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Part 20

"Kaho Na Pyar Hain"

"Yeh Shabbir Sir phone kyun nahin pick kar rahe?" Dhrasti yelled in her mind as she was getting fed up of waiting especially with that creepy Karan opposite her. "Ek cup coffee ho jaye!" Karan announced delightfully and before Dhrasti could respond he had already called the waiter and placed an order for two cups of coffee.

Dhrasti had had enough, she was waiting for the so called meeting for hours now and there was no sign of Shabbir or Gurmeet and this Karan was behaving odd. "I'm going home now it seems like the meeting won't take place today" she spoke in one tone and walked away in a flash before that Karan could digest the fact that she had left.

Gurmeet looked at Dhrasti leaving and was furious, "how dare she leaves!" He shouted as what he wanted hadn't happened. Karan came upto his table and smiled, "tera kaam ho jayega, tu tension mat le, tora sa time lagega boss" he chirped away and Gurmeet listened intensely, "kaam ho jana chahiye aur woh bhi bohat jald" he stated before leaving.

Dhrasti was waiting outside the coffee shop for a rickshaw when she saw Gurmeet near his car "ab aye yeh late latif meeting karne" she said to herself and dashed towards Gurmeet in anger. Gurmeet was about to get into his car when he felt a tap on his shoulder, he turned around and was shocked to see Dhrasti, he still however managed to remain calm. Dhrasti started clapping really loudly "kya baat hain kya baat hain" Dhrasti shouted gathering attention of the people near by. Gurmeet was now embarrassed at being seen with this crazy girl. "Yeh tum kya kar rahi ho?" Gurmeet screamed. Dhrasti however paid no heed to Gurmeet, she still continued clapping and her motor mouth was not stopping either "yeh kya time hain aane ka, itni der koi intezaar karata hain kya, waqt ki kadar tho nahin hain aap ko….." Dhrasti continued with her ranting about Gurmeet's late arrival but Gurmeet couldn't make sense of anything she was saying. He started shaking her by holding her shoulders but she just wouldn't stop. A lot of people had gathered looking at them in astonishment, "Dhrasti STOP!" Gurmeet yelled but it was as if Dhrasti was deaf, Gurmeet didn't know what to do to shut her up.

Without thinking, acting on his instincts he pulled Dhrasti onto him and placed his hard lips on her soft pink lips. He started kissing her and this worked as magic to shut Dhrasti up. His mind told him to stop kissing her but it only made him deepen the kiss, he could taste her strawberry flavoured lip gloss and his saliva mixed with hers like two souls joining together, their breathing became one as their lips locked together. Gurmeet closed his eyes and was living in the moment, he had a new found feeling that he never knew existed, he was enjoying himself and wanted this moment never to end.

Dhrasti however had her eyes wide open in shock, what was Gurmeet doing to her, she never thought he will drop so low, that he was so cheap, she tried to push him away but she was too weak for this ruthless man. Tears started streaming out her eyes and fell onto Gurmeet's cheeks. The warm drop of tear that fell on Gurmeet awoke him from his blind moment of passion and he pulled himself away from Dhrasti with a jerk. He saw Dhrasti's face which was sad and covered with tears, before he could say something or even attempt an apology Dhrasti covered his face with a huge SMACK! She looked at him in despair, not believing what he just did, she held onto her mouth with her hand and started running away from the place, tears blurring her view but her legs didn't stop.

Gurmeet stood still at his exact place, rubbing his red cheek in anger, for a second he thought he went too far with Dhrasti but this slap caused him to think otherwise. He got into his car and drove off calling Karan with a new set of instructions.

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Shabbir was in awe of Prachi, him lifting the 'ghungat' like cloth from her face kept on replaying on his mind. He shook his head and tried getting rid of that thought "yeh meri dimaak ek hi cheez par ake atak jaati hain!" He laughed and glanced ahead and noticed Prachi looking at him.

Prachi was helping two students with their dance choreography when she spotted Shabbir laughing and like a bumble bee attracted to a sunflower she was unable to resist admiring his innocent laughter.

Shabbir walked upto Prachi and just when he was about to reach her he stumbled upon Barun's open shoe laces and fell flat on the floor. Prachi started laughing hysterically at this funny scene. Shabbir looked up still lying on the ground and once again found himself lost in Prachi. Her laughter was like medicine to his heart, it gave him a feeling of peace. "Shabbir tu tho comedy circus ka clown ban raha hain" he said to himself and got up leaving the college before he got involved in more dramatic incidents.

In the busy dancing atmosphere where everyone was now hooked up with there partners, Manvi found herself lost and misplaced as her dance partner Kushaal was no whre to be seen, it was as if from the stage he disappeared like the Genie from Aladdin's lamp.

Meanwhile Kushi in the other corner of the hall was finding it difficult to persuade Barun to dance. She forcefully placed her arms around Baruns neck in a ring shape hoop, placing her body on front of his and asking him "now you place your hands on my hips". "what the" Barun shouted as he was confused to see what Kushi was doing. "go on put your hands on my hips" she said again. In order to shut her up from continuingly repeating herself Barun decides to put his hard hands on her curvey hips. His little touch makes Kushi feel uncomfortable but she decides not to pay attention to this strange emotion brewing up in her body as winning this competition was very important for her. "now slightly move your body with me left and right" she orders. "damn! Am not moving like that, are you mad?" he shouts moving away from Kushi. "hai devi maiya" yeh kaisa partner apne mujhe deh diya" Kushi mutters looking up whilst the bell goes off.

"okay guys, I hope you enjoyed today's lesson, we will meet again tomorrow" Prachi announces whilst all the students exit the class.

Manvi also exits the class, "yeh Kushaal, kaha gaya… and why is he avoiding me!" she thinks when she suddenly spots him in the college car park. "acha bachu, so you are hiding there but mere nazaro se kaha bachoge" laughs Manvi running down the lengthy stairs.

Now she stood on front of Kushaal breathlessly saying, "where did you go? I was looking for you everywhere". "tumse matlab, I don't have to answer to you" Kushaal claimed making a dirty face. "huh, why are you talking to me like that" asked Manvi. "like what" he answered.

A new facet of Kushaal opened in front of Manvi, she didn't know what to say as for the first time she Manvi was lost for words. Although she was confused she was not going to give up as she only had one motive which was to make him love her. Therefore her cunning mind quickly plans a plot sitting herself down on his motorbike. "what are you doing on my motorbike" Kushaal says out of frustration as he did not want Manvi to love him and no matter how hard he tries for her to hate him, it was not working.

"drop me home, darling" Manvi asks Kushaal nicely as this was going to give her the oppourtunity to get close to him. "ride toh main dunga, but so fast that you would wish you didn't ask me for this ride" Kushaal schemed in his mind. "acha Manvi darling, lets go for this ride baby" he smiles and says. Manvi gives Kushaal a strange look as she did not understand why he had a sudden change of heart.

Kushaal started riding the motorbike really fast to fright Manvi, "wow Kushaal you are my type of driver" Manvi declares happily. "Kya" asks Kushaal as he could not hear a word she said as the sound from his engine and the racket of Delhi streets was so loud.

"isko dar kyun nahi lag raha hain bhai" he thinks speeding up the motorbike to 120mph dodging all the slow moving vehicle. As the motorbike speeds up Manvi gets more and more excited, draping her lilac silk scarf which dances to the swift wind. Kushaal now gets fuming as his plans were not working and unknowingly he was about to crash in to a woman holding a basket made out of straws. Fortunately Kushaal manages to sway his motorbike in another direction but the women drops her basket in the air and from it all her marigold flowers fall building a cloud of petals which showers on Kushaal and Manvi.

"Kya bath hain Kushaal my darling, kya preparation kiya hain.. main toh puri gayal hogayi hoon.. phulo ka swagat toh koi tumse sikhe" chants Manvi in her enthusiasm. Kushaal could not believe what was happening to him, instead of making her hate him, she was undoubtedly falling more in love with him he thought.

Before they knew it both of them had reached Manvi's house. Black smoke, orange flames and piping hot surrounding is what they saw and felt. From the narrow kitchen window the flames were reaching the outside world, with men and women standing around the building shouting "aag, aag" but none from the crowd did anything to stop the fire.

Manvi was in tears, she didn't know what to do, jumping off the motorbike she ran inside the house as she believed her sister Dharasti was in there. Kushaal was too late to stop her, as from his back she suddenly disappeared with out him noticing.

Manvi was now in the living area which was free from the humongous fire, she realised it was only the kitchen that was on fire, with her loud vocal she shouted "Di, Di…. App kaha hain..". She got no reply which added to her worries, "maybe Di, is inside the kitchen" she thought planning to now jump inside the kitchen.

"oh my god… Manvi went inside.. is she mad??" Kushaal expressed nodding his head. "yeh toh puri pagal hain.." he shouted jumping inside like a superhero. He looked at the flame free zone and noticed Manvi was not visible. A sudden worry emulated his dull face which was now covered in black smoke, "Manvi, Kaha ho tum" he bellowed across the rooms. Manvi did not respond to the cries coming out of him, as she was too engrossed in the search for Dharasti her loved sister.

Kushaal frantically searched the house top to bottom as he did not wished for this kind of escape of Manvi from his life, he looked right and left and with no other option left he zoomed across to the kitchen door and saw a glimpse of Manvi and was shocked at what he saw.

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Prachi reached her house and was too tired, the dancing needs a lot of energy. She had a shower and found herself laughing thinking about Shabbir's sweet but funny antics. She came out the shower wrapped in her red towel and looked outside her wide opened windows, she breathed in the cold air and smiled at the beautiful greenery, her smile lasted a few seconds as it disappeared as soon as she saw the pain etched across the face of the man she loved.

The tall broadly built man had been long awaiting her return from college and stood outside her window to speak to her, to see her, to complain to her but most of all to tell her he loves her. But when he saw her smile and happy he felt hurt, like she didn't care about him, his pain, his feelings. He was gone from her sights within seconds, trapping himself in his home which was empty like him.

Prachi changed into some clothes and ran out of her house like a bolt of lightening. She ran across the fields and stopped herself in front of his house. She pushed the door open and entered into his house that she wished one day will become her home.

Stood before her was the man she belonged to, he stood near the far wall caressing an image and she didn't need to see it to know it was hers. She knew he knew she was here, but he refused to turn around. "I'm sorry" she whispered but there was no reply from the other end. "I'm sorry" she spoke a little louder but again the man remained quiet. She took slow steps closer to the man but was stopped in her tracks as the man turned around and reached her.

He looked at her and wiped the tears from her face that she even failed to notice had dropped out of her eyes. He smothered his hands across her face, feeling her skin which makes him feel alive. "Tum kya chathi ho… Main yu hi jalta rahu… Faisla ka waqt kareeb hain Prachi… Kya iss bar puri karogi humari pyaar ki kahaani?" He questioned her in his deep voice which consisted of his pain as well as his love.

Prachi stepped away from him as soon as she was bombarded with the questions she didn't want to answer, the questions to which she had no answer.

The tall broadly built man demanded for answers, he walked towards her with slow steps whilst her steps were going backward.

"Yeh dekho Prachi, meri nazdhikhi bhi tumhe manzoor nahi, my every step towards you is like your every two step away from me" Spoke the man who didn't see the light of day.

"Nahi, tum mujhe galat samaj rahe ho" she answers. "Toh sahi kya hain Prachi, main toh barso se inni sawaalo ka jawaab dhoondh raha hoo, lekin kabhi tum ya tumara woh bh…" He speaks from his heart but Prachi doesn't allows him to complete his sentence getting close to him, placing her fingers on his lips trying to passionately hug him.

This time he was not in the mood to be swayed by her romance, he truly loved her but he wanted a commitment from her, he wanted the world to know that he is the one Prachi chose. He pushed Prachi away from him and stepped backwards.

"Nahi Prachi, I can't do this anymore! Mera bhi koi zindagi hain, main bhi jeena chata hoon" Cried his inner soul which he couldn't suppress any longer.

Prachi stood numb, she didn't know what happened, he pushed her away, how could he, tears stained her face but she wiped it with a strange determination. She looked in his eyes and turned around walking out the door, "you don't have to do this anymore, tum apni zindagi jee lo", saying this she left his house with a strange satisfaction and strength to do something.

PRECAP

Chaudhry household main kisne di hain dastak..

Manvi, Dharasti aur Kushi ki ghar main yeh aag kaise tufaan layegi?

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Posted: 13 years ago
luved it
awesome update
continue soon
looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago

yaar ye gurmeet ko aise kiss nhi krna chaiye tha drashti ko

nd shabbir scene was too funny

nd ye mystery man kaun hai????

abhi tak pta nhi chala

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Posted: 13 years ago
how could gurmeet just kiss her...really cheap
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Awesome part
poor the three what will they do now
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
prachi has done d right thing...

beautiful update...


loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

n thank u fr such a lovely update n also fr d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
back frm xams and completed all the pending parts 😃
loved the updates
amzing mast hy
continue soon
and thnx fr the pms 😊
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Love the update ... really Kool ... Awesome and can't wait to read the next chapter ... thanks for PM ...

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