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Posted: 13 years ago
part 6
lovely part...
cant wait for the meeting scene...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Di,i'm to total fida over Mr.love😆. Maaneet meeeting k liye eagarly waitiing. Lovely update. Tnx for Pm di. Lov ya.😃
-LUV Anyaa😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 7

Hi friends here is ur most awaited part ... enjoy all...

At dining table

Everybody eating their food and chatting maan didn't return yet so soniya is making faces to sanjay for doing this... and say


Mom -kya sanjay kya jarurat thi aapko maan ko site par bhejne ki dekha aabhi tak nahi aaya aur sab yaha use milne k liye kitna bechain hain (indirectly pointing geet)...


Dad - sona kaam important tha but pata nahi aabhi tak kyu nahi aaya itni der to nahi lagni chahiye thi use...


Dadi - sanjay bte shayad aap bhool rahe hain maan aapke hi bte hain agar ek baar kaam mein involve ho gaye to sab kuch bhool jate hain ...


Dad- maa aap fikar mat kariye mein use call karta hu...


Geet (st) - babaji this is the limit mein duparhar se yaha hu aur in dust danav ko meri koi parwa hi nahi kaam k chakar mein mujhe GEET HANDA ko bhool gaye aane do aachi khabr leti hu but pehle aaye to ... babajiii


Geet stared with dad voice who is on call with maan and maan is on his way to home...


Dad- are maan aap kaha hain aap abhi taka aye kyu nahi???????????


Maan - sorry dad wo traffic jum hain mujhe shayad thoda time lagega aap sab khana khake so jayeyiga mein sabse kal subah mein mil lunga... dad shayad network problem hain i talk to u... and call disconnected...


Dad- sorry darji beeji wo maan traffic mein fas gaya hain to wo late ho jayega usne kaha hain ki aap sab rest kijiye use subah mil lena...


Darji - are koi baat nahi puttar kaam jaruri hain pehle aura b to hum sab yahi hain koina kal subah millenge maan se...


Geet(st) - subah tak mein wait nahi karne wali wo kitna bhi late aaye mujhe unse aaj hi milna hain ...


After dinner all went to their room...(ok geet's room is next to maan's room with same balcony and both rooms are also connected with a door inside the room)


Maan while driving sab ko bol to diya ki sab rest kare but i know geet to mera wait kar rahi hogi , jitna mein tadap raha hu tumhe dekhne k liye utna tum bhi tadap rahi hogi . kaise milonga tumse kya bolounga omg why my heart beats so fast dekha geet tumhara maan is behaving like a teenager but kya karo tumhare khayal se hi mera dil jor jor se dhadkane lagta hain... he reach KM and take a deep breath when he come out of the car he can feel his whole surrounding with her aroma his lips curve into a smile and whisper geet...


When he whispered geet, geet close her eyes she started feeling restless more as she knows he is back, he is in mansion , she come in the balcony for some fresh air...


Maan come inside the mansion no one is in the living room its quite late and all went to their room's as maan ask them... so he went upstairs in his room he is dyeing to meet geet but he is afraid as well ... what happened if he couldn't control himself and end up doing something off limit no ...


After fresh up he decided to go balcony for some freash air...


When he come into the balcony he step rooted at his place when he saw his geetu after 16 years in moon light... chand ka nor bhi kam lage uski khubsurti k aage chandni mein bheegi hui jaise ek phool par giri hui koi aaos ki bund itni khubsurat ki use ektak dekhne se darr lage shayad dekhne se useki khubsurati kharab na ho jaye... maan slowly slowly pulling toward geet but geet is own world... maan come and stand behind geet...


A pair of hand slip round her waist she close her eyes with a smile on her face maan turn geet slowly to face him her eyes are closed maan give peak on her forehead she shiver with his touch. Maan ask geet to open her eyes ,by kiising her eyes, geet slowly open her eye.Their are so many emotions are playing in their eyes like complaining love longing for eachother. They come close and hug tightly each other as no tomorrow ...after some time they lose hug and maan touch geet face with his palm his touch was driving her to a new land..they both were lost in each other. she closed her eyes feeling him..his hands moved around her cheeks giving her Goosebumps..his other hand was on her waist..she leaned fully to his palm. her lips twisted..maan rubbed his thumb over it..she lost herself in his touch. when he lifted her chin n made her face him..she lowered her gaze in shy..he lowered towards her n took her lips in his..it was feathery..She want to respond but felt shy...she slowly took his lips in hers 'when the fire started, they both were kissing like there is no more tomorrow..his hands roamed on her back. Their somuch passion and love... they were kissing like no tomorrow... as they kissing last time..


Suddenly a thunder distract maan's dream but by thunder sound geet scared and turn to run in her room, maan is standing so close to her she loose her balance she think she is going to fall but before her delicate body touch floor strong arms catch her and geets eyes are closed but she can feel love in arms she very slowly whispered maan but maan is so lost in her beauty he missed that whisper .geet open her eyes and maan drown in her beautiful hazel eyes full of emotionals. slowly maan make geet stand on her feet . geet become to emotional hug maan as no tomorrow maan hug with same passion their longingness show in their hug both eyes are teary their voice stake in their throats both are enable to say anything... both standing hugging each other gods knows how long but no one wants to separate from other... suddenly Mr.Love voice get back both the reality geet blush and run from their to her room...


Maan(st)- i know geet tum 16 years k baad dakhunga to shayad mein aisa hi kuch karonga.


Maan to Geet - geetu Last 16 years semein tumhara intejar kar raha hu... tadap raha hu tumhare liye in 16 saalo mein meine tumse baat nahi ki janti hu kyu kyuki mein jaanta tha agar mein tumse ek baar bhi baat karli to hum dono ka alag rehna impossible ho jayega par ab tum yaha ho mere pass aaj mein tum se promise karta hu ki mein ab tumhe mujhse baat karne par majboor kar dunga...ye waada hain MSK ka aapni geetu se... mein bhi dekta hu ab kab tak meri chatter box chup rehti hain... he return to his room with smirk on his face...


Geet run from balcony in shy and come to her room and close the door behind her and and stand supporting door... she breathing heavily... when she heared maan's voice she is smile hearing his talk she make o shape mouth when she heared ''CHATTER BOX'' and blush with ''MERI GEETU''...


Geet - (while pick up Mr.Love in her arms and ruffle his head with blush she say) Mr.Love maan is so handsome na just like greek god omg kya ho gaya tha mujhe kaise unki taraf magnet ki tarah khichi chali ja rahi thi... mein to Sharma k waha se aayi thi lekin ab to unhe satane mein bahut maja aayega mein bhi to dekho Mr.MSK mujhe kaise mante hain????????


Maan's bed room


Maan is laying on bed and smile and think- kitni khubsurat hain geetu but maan bte abhi to sirf ek baar dekha hain to tu ye sab dream dekhne laga aage pata nahi tera kya hoga... o babaji plz mujhse job hi stupidity karwani ho plz jab hum dono akele ho tab karwana sab ke samne nahi...


Both sleep contained after whole 16years today their heart is so light ...

NEXT - socho socho?????????????????

Ok no jhota's and no chappal's ok.😆😆

yaar wink* wink* update diya to

So what agar dream tha 😆😆

Do hit likes and do comments it means to me alot...

Edited by ruby3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum par little dispoint with dream but koi baat nahi m sure ki dare is big romantic suprice on way .aur waise b sabar ka phal meeta hota hai.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update..
superb..
loved it so much... wow maan ka dream to bahut passionate tha...
maan babu abhi se ye haal hai aagey kya karoge.. me dreaming..haaye
wow what a meeting...
meri geetu..chatter box... lovely..
ab next kya?
maan ky plan karega..
do update fast soon..

and dear pls don't use bright colors... use little dark colors...
bright colors effect on my eyes and m not bale to read..specially that green 1...
pls it's a request...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058

awesome update..
superb..
loved it so much... wow maan ka dream to bahut passionate tha...
maan babu abhi se ye haal hai aagey kya karoge.. me dreaming..haaye
wow what a meeting...
meri geetu..chatter box... lovely..
ab next kya?
maan ky plan karega..
do update fast soon..

and dear pls don't use bright colors... use little dark colors...
bright colors effect on my eyes and m not bale to read..specially that green 1...
pls it's a request...



ur wish my command 😆😆 colours change...
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Posted: 13 years ago
some one told me that she doesnt like Mr.Love pic so here is new mr.Love pic ...
so as now u all have option assume what ever Mr.Love u like..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
I hate u 4 the dream but love u for beautiful part. ..


n by the way I loved this new Mr.love...old one is ok... ut this is chooo cute...but I like it with less fur...just like beethowen types
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
wht a dream..finally both meet each other
waitng for maaneet moments wid family
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

I hate u 4 the dream but love u for beautiful part. ..


n by the way I loved this new Mr.love...old one is ok... ut this is chooo cute...but I like it with less fur...just like beethowen types


thanks dear for ur cute reply...😊
and he is male he is handsome not cute only females are cute...😆
and most important thanks for hateing me and lovely me both at the same time 🥺❤️🤣

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