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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 12
nice part...
Vicky too has feelings for Geet?
now what is Maan gonna do?
hes scary alright...
koi nayi baat nahi hai...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u plz add the update number and date too in the title plz dear...




thanks dear ...


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Posted: 13 years ago




he too laughs like this doesn't he biwi ???? He asked and then her breath stopped in a start .. and she looked up to see maan looking at her with anger in his eyes ….. and her breath caught in her throat … he suddenly took her hands painfully backwards … and held them tightly… does he too laughs like me ??? talks likes me ???? looks like me ??? and does he also cares like me ??? haan geet

he held her hand tight and oulled her to him in a harsh manner … while geet looked at her stunt …. But then it was correct .. he did laugh like maan .. talked like maan … looked like him and also cared like him even more than him…. She was guilty .. she was a culprit… being from an army family she knew that culprits deserved only PUNISHMENT…. Loving was not a crime .. it was not .. but loving your's husband's younger brother was a CRIME … she closed her eyes and sifted her face sieways ….

Who is he geet ?? WHO IS HE ???? maan shouted as he almost shook her with anger but geet kept her silence …

Maan had expected her silence for she had been even when he had went to the extent of raping his own wife on their first night … still then too she said nothing about vikram !!!! and now also she was quiet .. it was frusturating .. she was quiet and he had a feeling that she would be for the rest of the eternity !!!!!

Are you going to say me his name or not biwi ???? he asked clenching his teeths for the final time … anger was evident in his voice and geet knew it … for the last time she nodded her head in a no .. indicating that she wont say anything about him… she knew that she wont open her mouth… what ever it may cost her .. and it was time that maan also knows that she wont say a word about him … ever ….

Its so damn frusturating … he shouted as he left her and took few steps back and turned away from her… he ran a frusturated hand on his hairs and closed his eyes …. And then he quickly regained his cool and used the last weapon he had .. though he hated to imagin it but he had to do it .. for him .. for her and for him….

He turned back only to see geet sitting holding her knees tightly hiding her hace in her hand.. he knew what would be going on in her ind … he went to her and croched next to her … and choose his words carefully…. If this would break her silence then he would be sure about who the man was whom she loved ….

Neither you are saying who is that man .. nor vikrant is saying about the girl whom he loves ….

He had not dreaded it .. he had neither expected it …. He didn't knew how much he had thought it not to be the reaction …. But geet reacted !!! and he got a sudden and shoking reaction… and her silence broke !!!!!

Ji????

Yah… I had gone to talk with him… you know he said that he loves a girl .. but he wont say who that girl is… and you know what more shocking is that he loves a girl who is married…

Maan said eyeing her every expression … some emotions passed on her face but they were quick but nothingless her emotions … hurts .. relief .. shock but nothingless shock … and then a hard cover of impassiveness … there was a silence between them that streached for too long …

I wont be able to tell you about him … ever …

Geet said at last … she didn't knew what would be his reaction … will he be angry ??? will he think her as a playing object ??? will he ever trust her again … and at that time it didn't matter to her… because for her at that moment it was important to save the man she loved from her husband for she knew exactly what maan had planned to carry out with the man … she was clever to take it out from maan…

Her marriage was leading to no where .. and there was nothing left in their relation.. except the fire in which they both were burning …. And she had risked it .. she would risk every thing for him …

Maan had expected her sentence … of course she wont say anything to him …. She hadn't even said about him when she was drunk… but the emotions in her face had gave her away …he was mow almost sure that his wife was in love with whom… but it was still almost and he desperately wished it to be wrong … but he had to find out the truth and he will soon but not now ….

I wont ask you from now on about him …. I will wait till you tell me yourself about him biwi … geet suddenly turned towards him and there was shock written all over her face … I want to give our marriage a second chance …. Lets just forget every thing and begin a new life …. He held her arms and made her stand … I am tierd .. tierd of everything .. I want to start a new life with you … just you and me … no third person .. no one … I just want to have a peaceful married life .. wont you give me anathor chance to rectify the mistake I have commited by marrying you forcefully ?? wont you biwi ????

He asked keeping a remorseful tone all the time and thenlooking in to her eyes .. she was shocked no doubt and he knew it would take time for her to get into terms with it …

Trust me once biwi … and I wont let you down … plea se ….

She knew that it was a huge risk to trust him but then again she took it and trusted him … and nodded slowly …

Thankyou … thankyou so much .. I promise from now on I will give you so much love that you would forget that man .. forever ..

He said as he dragged to hug her …

Its your greatest mistake to trust me biwi … for I wont leave him alive … I wont even give you a hint and I will wipe out his existence from the world ... I wont break your trust .. and I will for sure make you forget him .. beaware vikram I am coming … who ever dares to look at my biwi will get death as the reward.. even if its my own brother ….

Maan thought .. but geet was a way ahead of him… she hadn't missed the slight smirk on his face .. and she knew exactly why had changed all of a sudden …

What do you think maan .. I will trust you ??? I can trust you even with my life but with him never… I know you will kill every man even near my vicinity … and as long as I am alive I will protect him from you ever .. you have forgot one thing .. I am geet kapoor … every time you will find a way to him .. I will change that way

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As soon as maan had closed the door and had went out vikrant sat up with a start…

How could I be so fool ??? damn… how can I forget he is bhai … shit.. he would know now that I have feelings for mahi…. Shit .. shit … I don't even know what bhai will do next with mahi …. Shit

As he was busy cursing himself … a call came to him .. he was relieved to see the id …

Gadbad ho gayi yaar …

Bhai ke samne mahi ka naam slip ho gaya ….

I am a fool..

Thanks so much … I will be waiting ….

Relieved little he had a restless night and as soon as the clock struck 6:30 he walked down to the kitchen to make tea for himself where he saw geet making it …. He stood there mesmerized by her beauty .. her waist long .. very long hairs left open as she had just hada shower and then the pink suit she was wearing matched her innocence but then his gaze went to her mangalsutra and sindoor and he was pushed to reality ….

Hie bhabi …..

He said in an attempt to remind himself that she was his brother's wife … and geet was momentarily stunt to hear him addressing her such … she looked at him to see his cheerful face … she smiled covering her hurt …

Hello devar ji ….

So chai banai ja rahi hai??? He asked

Haan .. tere liye laun ??? she asked although she knew she would take it anyways ….

She poured the tea to two cups and vikrant held them and they walked to the terrace and while geet sat in the chair .. vikrant occupied the swing….

So you love some one … geet asked all of a sudden .. but vikrant was not surprised ..

Vikrant - Hmm …bhai did tell you….

Geet – hmm ….

Vikrant – wont you ask me who is she ???

Geet – tu bata de .. kaun hai… tu kahe toh use la doon …

Vikrant – uski saadi ho gayi hai .. and she is happy …

Geet - what is her name vik ????

Vikrant – yaad hai tune kya kaha tha jab maine tujhse poocha tha us ladke na naam ????

Please don't ask me for our sake of friendship vik… main tumhe saach bata nahin paungi aur main jhoot bolna nahin cahti ….

Geet – hmm … yaad hai … kaise bhul sakti hoon ???? she said as she rested her back on the chair ….

Vikrant – do you still love him mahi ????

Geet – pehla pyar koi nahin bhul sakta vik … bas use side main rakhke aage badna padta hai ….

Vikrant – kya yeh bohat aasan hai ????

Geet – aasan nahin hai vik… bohat uskil hai par karna padta hai … hamein aage badhna padta hai … hasna hota hai … sab kuch karna padta hai….

Vikrant – and how do we know that we are over them ???

Geet – when we see them and we don't feel the pain in our heart .. or the feeling that we want to steal them away .. then we know that …

Vikrant – our wounds are healed completely …..

Geet – right … so why you don't want to tell me who is she ????

Vikrant – you are very close to her …. Agar maine tumhe bata diya toh tum kuch bhi karoge .. and I don't want to waste her life for me … and bhai … he laughed a little .. he will even kill her husband and bring her to me … but …

Geet – if our love cant give them life then we shouldn't take their life .. isn't it ??? she asked as she turned towards him and smiled sadly …. This is the reason why I don't tell his real identity to any one …. I don't want to be the reason of destruction of three life and a family ….

Vikrant – forgive me mahi.. for every thing I have done to force you to get you married to bhai .. please … mujhse tolerate nahin hota… my best friend is with me but not with me … I want my frined back … please …

Remorse and pain was in his voice .. and she thought she owed him that …

Geet – I was angry on you .. but not any more … when ever you will need a friend .. you will find me beside you …

Vikrant – thanks …… I wont ever break your trust ….

There was a silence them .. after few minutes vikrant suddenly said …. Anjali … anjali parekh.. she is the girl I love ….

Geet – what ?? anjali … but she is marr….

Vikrant – she is married …. She is the girl I have fallen for … my best friend should know the girl …..

Geet – hmm …. Vikamaditya … vikramaditya verma

Vikrant – WHAT????? Vikramaditya verma ??? he is the man ??? tu pagal ho gayi hai kya ??? he is the son of the verma groups … whoh log khuranas ke opponent hain… do you even know that ??? he is also our collage opponent ….. oh shit !!! shit !!! shit!!! That's why … that's why you never looked at him … or you didn't want to marry bhai … does he knows it ?????

Geet – no .. he doesn't knows it .. and promise me you wont say it to any one … maan ko bhi nahin … please …

Vikram – thik hai… I wont promise ….. you also wont say about anjali to any one …. She is pregnant ….

Geet – I know she is pregnanat …. Don't worry I wont say it … some times it is better to not open such wound which can give foul smell...

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Geet smiled at vikrant who returned it …. Suddenly vikrant stood up and did what he had done 5 years back when he had asked her for friendship .. he went on his knees …

I vikrant rathor khurana … aged 23… passed out of IIT roorkee … with my whole heart want to ask you geet kapoor singh khurana … will you accept my friendship and be my friend till the eternity …

Geet smiled and held his hand and said .

I geet kapoor singh khuarana aged 22 .. passed out of IIT roorkee with my total dedication and with my whole heart accept your vikrant rathor khurana 's friendship …

And then they did what they always did … (as in kuch kuch hota hai!!!) and then laughed out aloud ….

Vikrant – a hug for our new friendship …

And they hugged each other ….

Vikrant ….

I am sorry mahi.. but I cant say that I love you … I wont let my love come in your way and your life …. I will do anything to keep you away from my feelings …. And I have planned what I have to do ….

Geet …

Sorry vikrant… but I wont let my love for you destroy your life … its my task to keep you away from danger .. and I wont ever let you get a clue about my love … cahe mujhe uske liye kuch bhi karna kyun na pade…

Wile both of them were busy establishing their new friendship and keeping their feelings inside them… they were unaware of a shadow that had heard their every convo ….

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After his confession maan had took geet inside and gave her medicines … whole night he was awake… he was very much disturbedthinking that his wife was in love with his brother…. He was aware when geet had got up suddenly shouting vikram …he knew that she had had anathor bad dream .. probably him killing vikram … which maan would do … for sure ….

After that she didn't sleep at all… she got up and went to have a bath as early at 5:30 … after she came wearing a pink suite.. and she looked really very cute in that …. Then she went to wear her sindoor and mangalsutra .. but she sat there for some time looking intently at the sindoor before applying it… as she got up to go down .. she suddenly looked at him .. and he stilled his moments afraid being caught … he could her the sound of her payal and knew that she was coming towards him… and after some time he felt her soft hands holding his head and very carefelly adjusted his head on the pillow and covered him with the spread perfectly and was about to go when maan 's hand fell on her duppatta …. She came to him and gingerly held his hand and covered with his and took it to her left cheek and rested there …. There was silence for some time and then suddenly she said ….

Kash … kash ki main aapko kabhi samjha pati ki vikram mere liye kya maina rakhta hai…. Maine aapse kaha tha .. main kisi aur se pyar karti hoon.. aapse saadi nahin kar paungi … par aapne meri ek nahin suni … kash ki aap samajh pate … use bhulna itna aasan nahin … mujhe waqt lagega …. Mere liye itna aasan nahin hai aapko accept karna .. I know you don't trust me …. But I will try by best to walk forward …. Chahe aap trust karein ya naa karein …

She said as she kept quiet for some time … he could feel her ragged breathing … and then something wet on his palm… it didn't take long to realize that it was her tear …. But .. but …

SHE NEVER CRIED!!!!

I wish every thing was normal…..

She said at last and kept his hand securely and got up to go…..

As she wsa sure that she had gone he saw his palm and still that drop was shining …. It was hard for him to accept what she had said….. he was in deliema for sometime.. and then he got up with a determination to confront her about her and vikrant …. And he was going to talk with her when he saw both of them going to the terrace from the kitchen … and he followed them and heard their every convo …

He was stunned to hear them …. From their voice nothing revolutary was heard that would give any indication that they were lying …. He felt terrible for doubting his brother …. So indeed they had nothing but friendship for them …. And about vikramasitya verma … he knew who he was .. and that he was behind his wife for some time ….. and that geet had never talked with him ….

I am sorry…how could I doubt on them ????i wont forgive you vikramaditya

He thought as he called someone to know about parek and verma …….



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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
fablous part
spell bound completely
oh great vik loves geet but he said lie to her that he wont and he said some anjali parekh name
great dear...
and here geet also did the same dear
wondeful dear
and mostly now msk will trust them again dear
poot vikramaditya and parekh dear
waiting for the next part
hwz ur exams dear?
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is the last update from me dear ...

for i have 4 exams with a span of 5 days gap with in each ...😕 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow u create a blunder in the part...

both lie to each other...abt their love n lovers...
anjali n vikramaditya...
n maan heard alll... wow...
poor vikramditya... 2 tou gaya ...
pl cont soon...
curiously watiing 4 nxt...
Edited by 286pearl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelycutietedy

this is the last update from me dear ...


for i have 4 exams with a span of 5 days gap with in each ...😕 😕



ok dear
we will wait for the next update dear
and all the best dear
for ur exams
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update. thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago


haye u gave me credit for the line...😳...thank U so much...

Maan heard their convo...and now he is after Anjali and Vikramaditya...

bechare woh dono bina kasoor ke maare jaayenge...

but Geet and Vikrant both have underestimated Maan...he will search the truth but why he is doing so...what satisfaction he will get...he knows before that Geet loved other guy then why he married her and when he already married her and she is truthful to him and wants to move forward with him then why he is now digging the past...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update,
they both love each other nd lied about it,
maan want to search them,
can't wait for more,
try to update soon dr,
nd best of luck for ur exams.
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Posted: 13 years ago
i have a question...is this maaneet story...then y geet is still loving vikram after 4 years of her wedding...u made vikram somthing that seems he is th lead n maan overall a negative character who obesssed geet, abused his wife...didnt trust her...spying her...n geet still loving vikram sex wth his husband...they promised to each other that they will b move on bt in reality they dont trust each other...still geet is only worrying abt vikram...plz dont mind bt still i m confused coz vikram indeed a good person n geet also n vikram his first lov...she always wth vik n really he is just shadow of maan so its natural geet cant able to forget him bt then hw is it a maaneet story...i m nw feelying pritty abt the vikramasitya verma n anjali...plz dont takie me wrong...i m still mcrossing my fingers that one day geet willb embraced with ony maans lv...

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