMM..

HAVE THEM

THEY ARE GOOD.

TRY THE ONES WITH NUTS."

( PAUSE)

"I AM OK.

WE ARE HAVING A GOOD TIME.

SO, DO NOT WORRY.

REGARDIGN WHAT I SAID,

DO NOT THINK THAT MUCH.

I AM FINE.

BYE."

She shuts the phone off and holds the railing tightly.

Her frame starts to shake.

First slowly.

Then a bit more hurriedly.

Then she collapses and the ground.

She starts to howl , but the next moment, picks up the cushion from the couch and drowns her face into it.

She feeble body twitched and shriek up with each cry.

She gasps for air

And then let out another shrill cry, muffled in the pillow.

She hugs the couch edges for life-support.

KHUSHI: ( shouts in the pillow, but Arnav catches glimpse of her plead)

"Why did you let me come?

Why did you?

You told me you LOVE ME. And it was the single most important sentence of my entire existence.

But

Tonight, how could you shove me away?"

Arnav can see her shake and sob .

He does not wait another second and starts to run to the lower area under the balcony.

He does not even know or seem to care, where the stairs is.

In that point of time, he even forgets that, one can use the stair or ask someone for the way up.

He grabs a low branch and tries to pull himself up.

"Khushi!

Khushi!

Where are you?"

( someone is calling from far away. The voice is getting clear.)

( sound of an open door)

"Khushi!

Oh dear !

( Lavanya's mother is closing in on Khushi)

"Here you are.

Are you ok?

LA is looking for you everywhere.

She is waiting with the facial mask.

Also the man you were waiting for is here.

He is downstairs.

Should I ask him to come up?

He seems very cute. Sweet kid.

He brought a big basket of chocolates and cookies for you and LA."

Now, Arnav can see Khushi's face from the side.

She is seating on the couch, looking away from the woman.

Wiping the tears as quickly as possible.

She is faking a smile, Arnav saw a million times.

writer's plead:
;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
KHUSHI TO ARNAV:
ARNAV TO KHUSHI:
I gave you more than I could give

I gave you love

I gave you all that I have inside

And you took my love

You took my love

Didn't I tell you

What I believe

Did somebody say that

A love like that won't last

Didn't I give you

All that I've got to give baby



I gave you all the love I got

I gave you more than I could give

I gave you love

I gave you all that I have inside

And you took my love

You took my love



I keep crying

I keep trying for you

There's nothing like you and I baby



This is no ordinary love

No ordinary Love

This is no ordinary love

No ordinary Love



When you came my way

You brightened every day

With your sweet smile



Keep trying for you

Keep crying for you

Keep flying for you

Keep flying I'm falling



I'm falling




Sade : No Ordinary Love
Edited by sheun - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
THE THING WE DO " LOVE"
51

LA's mom:

"Oh Kartik, is also looking for you.

You know what?

He told Radhika, my sister that he wants to marry you. Right after La's wedding.

What magic did you do on him?

( smile)

You have two guys fighting for you downstairs. Ha ha ha'

Come quick, sweet heart, before we get a riot going on'h a..ha'lol"

LA's mother comes near Khushi and hold her from back.

She pats her hair and pulls her up from the slumped up seating.

"Khushi!

Did Arnav say anything to you?

You seem to be very upset.

LA always talks about her experience with ASR and also about you.

I hear he has a really bad temper.

LA still fears him a bit.

I know it sounds weird, since they are good friends.

Even when she was planning to live-together and had the engagement planned, I was not completely positive that it will be a good pairing or not.

I never saw the love in his eyes that a husband should have.

I know , I should not be talking with you about this things, now.

But you need to understand dear.

He has been through a lot.

His family history, his past, the thing with his sister. We all know about it.

I know some people who know their family.

They went through a lot."

Khushi picks her face up and looks at her.

Arnav lowers his head down and stiffens.

Khushi:

"Aunty Ji!

What are you talking about?

I do not know anything.

What are you indicating at?

I was there when he talked about the engagement and then I was there when he cancelled it off.

I am terribly sorry.

I never knew things will turn like this.

I never knew Arnav Ji had any sort of interest other than Lavanya JI!

But things changed, turned into worse.

For some stupid reason, we hurried into this marriage.

But, still I feel sorry for what your daughter had been through.

But Aunty Ji, talking about Arnav ji"s past, I really do not know anything.

I am being brutally honest, sometimes, he is very caring, sometimes he does unexpected thing, but the next moment he changes in his angry mode.

He keeps everyone from him, emotionally.

I have seen the pain in his eyes.

But past, his sister, I mean DI, I do not know much.

They never talk about his parents or other.

It might be too much to ask, but can you share the information with me?

Please.?"

( ARNAV COMPETELY GET BEATEN DOWN HEARING THE DISCUSSION GOING ON WITH KAUSHI AND LA'S MOM)

BUT HE STILL FEELS CURIOUS TO HEAR, KHUSHI'S REACTION)

LA's mom ( TO KHUSHI)

"Dear!

See, if Arnav kept these from you, then , there must be some valid reason.

May be its better if you know it from him.

Everything has a timing and reason.

I should not share information that I got from someone else.

Its better , you not think of these.

He will share when its time."

"With any new marriage, you need time to talk things through.

Understand each other.

Both need space and lot of compromise.

You seem like a very soft hearted girl.

With Arnav, it seems like you will have to be the one to keep things in place.

To explain

To understand him with love and care.

Boys in anger say and blur out a lot of things, half of what they forget right after the shouting session.

And rest half they do not even mean.

So whatever he says, do not worry that he meant it all.

Give him a big hug and he will melt. Lol'."

"Anyways'let's not get into these.

Well, I have spoiled your mood, nah?

Well let's get down and see how the two boys are holding up?

I also want a chocolate bar from your basket. Lol'

Ok?

Don't think so much.

Enjoy the wedding and then talk with Arnav in peace.

Sounds good?"

"Let's go dear."

She pulls her up with tenderness and walks into the house with Khushi.

Arnav is stunned and stoned .

He is holding the poor branch and trying to climb and became a statue in mid air.

He eases in.

And gets down.

He waits till her hear anything else going around.

Any sound of Khushi or La or Aunty.

He hears some footsteps.

He hid himself under the shade of the trees and follows the footsteps going into another room.

He stands behind the tall curtain and listens.

Khushi

"OH!

You came?

Thanks.

I just thought you might like to attend the wedding.

Lavanya said, I can invite anyone. And here you are the only one I know.

But its day after tomorrow.

You came tonight?

(Khushi smiles a broken smile)

"Anyways, what is that?

OMG so much chocolate?

Really?

For me and Lavanya ?

Oh thanks.

I never saw SO much chocolate together.

You shouldn't have.

Thanks thought."

"Aunty Ji, where is Lavanya?

She would love to have some. And aunty, please have some."

Khushi gets up and hugs Aunty.

Arnav can only see a portion of Khushi's kameez and a scene of the man standing upfront.

His calmness evaporates.

Besides, self loathing, sadness, torment and disapproval, a new feeling barges in: "JEALOUSY"

Arnav

"What the Fu** is that Idiot doing here?

A single call from Khuhsi and he is here.

Worthless looser !

He needs a real good bashing!"

Khushi comes up to him and hands him a glass of water.

Besides, self loathing, sadness, torment and disapproval and jealousy, a new feeling barges into ARNAV .: "RAGE"

"Madam!

There is a car parked upfront.

We have looked everywhere for the driver, but no one is there.

It's blocking the back entrance to the left."

The guard comes in and lets LA's mom and Khushi know of the situation,

"ARNAV JI!" Khushi jumps up.

But the next moment her lit up face turns dark again.

From the back of the curtain Arnav trembles, seeing Khushi's lighted up face.

His heart starts to beat again.

He was about to come out from the hide out, when Khushi's next lines halts him.

Khushi:

"NO, cannot be Arnav ji!

Because I requested him that I need space and time alone.

I wish to be here and just forget everything for two nights.

So I believe he will respect my wish and just be with Mark and the rest.

He also had work."

Arnav becomes a marble curved by the words.

His step gets frozen.

Mind spins in confusion.

Arnav whispers:

"what the !

Do I go in?

Do I just go in and take her in my arms

Beg for forgiveness?

Or do I just stay here in silence?

Respect her request?

Damn it!

Why did you have to say this now?"

Khushi looks at the guard and asks, that frozen Arnav a bit more.

"Is the car blue?"

Guard:

"No, mam! It's a Black Benz convertible.

( before Arnav cloud think of his new next move')

NK :

"Aunty I think it one of the guests or the neighbors next door. If you do not find the driver, then you can call the towing company and tow the car.

Who knows what crazy will leave their car in the middle of the road like that?

Fools.

They think they can park and forget.

Juts make it towed, it will teach them a lesson.

Showoff, in a convertible Benz!!"

He hands the glass back to Khushi and signs her to follow him.

NK:

"Khushi JI!

You look amazing.

Your hair became a bit longer. Right?

What are you wearing for the wedding?

Any gowns or kameezes?

Or saree?

You look marvelous in saree."

"Aunty Ji!

You should see her in saree .

Amazing!"

While speaking, NK almost holds Khushi's hand and tugs her away to the other room, away from Arnav's vision.

Khushi, NK and Aunty all leave the room and turn the lights off.

( IT HAS BEEN 7 HOUR 55 MINUTES, SINCE KHUSHI LEFT ARNAV)

A LONELY ARNAV STANDS IN THE DARK.

BEHIND THE CURTAIN.

DESPERATE

NEEDY

DEPRIVED

And

LOST.

Besides, self loathing, sadness, torment and disapproval jealousy and rage, a new feeling barges into ARNAV.: "LONELINESS" .

...NEXT...

( IT HAS BEEN 11 HOURS 29 MINUTES, SINCE KHUSHI LEFT ARNAV)

* to dear : UNFORGETABLE ! i got all ur PMs..but dear ur inbox if full, so u r not getting any PMs i didnt forget u ! clear som space so u get em..*
Edited by sheun - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omG!...why dont they meet!
you have to stop this suspense yaAAr its just killing me..:P
anywyas plss update the enxt part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh no!!!!!!!!! second again.😭😭
😭
loved it.

loved the arnav who is jealous, rageous and lonely (i felt very bad for the lonely arnav😕)

your suspense is killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!

update soon
thanks 4 the PM
Edited by sooryalekshmi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Boys in anger say and blur out a lot of things, half of what they forget right after the shouting session.

And rest half they do not even mean.

So whatever he says, do not worry that he meant it all

very true
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg... when they will meet each other and express their feelings... m being so much desperate for that...
nice update... continue soon
thnx for the pm
Edited by jas0308 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice update...when will they meet???

thanks for the PM

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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww poor arnav😔 wont they meet each other??btw awesome update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update. Hope they will meet soon and talk out everything . Thanks for the pm dear.😊

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