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Posted: 13 years ago


The English translations of the update are in the brackets... sorry for the mistakes if committed'..But a request if ur comfortable with Hindi please read the update in Hindi only...

Part 18

Geet(self-thought): tu pagaal ho gayi hai tuje har jagah bad wahi dikh rahein hai'[U have turned mad'ur seeing him everywhere..]

Geet kept on talking to herself'..as she could still see Maan everywhere'.adi noticed geet with her sudden change'.

Adi: geet tum aise karo aaj ghar jakar rest kar lo'.shayad tumhe aaram ki zarurat hai'.[Geet you go and take rest'I guess you need to relax..]

Geet: nahin sir aisi koi baat nahin hai'[no sir its nothing like that']

Adi: its okay geet'waise bhi aaj koi zyada kaam nahin hai'haan kal office time se aa jana'[its okay geet'and there is nothing much important today'yes be on time tomorrow']

Geet: okay adi sir'

Geet leaves from the office but she couldnot understand what was happening to her'

Adi: ye maan sir ne kaisi ladki ko bhej dia hai'khud se baat krti rehti hai' [Maan sir has send a strange person'she keeps talking to herself..]

Adi: ab ye muje kya ho gaya'main bhi khud se baat karne laga'[now what has happened to me'now I m talking to myself..]

He receives a call from maan'.

Maan: adi main kal subah ki flight se Bangalore aa raha hu'.company k eek bada project mila hai or main ye project khud handle karne wala hu'[Adi I am coming to Bangalore tomorrow'company has got a big project and will handle it myself this time]

Adi: right sir

Maan: or ye batao vo geet aayi thi aaj'I mean sab thik to hai na'[and yes..did geet came to office today'and is everything okay?]

Adi(self-thought): pata nahin ab kya bolu ki vo ladki apne aap se baatein karti hai [I don't know what to say that the girl keeps talking to herself..?]

Maan: adi maine tumse kuch pucha..[adi I asked u something?]

Adi: vo sir'everything is okay..or haan get aayi thi bas kuch der pehle hi gayi hai'.[sir everything is okay'yes geet came to office..she just went a few minutes ago..]

Maan: chalo thik hai kal milte hai'[fine'will see you tomorrow..]

He cuts the call'decides to call geet and ask her if she was feeling fine'.

Maan: nahin abhi call karna thik nahin hoga'.aisa karta hu kal milkar hi usse baat karunga..[no it wont be right to talk to her'will meet and then ask]

Geet is back in her room'her friend Nandini is also bit confused with her strange behavior'

Nandini: geet sab thik to hain na'tu pareshan si lag rahi hai'[geet everything is okay'u looking bit tensed..?]

Geet: haan yar main to thik hu'samaj nahin aa raha ye ho kya raha hai'.har jagah bas wahi dikh rahein hai'[yes I am fine'.dont understand what is wrong'.i can jnust see him everywhere']

Nandini: kaun? [who?]

Geet: kuch nahin aisa karti hu thora aaram kar leti hu'[nothing'will take rest for a while']

Next morning'..

It was early in the morning and Mr. maan singh khurana was all set to leave for Bangalore'Maan was a changed man'he was smiling'.the last night he washed away all his sorrows'..his grandmom was happy to see him like that'.

Maan: daadima main kuch dino ke liye Bangalore ja raha hu,'waha ek bada prject hai or main chahte hu ki usse main khud handle karu'[grandma um leaving for Bangalore'.there is a big project and ll be taking care of it myself']

Dev: ji bro aap jaiye yaha pe sab main dekh lunga'[yes bro u go'I will see everything here']

Daadima: maan apko aaj aise dekh kar muje khushi ho rahi hai'.bas hum yahi dua karenge ki aap yu hi muskurate tahein'[maan um really happy for you'I just pray that this happiness on ur face maintains for ever..]

Maan: daadima main apse vaada karta hu ki ab apko shikayat ka koi mauka nahin dunga'.[grandma I promise I wont give u any reason for anything..]

Maan leaves for Bangalore'..here geet is also getting ready for the office'.she goes to her washroom and brushes her teeth'.and she sees maan standing behind her''she throws water on the mirror but Maan is still there'.turns back and maan is gone'

She dresses up and leaves for office'. hires a taxi and again sees Maan around her'.she reaches the office, pays money to the taxi driver and again sees Maan in place of him'

Geet: ye ho kya raha hai'har jagah maan sir'.muje lagta hai ki doctor ke pass chale jaana chahiye'.[what is all this happening'.um still seeing maan sir'I feel I should consult a doctor..]

In a hurry she gets into maan's room'.both the rooms were adjacent to each other so she straightaway went and again saw Maan sitting on the chair'Maan sees her and notices her talking to herself'

Geet: hey babaji'ab or nahin'.muje kuch sochna hoga'.ye har jagah kyu dikh rahein hai'kabhi washroom mein kabhi taxi mein or ab office mein bhi'..[o god'now it enough'why am I seeing him everywhere'.first of all in washroom, then taxi and now in office'.]

Maan: geet kaisi ho? [geet how are u?]

Geet: ae lo'abhi to dikh hi rahein the ab to ye bolne bhi lagein'.[see'.i was just seeing him now he is speaking too']


Maan(self thought) ye geet ko kya hua hai'pehle to aise react nahin karti thi' [what has happened to her'.she did not reacted like this before']

Geet: chup chap jakar seat pe baith ja'.babaji ka naam le shayad vo kuch madad kar de'.[sit quietly on the chair'.think of babaji'he will surely help]

She starts approaching the chair'.she is not realizing that it is Maan who is actually present in the room'.maan too is feeling awkward with her reactions'.he gets up and holds her'

Maan: geet tumhe hua kya hai'.ye kya tum apne se baat liye ja rahi ho'[geet what is wrong'whay are u talking to yourself ']

Geet: pagal ho gayi hu main'har jagah aap hi dikh rahein hai'.jaha jaati hu wahi bas aap'..bahot ho gaya ab'.muje pareshan mat kijiye'.chale jaiye mere khayalo se'.jaiye'.[I am going mad'.just seeing you everywhere'..now its enough'.go away from my thoughts'.just go']


in the meantime adi comes to maan's cabin.

Adi: good morning sir'.great to see you back'..good morning geet'.aap yaha maan sir ke room mein'?[ good morning sir'.great to see you back'..good morning geet'.you here in maan's sir room..?]

Maan: adi tum jao main tumse abhi baat karta hu'[adi u leave'will talk to u in a while']

Geet is shocked'.she is actually into maan's cabin''now she realizes that her thoughts were into reality'.

Maan: geet main sach much tumhare saamne hu'.ye tumhara khayal nahin hai'.[geet I am in front of you'.its not your thought]

Geet runs away from there with lots of embarassement''😳😳😳

Precap: geet jealous'.😆😆😆


Well how was the update friends'.I hope I could live upto your expectations'.

Please do hit the like button and do comment...it really means a lot to me...😳😳😳

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haww that was choo cute update..hayee geet is seeing maan everywhere..mst hilarious part was she thought to go 4 doc check up..ha ha ha
maan sach mein agaya n she said everythng..i wish maan remember her every word..plz update soon if possible plz plz update today itself
and my mst fav thng in precap..i love to c geet jealous..plz make her jealous as much as u can..i really enjoy it along with maan
Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely. poor geet... hope maan usko teek se samgha paye😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey mini nice update

to maan dikne laga geet ko nice
aaj sach bi hogaya
ore geet maan ko hi kehdi uski cabin se jane k
next precap osum jaldi
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh that was such a cute update...so somewhere Geet is affected by him and maan knows that now...
but thoda chota update tha Silky...please one more today...please
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part
geet ke saath kay horaha hai
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

oh that was such a cute update...so somewhere Geet is affected by him and maan knows that now...

but thoda chota update tha Silky...please one more today...please



di i wanted to update my other ff's today...i promise ll update this ff in a day or two
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor geet seeing maan everywhere maan reached there love the last scene



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: minnie_tweetie



di i wanted to update my other ff's today...i promise ll update this ff in a day or two

ok hun...i am just loving this story and so the greediness
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet cing maan evrywhr..😉
nice one!!

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