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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Both parts are lovely, love the way of khusi's dancing and wht a surprise!! (Arnav at the door), eagerly waiting for next part, pls update soon and thnx for pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
THE THING WE DO: " LOVE"
42
I made it through the wilderness
Somehow I made it through

Didn't know how lost I was
Until I found you

I was beat incomplete
I'd been had, I was sad and blue
But you made me feel

Yeah, you made me feel
Shiny and new
Gonna give you all my love, boy
My fear is fading fast

Been saving it all for you
'Cause only love can last
SONG COURTESY: ( LIKE A VIRGIN: MADONNA)


Arnav ( standing at the main door)

"Umm..Mrs Gomez!

If you two are done with whatever you are doing, then please finish it soon and get Khushi ready.

Lavanya and Mark are on their way to pick her up for shopping of the wedding outfits.

I also have an online meeting and teleconference."

Arnav glances a short one at Khushi, standing on the table top, statue in a dancing position hip in one side, the rest in the other.

A red chunri on hand and a flower in the other.

Her face turned redder than the chunri itself.

Khushi turns around and places her hand on the chair to get down.

The second she tries to lower her feet; she can feel Arnav's hand on her hand on the chair top. He slides it on the wood and holds it steady.

His eyes on the chair, no smile, just a blank expression.

A poker face.

Khushi comes down and Arnav gets his hand off the chair immediately.

Khushi

"Arnav ji!".

He looks again towards Mrs Gomez and smiles.

He goes to his room, closing the door slightly, leaving 2 inches gap in between.

Mrs Gomez, comes near Khushi and waves her to go to her room.

Khushi:

" Mrs Gomez!

Please do not mind.

It's just that, I need to speak to him privately.

He is trying to avoid talking.

He might get a but upset, as we had a bit of a heated discussion last night.

So if you leave, I will need to clear it up with him.

And I will request you to take a break.

You have been with me since early morning.

You need to rest. Also with all the dancing, you seem tired.

I can handle it and get ready."

Mrs Gomez:

"Mam!

Let me at least get some cloths out for you.

I will lay them down on the bed.

Arnav sir, told me to get you some western wear. A pair of jeans and tops and shoes, because it's a long drive to the dress shop and Lavanya Mam shops around a lot.

So you need relaxing attires and comfortable shoes.

He also said to tell you not to take dupattas or scarf, as you trip a lot and your dupatta gets stuck.

Opps! Sorry Mam!

I was not supposed to tell you that. I lost control.

Please , I am sorry."

Mrs Gomez frankly seems to be sorry and repentant of what she just said to Khushi.

Khushi on the opposite hand starts to smile a bit at the newly found information and detail Arnav has been to in taking care of her and of her habits.

She completely gets the fact that Arnav is intentionally avoiding her look and talks.

She opts up to play along.

Khushi:

Comes near and hugs Mrs Gomez.

"Uff

Mrs Gomez!

Please do not make a sad face like this.

You are like my mom's age. And it's quite alright of what you said. I do trip a lot and my dupatta do gets stuck a lot.

I have hit Arnav JI many times with my dupatta getting stuck on his as well. Lol'she starts to laugh at the memories.

I will wear whatever you put out for me. You know best and if HE thought so, then there might be a good reason.

Please also tell me what sort of jewelry to wear and what bag to carry.

Please do not get sad.

Ok?"

Mrs Gomez feels a bit relaxed and smilingly proceeds to her room.

KHUHSI WALKS TO ARNAV'S ROOM.

" Arnav ji!

May I come in?

Arnav ji!"

Khushi slowly pushes the door open and see that Arnav is in the bathroom.

She waits for a few minutes hearing the shower sound.

Mrs Gomez comes to call her and takes her in her room to change.

PLEASE MARK MY INDEX FOR UPDATES. THANKS
Edited by sheun - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
THE THING WE DO: " LOVE"
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(After almost an hour later )

( Khushi all dressed up, has been peeking in and out of Arnavs room for the last 20 minutes )

Arnav is working on his laptop, eating a sandwich. Three coffee mugs at his table. Another laptop open in front and the land line in hand.

Files piled up.

A box of rice crackers ( 0 gram fat and sugar free) lying on the table.

Khushi peeks again into his room.

She makes a fake sigh and coughs a bit.

Still no reaction from Arnav.

Khushi thinks:

"Why is he avoiding me?

He texted me so lovingly and now when I am near him, he is totally behaving as I do not exist.

Why is he acting like that? Is he still mad about last night? Well I was very rude. I said what came to my mind. Uff! I should have stopped and think before speaking.

Why do I have such a big mouth?

Arnav ji! Please look at me once. Just smile and it will be all ok.

Umm'if I go up to him and hold him, how will he react?

Guess, if he wants to keep his space, he can. But if I barge in, how will be react?

Hmmm'.I guess he won't scold me or shout.

Will he pull me as the way he does and hold me tight , a grip on my hand?

If he does, I won't mind ( chuckle)

Oh Arnav Ji! Looks nah ? please.

This is the first time I am in jeans and feeling very uncomfortable.

Wont you even look?

But with him, it is very difficult to know. He might get really angry and shut the door in my face.

Well, what is there to lose?

I need to take a step before Mark ji and Lavanya JI comes and spoil my stay with Arnav ji!

Why cannot I get some time alone with this HOT HOT thing?

Why do they need to come?

Uff!!!

After all these time, I get Arnav ji, all alone and now this new drama !

Hmm'but wedding shopping will be awesome. Wish Arnav JI also went with us. So at least I could see him at all time.

Arnav ji! I wish I could tell you how I long for you

How I love you

And how I am willing to do anything'.hmm.

Hmmm''

WELL KHUSHI !! WHAT MOST CAN HE DO?

HE WONT BEAT ME..HE HE HE'LOL.

LETS SEE WHAT HE DOES?"

Khushi:

"Arnav ji!

Can I come in?

Are you ok?"

Arnav

"Hmm"

"No'.Oh ok."

"yes''

Khushi

"Arnav Ji!

Is it a yes or a no?

Are you working?"

Arnav

"No, its alright.

I will do it later."

Khushi:

"Arnav Ji!

Why are you behaving like this?

I have waited all day ot talk to you.

I have not left you for India.

You can see me standing here.

Are you happy that I stayed back? Listened to you?"

Arnav

"What ever !

I do not care.

Just do what you have to.

I will not give a single dollar ."

Khushi gets a bit worried that ARNAV might be losing it out of anger.

And why is he talking so rudely?

Khushi:

"Umm..I do not need any money.

You already paid way lot for the outfits and accessories.

And I thank you for that.

I was about to faint seeing the prices and the outfits.

They are to die for.

But I could never afford such beautiful pieces.

Do you like what I am wearing now?

My first time in jeans.

Do you think it's too revealing?

Does my back look ok?"

Arnav

"Damn it !

What were you thinking?

I gave so much money and this is what you come up with?"

Khushi:

"Arnav ji!

You haven't looked at me once.

You are facing your computer for the last hour. You did not see me even.

So how can you comment?

OH !

You are still upset for last night. Right?

Sorry. Sorry. Sorry.

Should I hold me ears and say sorry again?

I WILL MAKE IT UP TO YOU."

With a lot of effort, Khushi steps from back of the door and enters "THE TIGER'S DEN".

She steps one and then two, very slowly she steps in and stands at side of Arnav.

Arnav seems very tensed and deep into thought.

His eyes are closed and he is nodding a bit.

Head phones are in his ears.

Khushi nears a bit more and wish out any talk or warning, places a swift kiss on his cheek.

Arnav jumps up.

Headset on the ground. The wire disconnects from the laptop and goes to speaker. Coffee mug on the ground, water on the floor.

VOICE 1:

"Arnav Sir !" ARE YOU OK?

WHAT WAS THAT?

VOICE 2:

"MR RAIZADA!

WHAT JUST HAPPENED?

ARE YOU WITH SOMEONE?

SORRY !

WE DIDN'T KNOW."

VOICE 3:

"ASR !

Opps! Sorry, do you need a break?"

VOICE 4: ( ALEX)

"OH HERE WE GO AGAIN!

SOMEONE GET A PINK LIPSSTICK"

HAHA'HA'HA..HA..HA'.

ARNAV flips out and grabs Khushi's arms and yanks her out of the camera range .

( he was on teleconference with five other parties. He was going through the report points, dictated by Alex. His ear phones were connected and as usual KHUSHI had no idea)

Khushi cringes up under his hold. She makes a tormented face and her head lowers down, waiting for all hell to let loose.

A minute passes

The grip gets softer. Arnav slowly makes way out from the room and takes her in the hallway.

Khushi closes her eyes shut and waits for the rebuking to commence !!!

He speaks:

"Please seat here, I am in a meeting. Will take a while.

Lavanya and Mark will come and pick you up. They texted as well.

Do you want to watch TV?

You ok ? "

He turns on the TV and gives a Hindi channel. He strides back to his room.

(Khushi bewildered at what just happened. How could she not understand that when he did not answer her call, then he must be busy?

He was on phone and on camera?

She kissed him in front of all those people? Oh no!

Khushi picks up a through pillow and dips her head into it. He drifts in self bashing:

HOW COULD I KISS HIM LIKE THAT IN PUBLIC?

OH I NEED TO DIE.!!!!

WHY AM I SO STUPID?

I KNOW I AM CRAZY. BUT THIS IS FULL ON LUNACY.

WHAT HE MIGHT BE THINKING?

OH!!! AND I HAVE TO FACE ALEX AGAIN TONIGHT FOR DINNER''what the !!!!!)

After another hour almost:

KNOCK !

KNOCK!!

Khushi gets up and open the door.

Its Lavanya and Mark.

As soon as Khushi brings them in, Arnav comes out of the room and waves.

His head phone still attached and laptop at hand.

He comes solely towards Khushi and signs her to follow him.

Khushi, red a tomato, follows him in his room.

( waiting for a advice giving session or atleast some words from him)

Arnav hands her TWO AQUA BLUE BOXES.

And while on the phone, signs her to open it.

Khushi opens it and inside there is BEAUTIFUL BRACELET. SILVER COLOR WITH CLEAR GLASS SETTING.

Inside the other is TWO CLEAR GLASS SET STUD EARRINGS.

Khushi is stunned to her core.

After what she did, he is giving her gifts?

Arnav :

takes the mouth piece off and asks,

" WEAR THEM!"

"AND GO WITH MARK AND LAVANYA."

Khushi stands there as a statue.

What is going on?

She has never seen him like this?

He is giving gifts while on phone? And being so polite?

Is he feeling OK?

Khushi as a good girl, takes the jewelry out and wears them.

Arnavs signs her to come closer.

Arnav while taking over with the rest scribbles something out on a piece of paper and hands out to Khushi.

And hands a piece of paper written:

WRITTEN NOTE # 2

"I WILL TAKE A FEW MORE HOURS TO GET THIS DONE.

SO DO NOT WAIT.

HAVE A GOOD TIME WITH THEM.

EAT SOMETHING AND TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF.

KEEP THE PHONE WITH YOU AT ALL TIMES.

I REPEAT ALL TIMES.

DO NOT STRAY AWAY OR GO SOMEWHERE ALONE.

BE SAFE AND ALWAYS WITH MARK AND LA.

OK? BYE

WHEN YOU COME BACK, GO TO SLEEP.

I MIGHT NOT BE HERE.

HAVE WORK"

Khushi with a lot of effort discovers the writing, amidst his terrible hand writing. But as he reads, her heart sinks.

He is completely ignoring me.

Whole day I could not talk to him .and now he is sending me off.

At night he will also not be here.

I stayed back ONLY FOR HIM.

DOES HE NOT CARE?( her eyes become watery)

Arnav hands her another piece of paper.

SMILES AND

Looks around and starts to talk again.

WRITTEN NOTE # 2

" FORGOT TO MENTION, YOU LOOK PRETTY."

Khushi stands there for a few more minutes, trying to wrap her mind around the absurdness of his behavior.

But as told, she slowly leaves the room and joins Lavanya.

Two pieces of paper with Arnav's scribble, lays neatly folded in Khushi's purse, with many, many many, lipstick marks on them.

PLEASE MARK MY INDEX FOR UPDATES. THANKS

Edited by sheun - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
lovely update...😊

Awww...poor arnav and khushi

Arnav must have rushed out from meeting to see her darling grl as soon as he received the SMS to have a glance of her though still busy continuing his MGR.
I remember Alex saying, Arnav, You have hell load of work to do. ...poor guy s so busy

Khushi,...i loved her sweet public kiss😳

U still keep up ur suspense track lols...keep going👏

Edited by sammymas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
awww this is so beautiful
finally she knows what he went through and now she wants him
she was angry but now so happy cuz of one text
🤣 ahhahaah what a sight that greeted Arnav

and now these 2 other updates were amazing
i wonder why he isn't talking to her
but she kissed him in front of 5 people
Edited by LyssaPie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Y is he avoiding her? :( but the notes r cute :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Hey nice update wonder wats going on in arnavs mind
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
yaar in dono ki hide n seek !!!! first khushi is not in mood now arnav !!! uff...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
superb update
thankx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
why the hell is he ignoring her? she stayed back for him isnt it? omg! but khushi isnt giving up.. good girl. :)

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