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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey sammy...
I just finished reading the whole update at a go..and must say tht I m attached to it.. It's Superb.
Could you pls PM me when you update next.. I m new to this forum but luvd the show... I really appreciate all your hard wrk.. hats off to you and all other writers in the forum..👏
mayuri...😊

Edited by mddmayuri - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow the most shocking ff I have ever come across! Did the story just end or is it gonna continue?
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Posted: 13 years ago
are u still hving reasons for no update??? samy whr r u??
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read this FF in one go and wow what a twist...really interesting story i tell yeah😛 Can't w8 to read the next update😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
INTEHAA HO GYII INTEZAAR KI...
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Posted: 13 years ago
What a TWIST!!!!!!!!!!!
waiting for the update!!!!!
please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Do you know what gets a lazy ass like me panting and sweating? It's not the thought of having to actually write the update. It's the dread and horror of having to THINK about PM-ing 500 different souls. OH MY GOD *buckles to the ground*. Why does India Forum only allow 20 members per message? What is this discrimination against the numbers above 20!? YOU all should be offended too. This is just preposterous. I have a migraine already - damn it! Will it KILL them to increase the number to at least 50? Every time I update, I come up with a new pattern. I'll psychologically try to convince myself that it's faster to start PMing from bottom to the top. Then the next MONTH (Lawl notice how I don't say 'next day') when I update, I try to PM the Id's starting from M first because there is SO many of you M's! That's another psychological method of trying to convince myself that if I PM all the M's then the others would not take so long. WHO AM I KIDDING!

Do you know what else literally mind rapes me!? THE SUBJECT BOX. Why can we just not leave it flaming blank! If you talk to the other readers and ever compare the Update inboxes you all receive - you will notice how different they are. I usually start off with 'Gangsters Mistress Updated'. Then 20 members later it shortens to 'Gangster Mistress'. 20 members later ... 'Gang Mis' ... 20 members later 'GM'. LMAO! and eventually rendered to a simple 'hi'. By the time I reach the 490th person I just give up and put a FULL STOP on the subject bar.

Since I feel like ranting - GUESS WHAT also annoys me! When you have an uneven number and you end up PM-ing a perfect lot of 20 members only to have ONE member left hanging. I get so lazy that I scroll up and decide on which person I should untick. Since I don't know who reads my CRAP, I end up groaning and just sending a special ONE PM to that lucky last member.


Anyway rant over! HI EVERYONE! = D How are you all? Ah yes yes I am well thank you. The rashes are gone and so is the eye infection. However I am still itchy and I just don't know why. I look like a barbarian scratching the arm lice away from my hairy arms (LOL JOKES about the hairy arms -.-). So I heard people FIND my little comments more interesting than the update itself. Should I be offended? = | Maybe I shouldn't update at all and just sit here writing this useless thing. *Sigh* I know your entertained though ;) Anyway YES YES you all have a lot of questions and doubts. THEY will be CLEARED ... one day 🤣. Good lord you all are SO paranoid about the ending already. Have I traumatized you all into believing that I relish in sad endings!?


Mahbeh I do!*Sexy eyebrow raising shot*



The Gangsters Mistress

~ Chapter Twenty ~









Approximately 2.3 seconds away from having her brain squandered into a rare piece of mash potato, Geet did the unthinkable. She used her brain and God forbid thought of something very random - but hey! She was entitled to repent or savor her last and final thoughts. Alas, the only memory and form of repentance she could muster up was her regret for not ever paying strict attention to her science classes during High school. Mayhap if she ACTUALLY attempted to educate herself with knowledge and information about the workings of the brain, she could have potentially diagnosed or psycho-analyzed her own brain cells. Inwardly sighing, Geet shamefully recalled the only thing she knew about the brain, In primary school, a fellow intelligent student had informed her that the human brain was the size of both our fists combined. Geet cringed in remembrance and urged herself to face reality. "Maan Singh Khurana and the curious case of the swinging bat". Composing her features, she squared her shoulders and openly challenged him. 'Do your worst' she announced. Maan raised his eyebrows and smirked coldly 'Goodbye Geet D'souza Handa. Say hello to your brother on my behalf'. Watching his hands tighten around the rod with veins pulsing from his forearms brought on a serious case of De jevu. To her horror, she found her cocky act of bravery slowly crumble away as fear settled in within the pit of her stomach. A lifetime ago she had been forced to play cricket which had consequently led to her waking up in hospital. Apparently the little player had gotten a bit too excited with his swinging techniques and only managed to knock her out unconscious. The humiliation of bearing a ball-sized round bruise on the center of her forehead compelled her to break out into a cold sweat.


Maan raised the rod and swung at her direction, only to hesitate inches away from her face. The eyes that had been openly regarding him with apparent distaste had suddenly clenched shut. A muscle ticked in his jaw as he raised his arms and re-attempted to execute the final blow. Maan ... Do I have to pay rent? His hand shook and wavered, vacillating once again. The guards looked at their boss in astonishment, never having encountered him hesitating in performing an act that was equivalent to breathing. With a roar of outrage, Maan swung the rod and slammed it violently and repeatedly against the wall. Instantly reflexive, Geet covered her face - fearfully waiting for her head to be flying around the room as she awkwardly remained standing with a naked and headless neck.


'GET HER OUT OF MY SIGHT!' he shouted, ruthlessly throwing the hateful rod at the guards direction. The targeted guard instantly lowered his head, missing the edge of the metal by several inches. Geet's eyes snapped open as she felt hands grasping onto her arm. Reality dawned in like a punch in the face. He hadn't hurt her? The most dangerous and cold blooded gangster had hesitated from slaughtering an enemy at his disposal? She was so taken aback from the unexpectedness of his behavior that she actually mused whether her facade had affected him after all. Her moment of surprise instantly changed to suspicion as the memory of her brothers broken body came into mind thus dominating her thoughts once again. Geet let out a laugh, struggling against the grasps of both the overbearing guards 'Do you think me stupid Maan? Acting like a tortured soul will not work well in your resume' she remarked. 'I can read the working of that sick brain of yours. The moment I turn around you will attack from behind like the coward your renowned for'. Maan had his head averted as he continued to glare at the ravaged wall. 'Or better yet, do you plan to torture me slowly? Surely you don't expect me to beg with mercy now do you?' she stated humorously.



Her words were met with silence. Maan casually craned his head towards her direction and regarded her quietly. 'Have you ever sailed in a ship before Miss Handa?' he asked politely. The question was so out of context that he may as well had commented on the weather and asked the size or colour of her underwear. 'W-what?' she stammered. 'The sea?' he asked again, 'have you ever journeyed across it?' Geet shook her head slowly, not comprehending with the aim of the conversation. Maan nodded his head and flicked his finger to the guard 'take her away'. His calm demeanor worried her more than his outburst of anger. 'Where are you taking me!?' she demanded. Maan decidedly ignored her question and turned his back on her with a casual shrug. 'I demand an answer to my question!' she shouted in dread 'what do you have planned for me? Where am I to be incarcerated?' Maan stretched his arms and idly cracked the nick at his neck. 'You cant ignore me!' she shrieked. 'one way or another I will have my revenge!'. With a yawn, Maan reached out for his pockets and retrieved a cigarette. Flicking it into his mouth and lighting it, Maan strolled towards her direction only to stop inches away. Geet ceased her struggles and eyed him revoltingly as he rudely continued to blow the smoke at her face. 'Words cannot convey how much hatred I harbor for you' she whispered. Maan leaned down, his lips barely touching hers 'do you really?' he whispered. Geet tried to avert her face but he anticipated her next move and rapidly grabbed hold of her jaw. Clearly aware that his nearness was affecting her, Maan caressed her cheeks. Geet tried to take a step back but one of the guards tightened his hand painfully on her arm, causing her to gasp from the pain. Maan seemed oblivious to her hurt, as he continued to run his knuckles over her smooth cheeks.


'Never question me Geet' he murmured to her lips, 'ever'. Unconscious of her own reaction, Geet shamefully gazed at his lips and felt her legs buckle. 'What I plan to do with you is my business' he continued, 'whether I decide to torture you or kill you is my decision to make ,after all I have the right to decide on everything that rightfully belongs to me'. He emphasized on his words by placing the lightened butt of his cigarette on the guards hand, 'only mine' he stated through clenched teeth as the guard instantly howled with pain, therefore removing his painful grasp on Geet's reddened arm. Geet's expression was unreadable as she continued to stare at his lips, as if mesmerized by his seduction. A ghost of a smile lingered on her lips as she finally looked up and met his heated gaze, Matters got out of hand the moment Geet spitefully spat on his arrogant face. Acting out of reflexive instincts, the uninjured guard back handed Geet onto the ground with the purpose of punishing the opponent for defying against the leader. Geet expected to hear Maan chuckling in amusement as each man took turns in punishing her for spitting on the leaders face. However, seconds after she had landed on the ground - all that could be heard was a loud thundering impact of an object being slammed onto something. Geet looked up at Maan's murderous expression darkened with rage. Before she could conceal her eyes from viewing the unthinkable, Maan raised the rod and slammed it repeatedly against the guards head. The guards blood spurted onto Maan's face as he continued with his vicious act. Her heart hammered onto her chest as she imagined her head instead of the guards being beaten into pulp. Clearly being disadvantaged by having no weapon to defend herself, Geet could only stare at the scenery before her, utterly horrified. It was obvious before the man even landed onto the ground that he was long dead. Wiping the blood off his face as If it were a normal casual thing to do, Maan turned his attention towards Geet.


Clenching her buttocks out of fear that she might humiliate herself by literally peeing out of fright, Geet contemplated ways of defending herself. Every step he took reminded her that she could not possibly defeat him with violence. She had childishly allowed her emotions to misjudge his raw strength. Looking around the room for a means to escape, Geet realized that she was once again helplessly trapped. The expression on his face looked like he was ready to extract his own revenge against her for spitting on him. Stupid saliva! Geet mentally cursed her spit and wished that it could have been the usual dried up ones. However owing to her luck, the one spit she had summoned up had literally emerged as if 90% of the water in her body was surging out in release. Blast her mouth for it had suddenly gone dry as she tried to swallow nervously whilst eying the bloodied rod that was still being carried in his hand. Use your brain and think Geet Handa! She mentally mused to herself. Man up and face him with pride! With that thought in place, Geet raised her eyes and stared directly at him. LOL JUST KIDDING ...SCREW YOUR PRIDE! Was the last thought as she took the cowards way out and pretended to faint back onto the ground. Selfish vanity first - revenge second.



LIKE it COMMENT it WHILST I DIE at THE thought OF pming IT! = \






Edited by _SiinnceMaan_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG is that reallyy youuu?! I must be dreaming!! Where the hell have you been woman? Hope you've been good!

SOOO happy you've decided to updateee!! :D

*patiently waiting*

*will edit later..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hindu4lyf

OMG is that reallyy youuu?! I must be dreaming!! Where the hell have you been woman? Hope you've been good!


SOOO happy you've decided to updateee!! :D

*patiently waiting*

*will edit later..



YOUR FAST! FASTER THAN MY 3 month delayed update! 🤣 I've BEEN recovering from my rashes and eye infection. Also catching up with University! YUCK. Education you suck.

Xx

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