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tvmylove

@tvmylove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: Ravi.

koncha nerathula potturan poem ah 😆😆

ok da..😉
Waiting for it 😆

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sahi.

@sahi.

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#732

Originally posted by: zee10

ok da..😉
Waiting for it 😆

same dialogue ah repeat pannureenga additional ah ok da podureenga 😆😆😆

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sahi.

@sahi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#733

Poem # 9 - Latchiyathai Thedi Oru Payanam

Sirantha vazhakai venduma un manasu enna solluthu endru ketuko
Unnaku mudivu eduka theriya villai ah un manasai kettu tholai
Unnaku latchiyam irukiratha athai yaarukagavum mathathai
Un latchiyathai nee mathinal avastha pada porathu nee thaan
Pidicha vazhakai kidaikala endral
Un Thookam kettu poi vidum
Un santhosham sogama maari vidum
Un Vazhakai naragama maari vidum
Un manasu enna sollutho athil thaan un aasai irukku endru purinchuko
Unnaku ethil romba aarvam irukiratho athula thaan Un thiramai Irukkum endru purinchuko
Un aasayai Thedu
Un latchiyathil gavanam seluthu
Un petrorgal un latchiyathil thadayaga irukirargala
Avargalai samathanam paduthura valiyai Yosi
Kaasu pinnadi pogatha
Nee polaika unnaku thevai velai
Pidicha velai pinnadi po
Pidicha velayil unnaku kidaikium samabalam unnaku thiripthiyai tharum
Nee aasai patta vazhkai unnaku kidaichal nee nimathi ah irupa
Santhosham venuma nee edukum mudivu thaan un santhoshathai theermaanikum
Un latchiyathai gavani nee sathichu kaatu
Ithu thaan un santhosham.

Poem # 9 - A Journey to Reach a Goal
Translation : Jillu

Do you want a beautiful life? Then listen to what your heart has to say
If you don't know what to decide on, then just listen to your heart

Don't change your dreams for anyone

For only you will suffer if you change it

If you don't get the life you asked for,

You will become restless

Your happiness will turn to sorrow

And your life will become hell

Whatever your heart tells you, just understand that's where your dreams lie

Go after your dreams

Focus on your goals

If your parents are blocking you from reaching those dreams,

Think of ways to convince them

Don't go running behind money

What you need to survive is a job

Chase after your dream job

You will definitely be satisfied with what you earn while doing what you love

You'll find peace in the life you desire

Your happiness will be defined through the decision you take

Focus on your ambitions and achieve them

This will be your happiness

Edited by Ravi. - 13 years ago

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hopper_ocean

@hopper_ocean

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Posted: 13 years ago

#734

After so long and ippo ur back with another super poem daa 👍🏼

Nijamavae rombha alaga sollirukei about life and the desire of heart ⭐️ Neriya youngsters when they don't get support from family, rombha break agiruvango. Not many thinks to try to convince their family about their dream. Some give up their real dream for the sake of their family and nijamave they turn out to be miserable and not happy.

As long our dream and goals are right, its better to go after it in right way. Thanks thambi, a very good

message for everyone out there ⭐️👍🏼

Thanks jillu for the translation ⭐️

Edited by hopper_ocean - 13 years ago

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__VJ__

@__VJ__

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Posted: 13 years ago

#735

Dei Thambi...👏 Need of the hour... Patta anubavam... 🤣

Nee ithuvarai eluthinathu la dis is sumthin neraya per will go thro in their life and relate to...⭐️

Ithai padikarathula oru thar itha follow pannina kuda its a moral victory...👍🏼

Edited by --Vink-- - 13 years ago

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sahi.

@sahi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: hopper_ocean
After so long and ippo ur back with another super poem daa 👍🏼

Nijamavae rombha alaga sollirukei about life and the desire of heart ⭐️ Neriya youngsters when they don't get support from family, rombha break agiruvango. Not many thinks to try to convince their family about their dream. Some give up their real dream for the sake of their family and nijamave they turn out to be miserable and not happy.

As long our dream and goals are right, its better to go after it in right way. Thanks thambi, a very good
message for everyone out there ⭐️👍🏼

Thanks jillu for the translation ⭐️

correct ah sonninga... I write this poem because all the youngsters have to follow their heart akka apo thaan avanga life nallatha nadakum manasula oru aasai vechuttu pidikatha field poyi avanga life ah waste panna koodathu pidichatha seyyanom apo thaan life nalla irukkum athu thaan en karuthu atha thaan intha 20 line kavithai la sonnathu...

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sahi.

@sahi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: CrazyFans1
Really Nice

Denks akka for your feedback... Will try to do better in the next poem 😆

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supercool3

@supercool3

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#738

Ravi, this is my most favourite poem of yours ⭐️

The message you've given is so true. In today's world everyone's running towards a goal that is set by society, and in the process many tend to forget who they really are.

People need to slow down a bit. It's needed

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cuty2sweety

@cuty2sweety

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#739

Ravusu - Great job da👍🏼

i loved this one ..

so nee un latchiyatha vidaatha da ..

Go 4 it 👏👏

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Aiswarya

@Aishu.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#740

wowww u're a poet too?? 😲😆 thiz is ur first poem am reading ...and i liked it alooot👏👏

the message is so related to our lives...and i really liked the way u conveyed it...often ppl keep their dreams only to themselves and never try to acheive it...but it shudn't b like tht no...we hav to try atleast once...& hear our "dil ki awaaz" 😳

anyway lovely poem...do u publish these or just put it here??😆 😳 thankz for the pm yaar...otherwise i wud hav missed it...and TY to jillu for translation😊