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Posted: 13 years ago
all d best 4 ur xam aditi
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb story...its so interesting and so much different from all the ff's that i read so far.

i wonder how i left this one...so just finished reading it today..its brilliant.

pia in the start was such a mean person and i really luvd the change that has come in her and instead i really felt bad for abhayendra also coz the poor guy only suffered and even now i have a feeling that since he loves pia so there might be some chances of his redemption.

tanisha was indeed a very sweet girl and pia was a good friend for her.

abhay using pia for his revenge by pretending to be in luv with her is not right ...that's only gonna break pia and abhay's mom is right that she might loose faith on everyone.

lastly all the best for ur exam.👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
@megha>> I m glad that u liked my FF...i m really happy 2 see my imagination becoming successful..
@DonIsback>>> Thnx a lot dr 4 reading...
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PART-17

In Pia's room

Pia is lying in her bed. Her eyes are closed but tears r flowing down from there. A cold breeze is blowing outside and trying to get inside pia's room through the windows.

But with this breeze something else is also trying to get inside through the window. And it seems that it's a human!!! After a lots of efforts the man comes inside pia's room silently. Aha!! He must be silent as he is here without shoes. His's feet r seem injured and bleeding also , but the man doesn't care a hoot about it. He is only staring at pia and coming closer to her.

when the man was coming closer to pia , pia was feeling strange inside her heart. It was like the atmosphere of the room has been changed. There was like a sweet scent has been sprayed in whole room. The cold breeze which was trying hard to get inside, now is running across the room by blowing away the curtains, bed sheet and ...pia's curly hair and her night dress. Pia quickly opens her eyes to hold on her dress but before she could do anything , the man puts a hand on her mouth , then arranges her dress with other hand. And Pia!!!! She kept looking with her burst eyes... Her hair starts blowing crazily and touching the man's face. The man seems not interested to move pia's hair from his face rather it seems that he is lost in her hair. Why won't he be?? There is a addicting smell is coming from her hair which is enough to put him in a spell.

But everything has to be ended in some time. Similarly, now the naughty breeze strikes the window and in response the window shuts down with a harsh sound. This sound breaks the spell inside the room. The man moves his hand from pia's mouth and only one word comes from pia's mouth with wonder-

Pia: Abhay!!!!!!

Abhay: ssshhh...don't say anything.

Pia's surprise continues...

Abhay: I m sorry pia..i didn't mean to hurt u. i know i don't deserve to be forgiven but still pia ...i have the right to ask pardon from u...

Pia: About which right u r talking about?

Abhay: The right of loving u...

Pia: Huh!!! n u never seem to give this right to me!!!

Abhay(In mind): How can i give u that right which will snatch every other right from u? I know i m wrong at this moment but i've left with no other option .

Pia: ahem ..abhay .. u've not answered me!!

Abhay: Who am i pia to give u right? This right can be only given by u to urself.

Pia: Then abhay i've already given myself that right ..

Abhay: And i also want to give myself that same thing..

Pia: i didn't understand...

Abhay: Pia, last night it was me who confessed to u but today morning i was so pissed off with some matter that i misbehaved with u...

Pia: I can understand abhay.. at this stage of life u r fighting enough to lead a normal life covering ur pain of losing ur near and dear ones.. i don't want to be an obstacle in ur way abhay , i want to be with u against all obstacles. I want to be on ur side always...

Abhay(in mind): sigh...Oh GOD!! I wish ..i really wish if u kept some other way for me rather than breaking this pure heart.. Why GOD?? Why?? Why u r upto making me a sinner??

[May b GOD was listening him to that time and smiling... I am making u a sinner? How? It was u who has chosen the wrong path...but Abhay u can't forget that u will get exactly what is written in ur destiny ..neither less nor much...]

Pia: Why u r not saying anything abhay?

abhay(leaves a deep breath): i wish i could say something ...

pia(smiles): U don't need to say anything .. i can understand everything by myself after looking into ur eyes ...

Abhay: u know pia ... u r a very good girl..very true person ...

Pia: Oh!! I think it's enough. i m already flattered...

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Then pia's eyes go on abhay's feet. Pia gets shocked to see abhay's feet bleeding.

Pia: OMG!!! What's this? Ur feet is bleeding!!!!

abhay: ummm, it has to be. Afterall i've come here barefoot!!!

Pia: What?

Abhay: Oh ya... n that @%$#& tree beside ur window was upto rip off my jeans!! Thanks GOD that i m saved from ripped jeans in return with my ripped feet.

Abhay starts laughing..

Abhay: I mean , look seriously.. if i wud come here with ripped off pants then it must not be a nice scenario to u..

Pia: Why??Abhay..why didn't u wear shoes?

Abhay: Come on..if i wud have been wearing shoes, then how could i be able to give u surprise?U've been waken up before i could do anything by the sound of the shoes!!!!

Pia: U mean u gave urself pain to give me surprise?

Abhay: ermm, kinda...

Pia(leaves a deep breath with teary eyes): I don't understand abhay, why u need to come here by climbing that tree and jumping through the window? I think we've got a nice doorbell which has a sweet sound. All u need just to take the hurdle of pressing the bell and wait for 5min. to open the door!!

Abhay: Yeh i know. But if i did that then how could i be able to see my sleeping beauty?

Pia: Oh really?

Abhay: yes hun...

Pia: Enough of flattering. Now sit here quietly. I m gonna give u first aid..

Abhay: As u wish..

Abhay sits on the bed comfortably. Pia bring a first aid box from her drawer. Then pia speaks out-

Pia: Now, show me ur feet.

Abhay: Wow!! The command is like an experienced nurse!!

Pia: Abhay shut up. n do as i say..

Abhay stretches his feet to pia. Pia is about to touch his feet with sterilized cotton..

Abhay shouts-

Abhay: Hey.. what r u doing? Don't touch my feet. It's not good ..moreover then when i m not elder than u..rather same age..

Pia: Come on Abhay... what's this? U r injured and i m here to help u. There is no shame to touch ur feet. I think u remember that one day i was also injured and u helped me. n today it's my turn. So, plz keep quiet.

Abhay gives a nod and keeps silent. Pia puts a bandage in his feet with her loving care and abhay is mesmerized...

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Pia: So now, it's ok... can u stand up?

Abhay: Come on .. I haven't got a broken leg ..it's just a small injury..

Pia: But after bandage it becomes difficult darling..

Abhay: Ahh..let it be. i m such a moron. I forgot the reason totally why i came here..but now i remember .. get ready and let's go.

Pia: What?? Where? Why?

abhay: plz pia..not this time with wh-questions..just listen to me once and get ready as fast as u can.

Pia: Ok but how can i change infront of u?

Abhay: U think it would be better if i go out from ur room? Okay then i m going..

Pia: Oh no..wait. u can't go outside. What'll others say?

Abhay: ok then i m sitting there ..

Pia: But how can i change?

Abhay: Oh GOD.. u r so dumb baby.. what is the washroom for? Plz sometime make good use of it ...

Pia(gives a teethy smile ): Oh ya!! i forgot about it!! I m just coming in a 5min.

Then pia rushes to the washroom and opens her clothes but after that she remembers that she hasn't bring the dress what she'll wear...

Pia slightly opens the door and says-

Pia: ermm, abhay ...

Abhay: Oh u r ready..so come out and lets go...

Pia: umm, there is a problem .. i mean i forgot to bring the dress what i'll wear now...

Abhay: u r amazing dear..there is no one like u ..u r the only one piece in this world..

Pia(in a crying tone): Can u help me by stopping ur taunting and giving me a dress from the cabinet? I m not wearing anything..

Abhay: Whoa..That's really scary. Wait i m giving u a dress.

Then abhay opens pia's cloth cabinet , at this moment pia screams-

Pia: Abhay..plz don't look down in the cabinet..

Abhay: Why??

Pia: U dumb..Why u r forgetting that u've opened a girl's cabinet. So behave urself...

Abhay: Oh sure..But tell me which dress u will wear? what about this red one???

Pia(Shouts): Eee, don't touch it..leave it right now..its not even a dress !!!

Abhay shakes his shoulder: as u wish..then what about this yellow one?

Pia: I hate this dress..

Abhay : If u hate this then why u r keeping it in ur cabinet.. U should throw away it..

And abhay really throws away the dress n the dress straightly goes into the waste basket.

Pia: OMG!! U threw it..

Abhay: Will u plz tell me what u'll wear?

Pia: Umm, actually i take a lot of time to decide that which dress i will wear..

Abhay: Arghh, then u keep quiet and let me decide. whatever i m giving u, u've to wear it.

Then abhay hands over pia a black cloth.. n says to get ready quickly.

5min.s have passed but pia still isn't coming out. Abhay becomes restless.

Abhay: Pia, how much time u'll take? Just come out right now.

pia slightly opens the door n tells-

Pia: But how can i come out in a hanky ?

abhay: What r u telling?

Pia(shouts): Arghh, u've handed me a hanky n expect me to come out in that??

Abhay(blushes): oops, i m sorry..i didn't know it was a hanky...i thought it may b one of ur dress like u wear always..

Pia: shut up.. now i've to do something..

Then pia wraps her into a towel n comes out..n what?? Like any other man, abhay also couldn't move his eyes from her!!!

Pia(with a naughty smile): Look at some other places dear...n control ur imagination...

Abhay(ashamed): Umm, oh yeh...yeh...

Pia quickly picks up a white dress and rushes to washroom and comes out in a 5mins.

Abhay: I must say u r looking beautiful...

Pia: Thank u...

Abhay: Will u now want to spend some more precious moments on ur make-up?

Pia(gives an angry look ): What do u mean?

Abhay: I mean ur beautiful without makeup hun...so, why to waste time?

Pia: ok..lets go..

They r about to leave but pia stops.

Abhay: What?

Pia: May b i can look good without make-up but do u know how r u looking without shoes?

Abhay: Oh sh*t. I didn't notice it!! Now what'll happen?

Pia: Wait a min. May be there is a spare pair of shoes of dad. i m bringing it...

Pia goes to bring the shoes..

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Abhay sits on the sofa and there comes a big smile in his face.. soon this smile turns into laughing as he starts thinking the incidents of today from coming here to choosing pia's dress and now these shoes!!! abhay suddenly feels that his heavy loaded heart has become like a light feather. There is no pain, envy or revenge!!! Only a strange type of happiness has captured over his heart . he feels that his dead like heart is again pumping blood , it has started beating again.. What is the source of this happiness? Is it Pia?

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By this time pia enters into the room and puts down a pair of shoes..

Pia: thnx GOD!! I've found a new pair of shoes which dad hasn't used till now. Look.. for u what i've become..

Abhay: What?

Pia: A shoe thief !!!!

Abhay bursts into laughing and pia gets wondered to see abhay laughing by opening his heart... Then she also joins abhay..

After sometime-

Pia: oh i forgot.. i think we should leave by this time. All the servants r busy with their work and no one is around..lets go..

Abhay: ya, lets go..

Pia: But how r u feeling after wearing shoes in a injure feet ?

Abhay: i never felt so much better ..

Then they both leave.

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Abhay stops the car near a beautiful restaurant. The restaurant is on a wonderful lake..

The restaurant is beautifully decorated and there r only a few ppl around. So, the place is calm and quiet .

Pia: WOw!!!! The place is so beautiful..

Abhay(giving a dazzled look ): Not more than u...

[It's very strange that though abhay is playing with pia's heart , but till now each n every word came from abhay's mouth to pia were directly from his heart!!! He made a plan that what he'll tell pia to woo her or made her fell for him more n more ..but when he came infront of her , he forgot all the words he planned!!! He had no control over his activities then.. Is this called destiny or fate???]

PRECAP: Abhay-pia r sitting in a table in the restaurant. Suddenly a guy comes , who blows away pia's senses and abhay!!!!!!! Don't ask about him...

Edited by sdoll - 13 years ago
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cute update...abhiya were awesum..hope abhay realises tht he luvs pia ...luved all d scenes...wonder who's d guy in d precap??🤔
Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 13 years ago
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Beautiful update dear. It was really hillarious. The part abhay gave piya a hanky to wear was most funny. O god I am just laughing away. So, abhay has started falling for piya, gr8. I loved abhiya's dialouges. Pls continue soon. The precap is really interesting. Thanks for the pm.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm update aditi 👏
abhay choose hanky 4 pia 2 wear ..😆
hope abhay realise his feelngs 4 her soon ... he always has feelngs 4 her ...
coninue sooon ... eagrly waitng 4 nxt update ..
nd xam kaise hue ?
Edited by hema_rawat - 13 years ago
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brilliant update aditi. Oh abhiya were too cute. Precap sounds awesome!
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Aditi loved it dear 😃 It was the sweetest n cutest update by far 😳 It was amazing n hilarious at the same time 😆 Abhay trying to chose a dress for Pia, throwing one into the bin n then handing her a hanky n saying tat she anyways wears such kinda clothes was so funny 🤣 Loved it 😊 Am so happy tat Abhay has started to feel for Pia n watever he said to her was from his heart n it was not a pre planned revenge drama. I guess that person in the precap is Abhayendra 😲 Plz continue soon dear n hopefully this time soon.
Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago
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wow!! That was such a sweet and lovely update!! 👏 😳 awesuum aditi !! 👏

oh..atfirst i thot it was abhayendra bt wen i read it was abhay i was really happy!! 😳
Abhay entering pia's room,the wind blowing n their sweet convo, u wrote everythng so beautifuly that i cn visualiz it very well! 😍

oh..i lovd their entire convo!! 👍🏼

and wen abhay threw tht yellow dress and pia screamd,i was laughing badly.. 😆 The entire scene was too gud!
Hm..so abhay is feeling sumthng for her!! And wth her, he is happy too!! Bt stil he cudnt mak it out! 🤔
abhay is speakng hs heart ..hope he soon realises hs true feelings fr her b4 its too late!!
And in d precap whz tht man? Is it abhayendra??

Plzz dear cntinue soon..awaitng d nxt part eagerly...
Thanx for pm..tak..cre..🤗

-indu
Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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