MG FF: Femme Fatale (2) - Page 34

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

who made maan think pari is dead..??

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

Thanks Jyo! 😃
Well...wait to find out!

Originally posted by: mandymore

Awsome prt...update soon

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Originally posted by: todayzstar

Wow..suprbb dear..
cntnue soonn

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Originally posted by: drdee142

Oh I just love this Geet, she's just fascinating and totally hilarious, imagine her asking Maan to dress up as a pink Telly Tubby 😆

So Maan has named the project after her, but if Geet has got rid of her scar how on earth will he ever recognize her 😕 I know she did it so no one will ever recognize her, she's not supposed to have an identity is she, hence your Title "Who Am I"

Dee

Thanks Dee! 😳
I am glad that you are liking Geet and enjoy her comments😆
And you are exactly correct, she cannot have anyone identify her,

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Loved it...

Their past was beautiful...even at that age maan could discover her intelligence..

He named his project PAR1 by his childhood friend pari...but why he thinks that pari is dead...is this also a part of her security that rajiv purposely did this.

Loved their first meet with glimpse of their past over power her..

Thnx for pm

Update soon

Like button is not working...sorry...

Thanks hun! 😃
Glad you enjoyed!
and yes, it is part of her security!

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Wow..another happening update...

They got identical scars and they loved it...this incident as well as Maan's mentioning Pari speaks how much she means to him..thanks for making this so evident to Geet and to us...

The fact that Maan has started to trust her felt good. And their never ending verbal battle - lovely !

Geet has gotten the scar removed...so sad ! How will Maan identify her now😕

Thanks hun! 😃
Glad you are enjoying hun!
And yes, she means a lot to him.

QUOTE=mayyo13]You gave us hope and shattered it in the same update that Maan might recognize Geet because of the scar... But she had it fixed!

Thanks dear! 😃
LOL sorry for ruining the hope!
And yes, she is tough.

Originally posted by: pinkybedi

Lovly

Thanks Pinky! 😃

Originally posted by: shalini01

i love this story sanju, and your way of writing. i love the maaneet moments especially the part where maan told geet to dress as the joker because she's insane enough 🤣 i love this side of geet, the upbeat version. so maan does remember his pari, that is so very sweet but he thinks she's dead 😔 great update, thanks for the PM.

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I am glad you are enjoying dear!

Originally posted by: -pushpa-

Awesome update,loved it.

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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

simply amazing...

Thanks dear! 😃

Originally posted by: nikki.171

For now I'll just leave you with this ... FaNtAbUlOuS !!!!

The update revealed lots of things ... Just lovin this !

Awww thanks Nikki! 😳

Originally posted by: dona86

loved it

awesome

Thanks Dona! 😃

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Aww they both miss each other! how sweet!~

Thanks hun! 😃

Originally posted by: megh_piyashi

loved it dear...
awesome update...

Thanks Piyashi! 😃

Originally posted by: amita5

awesome update

When will maan realise that geet is only pari his childhood friend

please update soon and pm me

Thanks Amita! 😃
It will take a bit of time before Maan realizes who Geet is.

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

great

Thanks Radhika! 😃

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update

maan still remembers pari but y he thinks that she is dead eager to know wat happened in the past

Thanks Preethia! 😃

Originally posted by: Speechless

Thanks dear!😃

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

So close yet so far!! I am dying to know Maan's reaction when he recognizes Geet. But I hope he finds out about her background before he identifies his friend in her. I cannot bear to see her get hurt again.

Thanks hun! 😃
Don't worry...he will find out in time!

Originally posted by: -mansi95-

heyya sanjana!:-)

have been mia for almost two months due to exams..and whoa guess what i see after coming...sanju is dazzling in second thread<3congo baby! hope to see a rocking gal in next thread!!!

resss...will be back after reading all updates.

-edited-

part 4 : LOL!the menses conversation just cracked me to no end!!!🤣it sorta reminded me of my personal experience just a few months ago,the same scene with different people!🤪mm..hmm...so the girl whom RK sheltered is geet and i guess its she who broke into the data..

With that the boss melded in with the shadows, escaping out.

i guess this is the give away line!!!😆

Part 5: after this..my guess about geet being the boss is getting much stronger..another murder..going back to the first update..(i dunno why but i always get dragged towards the first chapter..LOL!)so is she another agent ?and she is very much BUILDING CONTACTS...😳

part 6: so its true!!!geet-the boss!! i love the fictions wherein a woman is portrayed having a lot of power unknown to others...great going sanju!

part 7: so all is unveiled!!!:-) i say,maan loves pari!😍and maybe even geet knows that..so she is teaming up with RK for some leg pulling.😆

part 8:awwie!the childhood part was helluva adorable!lmao!!!Ms.bodily functions?...I guess its high time for you to write an out and out comedy fiction!😳i assure you it would be an instant hit!

part 9 : gosh!!!so a seemingly dead pari is back to claim and protect her love!😆great one!looking forward to the updates on past...

and pink teletubbie?!😲why not miffy?!😒

~Mansi.

Thanks Mansi!😳
Glad you are enjoying!

Hope your exams went well dear!

Femme Fatale

Chapter Ten:

Madame Lisette

Rules for agents 10:

Power comes in different forms..

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It took a summer to build a friendship between Pari and Maan, but the friendship was meant for more than a summer.

However sometimes fate acts in erratic manner, giving us only a fleeting moment of peace, taking away something just as we appreciate its beauty.

Maan tried to control his emotions as he had a stony look, not wanting to appear weak. "Its okay, we will meet again"

Pari was more emotionally labile. After the death of her family, the connections she had already built made them more precious and as such there were no words for her to say but to reach out to hug Maan.

Rajiv stared at the pair, feeling sadness that at their connection, hoping that they could stay friends even afterwards.

But some relationships were never meant to thrive.Sometimes even the strongest of friendships cannot stand the distance imposed by the world.

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Some of us choose life of peace, some choose life of violence.

But then there are those of us, who are drawn to violence with no choice but controlled by fate.

The boss had vague memories of a life unfettered by worries and blood but that was a time far gone and never to be retained.

As she walked up Madame Le Blanc's Pleasure house, she could only remember darker moments in her life, choices that made her who she was today. Irrevocably changed her into someone who could no longer go back to innocence.

Madame Le Blanc's was a high end, very high end indeed, courtesan's place. Only those who have immense power and money could gain entry to the Madame's place, it was both a forbidden and deadly place.

But it was one the boss knew intimately.

Slinking in through the back door, she held back a rueful grin as she saw the opulent beauty spread out. The lush decor hide the darkness that lingered inside, the travesty it was to sell one's body for money.

But sometimes the stains are too hard to wash away.

"Ma'am" One of the maids working in the kitchen saw the boss and immediately walked up to her. They knew her as the deadly agent, ruthless but also someone to not be denied anything. "How can I help you?"

"Take me to Lisette" She ordered, tapping her foot against the floor boards in impatience. There was something about this place that agitated her and made her weary.

"Of course" The maid acquiesced, gently walking towards the back passage that led to Lisette's rooms.

As they entered Lisette's Boudoir, the boss recalled the time that she had first come to this place. A young girl, coming to grips with her anger and helplessness she had decided to take control of her life, leading her to this place to learn how to manipulate people.

A woman's heart can be beautiful as a blooming rose or as a deadly as a stiletto pressed against the heart.

Lisette was the epitome of that idea; she was stunning but also powerful in using her beauty. Older than the boss by 8 years, she looked much younger than she was but there was a certain wisdom in her eyes that defied the innocence that she at times feigned.

With skin the colour of honey, hair as dark as the night and lips lush, she was the dream of men. But the boss knew the horrors the woman had to face to get to this place and as such she had sympathy with Lisette.

However Lisette was more powerful than what appearances foretold. She knew how to manipulate men and how to get information. Men often underestimate women, especially beautiful woman and that allows for manipulation. Lisette had taught the boss all this, talents she put into use as an agent.

"Ah, my femme fatale" Lisette cooed in her soft, husky voice. She rose to embrace the boss, who could only awkwardly pat her on the back. She was unused to such moments of affection for she worked alone without any emotional bonds.

Lies, her inner voice protested, you have made connections but you refuse to see or embrace them.

"Come and sit" In typical Lisette style, she took the boss's hand and made her sit on one the antique chairs in the room. "Tell me why my lovely poupee is here….but before that tell me how you are?"

"I am fine" Those were the only words that she could say, for as the boss she couldn't acknowledge emotions or feelings beyond the job. Even if Lissette was once her tutor, one of many, it didn't allow for disclosure.

Lissette gave a sigh, "Oh petite fleur, have we not gone past this stage? When we first met, I was just Radhika, starting this job and you were an inquisitive child. Both of us had lost everything and as such came to this dark place. So why do you hold back now?"

"Time changes things, both of us are different people" Her tone was harsher than she had intended but it did the job. "No longer are we weak or bound to others. We choose and grabbed freedom. So no need to relive the past"

Blinking, Lisette understood that there would no words today, "Fine, state what you need and as always, I shall try my best. Anything for my belle fille"

"I need you to keep my updated on any rumours about the Khurana family" She ordered, "Poke lightly but don't let anyone suspect"

"As if I ever would" Lisette smirked, "Does this have anything to do with the delectable and young Maan Singh Khurana?"

"Maybe" was the guarded answer, causing Lisette to laugh.

"Well, in that case I shall do my best" She winked at her, "And you stay close to him"

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Maan was smiling as he stared at the dcor of the party; everything was perfect. The lighting, the colour scheme and the ambiance of the place exuded class but managed not to be dull.

Maybe the insane girl can do something worthwhile, he thought with a smirk. Well, she is great at everything she does, so I shouldn't be surprised.

"Hmmm…very well done" Savitri spoke, as she stood next to him. "Who arranged this?"

"My secretory" Maan answered shortly, "Geet"

"Must meet her" Dadi smiled, having heard from Vicky about Maan's crazy secretory, "She seems to be a colourful character"

Maan rolled his eyes fondly, "If by colourful you mean destructive and insane, yes"

This time Dadi laughed outright, surprised at her grandson's outburst. "Oh dear! I've never seen you react like this with anyone. The girl must be something special, to have the great MSK in a flutter!"

"Who has my son in a flutter?" A soft voice spoke from behind. It was Anjali Khurana, Maan's mother. She was a soft and loving woman who always wanted happiness for others. But at that moment she was amused at Savitri's comment.

"Oh his special secretory" Vicky quickly joined the conversation, wanting to annoy his brother. "She is hilarious"

Anjali's eyes sparkled as she faced Maan, "Is she really? Is she pretty?"

Knowing where his mom's mind was going, Maan quickly deflated her hopes. "Mom, she is alright, nothing to talk about. She is more traditional than my style"

Anjali's face fell, as she never liked the brainless girls that Maan seemed to attract. So with a huff she and Savitri walked away.

Rolling his eyes, Maan walked away as well, towards his clients.

"Ms Browing" He spoke to the American delegate, "I hope that you are enjoying the party."

"I am Mr Khurana" The usually stern woman appeared to be relaxed, "It's a lovely night but we should discuss more about the project"

Maan smirked, knowing that the woman was trying to get an edge on the other clients, "Plenty of time for that. Once all the potential people interested are here, we can chat"

"But of course," She gave a laugh, understanding that she couldn't take advantage of Maan.

"Hope you enjoy the party" He reiterated and turned around to meet more people. But the sight that met his eyes had his jaw on the floor.

His insane but traditional secretory was wearing a floor length gown that made her look like an angel. He had found her beautiful in her simple salwars but this dress made her look beyond beautiful.

The black colour brought out her skin tone and the bodice made her figure look perfect. Her hair was done in a messy bun, with tendrils escaping down her back and around her face. But that was nothing compared to the confident look on her face and the way she carried the dress.

Before Maan could move, Geet was standing in front of him.

"Hi boss" She said with a smirk.

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Maan was scared the next summer about meeting Pari, worried that they wouldn't remain as close friends as they once were.

So it was with hesitant steps that he walked back into the farm house. He told himself that one year apart meant nothing for their friendship but he couldn't be sure.

"Come Maan" Rajiv urged the boy.

As they walked in, Maan saw her. She had grown within the short time, more feminine. It surprised him because he expected to see the typical messy Pari but standing in front of him was a young girl in a dress, all neat and tidy.

But the next second she run up to him and embraced him, making him forget about her attire and appearance.

Instead he just recalled his friend.

"I missed you" He gruffly spoke before pulling away and then puncher her lightly on the arm, "Look at you, you look like a girl!"

"I can still run faster than you" Pari yelled, before she stuck her tongue out and run out, causing a laughing Maan to follow her.

Rajiv just shook his head fondly, "Crazy kids"

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AUTHOR's NOTE:

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