FF#TUM KAISI MOHABBAT KARTE HO ch# 26, pg 69, 1/6 - Page 28

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CHAPTER 18

Picnic day:


All r ready for going to picnic. Anmol, kunal, preet picnic ka saara samaan bus main rakh rahe thay. Prem apni maa k sath jaldi jaldi fruit, basket main rakh raha tha. Heer kicten main chai bana kar tharmos main bhar rahi thi. Heer ki maa breakfast tayyar kar rahi thi kyn k kisi ne nashta nahi kiya tha aur time bhi nahi tha tou ab sab ne nashta raste main hi karna tha.
Sab samaan rakhwane k baad anmol ne sab ko bithana shru kiya.
Anmol: agay sab bare yani ham sab k baray bethen ge. So, dono dadi ji aap sath bethen, baqi barey mr. And mrs. Ek sath beithen.
Mid ki seats pe tm sab baitho. Ahem sanskriti, abhimanyu anjali, or prem heer. Baqi sab apni sequence khud bana k baithen, last ki puri raw meri hai so stay away preet. Preet gave him innocent look coz he already sit on that bench. He stand and sit on seat. Prem: main yahan baithon ga.
Heer: no way window ki side pe main baithon gi.
Prem sit on window side seat: sorry.
Heer: fine.
She came towards anmol who sit on last bench and ready to lay on it.
Anmol: what?
Heer: bhai! Wo prem ko iss taraf ki seat pe baithna tha lekin maine kaha main baithun gi tou wo window ki side pe baith gae.
Anmol: tou?
Heer: mujhe acha nahi laga meri wajah se prem ne seat change karli. Plz aap bol den un ko k wo window seat k barabar wali seat pe baith jaen.
Anmol: choro heer jab usnay itna tumhare liye kar liya tou.
Heer innocently: hawa lage gi tou prem ko flu ho jae ga. Aap tou jantay hain bachpan se hi prem ko flu bohat jaldi hojata hai.
Anmol: oh han! Chalo.
Anmol came towards prem. And order him to stand from window side and sit next seat.
Prem: but...
Anmol: no but shut. Do as i say.
Prem do as anmol say. Heer smile and sit window side. Anmol back to his seat. Driver start bus.
Preet: kash meri bhi engagement hojati tou mere sath tum nahi wo hoti.
Kunal: wo kon?
Preet: meri wo.
Kunal: kon?
Preet: jab mile gi tab bataon ga. Waise tumhari koi behen hai?
Kunal: han hai. Tum kyun puch rahe ho?
Preet: naam kya hai? Kahan hai?
Kunal: meher. Hostil main rehti hai, student haina. Lekin tum kyun puch rahe ho?
Preet: chalo phir main tumhari behen se shadi kar lun ga.
Kunal: main tumhara gala daba dun ga.
Preet laugh.


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Preet: chalo yaar songs gatay hain. Anmol bhai start aap karo.
Anmol: o.k. Heer mera sath dena, female lines ganay k lye.
Heer: lekin!
Anmol look disappointed. Heer smile and noded her head. But bohat ghabrai hui thi.


"Ye raat bheegi beegi ye mast "

--MALE--(Yeh raat bheegi bheegi, yeh mast fizaayein
Utha dheere dheere voh chaand pyaara pyaara) - 2

--FEMALE--(Aah, aah)
Kyoon aag si lagaake gumsum hai chaandni
Sone bhi nahin deta mausam ka yeh ishaara

--MALE--Ithlaati hawa, neelam sa gagan
Kaliyon pe yeh behoshi ki nami
Aise mein bhi kyoon bechain hai dil
Jeevan mein na jaane kya hai kami

--FEMALE--Kyoon aag si lagaake gumsum hai chaandni
Sone bhi nahin deta mausam ka yeh ishaara

--MALE--Yeh raat bheegi bheegi, yeh mast fizaayein
Utha dheere dheere voh chaand pyaara pyaara

--FEMALE--Jo din ke ujaale ne na mila
Dil dhoonde aise sapne ko
Is raat ki jagmag mein doobi
Main dhoond rahi hoon apne ko

--MALE--Yeh raat bheegi bheegi, yeh mast fizaayein
Utha dheere dheere voh chaand pyaara pyaara

--FEMALE--Kyoon aag si lagaake gumsum hai chaandni
Sone bhi nahin deta mausam ka yeh ishaara

--MALE--Aise mein kahin kya koi nahin
Bhoole se jo humko yaad kare

--FEMALE--Ek halki si muskaan pe jo
Sapnon ka jahan aabaad kare

--MALE--Yeh raat bheegi bheegi, yeh mast fizaayein
Utha dheere dheere voh chaand pyaara pyaara

--FEMALE--Kyoon aag si lagaake gumsum hai chaandni
Sone bhi nahin deta mausam ka yeh ishaara

--BOTH--Yeh raat bheegi bheegi, yeh mast fizaayein
Utha dheere dheere voh chaand pyaara pyaara


Prem heer ko dekh raha tha, usay yakeen nahi araha tha k heer itna acha gaati hai.
Anmol: heer saray songs main sab ka saath de gi.
All r charing her.

Preet sung.

Sapno Mein Aii ke Jai ke
O ri goriya

Humri churai le Neendiya
Sapno Mein Aii ke Jai ke
O ri goriya

Humri churai le Neendiya

Humpe girai ke haaye re Tu bejuriya

Humse churai le humka

Baharon mein tu hai
NAzaron mein tu hai
Dekhon jidhar mein Wahan tu dekhai de

Prem ki naaiya hai ram ke bharose
APni e naaiya ko paar tu lagai de

Prem ki naaiya hai ram ke bharose
APni e naaiya ko paar tu lagai de


Haan KAtte katte KAt na jaye
Bina hi pyaar ko paaye
Dekho meri sari hi umar Karun mein kya

Kahin to hoga koi upaaye
Ki meri tu ho jaye
Chahe Mujhko tu bhi Umar bhar
Karun mein kya

Kya mantar padhu mein
Kya tantar karu mein
Aankhon ki chahat tujhe bhi dekhai de



Prem ki naaiya hai ram ke bharose
APni naaiya ko paar tu lagai de

Prem ki naaiya hai ram ke bharose
APni e naaiya ko paar tu lagai de

Dil ko dil ki prem kahani
Jaruri hui sunani
Dil baat kaise mein kahun
Karun mein kya
Samjhe na tu baat woh pagali
Ki dil ki adala badli
Abb to bin kiya na mein rahun
KArun mein kya

MEin rah bhi na pau
Mein keh bhi na pau
Bole bina kaise tujhko sunai de


Prem ki naaiya hai ram ke bharose
APni e naaiya ko paar tu lagai de


Prem ki naaiya hai ram ke bharose
APni e naaiya ko paar tu lagai de



Sapno Mein Aii ke Jai ke
O ri goriya

Humri churai le Neendiya

Humpe girai ke haaye re Tu bejuriya

Humse churai le humka

Baharon mein tu hai
NAzaron mein tu hai
Dekhon jidhar mein Wahan tu dekhai de

Prem ki naaiya hai ram ke bharose
APni e naaiya ko paar tu lagai de

Prem ki naaiya hai ram ke bharose
APni e naaiya ko paar tu lagai de


Kunal sung.

Tu hi meri hai saari zameen
Chahe kahin se chalun
Tujh mein hi aake ruku
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Tere siva Main jaun kahan
Koi bhi raah chunu
Tujh mein hi aake ruku

Tum Mile To Lamhein Tham gaye
Tum mile to Saare gum gaye
Tum mile to muskhurana aa gaya

Tum mile to jadoo chaa gaya
Tum mile to jeena aa gaya
Tum mile to mene paya hai khuda
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Tujh mein kinara dikhe
Dil ko sahara dikhe
Aa meri dhadkan tham le

Teri taraf hi mude
Yeh saas tujhse jude
Har pal yeh tera naam le
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Tum mile to abb kya hai kami
Tum mile to duniya mil gai
Tum mile to mil gaya asra

Tum mile to jadoo chaa gaya
Tum mile to jeena aa gaya
Tum mile to mene paya hai khuda

Din mere tujhse chale
Raatein bhi tujhse dhale
Hai waqt tere haath mein

hooo Tu hi shehar hai mera
Tujh mein hi ghar hai mera

Rehta hai tere saath mein

Tum mile to mil gaya humsafar
Tum mile to khud ki hai khabar
Tum mile to ristha sa ban gaya

Tum mile to jadoo chaa gaya
Tum mile to jeena aa gaya
Tum mile to mene paya hai khuda


Ahem sung.

Aaja sanam madhur chandni mein hum
Tum mile to wirane mein bhi aa jayegi bahaar
Jhumne lagega aasman
Jhumne lagega aasman

Kehta hai dil aur machalta hai dil
More saajan le chal mujhe taaron ke paar
Lagta nahin hai dil yahan
Lagta nahin hai dil yahan

Bheegi bheegi raat me, dil ka daaman thaam le
Khoyi khoyi zindagi, har dam tera naam le
Chand ki behki nazar, keh rahi hai pyaar kar
Zindagi hai ek safar, kaun jaane kal kidhar
Chand ki behki nazar, keh rahi hai pyaar kar
Zindagi hai ek safar, kaun jaane kal kidhar

Aaja sanam madhur chandni mein hum
Tum mile to wirane mein bhi aa jayegi bahaar
Jhumne lagega aasman
Jhumne lagega aasman

Kehta hai dil aur machalta hai dil
More saajan le chal mujhe taaron ke paar
Lagta nahin hai dil yahan
Lagta nahin hai dil yahan

Dil ye chahe aaj to, baadal ban ood jaoon main
Dulhan jaisa aasma, dharti par le aaoon main
Chand ka dola saje, dhoom taron mein mache
Jhoom ke duniyan kahe, pyaar mein do dil mile
Chand ka dola saje, dhoom taron mein mache
Jhoom ke duniyan kahe, pyaar mein do dil mile

Aaja sanam madhur chandni mein hum
Tum mile to wirane mein bhi aa jayegi bahaar
Jhumne lagega aasman
Jhumne lagega aasman

Kehta hai dil aur machalta hai dil
More saajan le chal mujhe taaron ke paar
Lagta nahin hai dil yahan
Lagta nahin hai dil yahan


Sanskriti sung.

dil ki dhadkan bhi woh hai
teri uljhan bhi woh hai
usko suna de apni dil ki sadha

sapno ke saath tum reh ne lagi hoon
mujh se yeh khwab tum keh ne lagi hoon
armaano ka mila tum ko samandar
maujon ke saath tum beh ne lagi hoon

aaj mein boond hoon, boond hoon baarish ki
aaj mein hoon leher, leher hoon khwaish ki
aaj mein aasmaan se aayi hoon
aaj mein dhoop hoon, mein bahaari laayi hoon
sapno ke saath mein reh ne lagi hoon
unse yeh baat mein keh ne lagi hoon
armaano ka mila mujh ko samandar
maujon ke saath mein beh ne lagi hoon

sapno ke saath mein reh ne lagi hoon
unse yeh baat mein keh ne lagi hoon
armaano ka mila mujh ko samandar
maujon ke saath mein beh ne lagi hoon

Abhimanyu &
Anjali sung.

Sanchi sanchi teri nazrein ek darpan
De de maan ki kharein ek pal cheen
Adhron Kuch na kaha re
Naino ne Keh diya aaa

Tune to pal bhar mein
Chori kiya re jiya
Mora jiya
O o O

Tune bhi Pal bhar mein
Chori kiya re jiya
More Piya

Gumsum gumsum rehne wali
Humri yeh guraiya re
Kal kal Behne lagi
Jaise prem ki nadiya re

Tujh sang preet humne lagai hai
Tab jake Yeh rut aayi hai

Tune to pal bhar mein
Chori kiya re jiya
Mora jiya
O o O

Tune bhi Pal bhar mein
Chori kiya re jiya
More Piya

Gupchup gupchup dil mein aaya
Sajna sawang rachiya re

Pal pal har pal jiski chaya
Apna paar lagaiya re

O tujh per jaan humne lootai hai
Tab jake tu sang aai hai

Tune to pal bhar mein
Chori kiya re jiya
Mora piya
Sanchi sanchi teri nazrein ek darpan
De de maan ki kharein ek pal cheen
Adhron Kuch na kaha re
Naino ne Keh diya aaa

Tune to pal bhar mein
Chori kiya re jiya
Mora piya
O o O

Tune bhi Pal bhar mein
Chori kiya re jiya
More jiya


Taj and kali sung.

Aai Meri Subah Haste Hasate
Boli Aankhen Tere liye Sandesha hai
Haan hai
Jaagi aankhon ko bhi sapna milega
Koi khushi aane ka bhi andesha hai
Haan hai

Aan haaan
Gulabi si subah
Aan Haan
Sharabi si hawaa

Bheegi si bhaagi si
MEre bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

Bheegi si bhaagi si
MEre bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi ram dhun woh sunaye

Raahein waahein bole baatein rumani
Aao Baitho suno baatein kahani hai
Haan hain
Tazzi tazzi lage humko rozana
Teri meri baatein yun to purani hai
Haan hai


Aan haaan
Khayalon se paale
Aan haaan
Yeh zindagi chale

Bheegi si bhaagi si
MEre bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

Bheegi si bhaagi si
MEre bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi ram dhun woh sunaye

Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi
Mein pyasi thi nirashi
Tu pani ki surahi

Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi

Tujhe dekha to khila hoon
Teri chahat mein dhula hoon
Mile Mandir Mein jo ____
Mein to tujh mein yun mila hoon



Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi
Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi

Aan haaan
Dhundhe na abb koi
Aan haaan
Mein khoya Tu Khoyi

Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi ram dhun woh sunaye


Prem sung.

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun,
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun.
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun


Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Jo Bhi Jitne Pal Jeeyu
Unhe Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Kal Ho Ab Tera Use Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Mujhko De Tu Mit Jaane
Ab Khudse Dil Mil Jaane
Kyu Hai Yeh Itna Fasla...
Lamhe Yeh Phir Naa Aane
Inko Tu Naa Le Jaane
Tu Mujh Pe Khudko De Loota...
Tujhe Tujhse Tod Loo Kahi Khudse Jod Loo
Mere Jism O Jaan Main Aa Teri Khusboo Odh Loo

Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Bahoon Main De Bas Jaane
Sine Main De Chhup Jaane
Tujh Bin Main Jaaunga Kaha????
Tujhse He Mujhe Ko Paane Yaado K Woh Nazrane
Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera

Teri Yaado Main Rahoo
Tere Khwabo Main Jagoo
Mujhe Doondhe Jab Koi
Teri Aankho Main Milu

Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo
Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Joho Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun


All sung in course.


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They reached at picnic point.
Prem: yuppy, its park.
Heer read board: "Dreamers park". No yar.
Anmol: pakro apne paases or andar chalo. Park, zoo or water area sab hai iss main.
Prem pass le kar chala gaya.
Heer: water area hai na?
Anmol: han high slides, pool or ek choti si artificial lake bhi hai.
Heer excited: really! Lake main Boat hai?
Anmol: han meri maa sab kuch hai, ab chalo sab ja chuke hain.
Both move inside.


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Heer run towards sliding. Prem ne Heer ko ghusse se dekha usey Heer ka bachpana bilkul nai bhaya tha. Heer slide karti hui pani main aagiri.
Heer (exclaimed): Yahoo! Yippee!
Prem usey ghoorta hua park ki taraf chala gaya jahan puri family samaan k saath mujood thi. Preet, Kunal, Taj, Ahem waghaira sab high slidings ki taraf the. Issi tarah Sanskriti, Kali swimming pool ki taraf the. Abhimanyu aur Anjali artifical lake main boating kar rahe the. Ghar k bare park main samaan k saath baithe the.
P.Dadi: Prem! Tum yahan kyun aagaye?
Prem: Bas aise hi.
H.Dadi: Picnic achi nai lag rai? Kya hua tabiyat thek hai na?
Prem: Ji bilkul thek hai. Picnic to superb plan ki hai bhai ne.
P.Maa: Maa! Hum log thora ghoom phir k aate hain.
P.Dadi: Han beta jao bal k tum sab jao main yahan hun samaan ka khayal rakhne k liye.
Sab chale gaye sirf P.Dadi, H.Dadi aur Prem ruk gaye. Prem khoya khoya sa lag raha tha.
P.Dadi: Anmol aur Purva kidhar hain?
Prem: Pata nai.
P.Dadi: Jao dekho.
Prem (smile): Dadi bhagana tha to waise hi bol detin.
P.Dadi: Prem!
Prem: Ja raha hun Dadi.
Prem chala gaya. Both Dadi's smile.
H.Dadi: Buhat shararti hai.
P.Dadi: Pota kiska hai.
H.Dadi (smile): Tum b naa...


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Anmol: Kya boriat hai yar.
Purva: Lo... khud hi planned picnic se bor hogaye.
Anmol: Picnic manane aaya tha, pura area ghoom k aisa lag raha hai k yahan ki length napne aaya hun.
Purva laugh.
Anmol: Hanso mat. One to all sab pani ki billiyan ban gaye hain. Ek Prem aur hum do hi pani se bahar hain.
Purva: To aap kya chahte hain?
Anmol: Kuch halla gulla, gaming.
Purva: Mmm! Cricket khelte hain.
Anmol: Sare poday(plants) ujar jayenge.
Purva: Phir?
Anmol: Chuppan chupai(hide & seek).
Purva: What? Pagal hogaye hain kya?
Anmol: Oye...
Purva: Oops sorry. I cross my limit. Lekin...
Anmol: Lekin wekin kuch nai. 1st mujhe apna bachpan yaad aaraha hai, 2nd yahan football, cricket, handball jaise game bachey khel sakte hain hum bare nai, hum forcefully khelenge isliye aur 3rd Heer aur Prem ka favorite game hai.
Purva: Heer se ziyada Prem ko hide & seek pasand hai.
Anmol: I know aur ye ek hi game hai jis pe dono fight nai karenge.
Purva: Yah! Warna puri picnic dono ko manate end hojayegi.
Anmol: Heer ko dhondna buhat mushkil hai.
Purva: Hope so sab se pehle Heer hi turn de. U know na?
Anmol: Yes i know. Heer ko dhondna buhat mushkil hai aur Prem se chupna buhat mushkil hai.
Purva: Lets see.
Anmol: Jao sab ko bula kar lao.
Purva chali gayi.


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First turn Purva.
Purva: Kya yar main hi. Chalo chupoo...
Sab chupne bhag gaye.
Purva (shout): Main aarahi hun.
Purva find Taj first. After 1 by 1. But Heer and Anmol still hide. Purva want to find them.
Preet: Arey un dono ko choro. Unko pata hi nai chale ga k koun bari de raha hai.
Kunal: This is cheating.
Preet: So what? Itne bare area main koun dhondega? Shaam hojayegi.
Prem: Rite! Waise b thori cheating to allow hoti hai.
Abhimanyu: Yah! Without cheating maza nai aata.
Purva: O.k! Chalo Taj go for ur turn.
After Taj, Preet, Abhimanyu, Anjali, Kali, Ahem, Sanskriti and Kunal turns. Now, its Prem turn. Prem cheats. Wo kisi ko nai dhond raha tha. Wo sirf Heer ko dhond raha tha kyun k wo Heer ko chirana chahta tha. Prem suddenly stop coz of tree. He saw that tree. He still focus and concentrate.
Prem: Dhat tere ki.
That was Heer. Who climb on tree and lay on a strong stem and sleeping.
Prem (smile): Kis kis ne kahan kahan nai dhonda aur ye madam usi tree k uppar maze se so rai hain jis k nichey sab turn dene wale counting kar rahe the.
Prem sabko bulata hai. All are laughing (not on Heer) but their ownself.
Preet (shout): Shair aaya! Shair aaya.
Heer quickly wake up, lost balance and fall. Prem hold her in his arms, eyelock for 5 sec. All are "Aham! Aham."
Prem: Bhai kahan hain?
Heer: Preet tujhe to main batati hun.
Preet run, Heer run behind him.
Prem: aray bhai kahan hain?
Kunal: pata nahi.
Purva: chalo dhoonden.
Wo sab dhoond hi rahe thay k heer bhagti hui ayi. Tears on her eye.
Purva: what happend.
Heer: wwoo...bb..bh..ai.
Prem: bhai? Kahan hain?
Heer: plz unhen bachalen... Prem. Main aap se kabhi nahi larun gi. Plz. (cry).
Heer joint her hand infront of him. Tears drop from prem's eye.
Abhimanyu: kahan hain bhai.
Heer: wo crocodiles area main jo chota sa pul hai us k neechay hang hue hain.
Chorus: what?
Prem run towards there. Abhimanyu, kunal, Ahem run behind prem.
Purva: preet kahan hai?
Heer (crying): bhai ko pull karne ki koshish kar raha hai.
Taj: main bhi ja raha hun.
Purva: no! Yahin ruko.
Baqi family members k paas chalte hain. Inform karne.


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Prem half hang and kunal help him. Preet hold anmol hand. Abhimanyu hold prem. Prem ulta hang hua tha uski dono legs ko abhimanyu ne pakra hua tha. Ahem, kunal ko sambhala hua tha. Bohat mushkil se wo log anmol ko bachanay main kamyab hue.


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Snack party is on. They all try to cheerup anmol and also them self too. Heer still hold anmol. She place her head on his chest and quiet.
Anmol: heer! Hato beta 1 ghanta hogaya ab tou hat jao.
Heer: aap ko kuch hojata tou?
Heer start cry again.
H.maa: bas karo heer. Kyun anmol ko pareshan kar rahi ho.
Anmol: i m fine heer madam. So smile please.
Heer smile and saw anmol.
Heer: aap mere sab se achay bhai ho.
Abhi, ahem & taj shout: oyeee! Ab baat mat karna hamse.
Heer pout. Prem smile.
P.papa: mere khayal se ab ghar chalte hain.
H.papa: han shaam tou ho hi chuki hai. Ghar pohanchtay raat hojae gi.
Sab samaan sametne lage.


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Heer sab se pehle bhagti hui aayi aur ek bus main charh gayi. Suddenly she realize k wo ghalat bus main charh gayi hai coz there are only gents.
Heer: Oh no!
She want to exit but a guy stop her way.
Heer: Plz mujhe jane den main jaldi main ghalat bus main charh gayi. Plz mujhe... Bhaiii. (she shout)


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Purva: Aap girey kaise?
Anmol who pack perashot umbrella: Main gira nai tha.
Purva: Means?
Anmol: Its a secret.
Purva: Hamraaz to main hun aapki so...
Anmol: Someone push me.
Purva drop tharmos: What?
Anmol: Yes! Someone push me as he/she want to kill me.
Purva: Its coincidence or by mistake may be. Are you sure?
Anmol: Yes! I'm sure.
They reach near exit gate of picnic spot.
"Bhai" A voice eco.
Anmol: Ye to Heer ki awaz hai.
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Isse pehle k wo larka aage barhta kisi ne usey piche se pakar k khincha. Heer saw that was her wellwisher "A man in black and wear mask."
He hold her wrist and pull her towards him. Show finger to that cheap guy for warn and exit from that bus. Wo Heer ko khinchta hua uski bus tak laya aur ander jane ka ishara kiya. Heer bus main aagayi.
Anmol and Purva bhagte hue bus ki taraf aaye. Heer bahar nikli aur usey dhondne lagi jo har bar sahi waqt pe usey save karne aajata hai.
Anmol: Kya hua? Tum chillain thin?
Purva: Itni zor se... hum darr gaye. Kya hua?
Heer: Aaa...! Kuch nai mujhe akele bus main darr lag raha tha.
She hide whole incident.
Anmol: Isiliye tumne socha k khud to darr rai hun baqi sab ko b dara dun.
Heer: Bhai!
Anmol: O.k! Fine.
Sab bus main baith gaye. Wohi halla gulla shuru hogaya. Heer think about "him". Prem notice that Heer is quiet. Picnic was totally memorable for all.

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o.k plz comment...


Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awmse update yaar😊
awww luv heer nd anmol scenes.😛
but prem ko heer ka bachpana kyn acha nhi laga😕
or is update mae bhi nhi bataya na ki heer ka saviour kon hai😡,
but muje lagta ki shayad prem hi heer ka wel wisher hai😍
nywz alover really nice update
thnx 4 pm
cont soon
Edited by kiran_28 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi annokhi 😃

Awesome update 👍🏼
My fav. part is that you added music on this page. So cool 😎
Keep it up.

I love this fun picnic - very well organized wow
It feels like we were all there and watching the fun
You did an amazing job describing the scene, dialogues and masti in between.👏
The hide and seek was really hilarious - so sad Anmol bhai got into trouble,
and that someone try to kill him.
Wonder who hmm, must be someone from this picnic group.

Heer Anmol scenes are very sweet.
PH were cute.
Preet and rest of the gang, including both Dadis were fab.

I'm not fond of song sequence in the story, but in this update it made sense as they were all singing in the bus. I kind of skim through this part.

I loved the entire dialogues, fun and the park scene.
Different colour font makes the page beautiful.
Thanks for working so hard.
Really appreciate your hard work. You did a great job.
Keep it up and looking forward to see what happens when they get home.

Thanks 🤗




Edited by AASUS - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update n thanks 4 the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update ..loved it ...👏...
thanks for the pm ...
please update soon ...
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